chapter 4:HORROR OF THE REAL DEMON
KYIUBI FESTIVAL
Asuma was walking with his "girlfriend" although they weren't official they were like on the verge and did talk about dating. So being the good man Asuma is he decided to take Kurenia out to the festival and play some games.
He was gonna impress her by showing her how good he was with shuriken throwing and other very skilled displays of luck and some skill... That is what he would say IF KURENAI DIDNT BEST HIM IN EVERYTHING! (unknowing that Kurenai had been putting small genjutsu on him throughout the time they were there).
"uhh, how are you so good..." Asuma was so sick and tired of everything Kurenai couldn't help but laugh.
"Sorry, Asuma but I guess you need to buy dinner how about squid?" Kurenai suggested Asuma got a flashback from one of his most recent missions that happened last week he fought a squid that was on a beach, the only good thing that came out of it was seeing Kurenai in a bikini.
He accepted with a mutter and groan.
they didn't expect a certain blonde-haired blue-eyed academy student to be there. "Hey, Naruto how are you doing?" Kurenai said as she walked up to the blonde-haired boy snaking on some squid 'so cuuuttteeee' she almost squealed if they weren't in a public place.
"Hey brat" Asuma wave as he gave the owner some money for him and Kurenai's squid.
"Hello Asuma-sensei, Kurenai-sensei, are you two on a date?" Nauto questioned looking at Kurenai and Asuma tilting his head slightly.
Asuma and Kurenai blushed and the guy at the squid stall let out a chuckle "N-No we were just... making a bet for dinner and I beat Asuma" Kurenai started with a blush "ye kid don't get dirty thoughts now" Asuma said... then realizing this was A CHILD. Kurenai was about to give a glare at Asuma but Naruto spoke up first.
"hehe thought so Kurenai-sensei is too good for you anyway Asuma-sensei" Kurenai laughed and Asuma turned into depression.
"WOW, Asuma you just got burned to a degree I don't think even my fire Jutsu could compere to that" Kakashi said whistling walking up to the group until they heard the sound of laughing coming from the bushes
"A-ANKO!" Kurenai stuttered out looking at the bush and sure enough, a purple-haired woman with a long light brown trench coat came out laughing, her cloaths were... questionable.
Kakashi was going to cover Narutos eyes and then "KAKASHI I CHALLENGE YOU AGAIN" might guy appeared and Naruto almost dropped his squid.
all the Jonin were here now.
"yo" Kakashi replied giving Guy a wave "SUCH A HIP COOL ATTITUDE KAKASHI WHAT I EXPECTED FROM MY ETERNAL RIVAL" Guy made a series of poses while saying that sentence (some weren't even facing Kakashi and were facing... well... thin air.)
"OH NARUTO HAVE YOU KEPT TO YOUR TRAINING. I KNOW YOU HAVE BEEN WORKING YOUTHFULLY HARD AND I DUG UP THE FACT THAT ITS YOUR BIRTHDAY" Guy took out a sealing scroll and placed his hand on it, a cloud of smoke appeared and reviled a pair of leg weights. (not as heavy as lee's or guy but it will still make him at least Chunin level).
"wow, thanks guy-sensei" naruto gave a wide smile and Guy cried about the adorable-ness of youth.
"hey don't miss me out, here ya go" Kakashi pulled out a scroll and naruto opened it up only to see a new Jutsu 'water style: liquid bullets'.
"WOW, I'm gonna get started right away" Naruto took the gift's strapped the leg weights on and started looking through the hand seals as well as the necessary chakra.
"Hey don't forget about us," Asuma said holding a kunai and shuriken pouch.
"here you go," Kurenai said as she held out a small book on Genjutsu detecting and dispelling.
Anko sat at the side in gaw as naruto tied the pouch to his waist and put the book in a sealing scroll also in his pouch.
she took Kurenai away for one second "first off who is the brat second off all how do you know each other third off why didn't you tell me we were getting him presents?"
Kurenai facepalmed "you know the kid with the nine tails yes that's him and he's the one we were talking about you were busy stuffing your face with Dango to even notice" Anko let out a giggle but her pride would not let her NOT get the brat a gift.
'im gonna give this kid the best gift he will ever have... the question was what?...
she had to think then Kurenai told her he was just starting the academy.
"AHA, I will give him what every academy kid wants. A HOT SEXY TEACHER" Kurenai thought she was gonna have to invent a new way of the facepalm.
