Destination Unknown.
A fan fiction by Aoi Kitsukawa
Disclaimer: Katekyou Hitman Reborn belongs to Amano Akira and its related companies; I only borrow the characters in the manga/ anime. Please enjoy reading it!
Author's Note: I received many reviews for chapter 6 that mentioning how much focus I put more on the OC –mainly Suzume –but it's something that I'm already expected. You know, it's actually one of my bad habits in writing fanfic, especially if I decided to put my OCs in the stories so they tend to be the led characters; however mostly because it's an 'Alternate Pairing' theme. However, my readers also love the plot that whenever I read the reviews, they always made me laugh with happiness! Oh thank you so much for the reviews!
This is not the next chapter; rather it's my replies and explanation for the readers who kindly send their reviews to me. The replies were too long that I don't think I want to risk my real next chapter with lots of pages. DX
For my readers, especially those who send their reviews to me, for this special chapter, I WANT you people to READ THE REPLIES that I wrote because they contains certain information regarding what had happened to Tsuna and his Family. Although not all, but still, it will clear some matters that might be confusing to my dear readers.
Special thanks to Animaddict for kindly reminded me of what elements that I should put in my story. I was in total lost until her review (the first one) came and help me with it.
Summary: He left. Framed with a crime he never did, he believes nobody would never forgive and remember him so he left the family. But little did he know that everyone had been tracing his footsteps ever since he was gone...
Special Destination 01: Replies and Explanations
Karenirvana: Thank you very much for your review. I hope you can keep on reading this story and yes, his family was treating Tsuna poorly. You have to keep on reading if you want to know the sequences of the story.
Sera: Sera, you're not the only one that realized the last chapter was more focusing on OCs rather than Tsuna or his family. Yeah, it's one of my bad habits too, too much focus on the OCs. However, you did predict it right; it has something to do with the recent situation the Vongola was facing right now.
Morgan: Yes, the crime Tsuna was accused was RAPE.
Regarding the Guardians and Reborn's reaction on the missing Tsuna…I guess you have to read my reply to Xeyuxe20 for explanation. And yes, from the last chapter, Kyouko failed to move on since she's still in love with Tsuna despite what had happened.
Animaddict: Thank you very much for reading this story. Your reviews actually reminded me of the questions I should put into the stories (some of the main elements) but accidentally forgot along the way. And I'm glad you like how I described Kyouko's conflict. Regarding:
1) Focus on OCs –The OCs had strong connection on the situation that had been facing by both Tsuna and Vongola. Split in two; one to help Tsuna whose undergoing serious depression (Andy and his team) while the other party went to investigate his 'accused crime' and pretended to search for Tsuna (Suzume). Last chapter, the was a reason why Suzume's half past was revealed, and it has something to do with the current problem the Vongola was facing.
2) Kyouya is a major OOC –Indeed, one big problem that currently I'm facing now. However, after you explained, I finally found the reason why. Sorry, I couldn't tell you, a big Spoiler!
3) Tsuna's exposure was decreasing –Well, Tsuna is sick, and actually last chapter was the right time to reveal what exactly his 'crime' was. Even in chapter 3 and 4, Tsuna went home in terrible state, and fell sick the next morning. How can I let him revealed everything while he was that sick and stressful? And Suzume wasn't took the spotlight, she's more on investigating and managing the administrative in Tsuna's place and chapter 6 was the meeting of the first clue before her trauma accidentally came.
4) The Guardians' feelings –Ufufu…another one of my missing elements. It's also made on intentionally, and please keep up reading if you want to know why (this is a spoiler if I told you).
Xeyuxe20: Well, most people were angry with the Guardians but you're the first reader that mentioned how Reborn was not so caring about Tsuna's disappearing. It made me shock too, as to be honest, I didn't realize I make him that way… *went to the corner and sat down with gloomy clouds on the head, crying* Reading the POVs? Well, maybe I should say like this:
Reborn cared.
He does care, but as much as we know, he is not a person whose emotions easily engulf him, as it would give him bad advantage as a hit man. He was mad when he found out what had happened to Tsuna, especially about the treatment he received from his Family (chapter 2 where he shot Dino angrily), but he needs to be calm or emotions will clouded his decisions. The Guardians indeed a bit distant with Tsuna due to what had happened, but that was not the real reason either.
Hippopotamus: Thank you very much for following and liking my story, I really appreciate it. Well, my replies for you inputs:
-"You have said the majority of the OCs are cliché, but I have to say yours too"
Well my dear, it seems like you have a very HUGE misunderstanding about my ending notes. While I did say that the OCs are too cliché, I didn't mean the OCs that served as supporting/ leading characters in all stories, I mean the heroines for Hibari Kyouya in 18OC stories. Same attitude (cold, provocative) and abilities (strong, a 'carnivore' etc), I was somewhat…tired to read the same themes in most of 18OC stories. I did like one –Comprehension (M rank) since the girl was shy, timid and weak; this is what I mean at the endnotes.
Most of my OCs that I create never has a very nice, good-sunshine childhood, since I always bound them all with the cruel and twisted life of the world. Once they grown up, the reality is harsher than dreams children always thought, and sometimes they had to face difficulties in worst way. That's why they all have almost similar background that created who they all now. Suzume is one of the major OCs in my story that led the story plot (remember, Reborn trusts her to admin the management in Tsuna's place, and she was hired as Tsuna's PA in the first place), that's why she appears a lot in the story. She is not Hibari's lover; she's his cousin and two years older than him! Hibari looked up to her as his big sister, not as romantic interest. He even knows that she is a sadist, and I don't like violent woman to be Hibari's woman. Not my interest.
-"Though it might be an idea –if you have time for it –to check up on the originality and try to make it a bit more mainstream"
I don't understand what do you mean by 'make it a bit more mainstream'. Sorry, but I really don't understand. I came from a country where English is the second medium language and it's a compulsory language to learn, although I'm more than enjoyable to learn it than looking it as an academic subject. However, I'm not a perfect person either so I hope you can kindly explain to me what exactly you mean by that.
Also, if you want to ask me whether my story is original or not, it IS ORIGINAL. I did make credits to Chuu-chan for her amazing story (Their Boss) that influence me to make this story, but with lots of 'abandon Tsuna' stories with the same theme: accidental killing/ lost interest in Tsuna, I decided that better to make a story with a little bit against the norms. That's what make authors different from each other, right?
-"Hibari seemed to react to Tsuna's pseudo name…was there a connection between the two of them and the name or did I just read it wrongly?"
That…I never thought it would lead you to think like this, because I just make it like Hibari was shock that Tsuna had choose a name different from his real name. Well, he might expect Tsuna to choose at least an Italian name instead of Englishman's name.
-You like Suzume too? Oh my, looks like she got two fans now! She is a good person, it's just that the way she handles everything to handle the Guardians' damages always in most brutal and sadistic way, which makes her equally sadist as Reborn!
And I'm not mad, but it really bothers me when people had accidentally misunderstood what I'm writing in the notes. Hope this will help you.
End of Special Chapter 01.
The special chapter ends here. Don't worry for the real chapter 07, it's still in progress. And here's some of the sneak preview of chapter 07:
"Tsuna-san…his family does no longer trust him, right?"
"…You can say like that. Although from what I finally heard from him and Suzume's, obviously it was a crime that done by someone who wanted him fall down like now." Andy wiped his glasses before wore if, and lazily stood up. "However, it's better not to say anything that could provoke his sadness. Right now, he's nothing more than a fragile glass…"
With that, Andy excused himself and went to the living room.
Please read and review. Thank you for your kindness to read this story of mine. –Aoi Kitsukawa.
