CH 2. ENGLAND YES OR NO?

The next day has arrived and all of the louds children are excited for two reasons, the first reason that spring breaks have started for the Royal Woods school district ,and Farway collage so all of the louds have a whole week long break with no school. And the second reason is the louds are going on vacation but unlike last time they are leaving the country and traveling to England. The louds family do not need to worry about getting a hotel since they have some family in England due to their dad's side of the family and they are staying with their great great great uncle who lives in a castle outside of a small town in the North York Moors area. There is one tiny problem with their great great great uncle Lord Chris Loud is that he hates most of the loud kids but mostly the first six kids that Rita, and Lynn Sr have. He think that Lori is drama, Leni is dumb, Luna to loud, Luan not funny, Lynn since he believes girls should not be sports (Chris Loud is old fashion with his belives like medevile times), Lincoln because he is write short stories, and Lily cause she is a baby. The only kids of Rita, and Lynn Sr that Chris likes was Lola because he believed she looked like a queen, Lana since she likes to explore the woods, Lisa because of her brains, and Lucy's interest in the supernatural just like him.

Still feeling sore from last night's attack, Lincoln looks at the bandage that Luna, Luan, Lori, Lynn, and Leni put on his injury. "What the heck was that thing that bit me last night? It was not any animal that I have seen, maybe it was hillbillies. No it can't be hillbillies, the thing looks like someone in the 1800, maybe a crazy person. Whatever it was the bite marks are gone but why do I feel sore, and still in pain." stated Lincoln to himself as he walked downstairs for breakfest. "Good morning son, um what with the bandage did something happen last night?" ask Rita. Lucky for the white hair boy his older sister told a good lie that their parents believed, however this is the first time that Lola, Lucy, Lana, Lisa, and Lily saw their older brother's arm. "Hey Lincoln what's with the bandage?" ask Lola. Both Rita, and Lynn Sr told their younger kids that their brother had a little accident with some kind of animal, but their older sisters took care of it. "Oh ok then what kind of animal was it?" ask Lana however none of the older sisters or even Lincoln answer Lana's quistion.

After breakfast the louds kids started to pack their suitcase for their vacation in England. "Boy I can not wait to arrive in England especially if Mick Swagger is performing live," stated Luna as she grabbed her guitar. "Well I'm going to play soccer and ask why they called it football over there. Hope I can go to a soccer game." Lynn stated as she grabbed her bag of soccer equipment . Meanwhile Rita and Lynn Sr are getting their stuff ready but kinda nervous to tell Lori, Leni, Luna, Luan, Lynn, Lincoln and maybe Lily that they can not come since great great great uncle Lord Chris Loud does not like them at all. "Dear I am kinda nervous to tell older girls, and Lincoln that they can not come due to Chris's thoughts about them." Lynn Sr said. "Same here, but I still do not understand why he has issues with the oldest kids, but he is fine with the younger kids. I also do not like how he describes Lori, Leni, Luna, Luan, Lynn, or Lincoln saying that they are annoying." Lynn then told Rita that he never understood his great great uncle and that he was always an odd ball of the louds family tree. Rita then asks her husband if he thinks that Chris is still mad at them when they went to England nine years ago.

Nine years ago Rita and Lynn Sr took their kids Lori, Leni, Luna, Lynn, and Lincoln while Rita was two months pregnant with Lucy. "So these are my nieces and nephew. Can you tell me their name Lynn?" ask Chris. "Well the one who is wearing blue is Lori, the one in the green dress is Leni, the one that is all in purple is Luna, the one with braces is Luan, the little girl who have a baseball hat is Lynn, and our son Lincoln is the one who have white hair. Oh and Rita is expected another one in a couple months later." Lynn answered his great great uncle . As Lynn talks about the kids he notices a stern look on Chris's face. "Even though I just met these kids I think they are all annoying. And why do they all start with the letter L kinda strange." Chris said in a stern tone. This causes the six louds kids to look at their own uncle and do not understand why Chris thinks that they are annoying even if they just met him for the first time. Rita was about to yell at Chris for his statement, but Lynn tried to talk with uncle but Chris did not listen to them. Chris did notice that Lori is a drama queen, Leni is dumb as a five year old, Line's tast in music is loud, Luan is more annoying than funny, Lynn should not be in sports due to her gender, and Lincoln was into childish things.