"N-Naruto Mizuki-sensei i-is asking for you" Hinata waked up to the group of Jonin surrounding Naruto.
Kakashi had a smirk when the girl's face was red looking directly at Naruto, all the Jonin were thinking the same thing along the lines of...
'after being her knight in shining armor the princes of the Hyuga has fallen in love with the beast of the village' all the Jonin (except Guy all had to prevent a giggle of amusement)
"AHH, NARUTO IT SEEMS YOU HAVE MADE A FRIEND, BONDS ARE THE SOUL OF YOUTH!" Guy didn't pick up the love Hinata had for Naruto. In fact, he was almost blunt everywhere except for taijutsu and ninja skills.
"Well it was nice meeting you all again and thanks for the gifts," Naruto said.
"HEY, little brat I refuse to get outdone by Kakashi or Kurenai and even Guy so I got you the best present of all," Naruto was interested so he listened"I Matarashi Anko Snake lady of the hidden leaf will give you 3 free lessons and a free meal" She didn't strike a pose but gave a thumbs up and a wink.
she pulled Naruto right up against her boobs and said "Well how about it most people would kill to have me as a teach' it's a once in a lifetime opportunity" Hinata saw Naruto blush at his face being pressed against the older shinobis breast and Hinata wondered 'does he like big boobs' and contemplated her own chest.
"Y-Yeah sure ill ask soon" Naruto stuttered not used to the hug.
Hinata grabbed Naruto's arm and pulled him away, Getting a giggle from Anko "She'll thank me later for giving her a lesson on seduction" as she proceeded to walk back to her own group 'Hey maybe I should use that on Kakashi, the closet pervert might get a nose bleed big enough to bring down those masks.'
BACK TO THE ACADEMY STUDENT GROUP 3
"HEY, Naruto what the hell took you so long, did the store guy give you trouble?" Kiba thought something like this might happen from the meetings his mother had to go to and shit she had heard from the civilian counsel scared of the blonde demon.
"Choji seems happy he got to stay here for five more" "minutes" Ino glared "no... it was more like visits" Shikamaru responded. Ino had a wide-eyed expression on her face. while Choji had a massive bag full of festival food.
"you sure took your time Naruto what happened?" Shino spoke as he walked up to the blonde.
"Oh, nothing much just meeting up with some friends" Naruto grinned "w-wait Naruto you are f-friends with Jonin?!" Hinata NEVER expected Naruto to know Jonin.
"WAIT NARUTO IS FRIENDS WITH THE JONIN" Sakura and Ino screamed in unison. Even Sasuke was visibly interested.
"WOW SO COOL NARUTO IS AWESOME" Ino squealed
"N-No way Naruto CANT be cooler than Sasuke" Sakura mumbled
'That might explain why he is strong but simply just being friends won't do anything if they don't train him' Sasuke thought and pondered for a second. He concluded that Naruto was just strong on his own.
10 MINUTES LATER
Mizuki gathered up all the students and walked down to a spot on the hill where they good all play and have fun before their parents picked them up or if their parents said they lived nearby and that they can walk home (only Naruto didn't have either Mizuki made it so he would walk down a specific path)
Sasuke was busy training like Naruto, both keeping a close eye on each other's style and Jutsu, Sasuke made a large fireball mean while Naruto was trying to make a water bullet. He looked over the scroll and read it a couple of times and went through the hand sings (water style: liquid bullet Jutsu) a liquid bullet shot straight out of Naruto's mouth and at the same time a fireball shot out of Sasuke's.
Hinata watched in awe as Naruto was shooting more water bullets and kept running through the hand sings over and over then "HEY, Naruto your gonna have chakra exhaustion if you keep that up" Kiba yelled worried.
Even Sasuke couldn't keep up that pace.
All the fangirls knew Kiba was right and got a shock, "N-Naruto you have done enough training" "yeah I have a drink" " Here have some food we can share".
Naruto turned around to see a small group of about 7 girls all asking for Naruto to eat with them "N-No I'm fine seriously I have enough chakra" Naruto smirked and put his hand on his biceps "I'm tough" all the girls had hearts in there eyes.
'How the hell can he put up with them even I can't stand them and they don't give me any attention' Shikamaru sighed even just thinking about it tired him out 'But his chakra is out of the ordinary.'
'Naruto, I know how much chakra elemental Ninjutsu can drain and you're doing it like you have Jonin levels of chakra capacity, Who are you?' Sasuke had to find the reason for Naruto's power.
