Hey, guys, back again with another chapter and I have been listening to you comments which speaking off let's answer a few right now.
Slim A Lou Prime: Wo wo wo slow down there, I'm not gonna be getting into the rage filled mess between the furry and the nerd anytime soon. But don't worry there will be primarchs in just as soon as I read up more on a few and try and understand their personalities. My goal is to try and get all the primarchs into this story. Is it ambitious, will it be hard to pull off, will you guys like it, the answer is… pretty much.
Godemperor63: I thank you for the compliment and the criticism. And from now on I will space up my dialogue, I had noticed that it was a bit mushed together but I thought it was just me. Thanks for the quote and yes Slaanesh finding porn is hilarious, but it might be a bit cliche I think is the right word. But I might do it who knows. And as for Macha….there are plans.
Shashenka: Thank you and for that part, I have 2 answers, what do you think and you'll have to wait and see. I can't spoil you guys all the time.
Notsae: I thank you for your criticism, but some things are out of my hand, let me explain. For grammar errors, I am currently using Grammarly and because I'm a poor bastard I don't have the money to pay for the full error report, just the one you get for free. Besides the English language is too complicated to constrict with grammar, although that doesn't mean I'll be misspelling and putting words in that don't need to be there. Already covered the spacing, but separating character speech and thought that's new. I thought I had already done a good job of saying what is thought and speech. I think you might be thinking of when I show it from the third person/other people's perspective. I make the chaos gods and their daemons speech like that so at any given point it shows who's talking, plus it looks nice. And for thoughts, there isn't much I can think of doing besides italicizing it and for thoughts and speech I always put down who's talking and who's thinking. But nonetheless, I thank you for your criticism. Also, I have gone back and fixed some of the stuff in the past chapters.
frankieu: What makes you think the chaos gods are gonna be the only ones that get a piece of the fallen, I would say who, but that would be spoiling.
LordGhostStriker: Haha god that's funny, I also love how you just decided to say fuck it and add fem versions of the traditionally male demons. While funny I don't think I'll do that, a one shot of it maybe but not for this story.
Now a Quote of the Day
"Remember: there is no such thing as innocence, only degrees of guilt."
Now on to the story
Normal speech
YELLING AND SCREAMING
Khorne and khornate daemon/follower speech, place, time, or Luke powered up speech/thoughts
Slaanesh and slaaneshi daemon/follower speech, thinking, quote, social cue, or emphasize
tZEenTcH's AND TzeeNTchIaN dAEmON/foLLowER SpEeCH
Nurgle and nurglite daemon/follower speech
ALL cHAoS GodS sPEAkINg aS oNe
(Authors talk)
Chapter 5: A Lamb in a Den of Wolves
After my trip to the warp, I was teleported back to my humble abode and got some sleep for the next day. I quickly wake up and leave the house. Now I just need to figure out how to contact the Broodlord, I think. Last night before I went to sleep I tried to contact the Broodlord I had created to see what it had been up to. But the only problem was I could not get any kind of reading. My only assumption is that either I was too far or due to it being very synaptic creature, it's resident independence from the hive mind has let it able to be difficult to contact. Just my luck to make an infiltration unit that I can't even contact, I think.
As I make my way through a nearby park run into somebody.
"Waahh!" I hear a clearly feminine voice sound out. As I steady myself from almost falling over I get a look at who I ran into. She appears to be a nun from the way she's dressed, with long blonde hair.
I quickly react and stick my hand to help her up, "Are you alright sister?" I ask.
"Oh yes I'm fine I'm sorry for running into you," the nun quickly replied grabbing my hand as I helped her up. "
No, no it was my fault I should have paid better attention to where I was going," I replied, the lessons about respect and politeness with other members of their faith coming back to me. You would think my recent bouts with members of the church would make me wary of this nun, but if it's one thing my mother did better than anything it was hammer manners and kindness into me.
