So this is another fanfiction I wrote in 2008 when my English was awful. Most of the gramatic mistakes are related to me being a German native speaker and using outdated dictonaries to fill the holes. Because I didn't know where the ' button is, you will find a lot of your instead of you're or dont instead of don't.
This is only here for education purposes for common mistakes like all the other fanfiction I wrote with this Disclaimer. We aware I won't fix anything unless it's necessary. Keep this in mind in case you want to critic this.
Also there will be characters from fanfiction I got premission in Dragon Ball Nea forums including some of my own.
Thats the first episode of the new DB Show. The moderator is the famous and most popular saiyan Goku.
Goku: Thank you, guys. I hope you will like that show. We have music, games and talents. And If you have ideas you can call me on 0934 3244580 or you sent a SMS with SHOW to 54000. You will see every Dragonball characters you ever seen or of some others fanfic on Dragonball Nea but with the allow of the creater. You can win more than Dollar.
1. The show get start it.
Thats the new and the puplic become crazy.
Puplic: WOW...YEAH!
And here is our moderator say hallo to the great Son-Goku.
Puplic: WoW..YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!
Chichi: I WANNA A KID WITH YOU!
Bulma: He is your husband.
Chichi: Oh? Thats right.
Goku: Thank you, your a great puplic.
Some minutes later the people stopped clapping there hands.
Goku: Huh...Its the first time I am a moderator in a show.
?: Thats why I am here to help you.
Goku: Huh?
Its the greatest rival from Goku. Who call him Kakarot and is one of your favorite DB charaters?
Puplic: VEGETA...VEGETA...VEGETA!
Bulma: VEGETA ...VEGETA...VEGETA!
Goku: Thank you, Vegeta. Your everytime here to help me.
Vegeta: Shut up, Kakarot. After this show I will beat you. Because I am what?!
Puplic: THE PRINCE OF ALL SAIYANS! WOOOOOOOOOOOO!
Bulma: Yeah ...VEGETA!
Goku: Vegeta, you cant say "shut up" in a TV show.
Vegeta: Are you sure? Than listen. SHUT UP!
The puplic clapping there hands again.
Goku: Now its time for our first cadidate. A bit applause for Freezer/Frieza.
Puplic: Buh...Buh...Buh!
Bulma and Chichi: BUH...BUH!
Freezer comes and beck to the Puplic who hate him.
Goku: Hey nice to meet you Freezer.
Freezer: Same to you, Goku.
Goku: Whats with your brother? Is he normal again.
Freezer: Yes, he is back to normal.
Goku: Whats with Cell?
Freezer: He is going to the evil guys school again. He wanna start in Naruto as a new character.
Goku: I hope he gets the job. Right guys.
The puplic clapping there hands again.
Goku: What would you do?
Freezer: Thats difficult. I dont know what I can do. I am working in the restaurant by my father.
Goku: King Cold has a restaurant?
Freezer: Yes, of course. We are only in TV rich.
Goku: Thats right. I am in real a gentleman. But on TV I worked hard to play a knowless barbarian. And now tell us whats your favorite episode of Dragonball.
Freezer: Hmm...the episode with as you transform to a Super Saiyan.
Goku: Yeah that was a good part. I think its time for a Flashback.
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Puplic clapping there hands.
Vegeta: Nice, how you transform.
Goku: Thanks, Vegeta . And now said hallo to the next cadidate.
Vegeta: Its our good old Mr. Satan.
The lights go to the wanna be champion Mr. Satan.
Puplic: WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
He jump to the high and as he came down he broke his feet. Everyone look to him like this
Mr. Satan: HAHAHA..My jokes isnt the best anymore. But I am as ever the champ
Goku: Hallo, Mr. Satan. How are you?
Mr. Satan: I am fine Goku. Thank you. I will beat that monster in all categories.
Freezer: Dumbass...
Goku: No bad words Freezer. You will get your chance but first some question for you Satan.
Mr. Satan: Sure, I give on Dragonball everytime interviews.
Goku: How old are you?
Mr Satan: I am 75 years old and lost my hair. But I am as well the strongest of the world. Thats all what I need.
Goku: Ok. What is your favorite Dragonball episode.
Mr: Satan: Thats easy. The episode how I beat Cell. HAHAHA!
Goku: Lets see. Flashbacktime.
Babidi: BABARAB-BA!
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Puplic: HAHAHAHAHAHA!
Goku: Thanks guys. That the spirit.
Mr. Satan: I mean the other fight. You know which one.
Goku: Aha? Babidi boy, he wanna the doll story.
Babidi: BABARAB-BA!
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Puplic start to clapping there hands.
Goku: That was a great part from our champion.
Mr Satan: HAHAHAHAHAHA!
Goku: Its time for the first game.
From the ground comes two question machines and one more the the quiz master.
Vegeta: And here you quiz master. The Kaioshin of 15 Generation.
The puplic clapping their hands.
Kaioshin (15 G): Hahaha...hi...I call you..give me your nummer. Hehehe...
Goku: Dont be afraid. You must make more point than the other one to win the big prize. You must answer the question from our Kaioshin. I hope your ready. Come on, guys.
Puplic: 3...2...1!
DINGDINGDING!
Kaioshin (15G): Here the first question.
Freezer and Mr. Satan are ready to answer it.
Kaioshin: What is my favorite colour?
Everyone are shocked.
Kaioshin: That was a joke. Here the real question. From which planet comes Piccolo?
Freezer use his speed to klick and answer the question.