"F-fine then I'll see if you have any kind of strain N-naruto," Hinata said as she went through hand sings (Byakugan) Hinta looked at Naruto's chakra network the asked him to try the Jutsu Naruto moved through the same hand seals and released a bullet of water.
Hinata froze for a second and processed "N-Naruto HOW MUCH CHAKRA DO YOU HAVE" Hinata shouted EVERYONE was curious for different reasons
Sasuke wanted to know how much chakra he needed to have to beat Naruto, and HIM.
Shikamaru thought it would be useful in knowing why Naruto was hated and what he was hiding
every boy (except Choji and Shino) was TREIFFIED they were scared to death when Naruto was so skilled to take Kiba on and had that much stamina NOW he had huge amounts of chakra.
Naruto was surprised at how much chakra he had when Hinata told him that his chakra was above that of all the teachers combined at the academy.
Mizuki was visibly scared he knew he could kill Naruto if push came to shove but if he had THAT much chakra then he might be a problem even for him if he were trained correctly and he is doing that himself 'MAYBE THE FOX IS INFLUENCING HIM' an idea that could not only scare the villagers into having a rebellion and trying to kill the fox but give him a chance to steal the scroll.
Naruto thought to himself for a second "Hey! maybe if I have more chakra than a Chunin and probably Jonin as an academy student maybe my parents were super strong ninja or apart of a clan!" Everyone was shocked at this "maybe I... have family out there somewhere..." Naruto started to cry.
This caught EVERYONE off guard Naruto was the blonde demon... was he?
Sasuke couldn't help but feel a sense of empathy and sadness. He understood Naruto better now he was not just some strong rival to overcome but someone who felt the pain of loneliness of having nobody.
a few tears fell from the Uchiha that night (which didn't go unnoticed by Naruto who knew of the massacre or rumors of it).
Hinata hugged Naruto and Kiba placed a hand on his shoulder, Choji even gave Naruto a bag of chips (his favorite) all the girls seen a new side to him HE was lonely all he wanted was a family.
Mizuki... WAS OVER AMUSED. seeing the Kyuubi crying about loneliness was a beautiful sight Shikamaru who was trying to comfort Naruto by being there for him noticed Mizuki and was disgusted by the sight
Shino now saw Naruto in a new light he felt bad for him and would try and be more open and friendly with him and after seeing Mizuki have to restrain from laughing at said by made him sick.
Sakura looked at Naruto then back at Sasuke just in time to see him shed some tears after remembering what Sasuke went through she realized 'he knows what it's like to be Naruto and have no parents' she felt bad and walked up to Sasuke and asked if he was ok Sasuke said he was fine and thanks for asking. and as a result, she fainted.
Ino looked at him and said "well you might be apart of my clan but called Uzumaki instead of Yamanaka, were both blonde and have blue eyes" the similarities were there and she couldn't think of anyone else at that moment.
Naruto started to feel better and stood up "well why don't you ask your dad I'm sure he will know and you can tell me tomorrow! I will find out who my parents are and then become tho Hokage and make them proud, BELIEVE IT!
10 minutes later
Most people had gone home the only people there were Sasuke, who was doing some training, Naruto, also training, but talking to Shikamaru and Choji. Shikamaru's dad was always late and Choji's dad was probably having a drink with him.
"Hey Shikamaru c'mon you have been here long enough let's go" Shikamaru's dad walked up with a bottle of sake in hand then beside him was a man who looked almost identical to Choji but had a more reddish tone of hair 'Must be Choji's old man' Naruto thought.
They waved each other goodbye and headed off.
Naruto's apartment was in the other direction so he headed home.
Sasuke went back to his house that was near the Uchiha clan compound.
Mizuki wanted to see what would happen to naruto but left it. He had a feeling just to stay away.
NEAR NARUTO'S APARTMENT...
Naruto walked down the road and seen a bright orange glow in the distance, moving towards him?...
all of a sudden it came into view a group of villagers seen him "THERE HE IS THE BLONDE DEMON" Naruto was still in shock at seeing the mob of villagers approaching him and fast.
he saw ninja round about genin level jump on to the path "let us kill the blonde demon!" all the genin had mask's on to hide their face, but Naruto could tell they were still shaky and worried than one of the 3 Genin went through hand seals.