As I help her up, the wind suddenly picks up and her veil flies off as I look into her eyes. Pure green, and green and clear as emeralds. Full of pure innocence and kindness. I have only seen those kind of eyes once, and they're not from a time I would like to remember. "Marie" I whisper the name of someone close to me.
"Umm could I please have my veil back now?" the nun asks snapping me out of my trance as I see that I have her veil in my hand not even realizing I had grabbed it.
"Oh ya here, sorry about that," I apologize sheepishly.
"It's alright, but could I ask you something?" she asks.
"Sure what do you need?" I ask back.
"Well I currently a bit lost do you think you could help me out?" she asks giving me a warm smile.
Is it a sin to be attached to a nun? I ask myself. I mean it's not like I can't see she's a beautiful girl. Long blonde hair, those emerald eyes, fair skin, and that smile could probably melt the heart of a stone cold mother fucker like Khorne. How can I not help her?
"Sure where you headed," I ask and she replied.
"I am going to be stationed at the nearby church, but I can't seem to find my way to it," she replied clearly embarrassed.
Uh-oh, was hoping she wouldn't say that, I think. Currently, that's were the priests and Fallen Angels are at, and I don't think I could just walk in there and have a cup of tea with 'em. "Sure I can do that," I say uncertain if this is a bad idea or not.
"Wonderful truly God has blessed me to have bumped into such a helpful person, may God bless you," she said as she clasped her hands for a quick prayer.
I suddenly feel a painful headache. Great now God himself officially hates me, I think. "Oh, by the way, I'm Luke Conwell," I replied officially introducing myself.
"I'm Asia, Asia Argento," she introduced herself as well.
"Pleasure to meet you, Asia, now how about we get you to your church," I say beginning to walk off.
"Oh right," she said as we made our way into town.
As we made our way through the park we stumbled across a young boy who had scraped his knee to which Asia ran over to. "Here, boys shouldn't cry over things like this," she said as her hand glowed green as the boys scrape begin to heal. Well, that's obviously new, I think to myself as I begin to think if this power has a connection to mine of any kind. "There all better now," Asia had said a soft smile adorning her face. The boy got up to see the miracle that had happened when women I can assume was his mother came over.
"What is going on here," she demanded.
"That Onee-chan over there helped by scraped knee," said the boy.
"He was injured so I decided to help," Asia said softly. The mother just huffed and grabbed her child by the hand.
"Let's go Genji you shouldn't be talking with strangers," the mother said.
"Hey what's your problem?" I ask as this chick was being pretty bitchy considering that her son was hurt and Asia just helped him.
"The women just huffs again and states. "My problem is that you and the nun are still here instead of taking a long walk off a short cliff,".
After that, she walked away with her son as I was about to retort, but Asia stopped me by putting a hand on my arm. "It's fine, I'm sure she didn't mean it," she said with a sad smile.
"Come on let's go find that church of yours," I say trying to get her mind off of what had happened. "So you got any friend here in Japan," I ask beginning a conversation.
"No just me I'm afraid, I didn't come over here with anyone else," she said her eyes losing a little of their joy.
"Well if you want I can be your friend," I tell here. I mean while I would normally leave most members of the church alone especially after all that's happened. But this is one of those exceptions to the rules, besides if push comes to shove I now could have a spy over there.
"R..really?" she asks with wide eyes like no one has ever offered to be her friend.
"Ya why not, it would be nice to talk with another foreigner, plus seeing that sad smile on you doesn't sit well with me," I say with a bit of a smirk.
She just smiles happily as we walk and we soon see the church off in the distance. "Would you like to come up to the church and have some tea with me," she asks giving that same cute smile.
"As much as I would love to I have to head to my school before I'm late," I say as I realize the irony of one of my previous statements. Her face drops a little, "But I could come by some time this week and then we can have some tea," I say bringing her smile back.
"That would be lovely hope to see you soon," she said beginning to walk off. I turn around and make my way to the school.