"I do not know Rita I mean why did facetime with him after Lily was born and he seems he has no issue with Lucy, Lana, Lola, and Lisa. said Lynn sr. "Yea that is but I have a feeling that he does not like Lily for some reason. Why is Chris so judgemental with kids in the family?" ask Rita. Lynn Sr just sigh and said he do not know why great great uncle Chris is like that since he was extremely judgemental to Lynn Sr when he was a kid "Maybe we should tell Lori, Leni, Luna, Luan, Lynn, and Lincoln that they can't come to England with us, Lola, Lana, Lisa, and Lucy. I do not know about Lily though." said Lynn Sr along with his wife are hoping that the six older kids would not be mad at them.

Both parents went into the living room and called down all of their kids and told the six older louds children that they can not come to England. Within a few minutes a stampede of the children came down the stars, granted it was not formal but it was better than it was in the past, once all of the kids are in the living room Lori asks their parents if everything is ok. "Well you see Lori, Leni, Luna, Luan, Lynn, and Lincoln we have some bad news. You six can't come to England with the rest of us." Lynn Sr told his six oldest kids. "Wait, why can't we not come to England with you guys pops?" ask Lynn. "Well we are staying at great great great uncle Chris Loud do not like you six." Rita answered. "Wait, we are Literally not going because what happened nine years ago. Lori stated. "What happened nine years ago anyway I mean great great great uncle Chris lives in a castle how could anything turn out bad." ask Lola.

Then Lori remembers what happened nine years ago while visiting their uncle. Lori was taking pictures of everything in the castle, Leni was trying on some dress from the medieval times, Luna was jamming on her drums, Luan was dressed as a jester and great people outside with jokes, Lynn broke someone's legs while playing soccer, and Lincoln was acting like a child. "To be fair I was only three or four years old so that is my defense on it." Lincoln stated. "Oh come on great uncle Chris is lame and does not know how to have fun, and be an extreme person, Beside I only broke that kids legs cause he blocked me from the ball, dad." Lynn butt end. "Pops he is still mad about what happened nine years ago?" ask Luna. "Dang it I was going to have some new jokes, and pranks I have in store for people at that castle." Luan said in a bump out tone. "But I want to wear the cool dresses that I found when I was little, maybe now since I am older they can fit me." Leni said. "What about Lola, Lana, Lisa, and Lucy. Or even Lily. Are they not going as well?" ask Lori. Both parents then explain that uncle Chris likes Lola, Lana, Lisa, and Lucy more since they reminds of him when he was little. "That is uncool pop." Luna said while Lincoln, Lori, Leni, Luan, and Lynn were about to start a fight between Lola, Lana, Lisa, and Lucy.

"Cool it down all of you, listen I am sorry that Lori, Leni, Luna, Luan, Lynn, and Lincoln can not come with us. It's just you know how judgemental he is." Lynn Sr stated as him and Rita trying to prevent an all out brawl between the kids. "So when are you guys leaving then?" Leni asks as she looks at her parents. "Well we are leaving in the morning around five in the morning." Rita answered her six older kids. After the little chat between their parents Lori, Leni, Luna, Luan, Lynn, and Lincoln put their stuff away. "I can't believe that our great great uncle is still mad about something that happened nine years ago." Lincoln told Lori, Leni, Luna, Luan, and Lynn. "I know it's like he never has a funny bone in his body, but for real this is not cool." Luan stated. As the six older louds children put their stuffed away, Lucy pops in the hallway. "Oh so miss spooky going to rub in our face that she can go to England!" yelled Lynn witch caught the attention of Lori, Leni, Luna, Luan, and Lincoln. "Sigh, no I am not going to do that in fact I ask mom, and dad may I stay home with you guys for the week." Lucy said. "Wait why would you want to stay here for a week and not got to England with mom, dad, Lola, Lana, and Lisa?" ask Lincoln. "Well I heard from Haiku that there is going to be a blue full moon this week and I want to stay here to see it." Lucy answers her older brother's question.

"Wait, you want to stay here, just so you can see the moon? That's the dumbest thing I ever heard from you." Lynn told her goth sister. "Hey maybe the moon is going to be made out of blue cheese, get it, but seriously why Lucy?" ask Luan after telling a joke. Lucy then explains that the blue full moon is a special moon that only appears every 95 years, and she wants to see it in person. "And unfortunately it will happen over Royal Woods, and the other great lakes states, so I am curious about this moon since it is involved with so many legends." Lucy stated.

