Mako's Message: So... ya know what? Here's the chapter. Enjoy.
Dillon knocks at my door, he's wearing a black suit and carrying a corsage. I let him wait outside for a minute, just to build up the suspense. He shifts uncomfortably outside the door, looking around and tugging at his collar. When I've decided I've let him sweat enough I go and open the door. He has trouble keeping his jaw off the ground.
I don't say anything, I just smile as he stammers out a "H-h-hi" and finally recovers enough to hand me the corsage and says, "I bought this for you, I thought it would match your eyes."
I open the box and it's a dark blue flower. I hand it back to him and ask, "Would you pin it on for me?"
He gulps and just nods his head. His hands are shaking as he pins the flower to my dress and he sighs with relief when he manages to do it without stabbing himself or me. I smile at him and ask, "Shall we go?"
He nods and I walk across the yard to the car I hired for the night. I hear him say, "Wow," before he follows along.
We don't talk on the way to the school. He's too nervous to talk and I spend the time rehearsing everything I'm going to say and do in my head. Tonight is going to work. Dillon will get his respect, and I'll get my Dave.
When we pull up Dillon gets out first and opens the door for me. People are watching him curiously, wondering what he's doing here, and then I step out. Everyone who is standing around outside stares at us with wide eyes and open mouths. I smirk at them and offer my arm to Dillon who takes it and leads me inside.
Inside people react same way, only it takes longer for people to notice us in the crowd. I lead Dillon over to the punch and he fills a cup for each of us while I scan the crowd for Dave.
I finally spot him across the room next to Riley, who's wearing a too tight dress with her tits practically popping out and flirting with some other guy like a slut.
Dave looks at me and his eyes practically pop out of his head. I smile as he leaves Riley behind and walks over to me. He looks me up and down and shakes his head, "Wow…just, wow. You look amazing."
I look at the floor before looking up at him and smiling, "Thank you."
Riley finds her way over then, and looks at me, "Well, don't you look nice."
I can't resist the urge and say, "I know."
Music starts playing then, and I ask Dillon if he'd like to dance. He agrees immediately and takes my hand and leads me onto the dance floor. It's a slow dance so he puts his other hand on my waist and he looks like he's so excited he might jizz in his pants. I smile and raise my eyebrow at him as we glide around the dance floor. He blushes and looks away and I laugh. He looks back and he sees I'm not mad and he smiles again.
I see Dave, among other people, watching me. His eyes never leave me. I meet his eyes for a moment before looking back at Dillon.
We dance a few more times, and we talk a bit, always staying across the room from Dave, who watches me the entire time. He's not the only one watching me, but he's the only one I care about.
Later, when people start leaving Dave comes over. Riley doesn't notice because she's talking to three other guys. He smiles at me and asks, "Did you have fun?"
I nod and say, "It was nice of Dillon to take me."
He says, "I'm glad he did."
I ask, "You are?"
He nods and is suddenly nervous, "Would you like to go for a walk?"
I smile and say, "Sure," then tell Dillon where I'm going and follow Dave out of the building.
We walk across the grass in silence for a bit before he finally says, "You really do look incredible."
I grin and say, "Thank you." Then I add, "I wore it for you."
He stops and asks, "You did?"
I say, "I wanted you to finally notice me."
He smiles and says, "I've always noticed you."
I take a step closer to him, "I've wanted you to notice me for awhile."
He steps closer to me and says, "I didn't know you felt that way"
Close the remaining distance between us and say, "I do. I have for awhile," as I look up at him.
He looks down at me and opens his mouth but doesn't say anything.
I ask him, "Do you want to get out of here?" and run my hands around his waist.
He asks, "What about Dillon?"
I say, "He knows to go back with the car if I don't come back."
He gulps and asks, "What about Riley?" and he wraps his arms around me.
I tell him, "Fuck Riley."
He smiles and presses his nose into my hair and starts lightly kissing my forehead and says, "Why would I want to do that?" and his mouth moves down to my ear and he says, "When I could have you?"
Feeling his touch and his breath and finally hearing him say he wanted me is almost more than I can take, my legs are barely holding me up and my skin is covered in goosebumps. I say, "We should go to the safe house. We won't be interrupted there."
He says, "That's what I was thinking"
We get into his car and drive off. Dave keeps looking at me as he drives, and I keep toying with my skirt, not sure if I want to tease him by pulling it up to show more leg, or tease him by pulling it down and covering more skin.
When we finally get there it takes all the restraint we have not to race inside. Dave unlocks the door and I push through before it's even open and stand in the middle of the room, waiting for him to come get me. He puts the keys down on the counter and slowly pulls his jacket off and tosses it onto a chair before undoing his tie sending it after the jacket. Then he just stands there and stares as me as my heart is pounding in my chest and I don't know long I can stand here without jumping him.
Then just when I think I've reached my limit he bursts into motion and closes the distance between us in an instant, wrapping one arm around my waist and putting the other behind my head and pulling my lips to his. For a second I go limp and cling to his arms then I recover and leap onto him, wrapping my legs around his waist and my arms around his neck. His hand slides down and grabs my ass and feeling him touch me like that makes me completely lose my breath. Dave kisses my neck as I gasp for air. Finally I gasp out, "Bedroom," and he doesn't hesitate.
I let go of his neck and unzip my dress as he carries me into the bedroom and we continue our kiss.
