ok so the top of the chapter is where I will respond to comments and the bottom will be the author's notes.
-OriChar- so thanks for your review and well I decided to rewrite parts of the chapter mainly because I really didn't notice some of the inconsistencies also I didn't intend for it to be a mirror of re:zero so after the first chapter characters will have completely different interactions with izuku the story might go away from cannon a bit because.
-freeforall436- ok yea I understand what your saying which is why while izuku won't rely on return by death as much as Subaru he still gonna need it for what I have planed and yea my main problem is that fully powered izuku is kinda broken in some animes witch is why his current limited is 80 and because of the inconsistencies I when back and rewrote parts of the chapter as well a the entire ending along with it while everything besides the ending is small changes.
-maximum Rhapsody- ok so I don't really know how to write romance much less a harem. but I do plan on trying to build a harem much like kirito's harem where he's with one girl and the rest all have feelings for him. as for who will be that girl I haven't decided yet. and as for the rest of the MHA cast, they will make an appearance but not until much later. and I want the girl who would be close to him are rem, crush, Emilia, ram, and mei. I actually haven't decided on what the paring should be.
-weird man- so thanks for the advice and yea I kinda when back and change that part too.
-guest- glad you like my rewritten version of chapter one.
so please review and hope you help me improve this story as I go.
P.S how do I get a beta reader because I have no clue how to get one.
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"talking"
'thoughts'
/update I have changed the numbers and dates in this chapter\\
when izuku opened his eyes he saw he was in a thick dark purple fog. turning around he saw a figure. he knew it wasn't one of the past users of one for all. he couldn't make ut the figure and as it got closer izuku could see the thick smoke coming off of it. then he felt it izuku felt something touch his heart. it played with his heart. izuku couldn't move for he was paralyzed.
"I love you"
then a massive shockwave rang through sending the figure away. in the center of the shock wave, the third user of one for all was standing. he looked panicky and as he grabbed izuku's shoulders he spoke with great urgency.
"ok listen, kid, this isn't an illusion or some type of quirk and you aren't asleep either. whatever it is we can't seem to fight it so while we hold it off we need you to stay strong."
"But what's happening"
"We don't know. all we know is that it brought you here and for whatever reason, it wants you and only you so be careful out there and remember you'll never be alone as long as you have one for all still crossing through you."
then as if the shock wave imploded he was surrounded in the dark purple fog. the figure spoke.
"I love you, I love you i-"
izuku woke up panting and sweating looking around he saw he was in one of the guest rooms the blue-haired maid brought him to. he decided to just start the day early and what better way than to do his morning exercise. getting up he saw he was still in his t-shirt and cargo shorts. he walked outside and into the hall and chose to go left. as walked down the hall, he noticed the hall seemed to go on endlessly so he stopped and picked a random door to open silently praying he wouldn't be walking in on anybody changing the room.
but when he opened the door he was met with a library. there was a little girl in the middle of the pathway with blond hair in a drill style she also had blue eyes and wore a pink dress. he quietly walked up to her as she stared at him feeling to break the silence he spoke.
"um, do you know where I am? because I think I'm lost, I can't find the outside"
he spoke quietly mainly because the room reminded him of a library and old habits die hard he guessed. she stopped staring and then pointed at the spoke.
"you're in the forbidden library I suppose."
"ok do you know why the hallway is endless"
"it's because of my magic I suppose"
"oh... wait magic"
izuku was on the verge of having a panic attack.
"yes, magic why do you act as if you've never seen magic.
"oh, i-its nothing um do you mind if I go now."
izuku ran out of the room and out of the mansion once he got to one of the gardens he started with his workout routine. he started with push-ups first during this time he was on autopilot as he now knew what the third user of one for all was talking about this wasn't the past of a dream he really was somewhere else.
"wait if I'm in another world then that would mean the multiverse theory is right and if he was brought here that would mean the figure was strong enough to travel through dimension. and if that's true then is magic just some form of ancient technology and if that's the case what powers It and if muter muter."
because of the many hours, he spent with mei at her workshop he was quite versed in making technology heck he could say that given the right materials he could build a fully functioning computer as mei loved to tack his ear off about anything related to science. and he also got to know so of mei's asperation and besides building the best tech she also wanted to invent something new and never before done.
now looking at his situation when he told the little kid it was magic she seemed to believe him far quicker than what he considered normal. izukus train of thought continued like this until he heard Emilia
"oh, there you are rem and ram has been looking for you since this morning."
when izuku looked Emilia saw how he had bags in his eyes and he seemed to be tired.
