update: i rewrite the whole chapter and change the story a little, i tried making this rewrite long but failed maybe in future chaptersfor people who watch ben 10 probably know some of these characters, this story take's a lot from ben 10. hope you enjoy
*new york*
It was a beautiful day outside, the bird's are singging, the flowers a bloming. In days like these nothing could go wrong.
Right?...
*boom*
An explosion comes out of nowhere in the city, sending out a large shock wave leaving a sizeable crater, and there's a figure standing in the middle of the crater.
A humanoid squid alien with sharp claw, and a full body armor protection, with a mask that allow him to breath. Several shield agent are lying in the ground deafeated. He then pull out a device looks like a tracing system "hmm... It's not here yet..." Was the alien said.
*elsewhere*
A sixteen year old boy sitting on a table eating his breakfast, he has a messy brown hair, hazel eyes, and wearing a white shirt and pink pants that had hello kitty head all over it. That boy was Peter Parker eating his cereal alone, aunt may had to go to work earlie leaving him alone in the house, it was saturday so he had the day off.
"Reported live from the scene it looks like some kind of squid alien is attacking the city, and some heroes are trying to fight it but looks like they're loosing." A sound from the tv news report got his attention, guess he had something to do today afterall.
"Guess i'll join."
*new york*
He was running and swingging from building to building rapidly, he was wearing a red and blue hoddie with red shoes and a mask, he has a homemade web shooter and there's a spider symbol in his chest.
Chapter one: The Spider-man
She was lying on the ground scares all over her body, did she... win? Clearly the answer is 'No' she opened her blue eyes looking around, she saw her teammates lying on the ground with scares all over they're body, some passed out some still strugling to get up but no use, They lost. The alien come closer to her ready to finish her, 'seol!' She heard her name being called to warned her, but she was too weak to move this is it.
this is her end.
The alien is ready to attack, when his sword touch the ground he saw that she wasn't there 'what?' He thought when he turned around he saw a red figure putting down the girl.
"Who dares?" The alien speak. He turned Around "oh me? I'm just your friendly neighborhood vigilante."
Peter took a stance ready to fight and so does the Alien, they both charge at high speed at the same time. he swung his sword wich peter easly dogde they both threw a punch and when they're fist meet it make a large shook wave, the alien hands turn into tentacle with peter's hand stuck in it, peter gave a disgust look under his mask.
the alien lift peter and smash him into the ground several times before he threw him, lucky for him peter manage to land on his feet 'darn he's strong guess i have to use full force' he thought clucthing his fist he charge with full force, it hit the alien right in the guts 'hes strong!' the alien thought before being punch away to outer space.
Peter gave a relief sigh and didn't notice someone staring at him, she was amaze seeing how strong he is she couldn't thought anything else except 'wow'.
Before she could say anything she heard the queen jet landing and then she saw he was gone, she saw paramedics helping out the others when she heard a familiar voice "seol, Are your okay?" A man wearing a shield suit, black hair, and red eyes, that man was Devin Levin their team leader. when their team need a leader there was a argument on which should be the leader and furry got him to take charge, "I'm fine mr.levin." "good let's get back to the academy." Without any question They left.
*elsewhere*
Peter got back home and enter trough his window that leads to his room, he notice that his clothes are ripped "aww man, pretty sure that fight wasn't that brutal." He took of he's hood and change to his casual outfit and lay on his bed.
He wonderd he was only been two years being spider-man, he stoped a ton of crime, organization, and others but... Nobody had notice his existance not even the heroes, it would be nice being noticed of all the good work he has done even the smalest thank would do.
these past 2 years wasn't really great he had to lose the most important person in his life uncle ben got killed beacuse of him, and gwen stacy died in the hands of his best friend dad norman osborn, aunt may was the only thing he have he would protect her at any cost, shake away those though he started drifting to sleep.
end of chapter one, thanks for reading i hope you like it.