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You'll Thank Me
The microwave beeped and I popped the door open, mouth watering as the smell of fresh popcorn permeated the kitchen. I opened the now inflated bag and dumped it into the plastic bowl I had waiting on the counter. I tossed a few into my mouth and another hand dipped in to grab a few. I glanced over my shoulder to be met with a mischievous smile.
"You just couldn't wait for me to come back?" I asked with a mock frown and a raised eyebrow. Austen just smiled; erupting butterflies into my stomach, and rested her palms on the counter behind me.
"Actually I was waiting, but then you were taking too long," he said with a grin and leaned in a little closer "and I had to come find you." His breath tickled my face and for a brief moment I thought he was going to kiss me. I closed my eyes and everything, my breathing picking up slightly, but the kiss never came. I peeped one eye open to see he had snatched the popcorn bowl off the counter and was shoving a handful of the beautiful snack into his mouth.
"Hey!" I crossed my arms over my chest as he chuckled and chewed at the same time. "Don't laugh and don't choke, that was mean." he shrugged and swallowed. "I thought you were going to kiss me." I said with a blush, slightly embarrassed, but at the same time starting to feel more comfortable around Austen. At the beginning of the school year I would never have thought I would be serving Austen Cole popcorn in my house.
"That was the idea, princess." Austen draped an arm over my shoulder and pecked me on the forehead. Warmth spread through my cheeks at the contact.
"You used me to get a buttery snack."
"Indeed." He said and I elbowed him slightly causing us to both laughing lightly.
It was a Friday night, a week since I went out with the girls to a club and got dragged home by Liz like a misbehaved child. It was embarrassing the way she spoke to me when Bex walked me outside when she arrived so I wouldn't have to go alone. I was embarrassed the way she told me off on the car ride home. She went on and on about how irresponsible it was, listing all the things that could have gone wrong. Firstly I never thought I would be yelled at by my best friend like I was 5 and secondly I couldn't actually believe she was being so judgmental since at the beginning of the year she was all about trying new things since we would be graduating in this summer and going to college next year. At first I just got furious. I held my tongue and took the lecture in the car ride home and then stormed out of the car when she pulled into my driveway. I didn't know how to respond to that situation. She wasn't my mother; even my mother wouldn't have acted like that. Rachel was pretty chill. After I had a few days during the week to calm down I started to feel a little guilty for ignoring her in school, thinking that perhaps I was in the wrong. I mean I hadn't even wanted to go to the club in the first place and the whole fake ID thing was up to Macey, I didn't ask for it. The guilt got me thinking about it more deeply. There was definitely something up with Liz recently. She had been acting strange for a while now and I didn't know what was wrong. This was the first real fight we ever had I didn't really know how to fix it. I knew I would have to call her, it was up to me to call her now since I have been the one avoiding her. She had already –sort of- apologized through text message, but I hadn't answered. I think I was just in a little bit of shock, I mean she didn't even let me explain everything to her.
On the plus side the police still hadn't broken down my door and arrested me for under age drinking or fraud. Was having a fake ID fraud? I don't know, but I wasn't arrested for it so far. No orange jumpsuits for Cammie. You can congratulate me; send me a card or something if you wish. A little gift maybe, I love cacti if you need any gift ideas.
Anyway, it was now Friday again and I was planning on calling Liz this weekend. I wanted to know what was wrong, get to the bottom of her weird behavior so I could help her like a best friend should. Maybe there was something wrong at home? Whatever the case Dr. Cammie would be there to help. I had a PHD in listening to problems. Right now though, Austen was over. We had gone over some history notes together for an upcoming test at first. He said he needed help. He didn't really, but we quizzed each other and filled out the study guide so it wasn't a total bust of a study session. Now we had decided to put in a movie, Indian Jones and the Raiders of the Lost Ark. I had gone to make some popcorn and he was supposed to wait for me, but he obviously hadn't.
