In case you didn't notice, was down for about a day and a half so I wasn't able to post. Also, when the site went down half of this chapter got deleted so I had to rewrite it(If somethings seem off that's why). I wrote it again, and was gone when I went back the next moring to edit. This time I have decided to do it all in one sitting to avid these problems. I also said I would be able to post a lot more over break, but turns out I write most/best during school, so I guess breaks mean no or significantly less chapters.

Review Responses:

VeronicaWeasley

I agree. I liked Ch2 much more the Ch1 as well. Thanks for spotting the typo. I decided to write a short chapter about San Francisco, but nothing special.

JustVilda Potter

Thanks so much, and sorry I've gone dead for a week or two. I've been super busy with school stuff, and I had no idea what to write for this thought I mention(forgot to in ACOL review) I like the little "JVP stamp of approval" on some of your story covers.


Mr. Baudelaire pull the RV into the lot at the campground they were staying at and Mrs. Baudelaire called "Children, children, we're here!"

Violet snapped out of her day dream and Quigley cleaned up the chess board. He was playing a solitaire version of chess called knights tour, where the goal is to move the knight around the chess board touching each square exactly once. Klaus claimed there was 26,534,728,821,064 correct possibilities, but he had been trying for months and still hadn't found a single solution. Isadora sat up in the loft and shook Klaus awake. Isadora grabbed her notebook and they headed down from the loft.

When everyone was outside else, Duncan popped out of no where.

Isadora turned to him. "Where were you? We were looking all over for you."

"Yeah right, sleeping beauty." Duncan snarked.

"Fine, but where were you?"

"I was up in the cab with Mr. B. I wanted a place to write that I could be mostly alone."

Mrs. Baudelaire pulled out her notebook and flipped to the page titled "SAN FRANCISCO AGENDA," which was contently marked with a red ribbon, similar to the one Violet tied in her hair. It said:

SAN FRANCISCO AGENDA

Wave Organ

Exploratorium

Il Migliore

Golden Gate Bride

Alcatraz Island

All of the children had given input on things that they wanted to see and do along the trip. For example, Klaus read about Alcatraz Island in many books about the history of prison breaks, and wanted to see the place for himself. Sunny had read a food review by Gourmet Guy about Il Migliore. He had given the place '4 Oh My's' and that was the highest possible rating so she wanted to talk to the chef and learn how to cook the Pasta Puttanesca Gourmet Guy talked about in the review she read.

"It's currently," Beatrice looked down at her watch, "1:37, and our ferry tour leaves at 2:20. Me and Bertrand need to check in to the campground and check in on some things for tomorrow. You kids can go walk around as long as you meet us on Pier 43 at 2:10."

Klaus and Isadora checked out the local library, Duncan and Violet took Sunny to the famous bread shop on pier 39, and Quigley made a point to map as much as he could. Everyone made it back in time for the ferry and while they waited Klaus bored half the group to death with a speech about the complete history of Alcatraz. After the ferry, the group had an early dinner at Il Migliore, Sunny got her cooking lesson, and they went to the Wave Organ. Klaus gave another one of his speeches, this time about the science behind the Wave Organ. Tired from the drive, every one of them fell asleep almost immediate after getting in bed.

Beatrice had set aside the entirety of the next day for the Exploratorium. She read all the reviews in advance, and found one from K. Heeres that said her family spent 9 hours there, and didn't even see everything. The group got their 3 minutes before they opened, so they were the first people inside when the place opened. The kids ran off in their respective groups, Klaus and Isadora, Duncan, Violet and Sunny, and Quigley by himself. While all the other kids explored the museum, Quigley attempted to map the whole place out in his notebook.

Before they new it, they hear a bell ringing from the front of the building and a message over the loud speaker informed every one that the museum was closing in 15 minuets and everyone needed to make their way to the exit. Quigley showed off his map to everyone as they waited for Klaus and Isadora to meet them at the predetermined meeting place, the large metal discs out front. They had a lot of trouble getting a taxi for they way there, 9 people don't fit in most taxis, so they decided to take the trolley back to the RV park. The family hopped in the RV as Mr B. check out and Mrs. B started the engine. They couldn't wait for this chapter of their lives to be over, it felt like it had been about 2 weeks since they arrived, and they were ready to see what was to come next. (This statement is 100% me)

Mr. B shouted "Next stop..."


There it was. I hate it, but I couldn't care less. If you want to meet the quads, put "quads", if you want to hear another chapter like this one about a stop at Lake Lachrymose and Aunt Josephine, put "Josephine." Even if you don't review(I'm looking at the other 12 people who read this and didn't review) please just vote so I can write what people want to read.