So, I present before you the first chapter of Durga... I'm changing the character sketch a bit... Here no one is a CID officer... All are business men...Enjoy...
Chapter 1:-
In the hall of a house,
Girl(24 yrs)(shouts):- Bhaiyaaaaaaa... Papaaaaaa... mummaaaaaaa...
Everyone comes running towards her...
Boy (26 yrs):- Kya baat hai Shreya (girl)?
Mumma:- Kya baat hai subah subah.. is ladki ne toh dimag kharab karke rakha hai
Papa:- Meri beti ko kuchh nahi kehna... dekho.. kitni pyari hai masoom hai.. isse aise kaise dant sakti ho tum..
Shreya:- Bhaiya... Papa... mere paas kapde nahi hai...
Papa:- Abhi(Boy) dekho.. bechari.. kapde nahi hai.. (to mumma) yeh pagal nahi hai jo aise hi chillayegi...
Abhi:(looks at the cupboard):- Shreya... yaar... tu... tere paas sach mein kapde nahi bai? (shocked expression)
Shreya:- Kaha hai dekho bhaiya... aap hi dekho...
Abhi rubbed his eyes... The cupboard was overflowing with dresses but Shreya was saying something contrast...
Abhi:- Mumma eye drop hai kya ghar mein?
Mumma:- Nahi
Abhi:- Shreya... yaar ek saal mein itne din nahi hotr jitne kapde hai tere paas...
Papa:- Abhi aaj hi Shreya k liye kapde kharidne jana hai...
Shreya:(naughty tone):- Papa... aap nahi... bhaiya hi chalenge... mere sath... (Abhi shocked) Kyun bhaiya? Aap apni is pyari si masoom si behen k liye apna purse nahi ujadenge ????
Abhi:(POV):- Ho gaya... Bhagwan... mere bank account ko bachana... (to Shreya) h.. ha ha.. (almost crying) b... bilkul...
Shreya(low tone):- Yaad hai? Pichhle mahine k sattayis tarikh ko... aat bajke tees minute pe aap ne mujhe danta tha... bin wajah... ab dekho hota kya hai (winks)
Abhi:(loudly):- Oye teri toh...
Papa:- Abhi... meri princess k sath achhe se peshana...
Mumma:- Gaya... Abhijeet tumhara bank balance khatam... mujhe toh kaam hai mai chali...
She leaves...
Shreya:- Mai bhi list bana leti hoon kya kya kharidna hai aur kis kis mall mein sirf selfie lene jana hai...
Shreya leaves...
Papa:(laughs):- Abhi suno...
Abhi(tensed):- Ha papa
Papa:- Abhi toh behen hai.. (laughing) bank balance phir bhi rahega... jab biwi aa jayegi na.. toh negative mein run hoga balance...
Abhi:(laughs):- Papa... yeh... yeh sab kuchh khatam kar degi papa... mera sara balance duniya se mit jayega...
Papa:- Zyada maang liya toh mere card se payment kar dena...
Abhi:(smiles):- Nahi nahi papa... akhir hai toh behen hi na.. mai de dunga.. no problem.. woh toh mazak kar raha tha...
Papa:(teasing):- Ha ha biwi ayegi toh mazak bhi maat karna.. nahi toh.. kuch samajhne se pehle... chappal udta hua ayega... tumhara tez gussa bhi kam par jayega...
Abhi:(laughing):- Bade experienced lag rahe ho aap
Papa:- Ji.. aap k papa hai.. aur tumhari mummy ne toh bapre.. chhodo... tum woh list ready karo... kuchh din baad 'Let's design' ko 'Love your dress' se milna hai
On the other hand,
Man:- Sachin himmat kaise hui tumhari
Sachin:- I'm sorry papa
Man:- Kaha tha na.. is topic pe dobara baat nahi karni
Sachin:- Papa... mumma chale jane k baad aap ne hi hume paal poskar bada kiya hai lekin.. sorry hume nahi sirf mujhe... Purvi ko nahi.. usne kya bigada hai? Sirf padhna hi toh chahti hai
He receives a slap and falls on the sofa...