"hey, izuku did you sleep well."
"oh, yea just woke up early and decide to start on my morning workout."
he got p and dusted himself off.
"So where are we going"
"oh I'm just gonna practice you might want to go see rem or ram for a new change of clothes and maybe a bath."
izuku flushed at this.
"oh um do you know where they are"
"They might be in one of the halls"
"ok so um yea bye now"
izuku ran off embarrassed. as he was walking through the halls he spotted the red-haired maid. he walked p to her and he still couldn't tell the difference between them so he asked the question.
"rem?"
"no, its ram guest-sama"
"oh sorry but can you help me"
"ok but what do you need"
"so I need a bath but don't have any clothes do you happen to have a spare robe or something"
"I can help you with that just leave your clothes outside and I will leave a rob for you o change into.
with a red face, izuku thanked her and walked off to where she said the bathroom was.
'god that was so embarrassing I really need to get a change of clothes fasts so this doesn't happen again.'
as izuku walked into the bath he saw just how big it was.
'Are they sure this is a bath and, not a bathhouse?'
when he took a bath he started contemplating what he would do.
'ok so I need a way to make money and I also need someone to help teach me to read and write the language. I also need a place to stay after today I'm probably gonna have to leave and find somewhere else to stay. not to mention I don't really know much about the kingdom I'm staying in and its laws.
getting out of the bath he felt refreshed with his dream out of his mind he opened the door just a little so he could grab the spare rob they gave him.
walking out he almost ran into the blue-haired maid named rem.
"hey rem w-what's up"
'dammit it's been years since he last stuttered'
"master Roswaal has retired and request that we all have lunch together."
izuku followed rem to the dining room.
when they arrived everyone but the little girl izuku had seen in the library was there.
"hey where Beatrice"
"she has rarely been seen and your lucky if you see her more than once" ram explained
then the man in the center of the table spoke.
"I am Roswaal and I must thank you for helping our dear Emilia for you see that insignia prover her royal candidacy as the next in line for the throne and without that she would have lost all rights to participate in the royal selection."
"oh"
izuku said sounding dumbstruck at what the white-haired girl lost.
"oh indeed so as a show of my appreciation you may ask anyone thing of me. if it's within my power I shall grant you that one thing."
"well you see"
izuku started looking embarrassed at what he would ask.
"um, so I have three problems that I need help with."
"go on"
"well I need a place to live and I need money I also don't know how to read or write so if you could offer me a job here I would appreciate it."
"oh my dear boy what are your qualifications"
"well I can cook, clean I also know how to fight and I'm strong and fast."
Roswaal hummed for a bit considering izuku's qualifications before he spoke.
"well, how bout we make you Emilia's combat butler."
"whats a combat butler"
"it's where when at home you will be a normal butler and help rem and ram out with chores and when Emilia leaves to the capital or to another house you will go with her to be her protector."
"ok I can do that"
"great ram shall give you a tour of the mansion while I have some business to attend to."
ram approached izuku.
"Follow me izuku"
as izuku followed ram around the whole mansion she showed him how to clean and how everything was supposed to be prepared they eventually ended in the kitchen with izuku helping prepare the lunch.
"ok izuku you will be peeling the potatoes"
she handed izuku the potatoes and knife quickly getting the idea he began the best of his ability peeling the potatoes. one really good and handy passive of one for all besides the near-endless stamina it was also the fact that regular kitchen knives just couldn't cut him and while his skin wasn't at durable as Kirishima's it was durable in its own right. ram was surprised as every time she expected the knife to cut him it just slid across his skin like a stick.
"izuku's skins quite durable"
"Thanks, I guess?"
then rem spoke up
"rem is almost done with the meal"
after that, they worked in silence neither comfortable nor unpleasant. once it was time for lunch ram informed him they would eat on their hour break before they would start back up again. after izuku ate he began to work on his kicks punches rolls dives and many move he would fight with for his hour break. he decided to practice his quirk at night as he really didn't want to draw suspicion to himself just yet.
then after his break ram continued to show him the ropes. then before bed ram had appeared and told him she would teach him how to read and write their language she first showed him the basics and told him to memorize them and learn them before they would go onto the more advanced material. once ram left he snuck out and escaped into the woods to practice. first starting with move men as the more he upped the percentage of one for all the faster and stronger he also got and that was a problem because he could crush things instead of just grabbing them and light tap could become strong enough to destroy entire buildings.
then he moved on to his air force series as his aim could do a little better. how he would practice is by destroying a tree and using black whip to send it up in the air where he would fire more air bullets at it destroying it even further this way he could train his control with black whip and air force at the same time. unaware of the red eyes watching him. and before he would go to bed he needed to test out how much one for all he could handle. quickly pushing up to 80% the sparks became flams as the intensity of his power became too much for his body to contain. but when he tried to use 81% he felt his body begin to break. stopping it before he actually broke something e was frustrated with himself.
