How has your year gone for you all? I hope it's been good, here I finally got around to finishing the new chapter for the new year. The finale to Neptune's Harem is coming soon, and I am deciding whether to go finish off Immortal and Undead with 1 more chapter, or to continue to get another ship in...As I stated before, this is my own personal version of an idea someone had, I am in NO WAY attempting to steal his story for myself, I just wanted to make my own spin on the concept as some have done before.
Without further ado, here is Chapter 2!
Chapter 2: Saving our Chika
A little while after their talk, maybe no longer than an hour, Excel had met up with the other girls at the entrance to the dungeon, where he met a mew girl, no taller than 3 or 4 feet tall, who was riding a small...thing...
"My name is Broccoli, its nice to meet you nyu."
"Nice to meet you too Broccoli, I'm Excel"
It was after he said him name, that a familiar face walked up, a red head who's outfit resembled a maid outfit, Cave.
"Master Excel, its good to see you finally out of your room, I take it they filled you in on everything thats happened so far?"
"They have, though I expected to get changed a little sooner if it wasnt for their questions of Leanbox's candidate being a guy."
"I see, well apologies for awaking you, once we save Miss Chika, you can go back and sleep some more."
"Oh please, knowing her she'll be just fine, I'm more concerned on the mascot, if they get their hands on it, shit could hit the fan."
It was then that Cave smacked the male upside the head, frowning slightly.
"Lady Vert told you to stop constantly speaking profound language, its not befitting of a CPU."
Hearing that, a couple of the girls giggled, Compa and IF knew a certain other CPU known for her foul language choices, Nepgear knew of her tendencies from Neptune telling her about it.
"Whatever, lets get going."
After a little ways of walking through a large green looking corridor, the just barely saw Linda running away from them, but they were halted by a large herd of Dogoos.
"What the goodness? So many dogoos!"
Nepgear shouted, there were so many, basically coating the entire room, top to bottom in their blue slime.
"We need to clear through all of them if we want to get to the other side to catch up, I think I got something."
Excel focused himself for a moment, before a large glyph appeared behind him.
"Sylphet Spear!"
A large spear shot out and cleared away about a third of the dogoos, but when they all tried walking through the center, like Moses parting the Red Sea, some of the dogoos began to attack...or lick.
"What do these slime balls think their doing? H-Hey! Don't crawl in those you little jerks!"
IF was slowly being covered in a small handful of Dogoos, the same occuring to Compa and Nepgear.
"Ewww! My cute outfit is going to be all covered in goo!"
Compa looked rather sad, as one dogoo even began trying to slide into her skirt.
Excel stayed back a little, but he didn't even need to as they were all targeting the girl as if they were little pervs.
"The one time I'm glad to be a boy. Let's take care of this."
He began to spin around his spear, gusts of wind forming around him before tossing his spear into the center of the room.
"Storm Surge!"
The gusts of wind exploded outward, pushing the girls back a small bit but emptying the room of the dogoos.
"You all ok?"
Excel ran over to check on all the girls to make sure they were ok, but about half of them were a little less fortunate. The 3 were Cave, Broccoli and Nepgear, their clothing was white so the good made their clothing see through, Cave always brought a spare set of clothing, which she could apparently change in a flash, Broccoli was already starting to shake herself dry, but when Excel looked at Nepgear his face reddened.
He saw her pink and white stripped bra, and presumably matching panties. Nepgear noticed her predicament and covered herself, her face quite pink.
"H-Here..."
Excel unzipped his hoodie and handed it over to her with a blush, wearing a black t-shirt.
Nepgear blushed a little deeper and took the hoodie, putting it on, her hands barely poked out of his sleeves, but it was better than being in see through clothing.
The rest dried themselves off and they continued on their way to find Chika, and hopefully the Mascot.
A little later on...
They party kept walking through the dungeon, it shifted from a green tunnel to a regular tunnel, with lava below them for some reason.
After a little ways of walking, they spotted someone from afar.
"It's Chika!"
They all ran over to her, she was lying down on the (for some reason even though they are above lava) cold ground, Cave set her in an up-seated position as she checked on Chika.
"Are you alright Miss Chika? We can get you out of here!"
"C-Cave?...No...don't worry about me...the flame of life within me is about to be snuffed out...My only regret, is being unable to see my darling Vert before my untimely demise..."
"Goodness no! you can't die now, you need to help us!"
Excel sighed and lightly bonked Chika on her head with the handle of his spear, where she went from playing dead to rubbing her head softly from the slight pain.
"No need to cause any distress, she's just BSing us all right now, she graduated top of her class in that area."
Excel sighed and grabbed the Oracle by her waist, and hoisted her up over his shoulder (like the scene in Shrek 1 where he did it to Fiona).
"H-How dare you pick up a lady on her death bed like this? I really am going to die you know!"
She began to cough a little.
"Yeah, your gonna die if you keep pulling that BS, we really will leave you here."
She stopped struggling, just letting him carry her.
" Wow, your quite strong Excel"
Nepgear spoke up, still wearing his hoodie during their walk.
Excel couldn't help but blush a little, shifting his weight to carry her a little easier.
"T-Thanks, I do work out a bit..."
Chika smacked him upside the head.
"Stop flirting with girls and get me home Excel."
"How about I drop you and make you walk yourself?"
Chika then shut up, and the party brought her back up to the Basilicom, giving everyone am hour or two to get cleaned up before they talked.
Of course Excel had to wait, cause they only had the one large bathroom that could fit all of them, and he was a dude so...he had to sit in his room and wait.
He sighed and decided to take this as time to work out a little, walking over to their personal gym, not noticing that someone got out early and was secretly following him.
Leanbox Basilicom, Gym
Maybe an hour passed of him pumping iron before he realized someone was watching him, it was Chika, wearing just a bathrobe and sandles.
"You seem to get along great with that Candidate from Planeptune, perhaps you could get yourself a date~"
"Nepgear? Nah, I don't think she'd like to date me..."
Excel took a drink from his water and sighed, wiping the sweat from his face with a towel.
"It's been an hour or so, so the bathroom is open so you can get cleaned up if you'd like ...actually its more preferred, you smell like sweat."
He sniffed himself and winced a little, he definitely needed a shower, he looked back over at Chika, realizing something.
"C-Chika?...Y-Your robe..."
Chika's robe tie slipped and was undone, revealing her naked body to him. When she realized what was wrong, her face became as red as Cave's hair and she instinctively smacked him HARD.
"D-Don't look you pervert!"
I hope you guys enjoyed this chapter, the next one shall finish off the last of Leanbox arc and possibly lead into going to Lowee and Lastation to help out Rom, Ram, and Uni.
I hope you all have a Happy New Year and take care of yourselves!
If you guys have any suggestions for what could be added or altered with any of my stories, I am always open to suggestions and criticism, that's how one makes a good story, peer editing and criticism.