"Do you want anything else? I think there's some beer in the fridge? Gabe drinks them." I said, I didn't know if he was sued to drinking when around the house "Or Coke? We have Coke too." I added and Austen smiled
"I'll have a Coke, thanks." He said and I nodded ducking under his arm and heading back for the fridge. Austen kept walking, but paused in the doorway and leant against the wall to wait for me.
"You want a glass or just drink it out of the can?" I asked grabbing two of the sodas. I checked for beer too though and we did have some.
"Can's fine."
"Okay." I shut the fridge door with my hip and Austen smiled again, eyes twinkling. "What?"
"Nothing, that was just cute." He said, quickly turning on his heel and heading to the living room without waiting for me to reply. My cheeks blushed, I still wasn't used to his off the cuff compliments like that, and they had been coming in more often since out date. I wasn't sure if I would ever get used to them if I were being honest.
When I entered the living room Austen was sat at one end of the couch, popcorn bowl in his lap and socked feet propped up on the coffee table. My heart did a little thump thump at the site of him so comfortable in my house. We were alone since my mother had gone away to decorate some house in the Hamptons and Gabe was working the night shift at the hospital. He would probably be staying at his apartment too since my mom wasn't around.
I placed Austen's Coke on a coaster on the coffee table and then popped mine open.
"Thanks, Mer." He said immediately reaching for the can.
"You're welcome." I said plopping down next to him and trying not to sit too stiffly. I didn't want to look uncomfortable or awkward, even though I slightly was. I mean I think it was safe to say we were dating, he hadn't exactly asked me to be his girlfriend, but he had done everything else. We walked to classes holding hands and he had his arm around me when he ate lunch together. He would kiss me in school when he thought no one was looking and we wouldn't get in trouble, and the most important one, we were going to the Snowball together. That meant we were dating? Right?
And just to prove my point, Austen wrapped his harm around me and pulled me closer on the couch before pressing play on the movie. I rested my head on his shoulder, my heart beating wildly in my chest. Liana's warnings about Austen from last Friday had been on my mind all week, but he hadn't done anything to live up to those warnings and right now all I could think about was how safe I felt with his arm around me.
I don't know when I dozed off, but I was woken up by the sound of my phone ringing. The movie was still going though so I couldn't have been out for very long… scratch that the movie was almost over, probably only five minutes left. I felt Austen's fingers running though my hair and realized my head taken the place of the popcorn bowl and was now in his lap. With cheeks tinged pink I lifted my head, eyes a little unfocused and head foggy from my nap. It was a little embarrassing to fall asleep at four thirty on a Friday when you're sort of on a date, but I ignored it and reached for my phone on the table. Austen's fingers feel from my hair and I missed their contact immediately. I didn't even look at the caller ID before I picked up.
"Hello?" I answered, voice still groggy from sleep
"Hey, Gallagher Girl." At that voice I shot straight up and out of Austen's lap, eyes wide awake.
"Zach?" I squealed and Austen gave me a weird look as if to ask if everything was okay. I nodded my head and his face relaxed as he turned back to the movie.
"The one and only." Zach replied and I could practically hear the smirk he must have been wearing through the phone.
"W-what are you calling me for?" I stuttered without thinking.
What was I thinking?!
This was Zach.
Zach Goode!
For Christ sake Cammie, you don't ask why a famous cute boy is calling you, holy cow you sound so stupid! You have been texting all week!
"I just wanted you to know that I'm in Roseville. It's official!"
"You're finally here?" I asked, not able to keep the excitement out of my voice and I almost let out a little squeal before I saw Austen look at me out of the corner of his eye and realized her was still here.
"Yeah, I just got in. I'm staying at the Bed and Breakfast in town with Grant and another friend."
"Oh? And how do you like our little town so far, hmm?" I questioned eagerly, a grin on my face, though he couldn't see it.