Naruto saw the hand seals they weren't fast but Naruto rushed through his own once he saw the pattern was similar to Sasuke's pattern.
"(water style:liquid bullet jutsu)" "(fire style:fire ball jutsu)".
the Jutsu collided with water being the advantage, but the fireball (weakened) came out victorious and landed a blow on naruto who had no time to react.
thank's to the water bullet he only had first-degree burns. he could still stand unlike the other genin "I-its all up to y-you two now K-kill that fucking demon..." the genin fainted due to chakra exhaustion.
"THAT'S IT NOW AGAIN" "KILL HIM THIS TIME" "GET REVENGE!" "IF YOU DONT KILL HIM WE HAVE OTHER'S" the villagers started screaming and shouting.
When Naruto heard there were others he started to panic. sure he could keep spamming the water bullet Jutsu but if there were more people like them and maybe even stronger then he could only stall his impending doom.
"(water style: liquid bullet Jutsu)" "(fire style: fireball Jutsu)" the cycle went on with Naruto getting burnt more and more.
ELSEWHERE...
Kakashi was walking with Guy, Kurenai, Asuma and Anko. When all of a sudden he had a strange feeling he shrugged it off thinking nothing of it.
but...
something...
Just felt off...
He couldn't describe it until...
"HEY, KAKASHI LOOK AT THAT!" Kakashi and the rest of the Jonin look towards where Guy was pointing. To the naked eye, it would look pitch black... but to the eyes of a well-trained Ninja who had years of experience, it would like... "A bonfire," Anko said with a hint of amusement.
"c'mon let's check it out huh Kurenai," Asuma said.
"FIRE-WORKS ARE THE EXPLOSIONS OF YOUTH!" Guy cheered on
Kakashi had a feeling there was something more to it than a bonfire so he went along. In a hurry, which surprised everyone.
'KAKASHI MUST BE WANTING TO FOLLOW THE PATH OF YOUTH AT MAXIMUM SPEED, NOW THAT'S MY ETERNAL RIVAL!' Guy ran after Kakashi and spoke "LET'S HAVE A RACE KAKASHI, IF I LOOSE THEN I WILL DO 1,000 LAP'S AROUND THE VILLAGE ONE MY HAND'S" "sure" Kakashi responded.
"HEY, don't leave me out" Anko who wanted to enjoy one of these challenges for once decided why not "AHH ANKO I SEE MY YOUTHFUL-NESS HAS GOTTEN TO YOU TOO" Guy was crying and smiling at the same time "uhh... sure let's go with... that".
"Should we join them?" asked Asuma in a comedic tone "you know what sure... loser buys the other person whatever they want for the whole day!" Kurenai states running of leaving Asuma in the dust. *sigh* Asuma run's after his 'beloved'.
BACK WITH NARUTO
Naruto didn't have enough chakra for his Jutsu and resorted to dogging but was getting burns here there and everywhere his black Tshirt was ruined and his white short's were now starting to go black
Naruto kept dogging but his injuries were making him slower and slower. The villagers were laughing in amusement but most of the genin were low on chakra.
But that didn't mean anything as the blonde demon had run out of chakra for his Jutsu as well, "C'MON WE'LL OUT NUMBER HIM IN TAIJUTSU" all the rest of the genin rushed at Naruto who put his guard up he just dogged and blocked they were too skilled for him.
His fast reaction and stamina kept him going and eventually, the genin were getting tired and Naruto's unpredictable movements proved to be a nuisance. So much so that although they were dominating he was dogging at least 60% of their attacks.
"don't worry you have done enough". The genin turned around to see Jonin the ones who would be there of the demon proved to be too much "leave we will burn him to death".
Naruto was terrified.
This was the end.
WITH THE "POWER OF YOUTH SQUAD".
Kakashi had a REALLY bad feeling now he was even running faster than Guy, who was screaming about Kakashi's youth. he looked at the "bonfire" to see that small flames were being erupted and what sounded like Naruto screaming.
Kakashi jumped on the roof's all the Jonin were shocked they thought this was supposed to be a road race until they jumped with Kakashi to hear Naruto's scream.
(fire style: dragon flame Jutsu)
(water style: liquid bullet's Jutsu)
Naruto thought he was gonna die until he saw Kakashi jump down in the nick of time followed by Asuma, Guy, Kurenai, and Anko.
"You have a lot of nerve!" Anko said with a growl.