"dammit that's my limited I'm not improving it's been months since I peaked am I not meant to weld its full power"
the red eyes slinked away as the user of one for all admonished himself.
Day 3
when izuku get to bed he didn't dream of anything. the morning he got up and went to begin his morning routine of stretches, push-ups, sit-ups, curl-ups planks, and finally his 10-kilometer jog. after that he took a bath and put o his newly acquired clothes that rem had fitted for his size. he for the large part remained distant with rm. not because he wanted to but because ram was the one he spent his first day with. after breakfast, the girls were surprised he woke up earlier than them and so they started the chores he had the windows to clean today for once he was glad he could use his quirk freely here. as on private property quirk, use was only regulated by the owner.
the windows were huge as it would take a ladder to clean the whole window so he used float to get to the upper parts of it. eventually, once he was done with the widows it was time to help with lunch. as they worked in silence he noticed rem did most of the work while ram did the work and then rem would come and clean up the mess like while he was cleaning the window he saw ram cut the bushes incorrectly only for rem to come in and fix it. he decided not to ask as there could be a good reason that he wasn't sure how to ask.
they served lunch and izuku took his hour break once outside he was about to begin his training until he noticed Emilia surrounded in floating lights al different sizes and colors. he approached her and asked what she was doing.
"oh I'm talking to the spirits"
"oh cool how do you do that and can anybody do that"
"well, no only certain people can form a contract with a spirit."
"so what happens after you form a contract with a spirit."
"well, it depends on the contract but it's common for one to acquire the power of their spirit."
"oh cool so is that what you and puck are"
"no were more than that but yea but everybody can use magic it just depends on what your magic affinity is. would you like me to check your affinity?"
at izuku's nod, puck leaned in towards izuku and closed his eyes.
"hum well, I can't say you have an affinity but it looks like your gate is holding back a large well of power. maybe you have some sort of sacred blessing."
the duo couldn't begin to understand what izuku held a somber look.
'dam even my quirkless ness is confirmed in this world too'
"well, I already knew it anyway. so what's up"
"oh nothing much I'm just continuing my studies in order to prepare for the royal selection"
"oh cool well my break is up and I'll see you at dinner"
izuku didn't notice the way puck stared at him intensely.
"what's wrong puck"
"It seems like that boy possesses a large pool of energy without any affinity. that boy isn't normal."
as izuku continued on with his day he noticed how ram kept eyeing him whenever she thought he wasn't looking. at night when she was teaching him the basics he noticed how she was even more distant than normal. after a long and awkward silence, izuku spoke up.
"hey, ram I really like the story's in this book you gave me."
"oh what's your favorite"
"I would have to say the one about the rabbit"
"it kinda reminds me of myself when I was younger"
"oh how so"
"well where I come from everybody has their own special kind of magic, and I didn't."
"oh really"
ram sounded more interested now.
"yea and eventually I was the black sheep. no one wanted to be with me and it wasn't till my mentor saw something in me and decided to show me ancient magic that he could no longer wield himself. and it wasn't till then that I met my first friend."
at izuku's nostalgic smile ram felt like he was alone as if his past was unreachable.
"do you ever miss them"
"yea I had many friends all of them with their own personality traits that never let the day go dull."
"well that should conclude today's session get some rest"
ram left the room and went to the end of the hall and waited for izuku to sneak out while she wouldn't admit it to anyone his story touched her heart and while she didn't fully trust him yet she felt as if you just couldn't fake the smile he held when describing his classmates.
she saw how he checked both ways before sneaking out to the forest. once there he did his usual training of destroying trees but then before it would normally end he started flying he then launched off into the sky.
walking out into the clearing she was stunned as not that many people could fly using magic. then looking up at the sky she saw the speck get bigger when izuku was about to hit the ground he stopped and just hovered there until he stopped and began walking off to the bed.
day 4
when izuku saw ram and rem walk off towards the front gate he decided to join them.