"Its great! Real charming, though I think its real appeal comes with being so close you." He says and I turn my face away from Austen as I turn bright red. I don't want him to see me blushing on a phone call. After I don't reply to Zach's compliment he continues "I just wanted to know if you were free to meet up tomorrow? For coffee or something? There was this really cute place I saw on the way in-"
"The Bean?" I asked him and he chuckled.
"Yeah that's the one."
"That's my favorite coffee shop. Its really good." I said and he chuckled again.
"Alright well, could we meet there for a drink or something? Tomorrow around 10 o'clock?" he asked and there was no way I could say now with the nervous tone that had as leaked into his voice.
"Of course! I- I mean I'm free yeah."
"Great because I have something really important I want to ask you." He said and the first I thought of was marriage. Zach in a suit, down on one knee proposing to me in The Bean, fairy lights twinkling in the dimmed lighting. The image shocked me at its ridiculousness and I almost laughed out loud in awkwardness to my imagination. Austen was right next to me! But then again, Zach didn't count because he was my celebrity crush really, I could totally fantasize about him and no harm could be done. All girls do it.
Except not all girls are actually friends with their celebrity crushes…
And yes!
That's right ladies and gents!
I used the word: friend.
The same way its safe to assume Austen and I are dating, I assume that Zach and I are now friends. We've been texting and calling back and forth recently and our conversations flow freely and smoothly.
"Okay," I finally reply "I'll see you there then?"
"Yeah I'll see ya, Gallagher Girl."
"Alright, bye."
"Wait Jen!"
Gosh darnit.
Yes, he does still call me Jen because he thinks my name is still Jenny. It's a problem and I'm working on it… ots just that I feel like every time it comes out of his mouth it adds an extra pound of weight to my shoulders and makes it that much harder to tell him.
"Yes?"
"There is a surprise too."
"Surprise? An important question and a surprise? Damn is it my birthday or something?" I asked teasingly and he laughed on his end of the phone.
"You'll think its Christmas, trust me." There was a moment of silence and then I heard shouting and a loud banging noise on his end of the phone.
"Uh, everything okay?" I asked as he mumbled a curse word.
"Grant-!" and then there was a sound of glass breaking. I put a hand of my mouth to stifle a laugh. "You idiot!" Zach shouted at Grant and then I heard voices. Probably Grant defending himself.
"Jen, I gotta go. These two losers are lowering the IQ of the whole town and I gotta save the day, but I'll talk to you tomorrow? At 10?"
"Yeah I'll be there. See you, Zach."
"Bye Jen." I heard one last curse word and another bang and the line went dead.
I couldn't believe I was seeing Zachary Goode in the flesh tomorrow. At 10. In The Bean. This was crazy! This was insane! This was-
"Who's Zach?" Austen asked and I suddenly remember he was here.
I was about to break into a fangirl moment and my boyfriend was here.
Somehow I doubted he would appreciate me squealing over another guy.
Real it in, Cammie. Calm down. You can do it.
"He's just a friend." I replied and I wanted to high-five myself with how casual I sounded when inside I was screaming, a tiny, metaphorical me was jumping and dancing and singing.
"A friend?" I could see the skepticism on Austen's –handsome- face. He looked doubtful and I knew I had to change the subject.
"Yeah. So the movie is over?" I asked looking away from his honey eyes and to the TV with the credits rolling. I couldn't believe I feel asleep during one of my favorite movies. I could feel Austen's eyes study me for another moment before he sighed and stood up stretching.
"Yup." He said popping the "p", arms up and stretching to the ceiling. I stood up too and headed in, wrapping my arms around his waist and pressing my cheek against his chest.
Wow.
When did I get so bold?
My heartbeat increased when I realized what I had done, but I smiled into his chest when his arms came around me, returning the hug. He nuzzled his face into the crook of my neck and the butterflies took off in my stomach.
"You smell so good." He whispered and I giggled. "I love the smell of coconut." He continued, describing the scent of my shampoo and body wash. He always went on about loving the smell and I thought it was adorable.