What his goth sister said reminds Lincoln about what the host said on that show that Clyde and him watched. On the tv the host explains the legend of Bitte Beth, and according to the legend a boy who made a deal with a witch to be like his sister since he was jealous of her but the foolish make a deal a deal with the witch, The boy will be like his sister but he will even become a girl himself. This only happens under a blue full moon. "Wait did you say blue full moon Lucy?" ask Lincoln. "What wrong bro, is everything ok?" as Luna. The white hair boy did not reply back to his musical sister's question due to Lori getting angry on her cell phone. "I can't believe this!" yelled Lori witch Leni as the oldest loud siblings. "Um what's wrong Lori did something happen?" ask Leni. So Lori explains that some of her friends are going to Texas, Florida, and California for spring break. "I ask my friends if I can come with them since I can not go to England due to our uncle's views about us, but all of my friends have left for their vacation. This is not fair!" scream Lori.

"Hey guys think about the bright side of this issue." Leni spoke up causing the other to look at her like she was crazy. "What do you mean there is a bright side to this, even though I love telling jokes and puns. I can not think anything good about this whole thing." Luan stated followed by a lot of I agreed with Luan from Lori, Lynn, Luna, and Lincoln. "What do you mean that there is a positive side of this situation?" ask Lynn. So Leni explains that the house will not be crowded, it will just be her, Lori, Luna, Luan, Lynn, Lincoln, Lily and now Lucy staying behind. "Maybe we could do something fun together. I mean it is an ideal that I thought of." Leni said. At first Lori, Luna, Luan, Lynn, Lincoln, and Lucy were thinking what the second oldest said for a few minutes, but realized that Leni had a point the siblings could hang out with each other, and do their own things as well. "Good point Leni. Tonight before anyone goes to bed I will hold a sibling meeting with you guys and plan out our week, get it." Lori stated as the other five siblings head back to their room until Lori reminds Leni that she shares a room with her. "Oh tost sorry Lori it's just I got used to having that room by myself since you left for college." Leni told Lori.

Around ten that night Lori, Leni, Luna, Luan, Lynn, Lincoln, and Lucy were in Lori/Leni room to discuss their weak plans without their parents and younger siblings. Some of the ideals were going to the beach since Michagan is by a large body of water, going to the movies, arcade, the mall and having a movie night at the house. During the meeting Lincoln asks Lucy when the blue full moon event will start. "I believed that Haiku said it might start tonight or tomorrow why you ask dear brother?" "Oh no reason I was just curious." explain Lincoln. "What are you for real stincoln, that you might have believed in that old myth? Thats funny." Lynn stated as she started to laugh. "Yea for once I agreed with mis sports lover it is impossible for a boy to change into a girl without going to the hospital." Luna said. "Yea witch is funny since Lynn used to believe in the whole luck thing." laugh Luan before Lynn yells at her to drop that subject. After the meeting the six louds kids went to their room and headed to bed, while Lola, Lisa (not by choice), Lana, and Lily went to bed early since the youngest loud siblings are leaving at five or six in the morning for the airport for England.

While the loud house was quiet just like last night Lincoln started to have heat flashes during the night and he can feel that something strange is happening. Middle of the night the white hair loud boy hair started to grow just a little. Also Lincoln started to dream about the whole curse, turning into a girl, wondering if he is turning into a girl how will his sisters react to it, and would all of them be on the same playing field when it comes to getting in trouble. The reason why Lincoln thinks that way is because sometimes his sisters will not be punished like he is, and the reason he kinda believes that he is the only son, only brother, and only boy in a house with ten sisters. As well would his sisters stop giving him a hard time sometimes since he would be a girl like they are. "If the whole curse thing is true and if I do turn into a girl, I am kinda curious to see what will happen." Lincoln stated as heard his mother, father, Lisa, Lola, and Lana headed to the airport around 4: 30 in the morning, since they did not want to miss their flight.

this is were the redo story and the original are different
1. Lisa, Lola, and Lana are not in the story like they were in the original.
2. Explain why this story will focused on the relationship between Lincoln and his older sisters (Lori, Leni, Luna, Lynn, and Luan) as well Lucy and Lily
3, The great uncle is bade on stories that picture the louds sisters as bad people. (I do not think they are bad granted I like the older sisters, Lan, and Lily. I am 50/50 with Lola depends on the episode same go with Lucy. While Lisa is my lest faverit sister of the loud house. sorry if i make people mad)
4. In this version Lincoln think about his life as a girl much earlier than the in the original since his sisters and him will be equal.

leave any feedback or compair the stories on witch one sounds better the redo or the original down the line in the future