Hi, everyone! No epilogue or anything. Link's pulled out the Master Sword, and we're going right to the next scene at the start of the next book.
This is a final "chapter" posted so you're notified that Into the Twilight is officially closed, and the first two chapters of book two are posted. I was going to wait until I was done writing chapter six of book two, but I'm a bit behind on writing this week. I started playing Final Fantasy XIV and uh...it's eaten my soul. I admit I'd rather run quests and dungeons with my husband than write. You can't blame me, right?
In any case, even though I'm marking this first book as complete, there will still be ninja edits. Some of the chapters are fairly clunky, and will need sections of them rewritten. The Kasuto chapter in particular is one I want to improve. The problem is I have a very chatty kid, and it's very difficult to work when somebody is chattering at you. My husband is my beta reader, so he has that exact same problem when proof-reading. It may be worth re-reading the entire trilogy once I'm done with it, because a few things will probably be slightly different.
That being said, if you catch any glaring errors I've missed, feel free to point them out. If you have a more solid critique of anything, go ahead and let me know. I don't mean asking me if I'm going to hook Link and Midna up, or if I'm killing Ilia off because she's not well-liked, or anything subjective like that. I mean a critique on problems I have with my writing, like how I sometimes mix up "but" and "and" connecting two parts of a sentence, or even of stupid plot holes I left behind. If you have any pointers, I'm happy to listen. Critiques are how we improve! So if you have any, or just want to tell me what you think, please leave a review. I tend to reply to my reviews, since it's fun to nerd over the same game and fandom. We love Zelda, amirite?
The first two chapters of Midna's Lament are now posted, so please go back to my main page to find the next book. If I have time this weekend, I'll proof-read chapter three and add it. Otherwise I'll be sticking to my schedule of uploading on fridays.
Love you guys!
-Beth aka "Annie"