"Thank you. It's my shampoo." I whispered and his arms tightened around me.
"I know. Don't ever change it." He lifted his head away from my neck and then dipped it back down again to claim a quick kiss. His lips were warm and soft and gentle and my arms unwound themselves from around his waist so my hands could slide up his chest and then around his neck. My fingers playing his soft hair at the base of his neck. He pressed me close -if that was even possible- and then pulled back so we could breath.
He left me breathless.
Literally.
"God Cammie." He whispered, his eyes scanning my face and then he smiled a bright, charming smile with his little dimple that captivated me every time. I just had to smile back at him.
If you knew Austen Cole and you could see that smile you would know that you just have to smile back. Its not and option. It's a mandatory response. After kissing a couple more times we checked the time and realized it was going on six o'clock in the evening.
"Want to stay for dinner?" I asked picking up the empty popcorn bowl –Austen must have eaten most of it by himself since I feel asleep-, tossed the empty Coke cans into the bowl -he had drunk my soda too and headed into the kitchen with Austen on my heels. He was checking his phone, eyes on the screen.
"Um, no thanks babe."
Swoon.
He called me babe!
That was the first time he ever called me babe!
And he said it so naturally.
Like it was a normal occurrence.
Swoon again.
"You sure?" I tossed the empty cans into the recycling and placed the bowl in the sink.
"Yeah I'm actually gonna head over to John's. He lives just around the corner from you. Did you know that?" he asked looking up from his phone and I signed leaning up against the counter.
Yes I did know that Mr. Sourpuss lived less than five minutes from my house. Sadly I had seen him around. He drove by on his way to school. I didn't need reminding of Jerk Boy's close proximity at all times.
"Yeah." I breathed out and Austen chuckled. He knew I didn't like John. He knew John didn't like me.
"I don't know why you two don't get along." He said coming closer and I frowned.
"Don't get along? He hates me! I've never done anything to him and he hates me."
"He doesn't hate you…"
"Uh, yeah he does. He accidentally spilt a whole can of Dr. Pepper on me at lunch on Tuesday." I argue as Austen slips hand onto my hip. "I had to wear my gym shirt all day, remember? And I was sticky and disgusting for the rest of the day. It was gross."
"He apologized." I laughed at that. Barely.
"He said, and I quote," I pointed a finger at his face to show him how serious I was about these words being John's "Whoa didn't see you there, Morgan." Austen laughed at my attempted guy's voice. "That is not exactly an apology. Especially because he most certainly did see me! I was stood right next to you! I was holding your hand and everything and yet every drop of that soda ended up on me!"
I was actually getting fired up about the memory. At the time my anger was dulled by my embarrassment and my eyes had prickled with tears when everyone in the cafeteria went silent. Watching my white shirt become see-though. I actually cried in the girl's bathroom after that. Now though, now I was just pissed remembering it.
I mean spilling his soda on me in front of everyone was low and cliché. Two things I wouldn't have pegged John Harper as, but hey, you think you know people…
"Alright so he probably did it on purpose…"
"Probably?"
"He did do it on purpose, but I told him to lay off after wards."
"You did?" I asked surprised and warmed by this news.
"Yeah." That's really sweet of you." I said "But it probably just made him hate me more anyway." He just sighed and pecked me on the lips, not bothering to defend his friend anymore. Why did John have to be Austen's best friend? Why couldn't it have been someone nice? Someone who didn't not like me? I mean Finn was the best! I loved Finn and we go along great, best out of all of Austen's friends and yet John… we couldn't stand the sight of each other.
"Mind if I leave my car in your drive? I think I'm going to walk over and I'll just grab in the morning before practice. Our last game is on Tuesday." Austen said regarding football. This season was still going, They had to make up a game that was canceled back in September because of a big storm that hit, so the season was extended by a week.