"why are you ere izuku"
rem sound nice as if she was genuinely curious as to the reso he decided to join them on his break.
"well I wanted to see the village"
when they got to the village izuku was on alert as danger sense was activated telling him anger was in the village. walking to the market izuku saw rem and ram handling the purchasing of supplies so he decided to wander.
rem was curious as to what their co-worker was up to. she hadn't interacted with him much but she could tell he was a hard worker judging by how well he cleaned and how he always saw it through he cleaned almost as good as ram. rem would never admit but she was beginning to get jealous of all the time her sister spent with izuku. though she didn't hold it against him as he just needed to learn how to read. looking back towards the vendors she put izuku out of her mind.
izuku was really enjoying the time he spent with the kids he used his strength to essentially pick and swing the kids around. thy seam to enjoy it and so far his danger sense hadn't gotten wore so he just assumed it was near the village instead of at the village. the quite dark blue-haired girl walked up to him holding a small cute dog.
"hey there that's a cute puppy you got there"
as izuku was about to rub it, his danger sense spiked and he pulled back his hand just in time to barely dodge the teeth of the small animal.
"who there almost got me that could have been pa-"
izuku felt killing intent coming off the girl and it made him shiver he just managed to escape a trap he didn't fully understand. deciding to play dumb he kept playing with the kids until ram and rem showed up.
"izuku were done its time to go and we have to be back at the mansion, and what are you doing."
ram was curious as izuku had all of the kids on his back and he was doing push-ups. it impressed both ram and rem, with all the kids on his back it must have been heavy yet he was just casually going up and down while talking to them. truly strange man.
"ok bye kids ill see ya'll later."
as izuku walked he wonder what he did to get that kid to absolutely hate him. then the very same girl walked in front of their path. rem and ram looked at the kid with irritation and curiosity.
"what do you need child"
ram demanded but the little girl looked past them right at izuku and spoke.
"so how did you know that dog would cure you"
"well i didn't but i do now"
he ram and rem took a battle stance and izuku almost missed it but he used the black whip on ram and rem just in time to stop them from getting bit by bigger versions of the small puppy. he guessed the small one was for getting their pray while the big ones helped finish it off. taking note of their surroundings izuku saw they were surrounded. rem and ram were really close so he just knew what he needed to do.
"ram, rem stay close an get down"
he rose his hands and then black little tendrils sprang forth they quickly became 100 on each hand. they attacked, grabbed, and tossed anything that was in a 100 mete radius.
"ONE FOR ALL... BLACK WHIP OVERLOAD"
izuku shouted his super move black whip overload as the name suggests just like the first time using the quirk he would create a massive amount of black whip tendrils that he could use to attack large groups of enemies effectively dealing with surrounding enemies. the little girl looked shocked at his power but he was faster and right as he was about o punch her the little dog she was holding suddenly got bigger as it was the final one. he tried to punch with 10% but the dammed thing wouldn't budge.
"oh so you can handle more fine than 25%"
he kicked this time only for the dog bear he really didn't care anymore thing to still not budge so hi being really frustrated with himself for letting the little girl escape and himself for not using his training he kicked with 40% sending the thought flying possibly far away he just hoped he didn't have to meet her again oh who was he kidding with his luck he will definitely see the villain again someday.
crack
izuku felt the after-effects of using black whip like that. his skin was red and looked like he just got a really bad sunburn. he felt the girl's gazes as he picked up the baskets of supplies and started o walk back to the mansion.
late that night in Roswaal's room
"so my dear ram what do you think of our new butler."
"Well he's a hard worker and is competent enough to be a good butler not to mention when we were attacked his first move was to move us away from danger he also dealt with the villain so quick we didn't even have a chance to fight not to mention rem appears to be enraptured with him along with Emilia"
"Are you sure its just rem and Emilia"
with the way ram was sitting on his lap, Roswaal missed the light blush that appeared on her face.
"however he's also an unknown variable he can fly is fast and strong can summon "black whips" as he calls it and he can also sense danger to some degree all in all we would watch him, he seems to harbor no ill intent towards us but we still don't know what he wants or his goal."
"exactly my dear ram go keep an eye on him"
she nodded and walked out of his room tomorrow is a new day.
and that's a wrap so thanks to those who review and stay safe out there.
