8ball3- thank you for reviewing I'm so sorry if it was offensive but I am writing Ethan as a homophobic person, he does get character development but if you think it's rlly rlly bad I'd be open to more constructive criticism and I'll modify chapter 7, pls leave another review before I continue to post so I can modify chap 7 I rlly don't want to rub anyone the wrong way.
I want to clarify that I was intentionally writing Ethan as a homophobic character and just an overall insensitive character, I know that the trope is rlly basic, stale and over used as well... but the thing is is that when I was writing this I was going through a sort of phase where I was obsessed w this trope. I'm rlly rlly sorry if it didn't meet your standards in terms of the plot and if it's offensive. I am also aware that Ethan is a very very flat character and that I haven't been writing him well and he seems to have no human emotion so if it's too bad let me know because I don't mind re writing it better and less offensive.
To address the next thing, I will stop writing in povs I didn't realize that it annoyed the readers and did it mostly since I was paranoid. I didn't want anyone to misread the work but if it's more of a challenge than assistance I'd gladly stop using the povs.
I apologize that you have to read my horrible grammar but initially I really tried to make the grammar acceptable but you have pointed it out that it wasn't decent to begin with and I sincerely apologize and I will genuinely try to improve. I'm really stressed out with school abs I generally barely have time to write the story let alone check the grammar, never the less , that is an unworthy excuse and if I'm not able to write a decent story then I will just drop it.
Also I am a native English speaker( I just don't live in the us) I'm just severely malnourished of brain cells, sorry...
I'm really sad to hear that my story had potential and I still couldn't do anything with it... if you think I have no chance of redeeming it I'll gladly drop it and let you take over.
I'm so sorry, I apologize, I wanted Ethan to be a character that you hate but I didn't want you to hate me.
Please give me constructive criticism and I'd gladly accept,
Thank you.