"Yeah that's fine." I said "I'll walk you halfway?" I asked and he nodded with a smile. And we headed to grab our coats. It was nippy outside. The first snow was meant to hit next weekend and hopefully we could get a snow day out of it. Christmas break was in two weeks anyway though. The Snowball even sooner.
I pulled my pompom hat onto my head and pulled on a pair of gloves, zipping my jacket up all the way.
"Cozy?" Austen asked with a smirk as I snuggled my chin into my fluffy scarf and I nodded. He chuckled and kissed me on the forehead before we headed out. I didn't bother to lock the front door since I would be back in less than ten minutes probably. I held Austen's hand as we walked, my mind wandering to the phone call I had with Zach earlier. He had something important to ask me? What could that possibly be? And a surprise? I loved surprises. So long as they were good ones. I know most people don't like surprises for some reason, but I did.
It was so exciting. Surprise dates and surprise gifts and surprise in the form of good news. I loved it all. I was giddy with the thought of Zach's surprise and intrigued by this secret question.
My eyes wandered the street and I saw someone walking down the street towards us. The person's head was down so I couldn't see their face, but they were a distance away and it was pretty dark. The streetlights were bright around these streets though, one thing I was always grateful for. No one could sneak up on you.
Austen stopped walking and pulled me in. My eyes leaving the random stranger who looked oddly familiar.
"I had fun today." Austen said with a smile and I smiled back.
"Me too, though I'm sorry again for falling asleep on you."
"No problem, you're cute when you snore anyway." I gasped and his him lightly on the shoulder
"I do not snore!" and the amusement in his eyes told me he was just teasing, but my cheeks were already blushing red.
"I'll text you later okay?" he said and I nodded as he kissed me one last time before he crossed the street and headed off down the street the rest of the way to John's house. I watched his retreating figure for a few blissful moments before I turned around and almost rammed right into someone, key work almost, before I managed to save myself and jumped backwards. It was the stranger from before presumably.
"I am so sorry, I was expecting… y-you…" I couldn't finish my sentence when met the eyes of the person. My eyes widened and so did theirs.
I couldn't believe he was there. He was stood in front of me.
"John." I said shocked. The boy who had been walking in the distance was John. My eyes scanned his figure in disbelief. He had a stuffed pink bunny in his hand and I could see a plastic toy of some kind sticking out of his jacket pocket. When he saw me staring at the bunny, his startled expression at seeing me dropped and he shoved that hand into his pocket too. He glanced around and saw Austen's retreating figure. Austen was heading off to John's house, which was just around the corner. Apparently John wasn't there though, he was in front of me. I had only offered to walk Austen half the way because I didn't want to get any closer than that to Jerk Boy and yet life was exceedingly unfair and here he was. He was dressed casually in jeans and leather jacket, his hair was scruffy. I wasn't really used to seeing him out of uniform. I had to wonder what he was doing out of the house at this time of the evening. With a fluffy bunny in his pocket at that. Did he even know Austen was coming over? Or had Austen just decided to go over himself. I suppose they were best friends and Austen felt comfortable enough to just walk over and into John's house like he lived there too. John's eyebrows were pinched together and the expression on his face was one of distaste now that he had time to assess the situation. He knew I had just been with Austen. His eyes narrowed at Austen's back.
"You think that Austen, likes you?" He asked suddenly and I was taken off guard, not expecting that from him. His steal grey eyes were cold and dark all I could do was stare in shock in response.
"You think that he's into you? For real?" he continued and still I said nothing.
"I- I don't know- I"
No.
John wasn't going to ruin this for me. My anger from earlier about the Dr. Pepper incident started to bubbled back up. I didn't know why he didn't like me so much. I had never done anything to him. Never had I done anything to deserve his cruel and snide remarks. He was an asshole with a stick up his butt and I was tired of face the brunt of his bad moods, which by the way were never ending! I didn't need to stutter and give him the satisfaction of seeing me become embarrassed because of him anymore "I don't know what you have against me, but whether you like it or not Austen and I are dating. I don't care if you hate me because you aren't the one I need to enjoy spending time with. I try to be cordial with you, but you just can't seem to stand me no matter what! You and go and spill drinks on me for no reason when I'm minding my own business. And for the record I do believe that Austen likes me and I have reason to," I could feel my confidence growing as I continued to speak. The shock on his face that I was actually speaking with force and confronting him head on about his behavior was short lived though as he cut me off.
