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Daya sits on the sofa...
Abhijeet - kya hua tha ghar par...aaram se bataa...
Daya - wo ...
Flashback :
Daya was sleeping the bed due to tiredness ... he was not able to get up early...
Dadi came in his room...She ruffles his hair lovingly ...
Dadi (loving tone) - daya beta uth jaa..
.Daya - dadi please thoda so lene do ...
dadi - beta ...uth jaa ... Pradyuman aa gaya ..
.Daya (immediately gets up) - what ...dad aa gaye...shit unse kya kahunga...o God...
Dadi - areh shant ho ja...itna chilaya ga to isse pehle hi shak ho jayega ...meri baat dhyaan se sunana aur jaise main bolunggi bilkul waisa hi bolna uske saamne...
Daya - theek hai dadi...
After telling him everything...
Dadi - main nicche jaa rahi hunnn...thodi der baad aana...
She goes down ...where Acp sir was sitting on the dining table ...
Acp - maa ...daya aur Kavin kaha hain ..
.Dadi.- Kavin to subah hi chala gaya apne dost ke ghar ...
Acp - itni subah...kisliye...
Dadi - wo...daya bata raha tha ..ki unke exams start hone wale hain to ussi ke liye...
Acp - accha ...acchi baat hain ki ye ladka padhai par dhyaan to de raha hain...
Dadi - wo humesha hi deta hain ...bus tu hi usse nahi samajhta...
Acp - haa...kyun nahi...aap aur aapke pote ek team bana lete hain...aur aapko to apne bete ki yaad hi nahi aati...
Dadi - ab mere pote hain hi itne acche kya kare ...
Acp - maa ...daya ...
Meanwhile daya comes down...
Daya - main yaha hunn dad......
he comes down and sits on the chair...
Acp - itna late kaise...
Daya - wo dad ...kal raat ko jayada der tak padh raha tha issiliye... exams start hone wale haina...
Acp - accha aur Kavin wo kaha hain ... ...
Daya - (slowly murmers) issi ki wajah se to fassa hunnn...
Acp - (giving him a hard look) kya...
Daya - wo dad...Kavin apne dost ke ghar gaya hain...padhai karne ...kuch notes chahiye the usse ...to usne kaha ki wo wahi se chala jaayega ...
Acp sir gave him 'oh really ' wala look ...to which Daya down his head...
Dadi - tu bhi aate hi kitne sawal karta hain...daya putr tu khana kha...aur tu bhi kha le pehle...
Daya - (taking his plate) ha dadi...
Acp - main bhi kha raha hunnn...
After finishing the breakfast...
Daya - dad mujhe aapse baat karni hain...
Acp - kya baat hain Daya ...
Daya - dad...wo mera ek dost hain...abhi naya hain city mein...aur apparently usko koi ghar bhi nahi mil raha hain ...to kya wo yaha as a paying guest reh sakta hain ...
Acp - nahi daya ...
Daya - par dad kyun...wo accha ladka hain ...
Acp - daya ...ye ek Acp ka ghar hain ...aur tum usse kitne din se jaante ho...main koi khatra nahi le sakta...kisi anjaane insaan ko iss ghar mein rakhana...ye sahi nahi hain ...
Daya - Dad... please...
Acp - no means no ...
Daya moves near dadi...
Dadi - kon hain ye ladka...
Daya - dadi ye wahi ladka hain jiski mein baat akr raha tha...please dadi dad ko maana lo...ek app hi ho jo aisa kar sakti ho...dadi usko bahut zarurat hai...aur usne humari kitni help ki hain ... humara bhi to farz banta haina...
Dadi - baat so sahi hain...par Pradyuman...
Daya - aap unse ek baar milne ko kehdo...
Dadi - theek hain...
Dadi (to Acp ) - Pradyuman wo accha ladka hai ...usse madat ki zarurat hai abhi...
Acp - maa ... please...
Dadi - accha ek baar mil le ...na theek lage to mana kar dena...kisi madat ho jaayegi...
Acp - theek hain ...aaj shaam ko bula lo usse...
