RedHood123, if you are reading this, here are my views on your stories.
While each of them are creative, they need more spelling checks. You didn't add commas or full stops to certain sentences.
Here's an example of how you written:
Chud: Correct Aiden how many stars are in the galaxy?
Here's how it should've been written:
Chud: Correct! Aiden, how many stars are in the galaxy?
So, while each of your Skatoony stories are creative, they need to be checked for spelling and punctuation before being published. Same thing with your Woodland Critters stories. And that's a lesson I need to take into consideration as well.
Also, here's some advice from me about writing Skatoony stories: While it's cool to add guest characters from different franchises, it would also be cool to add official Skatoony characters in the story as well (E.G: Bigfoot, Dabbs, T-Bone.)
So, here are pros and cons about your stories:
Pros:
• Very creative storylines
• Good use of crossover characters
Cons:
• Needs checking for proper punctuation
• I suggest the YOU'RE OUTTA HERE parts be centred and/or bold to stand out from the stories.
In conclusion, apart from reviewing each of your stories individually, I chose to write this because my reasons apply to each story. Hope you're okay with this and I hope I haven't hurt your feelings with this.
-DiamondPickle994