"I'll give you the worst mental torture you ever see" Kurenai's blood-red eye's looked like that of a real demon.
"THIS IS EXTREMELY UN YOUTHFUL AND YOU WILL FACE MY WRATH" Guy took a stance and had the aura of a literal beast.
"consider your throat slit," Asuma said leaking killing intent
"YOU... Will hear the birds chirp ONE... LAST TIME!" Kakashi was perhaps the freakiest unfolding his (Sharingan) and a hand full of lighting.
Naruto could cry. he was safe even though he was surrounded by a mob of villagers he had never felt safer in his life.
(Chidori: one thousand birds) Kakashi rammed it in the Jonin and that was the queue for a large platoon of 20 Jonin level ninja to rush out and a battle began.
Naruto looked left and right trying to analyze everything at once Kurenai guarded Naruto against threats meanwhile Guy, Kakashi, Asuma, and Anko were taking on the Jonin.
One Jonin sneaked behind Naruto as he was about to stab him when he saw petal's he jumped back but when he did he was impaled Kurenai had a kunai knife right in his backside "NOBODY BUT YOU AND YOUR FRIENDS ARE GONNA DIE TONIGHT" was the last words he heard, Naruto looked behind him to see Kurenai smile at him, in a second she was in front of him.
"Hey don't worry your safe I won't let anything happen to you, your a brave boy fighting back those corrupt genin and really strong you've made us all proud". Naruto gave a grin and Kurenai took up a stance to defend Naruto.
more and more Jonin showed up Kakashi, Guy, Anko and forcefully Asuma were having a competition on who could kill the most traitors or knock them out. Kakashi was currently in the lead followed by Anko and Guy who was right on her tail, and Asuma was behind him by 4.
But the numbers became overwhelming, it seemed like the entire village was after Naruto, Chunin, and Genin were trying to land the kill on Naruto but would always get intercepted by Kurenai. Until some Jonin managed to get past. They formed a plan that would be full-proof.
Kurenai was getting tired from all the Genjutsu not only using them on the enemies targeting Naruto but also to help Kakashi, Guy, Anko, and Asuma
she was a little low on chakra. Then a wave of Chunin and Genin as well as some Jonin came her way she was so focused on them she didn't hear Naruto cry for help.
Her instincts told her to check on Naruto to see a Jonin holding him covering his mouth on a puddle sinking into it Naruto struggled but the Jonin's grip was too strong and he got dragged underwater.
Kurenai was about to rush over and save Naruto but the traitors got in the way she would have to incapacitate them all.
Naruto was underwater it wasn't a Genjutsu, he could tell. He struggled and struggled effort's futile... it was starting to look black.
?
NARUTO...
NARUTO!
'huh... where am I' he looked around to see a giant cage and what looks to be like a sewer.
the cage had a sheet of sealing paper with the kanji for seal written on it.
"we're in your head Naruto Uzumaki" inside the cage was a massive red. When Naruto walked closer he saw "Y-YOUR THE KYUUBI" "Wait am I dead that's why I can see you?".
The fox laughed "NOW, THAT'S A REACTION I HAVENT SEEN I THOUGHT YOU WOULD HAVE BEEN SCARED OR SHIT YOURSELF! HAHA".
Naruto looked at the fox and said "I don't care if your the Kyuubi or not I'm not scared of anyone! BELIEVE IT!" Naruto let out the most confident and fearless look he could muster.
"well, well you have some balls after all. The reason you're here isn't that your dead, but you're about to be, take my power and free yourself." The Kyuubi stood up and had a smile on his face.
Naruto wasn't dumb he knew he would die he struggled to his heart's content and the man's grip didn't loosen at all. This was his only option.
"FINE, Kyuubi lend me your power".
REAL WORLD.
The Jonin thought for sure Naruto was dead he had drowned.
Finally, the village was safe at la-
Naruto started glowing red and he felt a kick that sent him straight through the puddle.
5 MINUIT'S EARLIER
Everyone had seen Naruto go underwater and not come back up they were all taking out the Jonin as fast as they could to get to Naruto all of them Panicking for the safety of the blonde.
Kakashi who looked the calmest of them all was worried to death 'Naruto is all I have left of my sensei I'LL BE DANMED IF I LET HIM DIE HERE!' Kakashi was not aiming for the knockout he was aiming for the kill.
His eye was spinning constantly and he was coping and using Jutsu (fire style: dragon flame Jutsu) (fire style: fireball Jutsu) (lighting blade). He was using EVERYTHING. Villagers were terrified and some even started running.