When we reach the bed I pull my arms out and fall backwards onto it. Dave holds onto the dress letting me fall completely out of it. He looks at it for a second, then at me, and tosses it aside. I don't care. It's served its purpose.
I crawl backwards across the bed as Dave climbs onto it and crawls after me. He doesn't catch me until we reach the wall and he starts kissing me again and I start trying to unbutton his shirt. When I finally get it unbuttoned he seems torn between taking it off and kissing me. I want the shirt off him so I push him away just enough to pull it off of him.
I kiss his bare shoulders and chest while he kisses whatever parts of me he can reach.
He reaches behind me and unfastens my bra and I shrug out of it, and we pause for a second, enjoying the feel of out bare chests meeting for the first time before we start kissing again.
Soon he reaches a hand up and cups my breast and I reach down to start unbuckling his belt.
When I get it done he immediately starts pulling them down and I do the same with my panties and finally we're completely naked together. Nothing but skin on skin from head to toe and it feels so good I can't help but bite my lip. Dave looks like he's trying not to lose it right then and there.
Finally I spread my legs and he pushes into me and it hurts in all the right ways. He pounds away at me and I scream in pleasure.
We fuck two more times after that and spend the night curled up in each other's arms
In the morning I feel happier than I ever have, and Dave kisses me again as soon as he wakes up. We get dressed in our spare clothes and head home.
Dave decides to stop at Atomic Comics because he says he needs coffee. When we go in Marty and Todd spot us and call us over. When we sit down Marty asks, "So where did you two disappear to last night?"
Todd says, "Yeah. We looked for you after the dance but couldn't find you. Riley couldn't find you either."
Dave looks a little nervous but then looks at me and smiles. He turns to them and says, "Mindy and I are together now."
Marty and Todd are completely shocked. They say, "What? Really? I never thought you two…even with everything?"
Dave says, "Fuck'em."
Marty says, "You're a braver man than me dude."
I smile and put an arm around Dave and say, "I know."
After we leave Atomic Comics Riley spots us driving down the road and steps into the road and flags us down. When Dave steps out she says, "What the hell! Why'd you leave me at the dance like that!"
I open my door and stand up and look at her over the roof and says, "Cause he's with me now, so keep your hands off my man, bitch, or I'll break them."
Dave smiles and shrugs then gets back in the car and we drive off, leaving her standing there in shock.
When we get home, I ask Dave to come in with me. Marcus is eating lunch when I walk into the kitchen, leaving Dave in the hall, and I say, "Marcus, I want you to meet my boyfriend," and I tell Dave to come in.
Marcus drops his fork and after a moment of shock says, "Give me one reason why I shouldn't kill you. Or worse, arrest you."
And I say, "Because you love me."
And he starts to say something back, but stops, and after a minute says, "Damnit," and goes back to his lunch.
Dave says, "I guess we should go tell my Dad now."
Dave's dad is excited to hear the news. He says, "I always knew there was something special between you two."
We go upstairs to his room, planning to rest before going out that night, but we end up having sex again. It doesn't stop us from going out though. I can't decide if I want to act like a couple with him in costume though. I'd love to walk down the street as his girlfriend under any circumstances, but I also have Hit Girls reputation to think of, so I end up just sneaking kisses when we're alone.
Just when I'm worried that this otherwise perfect day will be ruined by a boring night, there's an explosion
Oh thank fucking god we finally found a pair of shoes. I swear to god I can't believe it actually took longer than dress shopping. I was really starting to run out of ideas for my story. What pisses me off even more is that we went to four different stores and when we(I say "we" but I really mean Angela, Jessi, and Angela's Mom) finally decided on a pair, it was from the FIRST STORE WE VISITED! Fucking hell. Ugh. The things I'm willing to do to get Dave.
Well, at least it wasn't a complete waste of time. That story should keep me entertained for awhile.
More Mako's Message: So, if you didn't notice something was up before the "reveal" I'm both disappointed and insulted. I worked real hard to make this sound too good to be true, while at the same time making sure it didn't sound like my writing. But after the point where she started running out of ideas I let it devolve into "bad fanfiction". The "sex scene" was also tricky, since, one, she's 12 and it's creepy, two, she lacks the experience to write a good one, and, three, while I liked the bluntness of the original version("and then we had sex and it was awesome"), I couldn't deny that a bright and imaginative girl could probably write a better one even if she had no experience(including porn, written or otherwise). So hopefully it worked and wasn't too squicky.
Anyway, I showed this to a friend and after reading it he said that my fans were going to lynch me for this. But this idea was too good not to use, and I had so much fun writing it that if you do I'll die with a smile on face. But remember, if you do, I'll never be able to finish the story...
But I'll give you this glimpse into the future just because I'm in a good mood and feeling generous
.oOo.
When I finally pulled away she had the biggest grin on her face and tears running down her cheeks and she said, "I knew it was you."
And of course my first instinct was to deny it, but I just couldn't lie to her that time. Not there, not like that. So, I dropped the hiss I usually put in my voice when I'm in costume and nodded and said, "Yeah, it's me. Don't tell anyone or I'll hunt you down."
She laughed and sniffed and said, "I won't tell anyone."
I stepped away from the cot and said, "Goodbye Jessi. Good luck."
"Goodbye. Thanks for everything." And then when I reached the door she said, "I love you."
I looked at her over my shoulder and said, "I love you too," then knocked to be let out.