His tone went deeper as he spoke again and he took a step closer to me his head leaning forward a bit, "You listen here, Morgan," my name on his lips sounded like venom spat from a serpent's mouth. "I don't care whether you hate me or not either, I'm not the one kissing you everyday my best friend is. I've known Austen for my entire life. I'm not saying this because I hate you. Get over yourself." He snapped with a sneer and once again John Harper had gotten me. It seemed I could never get ahead with this kid.
"That's one of your problems." He continued "You're too busy thinking that because you're a nobody in school people are always out to get you because of that. I don't care that you're a nobody. What I don't understand is why Austen is playing with you." He leaned back again and readjusted his shoulders studying me for a few seconds my lip was quivering. And I felt stupid. Were my eyes watering again? Why did I always cry in front of him? Always. He had seen me cry more than any other person. He had seen the tears leaking when he spilt his soda on me. He was the only one who saw. He just got to me more than anyone else could.
"Maybe he just wants a new toy, maybe he wants to crush your dreams to smithereens. Maybe he genuinely thinks he likes you at the moment, but the moment will pass. I don't really care, but whatever the reason… you will get hurt. It's gonna be ten times worse than right now, trust me on that. You can't handle simple facts like these, what about lies? Can you handle the lies that will continue to pour out of his mouth? It may seem cruel to tell you now, but you'll thank me later. You'll thank me later if you get out of this now." His words sounded eerily like Liana's from last week. Did Austen really like me or was I just his shiny new toy for now? Was I going to be used a tossed aside? I didn't think so. I didn't think Austen was like that. I had managed to write Liana's comments and threats off as jealousy. She was Jealous about Austen's relationship with me. She had been sort of together before he and I went on a date, but what could John's motives be in saying something likes this? It was like he was jealous of Austen and I's relationship. What he could have to be jealous about that? His jaw was set, his lips pressed into a thin line, his dirty blonde hair all scruffed up and falling in his eyes and I shivered again against the cold. He pursed his lips slightly as though he was going to open them again; his fist loosened a little, and this wave of need washed over me. I wanted someone to hold me, to fill the hole John had just carved out and for a second… a really tiny second I thought he was gonna say sorry, it was in his eyes. At least I thought it was, but the only thing that happened was his face filling with rage as a tear rolled down my cheek and then he just strode right past me in the direction Austen had gone, his shoulder brushing mine a little and I felt like I was about to crack and fall to dust right there in the middle of road.
A/N- UNEDTIED.
OKAY SO THAT CHAPTER WAS OVER 5000 WORDS… PRETTY LONG I THINK AND I ACTUALLY THINK ITS ONE OF MY FAVORITES SO FAR! WHAT DO YOU THINK?
THERE WERE LOTS OF BOYS IN IT, WHICH I THINK MADE UP FOR THE LACK OF THEM IN THE LAST CHAPTER.
I TOLD YOU THERE WOULD BE MORE ZACH AND AUSTEN AND JOHN!
WHAT IS UP WITH LIZ?
WHO LIKES AUSTEN? ARE HIS FEELINGS FOR CAMMIE GENUINE?
WHAT ABOUT ZACH? HE'S IN ROSEVILLE! YAY! WHAT'S HIS SURPRISE? AND WHAT DOES HE WANT TO ASK CAMMIE?
AND FINALLY… WHAT IS JOHN'S PROBLEM?! IS HE REALLY JUST A JERK, I MEAN HE DID MAKE CAMMIE CRY OR DOES HE HAVE REASONS FOR HIS ACTIONS?