Kakashi's chakra was getting strained and drained until
"AAAAAAHHHAHHHHH" the jonin who took Naruto underwater was kicked up as high as the fireworks.
out of the blood-red boiling water came "N-Naruto?" Kurenai asked. Naruto's response was "RRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHH" all the people there Ninja's and Villagers alike could feel the blood lust and power coming from Naruto 'T-This is the REAL Kyuubi' all the villagers thought in unison as well the Ninja's.
"AM GONNA RIP YOU ALL TO SHRED'S!" Naruto yelled and vanished
WARNING BLOOD AND GORE (if you don't like it then skip to END GORE that will be the end of Naruto's rampage and there won't be anything important plot-wise Just a really gory fight scene/massacre).
Naruto appeared in front of a group of Genin one of the girls started crying, Then her head was sliced clean off and fell on the ground with that same crying face only to be crushed into mush by the blonde demon's foot, Naruto had a sick expression on his face as he licked the blood of the worthless girl of his face.
he tore off the arms of the genin who screamed out in pain "not so tough without your fire Jutsu, huh" (water style: liquid bullet Jutsu) red water gushed out from Naruto's mouth. was it red from the Kyuubi chakra or red from the sliced-up corpse on the ground? Both.
Naruto disappeared in a red flash and genin's throats were slit and blood gushed out of them.
"YOU SICK BASTARD" one of the Jonin ran out toward's "Naruto". "Naruto" blocked the Jonin's Taijutsu effortlessly and punched him in the gut then a stomp to the knee caps followed throat grab "W-WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU!?" "Naruto" laughed "IM THE REAL DEMON, THE KYUUBI, HEH, I HAVE SEEN ALL THIS FROM INSIDE THE BLONDE BRAT, YOU TAKING OUT YOUR FRUSTRATION ON HIM AN INNOCENT CHILD, IT WON'T BE HARD TO MAKE A DEAL WITH HIM. MAYBE I CAN DESTROY THIS VILLAGE AND MAKE A NEW ONE THAT'S AN IDEA, IM A PRETTY CUNNING FOX IF YOU MUST KNOW." THE KYUUBI answered with a sinister grin.
All the villagers were terrified Naruto had no reason to protect the Village or anyone he can speak with the KYUUBI and the KYUUBI had full control. (is what they thought but Naruto just left him to it with the only restriction of "get me and the people I care about safe. Then I go back into control. got it!").
THE KYUUBI then went on a massacre on the ninja with his water Jutsu and killed them all.
GORE END
the third Hokage arrived on the scene to see Naruto covered in red chakra with sadistic red slit eyes and thick whiskers and canines like a wolf.
"N-Naruto!" The third Hokage was shocked to see Kyuubi marking's
When he heard from a dog Kakashi had summoned mid-fight he came asap, He did not expect to see... Naruto like this "Lord Hokage, the Kyuubi has taken control over the boy!" one of the villagers said.
"And why do you think that has happened! WHAT THE HELL MADE YOU ALL THINK IT WAS ACCEPTABLE TO PUSH NARUTO TO THE LENGTH OF HAVING TO REALY ON THE NINE-TAIL'S IN THE FIRST PLACE" the third Hokage was FURIOUS.
"welp, it was fun while it lasted but I see no danger now I'm gonna take a nap, get out brat!" KYUUBI stated and the red chakra faded revealing the blue normal eyes Naruto had.
Everyone was shocked that THE KYUUBI just went back nonchalantly like he had not killed a mini-army. Naruto fell down but just before he hit the ground Kakashi caught him one eye crying normal tears's the other crying tears of blood. Instead of the normal 3 tomo-Sharingan, it was a mix between a pinwheel and a shuriken. Kakashi had awakened his Mangekyo Sharingan.
END OF CHAPTER 4
So, Kakashi has his magekyo how was that, huh. kind of just wrote itself out, well the next chapter is gonna be Naruto VS Sasuke.
If I'm being honest I think I built it up well but I want to hear what you think. This is my first fanfic and I'm probably gonna do another soon maybe chapter 5 ill start a new one and keep doing this one as well it might be a gamer fanfic on Naruto. But I'm getting ahead of myself maybe when I reach past the Chuni exam arc I'll start a new one.
But one thing that's been really bugging me were how little the views were like by this point the views are
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