A/N: so i said i was re writing this and so here is the new chapter two.
Chapter 2: First day
I'm so scared. I know we all said we are going to dauntless and I'm no longer friends with Toby and all the other boys but tomorrow will be Shana Zeke and Toby's choosing ceremony. When Toby transfers my mom will expect me to follow dads ways and help Toby's dad. I haven't seen Toby for a year and tomorrow I'm going to see him again.
Shauna and Zeke started dating last month and so we welcomed him back into the group but I can't stand how he always sticks up for Toby. I'll be sad to see them go but we all belong there. The entire group will be there tomorrow so I better get some sleep otherwise I won't make this ceremony….
The room is packed in the house feels like old times with us all together. They're calling names in Reverse alphabetical order so Toby is choosing last out of our friends. Zeke already chose stop and Shauna is up now. She stayed with Zeke of course.
Me and the Gang laugh like we never grew apart. Eve, Ophelia, and Veronica seem nervous. I'm guessing it's because they're choosing next year but I can't be sure. Veronica is asking if she can add someone to our group but I can only think about Toby. He is choosing now. He picked dauntless which comes as no surprise.
As he walked towards his new faction he walked by me and slipped me a note. It said go to where we first met I will try and explain but I'm not sure I can. I still love you and I hope you understand. I dropped everything and ran to the back alley by the Stream.
He showed up for a few minutes and told me "I left you to keep you safe and now you are I can't explain what I was keeping you safe from however I can say I never stopped loving you. Every week I will leave your letter here never forget that."
I said "you hurt me but I still love you. I will retrieve the letters when I can but if you can't explain why you did this it will never work" then ran away to my house.
Marcus, Toby's dad, was there. He asked if I could lend him a hand now that he was alone in his house. I told him I would on weekends and I would be over tomorrow. My mom seems so happy with my decision. I really am only doing this so it seems like I'm following my dad's lead. Caleb tried to stop me as I ran to my room, but I slammed the door in his face. I cried myself to sleep that night remembering what Toby said.
The next morning I ate breakfast quickly before running to Toby's house. Marcus was waiting for me and as I entered he locked the door. It was weird but I thought nothing of it. He for me to clean up his mess from breakfast then go to Toby's room. I didn't know how much it would regret agreeing to help. When I got into Toby's room I saw that there was almost nothing.
Marcus walked in behind me and then I finally put the pieces together. Marcus was abusing Toby. Toby left me to keep me safe from him. Sadly, his plan backfired and now here I am. Marcus told me to remove my shirt and out of fear I obeyed he removed his belt and started to hit me with it.
I couldn't help it scream and that's when it got worse. He flipped his belt to the metal part with what hit me and I bit my lip to hold back my screams. When the 30th lash hit my back he told me to get up clean up my mess. That's when I noticed the pool of blood around me. I tried to stand but my vision went black so I lied down for five minutes more before cleaning up the blood and showering.
I took one of Toby shirts and where that is I wash my clothes in Marcus's. when I finished I redressed and ran home. That happened every weekend and would constantly get worse. All I know it's Toby's letters kept me going and every weekday I had even more of a reason to practice.
A/N: So she knows why all this started now. She also understands why Toby did what he did. If you are questioning why I didnt do both of there point of views its because it gives away too much. Tris is still mad at Toby dont get me wrong but she does understand now. please review and tell me if. you like what ive done. I know as of right now i am still jumping through time a lot but i hope i get better.
there friends are:
Chris: candor, same as tris
Marlene: dauntless, same as tris
Cara: eruidite, same as caleb
Caleb: eruidite, 10 months older than tris
Lynn: dauntless, same as tris
Uriah: dauntless, same as tris
Will: eruidite, same as tris
Eve: candor, one year older than tris
Veronica: amity, one year older than tris
Ophelia: abnegation, one year older than tris
Zeke: dauntless, same as tobias
Shauna: dauntless, same as tobias