THOSE ARE SOME PRETTY GREAT QUESTIONS WHICH I WILL NOT ANSWER FOR YOU (EVEN THOUGH I KNOW THE ANSWER TO THEM ALL MUHAHAHAHAHA), BUT WOULD LOVE TO HERE YOU ALL TRY TO ANSWER!
REPLIES:
.BERE- YESSSS ZAAAAACH! HE IS HERE! SO CLOSE WE CAN TASTE HIM! *POPS PARTY POPPER*
TOASTY EH- I LOVE YOU TOO!
GALLAGHERGIRLS13BYE- YES I'M SO EXCITED FOR ZACH BEING IN ROSEVILLE TOO AND DRAMA IS COMING! I FEEL IT ALREADY STIRRING DON'T YOU? I'M GLAD YOU LIKED THE LAST CHAPTER I THINK IT WAS NICE CHANGE OF PACE TOO. TOSSED IN THAT CLIFF HANGER LIKE "HELL YES" BECAUSE I'M EVIL. THOUGH I FEEL LIKE THIS ONE IS EVEN WORSE… I FEEL LIKE "WTF IS UP WITH LIZ" IS AN ON GOING TREND NOW TOO BECAUSE SOMETHING IS WRONG WITH THAT GIRL… BUT WHAT COULD IT BE…? ANYWHO! LOVE YOU AND HOPE ALL IS WELL! XXXX
DROPDEADGORGEOUS4EVER- YES LIANA IS GETTING INCREASINGLY MORE HATABLE IT SEEMS. CAMMIE ALSO WANTS TO KNOW ABOUT THIS THINGY WITH LIZ AND HAS DECIDED TO FIND OUT (FINALLY). ALSO I FEEL YOU GIRL, AUSTEN AND CAMMIE ARE PRETTY CUTE AND I HAD FUN WRITING THEM IN THIS CHAPTER, BUT I MEAN… ZAMMIE! WILL AUSTEN DO SOMETHING REALLY DOUCHY? MAYBE, JOHN AND LIANA SEEM TO THINK HE WILL…
IT'SHARDIKNOW- OH YES…. LOTS OF FUN MUHAHAHAHAHA, DRAMAM IS BREWING.
SHIMMERGALLGHER- MORE ZAMMIE IS DEFINETLY COMING! TRUST ME! YOU'LL ALL BE SQUEALING IN THIS NEXT CHAPTER! YOU CAN GO PUSH AUSTEN OFF A CLIFF, I FEEL MOST PEOPLE WOULD APPLAUD YOU HAHA.
LEX25- YES I DON'T REALLY LIKE CAMMIE AND LIZ FIGHTING, BUT NOW CAMMIE THINKS SOMETHING IS WRONG WITH LIZ AND WANTS TO HELP HER SO HOPFULLY THEY WILL FIX THINGS SOON. I DON'T TRUST LIANA EITHER, BUT SHE MIGHT NOT BE A COMPLETE LIAR… WHO KNOWS. NO ONE'S A WORSE UPDATER THAN ME SO DON'T WORRY. AND THANK YOU MUCH! THAT MEANS A LOT. I HOPE YOU LIKE THIS CHAPTER!
GUEEST #1- MORE ZACH IS COMING! YAY!
INEEDANAME- WHOOP! I SHIP ZAMMIE TOO! AND SORRY FOR THE SUSPENSE AND THE LONG, LONG, LONGGGGGG WAIT! PLEASE DON'T DIE WAITING! I HOPE YOU LIKE THIS CHAPTER!
VOLLEYBALLER82- HAHA LIANA IS A B WORD, AND AUSTEN IS BEING A SWEETHEART SO FAR SO IDK KNOW IF SHE'S TELLING THE TRUTH OR NOT. MORE ZAMMIE IS COMING THOUGH AND LIKE ZACH IS IN ROSEVILLE! YAY!