Voice:- Bhaiyaaa...
Sachin(24 yrs):- Purvi andar ja.. bahar maat aa abhi...
Purvi(24 yrs)(voice):- Bhaiya... aap gir kaise gaye? (pulls him up) aap ko lagi toh nahi na
Sachin:- Ha m.. mai thik hoon.. tu baat kyun nahi manti hai? Bol raha tha na mai.. mana kar raha tha na.. abhi is waqt bahar aane ko?
Purvi:(tearfully):- Sorry lekin aap ko lag gayi hai isliye mai bahar ayi..
Sachin(smiles):- Nahi lagi hai.. tu andar ja.. (low tone) plz behen.. ja andar... Papa gusse mein hai... kahi tujhpe gussa na nikal jaye
Papa(Man)(cold tone):- Purvi suno
Purvi:(frightened):- H.. Ha.. mm... mai??
Papa:- Ha tum.. suno
Sachin:(POV):- Purvi ko dant par jaye toh?
Sachin:- Papa... Purvi ki tabiyat thik nahi.. u.. usse kamre mein jane do na.. m.. mujhe bolo kya bolna hai.. mai bol deta hoon..
Papa:- Sachin chup karo.. aur tum yehi khade raho..
Purvi:- B.. Batao papa..
Papa:- Dekho Purvi.. tum ek ladki ho.. aur tumne jitni padhai ki hai na.. woh zaroorat se zyada hai.. ab aur padhai karke kya faida? Jana toh tumhe kisi aur k ghar hi hai na? Isliye rasoi sambhalna seekh lo ... kaam ayega..
Purvi:- T..thik hai papa
Her father leaves...Purvi:(POV):- Lekin mujhe toh army officer banna hai... (a drop of tear slips from her eyes)
Sachin:(wipes her tear):- Oye pagal... tu hasti hui achhi lagti hai samjhi.. rote huye na bilkul chudail lagti hai.. samjhi? Huemsha hasegi.. aur 12th k baad college nahi gayi toh kya hua? Ha? Tujhe maine sab kuchh sikhaya hai na?
Purvi:(bursts into tears):- Bhaiyaaaaa (hugging him) mera sapna.. woh sapna hi reh jayega na.. sach nahi hoga na...
Sachin:- Zaroor sach hoga.. (POV) Papa, Purvi mujhse bus panch minutes chhoti hai.. phir bhi aap k kehne pe mujhse kitni izzat se baat karti hai.. Jab ki hum dono same age k hai.. Aur aap meri phool jaisi behen ko padhne nahi dete.. itna successful businessman 'Love your dress' ki owner hokar bhi ek neech soch wale insaan ho aap..
Purvi:- Bhaiya..
Sachin:- Bol..
Purvi:- Aap papa ko kabhi pressurize nahi karoge.. kabhi nahi bologe mujhe padhne dene k liye.. kyunki ussi dauran aap ko ghayal hona padta hai.. aur mere liye sirf aap hi ho.. jo mujhse pyar karta hai.. plz aap aisa nahi karoge kabhi..
Sachin:(smiles):- Pagal hai tu? ha? Tere liye nahi karunga toh kiske liye karunga?
Purvi smiles...
In the evening,
Abhi's side..
Shreya:- Phone kyun nahi utha raha hai.. hatt..
Abhi:(laugh):- Dekha.. tera phone bbi nahi utha raha..
Shreya:(shows her fist):- Yeh dekha hai na tunne?
Abbi:- Izzat se bol... jaise subah bol rahi thi
Shreya:- Oye.. chup... woh toh mumma k samne... bhaiya se bhai aur Aap se tu.. hona toh natural hai... (laughs) (looks at the other direction) tum aa gaye?
She hugs the person...
Abhi:(shocked):- Tu?
The chapter ends
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Regards
-Babli-