Daya (excited). - theek hain dad...main college ke liye nikalta hun ...bye...
Flashback ends:
Daya - to dad ne kaha hain ki aaj shaam ko tumse milenge ...ghar aa jaana ...
Abhijeet - sir man to jayenge na...
Daya - dekhte hain ...ab ye to Shaam ko hi pata chalega...
Kavin -koi mujhe bataye ga ki kya ho raha hain...
Daya - wo hum batane wale the...Abhi ko ek ghar chahiye tha shift hone ke liyee aur iss time Mumbai mein ghar milna bahut mushkil hain... issiliye wo humare ghar mein rehega...
Kavin - what ...
Abhijeet - agar tumhe ye sahi nahi lagta to main nahi rahunga ... don't worry ...sabki permission ke baad hi main uss ghar mein aaunga...
Kavin .- nahi ...maine aisa to nahi kaha ki mujhe problem hain aapke waha aane se ...aap aa sakte hain...
Abhijeet - (suprised tone) pakka... maar kar bhagaoo ge to nahi na...
Kavin - nahi...wo mujhe aapse sorry kehna hain ...
Abhijeet. - sorry...woo kisliye...
Kavin - mujhe aapse aise batmitizz nahi karni chahiye thi ...I am sorry bhaiya...
Abhijeet - bhai bhi kehte ho ...aur sorry bhi...
Daya - mujhe daya bro ...aur isse bhaiya...ab ye kya hain ...
Kavin - ab aap Abhijeet bhaiya se chote hona ... issiliye...(pulling his cheeks) aap mere pyaare daya bro ho...
Daya (removing his hand) - ye mat kiya kar...
Abhi and Kavin- ooooo...so cute...
Daya - chup karo dono aur chalo college...
In colllege...
Abhijeet was sitting on the computer and doing some work...
He calls someone...
Abhijeet - Adi ...maine tujhe kuch students ki photos send ki hain...unki information mujhe jald se jald chahiye...
Adi - theek hain ...kaam ho jaayega...
Abhijeet - theek hain ...
And he cuts the call...
Abhi (pov.) - inki information se hi kuch link connect honge...let's wait...koi bahut bada game plan kar raha hai...jaldi pata karna hoga...
He comes down ...,...a group of students were playing guitar and other musical instruments... Abhijeet went near themm...
Meanwhile Purvi came there ...
Purvi - hello Mr. Khadoos...
Abhijeet - hello Mrs. Attitude...
Purvi - (angrily) you...
Abhijeet - (proud) accha dikh raha hunnn...pata hain...par tum aaj bhi waise hi lag rahi ho...
Purvi (confused) - kaise...
Abhijeet - Ajeeb ...tumhe nahi pata tha...chalo accha hain bata diya...
Purvi. - ohhh...bahut proud hain na tumhe khud par...
Abhijeet - obviously ...wo to hain...
Purvi - aise baat hain ...chalo ek challenge karte hain...sab apta chala jaaye ga...ki tum sirf bolna jaante ho ki kuch karna bhi...
Abhijeet - dekh lo...jeetunga main hiii...
Purvi - itna ghamand theek nahi hain...
Abhijeet - bachpan se hainn...kuch nahi akr sakta...
Purvi - aaj pataa chal jaayega...Priya apna guitar laao...
Abhijeet - guitar wo kyun...
Purvi - challenge hain...
Abhijeet - challenge to bataoo...
Purvi - haarne ki badi jaldiii hain...
Abhijeet - harne ki nahi ...tumhe haraane ki...
Purvi - tumhe ek song gaana hain...dekhte hain kitne log aate hain ...
Abhijeet- agar pura college aa gaya to...
Purvi - aur agar nahi aaya to...
Abhijeet - jo tum kahogi wo kkarunga... ... lekin agar main jeeta. to tumhe wo karna hoga jo main kahunga...
Purvi- soch lo...
Abhijeet - soch liya...
Purvi - agar tum haar gayee tto pure college ke saamne mujhe thankyou kahoge... aur ye bhii ki main bahut hi smart ladkii ho...
