Just an announcement/checkup.
I just wanna start by saying thank you so much for the reviews! This is the first time I have ever written and my English isn't great but you guys have been so kind! I also want to apologize (now I know it can be spelled with both a s or a z thanks to an extremely kind reader) for any mistakes I have made while writing this. I often mess up with grammar and things like comas so I hope that doesn't bother you guys too much. I also do not speak Hebrew and when using a translator it doesn't come up in a language I understand. I may use so Arabic and other languages just because it is better to understand but I feel like it works because Ziva is bilingual.
Now about the story. I know in my description I said that McAbbys family will be present and I do intend for that to happen but I am finally beginning to understand how I want the DiNozzos family first. For example, I know that I made Alex sound kind of like a brat but I think he is going to be a very sweet kid who is just going through puberty and it makes him moody. I have 3 brothers and 1 sister so I know that teenagers change and have moods. I also want to point out that I intend on making Ziva a wonderful mother but In the last chapter she was just stressed and frustrated.
So I am mostly sure that Alex will be a nice, athletic, kid with the occasional disrespect, and Ellie will be a daddy's girl who is very stubborn and a free spirit but I am struggling with Tali. I don't necessarily make her the perfect kid but I like the idea of her trying very hard to please and I have a couple thoughts about later chapters where her and Ziva talk about being the middle children since they both relate.
Anyway, thank you if you read this and please, please, please send requests for scenes and personalities.
