Season 1: Junior Saga

The story began 100 years after the Shadow Dragon Battle.


Writers notes:

This is a fanfiction I started writing 2008 to 2010 so it's generally badly written like the previous story I posted.

My lack of proper grammar and English will show it's ugly head as well as grade school level writing. I had no idea what I was doing nor did I care. I wanted to write down what I hoped and wanted to see at the time. We all were desperate for more Dragon Balls and the AF rumors gave us going.

The story will evolve over time to be similar to stuff you see in Dragon Ball Heroes, only that this was made without me seeing Father of Bardock and 4 years before Battle of Gods came out. So don't come expecting Dragon Ball Super stuff in this.

The story will be split into two. Not sure if I will post the second part as a seperate fanfiction since there will be different main characters. I hope you still enjoy the story for what it is.

Junior Saga: Chapters 1-17 + Movie 1 Rise of the Juniors

Mirror Warrior Saga: Chapters 18-30 + Movie 2 Salbora's revenge

Mechanic Saga: Chapters 31-52 + Movie 3 Gocittobo, the Ultimate Warrior

Different Dimension Saga: Chapters 53-68 + Movie 4 The lost twin

Evil Jr Saga: Chapters 69-77 + Movie 5 Ready for a Great Battle

Hidorika Saga: Chapter 78-94 + Movie 6 Shadow Super Saiyans

The sequel will be called Dragon Ball Jr Star.


Son-Goku Jr. was going to school and see some new faces and this opponent in the last Junior Tournament Vegeta Jr.

Goku Jr.: Vegeta, what are you doing here?
Vegeta Jr.: I am going to school here now and we are in the same class.
Goku Jr.: I think you hate schools?
Vegeta Jr.: Thx to my mother I must go now.

In the other side on the floor some pupil was crying.

Goku Jr. and Vegeta Jr. run to the crying guys and see somebody was steeling there lunch money. The guy looks like a little Cooler.

Goku Jr.: Who are you?
Cooler Jr.: Hahahaha, I am your nightmare.
Goku Jr.: Its not funny.
Cooler Jr.: It wasnt a joke. I am here for your lunch money. Now give it to me.

Cooler Jr. was going to punch Goku Jr. but Goku Jr. dodged and kick him in the face.

Cooler Jr.: You are very fast.
Goku Jr.: Thx ^^.

Somebody like a little Freezer came and talk to Goku Jr.

Freezer Jr.: O no. Dont say that.
Goku Jr.: Why?
Cooler Jr.: I think after the school you now what my brother mean, muhahahaha.

In the class Goku Jr. think *what can I do now.
A little Namenkian was running in the class with a Flagg as a cape.
The teacher: Stopp it Piccolo, its not a cape.
Piccolo Jr.: I am Piccolo hahahah.
Goku Jr and Vegeta Jr. was shocked to see a guy like this.

Freezer Jr. ask Goku Jr.: What would you do agains my brother?
Cell Jr.: He is a very cold person, if you dont give up you he going to kill you.

Vegeta Jr.: No problem. Goku can beat Cooler. Dont forget he is the grandson from Mr. Satan.

After the school Cooler Jr. wait for Goku Jr.

Cooler Jr.: hahaha, I know it. He had fear.
From the shadow of school: I dont think so.

Its Goku Jr. and he will fight with Cooler Jr.

Cooler Jr.: hahaha, Are you sure you can beat me?
Goku Jr.: No, I know it.

Goku Jr. started with a punch in Coolers Face and kicked him 10 times.
But Cooler dont give up. He hit Goku with his Tail and say: Muhahah, you never beat me.
Goku Jr.: Dont think so. I am the Grandson of Goku and Mr. Satan.
Cooler Jr.: Whaaaaaaat?!
Gokus punch was so strong and Cooler Jr looked like he was beaten.

Its time for a little time out.

Cooler Jr.: You are very strong but now I show you my real power.
Cooler became a other bad thing.
Goku Jr.: Woooow, What a power! I never see a power like this!
Cooler Jr.: Muhahahah, Now its time to beat you.

Cooler Jr. and Goku Jr. had the same power but Cooler Jr. would like to win.

Cooler Jr.: Nobody can beat me. Now I going to destroyed the world.
Cooler made a very big Super Nova and fired to Goku Jr.
Goku Jr.: You cant win because I am a Super Saiyan.
Cooler Jr.: What?!
Goku Jr. became a SSJ, destoyed with a punch the Super Nova and beat Cooler Jr. but he dont kill him.

Cooler Jr. with a weak Voice: W-w-wh-why? Why you ... havent kill me?
Goku Jr.: Because now we are friends.
Cooler Jr.: You are a real warrior Goku. I hope we can fight once more but a other time.
He looked to the sun and say: And next time I win.
Goku Jr.: We will see Cooler.

The End


Italic text will be me adding footnotes to each chapter and mention stuff like.

Saiyajin is Saiyan.

Freezer is Frieza or Freeza.

Tsufurujin is Tuffle

As you can see this too is written like a show. And likely what I imagined when coming up with stuff. So expect a lot of narration. I rarely got any constructive criticism nor did most of us even have enough basic English to understand what that was on the website Dragonball Neo Elite AFStadium.

Now that criticism is meaningless as I post this just as means so show my history and hopefully for people to learn how not to write fanfiction.

I intend to recreate these upcoming fanfiction with my improved writing for the modern era. I have no attachment to these characters, but I have a certain understanding what I wanted to do with them. So in case you are curious to what that story will be like, you can consider the old story as "spoiler". But be warned that it will get worse from here on and I can't tell if I improved much during those 2 years.

I only wrote to finish my story, and the consequences of having fun writing a story will be also displayed here.