Hi, I'm here saying that I rewrote this chapter and most of chapter 1 because it just wasn't working. I hope any reader I have is enjoying the story. And just for support, please review. I won't ask for bright comments, I will take helpful advise. Reviewing is easy. If you are on a phone, just chick the button in the bottom of this chapter and it will take you to a box. Write a name for your self and write what ever you want. If you are on a computer, after reading this chapter, go the the box in the bottom of this screen and write your name at where it say name, and write your review. Of course, reviewing is optional. And here are the reviews I got.
Matt-Meh. Neat idea, but feeling sad that G.K doesn't have anyone to love. Thank you for the review I agree its sad.
Matt-Pitch is back! Also nice so far, though there's a few spelling mistakes. Thank you again for another review, Yes, Pitch is back, and thank you for letting me know I had spelling mistakes.
Nico Fan-Nice idea. Thank you for the review, and thank you.
Nico POV
I was in a mortal town when I realized the day day was Halloween. Deciding that I wanted to see how mortal celebrated Halloween, I stayed for the night.
I was sitting on a roof when my mental sense hit midnight. As soon as it did, my pumpkin started glowing in a creepy blackish way. Suddenly, I found myself with my carved pumpkin on top of my head covering my face. Matching with my pumpkin I had a black cloak going from where my pumpkin stopped covering my face to my feet. Strangely, my vision was still perfect and I felt no extra weight. In fact, my cloak wasn't even making walking a little difficult. I started going down the roof when I stayed on the same height level that I previously was on without anything to support where I was standing! In other words, I was floating. I tried experimented more, and I was able to lower my self or go higher. It was just like walking on a non existence platform. After I finally got down, I saw an image in my head. A black horse running past me in front of exactly where I was right now. As soon as it started, the image disappeared. Suddenly, a black horse ran past me, exactly where the vision show it would run. Surprised, I tested what other thing my pumpkin cloak can do. After two hours I could, phase through walls, kinda see the future, walk on air, and make people experience fear. I also realized that the powers that I already had had increased in power. For example I could create living creatures out of shadows, or I could easily shadow travel, and finally, my strongest upgrade, my hell fire ( from the Battle of the Labyrinth) could take away some of someone's energy and give that energy to me. Deciding that that was enough experimenting, I walked onto the streets. Suddenly, I saw a blue flash, a hole in the ground, and a sack. Then, I blacked out. At least I still have my sword.
3rd person (2 hours before Nico was captured.)
In North's place North saw an image of Pitch circling the children globe. Eyes widening he called the guardians. In a few minutes, Sandman arrived on top of a flying string ray made out of dream sand. Next came Bunny and Jack Frost as if they were racing to get here first. At last, Tooth arrived with a few of her fairies. Suddenly, before any of them could start an argument, the moon shone brightly. In an instant, it shot a ray of light the showed an image of a lean figure laughing. Santa said " My old friend, what must we do?" Suddenly, a crystle appeared. It showed a lean figure wearing a pumpkin hat with a cloak that went from the pumpkin to the ground. Then, the crystle went back down. " What! Him?" Easter Bunny shouted. Jack asked " What do you have against him?" Bunny replied " Mate, he's the spirit of Halloween!" Jack Frost just shrugged and said, "The sack?" "The sack." Bunny replied. With that, they went to Nico using their own respective ways.
Nico POV
The people the captured me messed up big time. In my sack, I created a shadow monster. Soon I was thrown through something and as soon as I landed, I cut apart the sack with my sword. As soon as I did my shadow monster pounced on a big red man. I instead, shadow traveled to a near shadow and watched them from the shadows. In an instant, 2 figures came out of the portal I was thrown through. As soon as they came the red man said " Guys, I think you got the wrong thing. With that, one of the guys from the portal pointed his staff at my monster and it froze. Now, that was offending. My monster destroyed by someone with snow powers. I came out of the shadows with my "suit" and hit the person that killed my monster with hellfire. The person was instantly out of breath and I thought I could go on forever. I created more shadow monsters and took out my sword. While I attacked, I sometimes phased through some of their attacks making hitting me almost impossible. I then, started floating or walking on air and attacked with my shadows. I shaped them in to arrows, swords, spears, and a lot more weapons that I didn't stop throwing making the deadliest game of dodge ball ever. Eventully, the yellow floating thing hit me with his sand and I blacked out once more.
Pitch POV
I was still weak from my defeat, but I now I knew exactly what I needed to do. I needed my own team. For my first member, I used my power over nightmares to mix five of them together. They struggled and did everything to escape this fate, but eventuly gave in. After they were just nightmare sand, I mixed them and twisted them and gave them some of my power. Finally, I had my first creation. It was nightmare sand that had a mind of its own. It could increase in amount of decrease at will. It could turn dreams into nightmare with just a touch. My creation was complete, now, I needed more.
I wandered through the streets of the city in mind until I finally found the spirit I was looking for. The spirit of despair. His name was " Broken." or so he called him self. He was a spirit that just appeared without help from the man in the moon which meant the man in the moon knew little about him. With a touch, he could make others feel broken. The guardians didn't know of him. He had become like this because his parents threw him out, everyone treated him like trash, where were the guardians? No where, now he wanted revenge against them .his was why he was going to join my team. When I offered, of course, he agreed. I knew I needed at least four of them. So, I went to the most portected area in this mythology. The area of creation. Knowing that it was dangerous, I took my newly formed nightmare dust which I call Dust with me. After fighting a lot of knight who had some power from the ancient time, I got to the area of creation. Even after getting here, I knew there were many traps. The things I needed was a traps them selves. If you weren't strong enough, the power of the spheres that I needed will consume you. As soon as I entered the room with spheres I took two of the magical things. Even just that, drained me a lot. Then I ran out, only to meet even more magical knights. One threw a fire ball at me while the other made Earth grab for me. Luckly, I got them hit with nightmare sand which gave them a long enough nightmare for me to get on a fearling and ride away.
After I got back to my place, I threw my first sphere. I first imagined having full control over it. Then, I imagined it have emotions and feeling so it would seem a little better. Then, I imagined a thing with full black armor over it. Finally, I imagined it have control of darkness and gave it a staff that could let it go into people's minds. Suddenly, I full armored knight appeared. It was still weak from just appearing. I took it to my darkest corner in my place and started making my next teammate. Next, I imagined a boy, yes, a boy with control over my fearlings. I gave the boy power to modify my fearlings as well as a spear to give him some control over nightmare sand. At last, he appeared. I, exausted after this, made only 1 more creature. I mixed my fearlings once more to make a strong horse. A ride that was as strong as 4 fearlings. With that, I went outside to see the day becoming night. I went outside and just sat on a mortal bench until I replenished my power.
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