Kuoh Academy
As I make my way into the school I start to hear some strange things from some of the other students. "Did you hear about the attack?" says a student.
Apparently, my Broodlord has been busy, I think.
"Ya, they said three of the Streaks members were sliced up, looked like someone had cut them to ribbons with a sword or something," another of the students in the group said.
Streaks huh, must be some street gang that might make the Broodlords job a bit harder, I think.
"Ya plus they said some of the employees at the local motel they were near were missing and one of the residences were beaten to death," said the first student.
"My dad said that the place was a disguised brothel somebody probably grabbed a few of the gals, before they sliced up the guys," piped in a third student.
"Whatever happened the Streaks aren't gonna like that some of their members are dead that's for sure," said the second student.
As I make my way into the classroom and take a seat some more news reaches my ear. "Did you hear about the recent kidnappings," said one of the girls in the class.
"No, what happened?" another girl asked.
"Apparently 7 families were abducted within the span of a single night, the police are calling for a curfew sense this and the recent incident with the Streaks happened," the first girl finished.
So there are kidnappings happening, it could be the Broodlord but for the need of that many bodies this soon, it must be something else but what or who did this and why so many? I think.
I make it through the day and head home trying to figure out why so many people are disappearing and to try and draw a game plan for when the supernatural comes a calling. The first thing that needs to happen is to figure out who will be summoned as my main force. While I could just summon daemons or call forth the cult the genestealer is making but they are more likely to make people shy away from me and I am gonna need allies, I thought.
The first and one of the few candidates that would work are the Space Marines. The Emperor's finest are one of the few factions that would make it possible to establish allies and be able to defend me. Their very human like, they can go toe to toe with a good number of scary as shit in 40k, and they are probably gonna be easier to explain to any of the public than anything else I could create, I think. But the real question is what legion I build, do I pick one and slowly add the other legions of the original 18, or do I just add them in all at once?
I decided to head off to bed and think about it in the morning. Besides it's not like I'll need them anytime soon anyway, I think.
Next Day at Kuoh City Park
This morning I woke up this morning going to try and work out some. Instead, I end up running into Asia sitting on a bench alone frowning. "Hey, Asia are you ok?" I ask her clearly depressed over something. She sees me and quickly hides the frown with a smile, how do I know I have done it myself.
"Oh Luke, I'm fine I just decided that since it was such a nice day I thought I would head to the park," she replied with a somewhat forced smile.
Clearly trying to hide something but I don't feel anything telling me she's lying, I think. The great little thing about this mark not only does it glow when in the presence of supernatural beings, but it also apparently allows me to feel the emotions of others and figure out when they're lying. "Well if you want to enjoy the day some more we could hang out if you like?" I ask hoping to see what could be the cause of this behavior.
She looks up to me with a genuine smile this time, "I would love to," she said. With that, we made our way out of the park.
First I had taken her to a local diner that sold some American style meals. Since Asia couldn't read the menus I ordered for us. I had gotten the both us a drink some fries and a burger. It was pretty funny and cute how the nun didn't know how to eat a burger, looking between a fork and me trying to decide how to eat it. After I had told her how she begins to eat it and told me it was the best food she had ever tasted.
We finished soon after and began to make our way to the local arcade where I got her to play a few games. Hell even for her first time with the game she still kicked my ass at Dance Dance Revolution. As we made our way to the exit, I notice she was glued to one of the machines. Specifically the claw machine and its prizes.
"You want one?" I ask already knowing the answer.
"Oh n..no no I was just curious about the machine was all," she says embarrassed that I had found out. I begin to put a couple of tokens in and start to grab a plushie.
"Back in the states the fairs I would go to had a lot of these, but most were rigged so you couldn't get anything (I say all of those oversized toasters are rigged), but those who know the sweet spots well," I say letting my actions do most of the talking as the price drops. The plushie was a little miniature version of a wolf.
