I'm sorry but I'm going to give this story a break it just dosnt seem right so ill give it a week and if people start liking it ill start up again this is not the best story I wrote so review to give me advice

I'm sorry but I'm going to give this story a break it just dosnt seem right so ill give it a week and if people start liking it ill start up again this is not the best story I wrote so review to give me advice
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