Freezer: He is a namenkian and thats mean from namek.
Kaioshin (15G): Thats wrong.
Freezer: What?!
Kaioshin: You right he is a namek but Piccolo was created by Kami on the earth and thats mean he was born in the earth. But it was a good point. The next question is how is Cell realy defeated?
Mr. Satan: From me the champion.
Kaioshin: Again no points. He was killed by Gohan as he was a teen SSJ2. The next and last question what say Broly mostly?
Freezer: Who is broly?
Mr. Satan: I wanna train by Mr Satan.
Kaioshin: That was a close one again. Goku do you now the answer.
Goku: Thats simple. The same Vegeta call me. Kakarot.
The Puplic clapping there hands.
Its time for the "Bombom Destruction Game".
Goku: In that game you must destroy in 15 seconds as much as possible so many blocks you got but if you destroy more than 1 with one move you get only 1 point. Ever block is 1 point thats mean nobody can cheat. And now...
Puplic: 3...2...1! GO!
Mr Satan and Freezer run and started to destroy the blocks. Mr Satan has no energy beam so he use a laser cannon.
The Puplic: 10...9...8...7...6...5...
Freezer and Mr Satan make more speed because one of them can win this.
The Puplic: 2...1...WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
Vegeta and Goku: Stopp its time-out.
Goku: Lets see the outcomes.
Freezer: 11
Mr Satan 9
Goku: Freezer one this one but the games isnt over yet and Mr Satan the champ has many tricks.
Mr. Satan: You get it, Goku! HAHAAHHAHA!
Freezer: What a fool...
Vegeta: The first time we have the same mind, Freezer.
Now they go to the place with which the last game "what is it"
Goku: In that game...
Vegeta: Let me tell them Kakarot. In this game somebody made a imitations and you must guess what they is. Freezer, you start it. You have 60 seconds and every right one is 1 point for you. GO!
For the imitation comes the an old villain to this show. Its Buu (Kid Buu).
Puplic: YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!
Buu make the imitations.
Freezer: It can swim, with a tail...ah a croco..
1P
Freezer: Its a little thing, you can eat it...a candy...
2P
Freezer: ...its one of the ginyu force...make stupid...hmm...Ginyu...no Ricoom...
3P
Freezer: ...
Puplic: 6...5...4...
Freezer: A monkey...saiyan..
4P
Puplic: 1!
Vegeta: And its over and now for Mr Satan. Here is the Parasite Baby.
The Puplic clapping there hands.
Goku: Whats up, Baby?
Baby: Damn Saiyans. Some day I will destroy you. But for now I am here to help Mr Satan.
Vegeta: Than GO!
Mr Satan: Hmmm ... its green...a frog...namenkian...Piccolo...Paikuhan
1P
Mr. Satan: Great apes...gum...Super Baby...Great Ape Baby
2P
Mr Satan: Angree...painful...destroyer...you mean saiyans.
3P
Mr Satan: hmm thats difficult...hmmm...fast...hot...flames...Nova Shenron
4P
Puplic: 7...6...5
Mr: Satan: Dragons...no...demons.
5P
Puplic: 2...1..
Vegeta: Sorry Mr. Satan but the game is over. Lets see the points
Freezer: 4
Mr Satan 5
Goku: And the result?
Freezer 15
Mr. Satan 14
Goku: Freezer won this one.
The puplic clapping there hands.
Mr. Satan: Uh...
Vegeta: Dont be cry, Satan. Or I show your real hurts.
Goku: Thats enough Vegeta. He gave his best and thats mean he won. What did he won?
In that moment came Nr 18 to show the prize.
Nr 18: Thats simple. He won that. A plasma TV with over 1000 channels and a radio control.
Mr Satan: WOW!
Now Goku, Vegeta and Freezer go for the last test for Freezer.
Goku: Ok thats your chance. If you answer the last question you can call to Shenlong.
In that moment came Piccolo from the roof.
Goku: Hey thats Piccolo.
The Puplic: WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
Piccolo: Hi Goku. I am here to save the Dragonball from Freezer. I know he planning bad things.
Freezer: I am ready for you namenkian.
Piccolo: I am the quiz master for your last test. I hope you are ready because here it comes. What is the name of the producer of Dragonball?
Freezer: Damn it. I knew that.
Piccolo: You have 3 seconds left.
Freezer: What?! Its Akira Torikoma.
Piccolo: Thats wrong thats mean Akira Toriyama. What a pity you worked to hard for it, haahahhahaaha!
Piccolo flew away and laugh about Freezer.
Freezer: Damn Namenkian.
Goku: Dont worry Freezer. You win another great prize. Nr 18.
18: Yes, a PS3 with controler and the game Dragonball Z Burst Limit.
Freezer: What a heck is that? I wanna Dragonball Z Bodukai Tenkaichi 3.
Vegeta: You cant have everything Freezer. Thats the hurt from the world.
Goku: That all for today and I say GoodNight people with a bit live music from Krillin.
Krillin comes with a micro to the platform and start to sing.
Krillin: Thats a song extra for my fans. The sky is blue and the water too. The grass is green.
The people go all home without Bulmas parents and Muten-Roshi.
Muten-Roshi: Yeah...you the best.
Mrs Briefs: I didnt know that. He is pretty good.
Looked next time again the Dragonball TV show
Producer
Mertyville
Music
Krillin
Moderator
Son-Goku
Co-Moderator
Vegeta
Intern
Son-Goten
Trunks
What you guys think about it?