Abhijeet - theek hain ...manjoor hain...
Purvi - theek hain...(to everyone ) commmon guys...let's see ...
Abhijeet picks the guitar and moves at the center of the crowd...
Abhi - Tujhko… main rakh loon wahaan
Jahaan pe kahin
Hai mera yaqeen
Main jo… tera naa huaa
Kisi ka nahin…
Kisi ka nahin..
people on the ground started gathering near him...
Le jaayein jaane kahaan
Hawayein, hawayein…
Some people came there with other instruments and joined him...
Le jaayein tujhe kahaan
Hawayein, hawayein…
Begaani hai yeh baaghi
Hawayein, hawayein
Le jaaye mujhe kahan
Hawayein, hawayein
Le jaayein jaane kahaan, na mujhko khabar
Na tujhko pataa…
O…
Looking at Purvi...
Banaati hai jo tu…
Woh yaadein jaane sang mere kab tak chale
Inhi mein to meri…
Subah bhi dhalein
Shamein dhalein
Mausam dhalein
Moves near Purvi ...and moves around her...
Khayalon ka shehar…
Tu jaane tere hone se hi aabaad hai
Purvi closed her eyes ...she was feeling the song...
Hawayein haq mein…
Moves near a couple...
Wohi hai aate jaate jo tera naam le
Kavin - woooooo...common bhaiyaa...
Deti hain jo sadayein
Hawayein, hawayein
Na jaane kya batayein
Hawayein, hawayein
Le jaaye tujhe kahaan
Everyone in the college came there ...
hawayein, hawayein
Le jaaye mujhe kahaan
Hawayein, hawayein
Daya and Kavin too came running there ...
Le jaayein jaane kahaan, na mujhko khabar
Naa tujhko pataa…
O…
Moves to an Old couple teacher ...
Chehra.. kyun milta tera
Yun khwabon se mere
Ye kya raaz hai?
Kal bhi.. meri na thi tu
Naa hogi tu Kal
Meri aaj hai
Teri hai meri, saari wafayein wafayein
he agains comes in the centre...
Maangi hai tere liye duaayein duaayein
Le jaaye tujhe kahaan.. hawayein, hawayein
Le jaaye mujhe kahaan.. hawayein, hawayein
Le jaaye jaane kahaan (hawayein hawayein)
Le jaaye tujhe kahaan (hawayein hawayein)
O...
Abhijeet finishes the song and gives the guitar to Priya back...
All started clapping...Purvi opened her eyes... Abhijeet moved near her...
Abhijeet - kaisa laga Mrs . Attitude...
Purvi - wo ...
Daya and Kavin came near Abhijeet ...
Daya - kya baat hain...tum itna acha gaate ho...suberbb yaar ...
Kavin - Sach mein bhaiyaa...thoda mujhe bhi sikha dijiyega... ladkiyon ko impress karne mein easy rehega...aapne kitni ladkiyon ko impress kiya hoga na ...
Abhijeet starts coughing...
Daya (rubbing his back ) - Abhi aaram se...kya Kavin...
Kavin - accha sorry...main chalta hunnn...
And he ran from there...
Purvi - acchi singing hain ...
Abhijeet .- thanks... challenge yaad haina...
Purvi - hmmmm...kya karna hain...
Abhijeet - baad mein kabhi bataunga...tab tak udhaar raha...
Purvi - theek hain ... congratulations jeet ke liye ...
And she too goes from there...
Daya - Abhi ,...itni achi singing kaise yaar ...
Abhijeet - maa ne sikhaya tha...
Daya - oooo...College to khatam ho gaya...shaam ko time se ghar aa jana...hmmm
Abhijeet - haa ...chalta hunnn...
Daya - byee...
In Purvi's hostel...
Purvi - aaj aisa kyun laga ki main Abhijeet ko pehle se jaanti hunnn...kuch to connection hain...par kya...(shaking his head) nahi zayada hi soch rahi hunnn ...uss khadoos se dur hi rehna theek hain ...
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