PCZDJ- THANK YOU! AND I WOULD LOVE TO WRITE A JOHN'S POV. I FEEL LIKE HIS POV WOULD ACTUALLY GIVE SOME THINGS AWAY THOUGH SO MAYBE A BIT LATER ON. BUT I LOVE ALL BOYS HERE AND ANY CHAPTER IN THEIR POV'S WOULD BE AWESOME!
ZAMMIEWRITER2000-谢谢!这意味着很多。I'm so glad you like it!
LAUR:)- I'M GLAD YOU LIKED THE LAST CHAPTER AND I'M SORRY I DISAPEARED AGAIN! I DO THAT A LOT… I HOPE YOU LIKE THE ZACH IN THIS CHAPTER THERE IS MORE TO COME!
x2INFIN3TY-B3YONDx- YOUR REVIEW MADE MY DAY! THANK YOU SO MUCH AND I'M SORRY MY STORY DISTRACTED YOU FROM YOUR HOMEWORK, BUT I'M SO GLAD YOU LIKED IT AT THE SAME TIME! CAM AND FINN ARE SO CUTE I HAVE TO ADMIT, BUT ZAMMIE IS COMING! YAY!
GUEST #2- I'M GLAD YOU LIKE FINN HAHA HE IS PRETTY FUNNY, BUT YEAH ZACH IS PERFECTION.
GUEST #3- SO I DIDN'T UPDATE SOON… BUT I HOPE YOU LIKE THIS CHAPTER! :)
ZACHGOODET- ZACH PUNCH AUSTEN? THAT COULD BE ARRANGED… ESPECIALLY IF IT WOULD MAKE YOU HAPPY.
CHAMELEONMAXERICA21- I'M A WRITING GODDESS? WHOA… THAKN YOU SO MUCH! I LOVE YOUR REVIEW HAHA THIS CHAPTER HAD MORE ZACH, BUT THE NEXT CHAPTER WILL HAVE EVEN MORE! YAY!
FANGIRLY662- I'M SO SORRY! YOU'RE RIGHT I DISPEAR AND THEN COME BACK WITH SHORT CHAPTERS. JAMMIE AND FAMMIE ARE SLIGHT SHIPS OF MINE BECAUSE I LOVE BOTH THOSE BOYS SO MUCH! BUT ZACH IS COMING! HE DIDN'T SHOW UP AT THE CLUB, BUT HE AND CAMMIE WILL BE HAVING COFFEE! IS IT A COFFEE DATE? IDK… BUT YAY! THAT SCENE WHERE ZACH AND AUSTEN PUFF OUT THEIR CHEST AROUND MAYBE IN MY OUTLINE ;) I HOPE YOU LIKED THIS CHAPTER I'LL TRY TO UPDATE FASTER NEXT TIME! HOPE ALL IS WELL GIRL! XXX
GUEST #4- HELLO? YEAH I'M HERE. I GOT MY BUTT IN GEAR! (WHOOP THAT RYMED) I KNOW I TAKE FOREVER TO UPDATE. I'M VERY SORRY BECAUSE I DO LOVE WRITING AND I INTEND TO FINISH THIS STORY. I'M GLAD YOU LIKE MY STORY SO MUCH AND YOUR WORDS MEAN A LOT. I'LL TRY TO UPDATE SOONER AND I HOPE YOU LIKED THIS CHAPTER!
GUEST #5- I UPDAED!
SOFIA123- I KNOW I HAVE A THING FOR CLIFFHANGERS, IT'S A BAD HABIT AND AS YOU CAN SEE I ENDED WITH ANOTHER ONE I THINK… SAYING MY STORY IS THE BEST ON THE WEBSITE IS SO AMAZING! THANK YOU SO MUCH IT MEANS THE WORLD TO ME! LOVE YA! XXX
ALRIGHT THAT'S ALL FOR TODAY FOLKS!
REVIEW THE WORD MANATEE IF YOU LIKED THIS CHAPTER AND THE DRAMA THAT'S BREWING!
