Hey guys! First of all, sorry if I spammed you with new chapter notifications. That was unintentional if it happened.

I just want to let all you wonderful people know that I have completely overhauled the beginning of this story (first 5 chapters ish) to fit the tone, theme, etc of the later chapters. I wasn't very happy with it and based on reviews, many of you weren't either.

The changes are live right now, the 2nd of October 2016. The chapter count went down one I think. There was a snarl up with the numbering on my end and fixing it in the Doc Manager and my own laptop is too much of a hassle.

So yeah, please give me reviews and feedback about the new starting! I spent quite a bit of time doing the rewrite (more extensive than I had thought). This is the first wave of rewrites and edits I have planned and is the biggest.

Please point out any inconsistent details or typos in a PM to me, I have a habit of glazing over sentences while reading and miss out on these details. The rewrites also probably screwed up some detailing as I changed the appearance and characterization of Jaune and so there could be some references to the old Jaune later in the chapters that I missed. Anything would be a huge help to me.

Thanks for reading my stuff guys, y'all are great!