"Thank you, Luke, whenever I will look at this I will think of what a blessing it is that I have met you," she tells me. Damn any more of this and I'm gonna cry from her cuteness, I think. (Off in the warp a certain chaos god is seething in jealousy).
We make it outside and sit on a bench near a small fountain. There we began talking about each other. I had told her I was from the states and that I was over here as a transfer student. But then we got onto Asia herself, and that's when the mood dropped. She told me that she came from a small village in Europe where her parents had abandoned her at a local church. There is where she first used her power to heal a wounded puppy. She was then taken to a bigger church and told to heal other people and there she was seen as a holy maiden gifted by God himself. But that all changed one night, she had found a wounded man and healed him. But it wasn't a man but a Devil. When the rest of the church found out she was deemed a heretic and cast into the world, nowhere to go and no one to help her.
If I ever find the ones who did this I am gonna roast those mother fuckers in warp fire and feed their souls to daemons, I think pist off beyond belief that anyone would do this to her.
"So if anything I'm just glad that I found you and you were kind enough to be my first friend, if anything I'm glad to have any friends," she said solemnly crying a little.
"Hey don't cry you and I will be friends for a long time I promise, and nothing's gonna change that," I say.
Not even two seconds later a spear of what looks like pure light pierces my shoulder and I'm launched into a nearby pole. "Fuug!" I sound as the pain in my shoulder is incredibly painful. Felt like my shoulder was about to be taken clean off.
"Well, well there you are sweet Asia, and here I thought you would have ran off farther," said a sickeningly sweet voice. As I open my eyes fighting through the pain and confusion I see what appears to be a women dressed in BDSM like attire. She has wings, pitch black angel like wings. This must be one of the fallen angels. But the most disturbing thing is she appears to have a more purplish hue to her skin and a large purple horn on the right side of her head.
No how the hell did chaotic corruption get here and more importantly how did this fallen bitch find out about chaos, I think.
"LUKE!" Asia says as she tries to run over to me to check my wounds, but the fallen cuts her off before she can even get close.
"Now, now Asia you wouldn't want you, dear friend, here to suffer any more would you," said the angle. Asia shook her head no.
"Just run Asia I'll be fine!" I say trying to get her to flee. I can take a whole lot more punishment than she can after all.
"Quit welp!" the fallen says as she throws another spear at me hitting my knee.
"FUCK!" I scream, Dam this light spear bullshit hurts, I think.
"Please don't hurt him anymore I'll do what you ask," Asia pleads with the corrupted angel.
"Smart choice my dear, now let's go we have a ritual to perform," said the angel.
Asia just looks at me with tears in her eyes as the heretical angel grabs her."I'm sorry my friend, I'll miss you," Asia says as the teleport away.
Dammit get up, we need to find her! I think to myself trying to get up. As I start to slowly heal from my injuries no thanks to the mark as it pulps warp energy into me to keep me alive, the Changeling appear. "Creator are you alright?" the daemon asks quickly trying to help me up.
"I'm fine I just need to go after them," I say almost falling back down as I get up.
"Creator you are currently in no condition to go after them, you must wait," Changeling said.
"I DON'T HAVE TIME TO FUCKING WAIT!" I yell at the daemon as my eyes flare with eldritch power. It recoils a bit due to my overwhelming presence as pieces of the cement crack under me.
"You must wait you are not fully healed and you do not need to worry for the lamb she will be safe for the next few hours due to the ritual needing time to be prepared," the Horror of Tzeentch stated.
I stop myself as I look at the hood wearing daemon intensely. "How do you know that they need a few hours to perform the ritual?" I ask accusingly. The daemon stops itself and if he could seat, he would probably drenching himself right now.
"Creator you must understand my master gave me direct orders to give the fallen information of chaos so that they may become corrupted by it," it stated.
"YOU DID WHAT!" I scream as I forget all my pain as I pin the daemon to the side of a tree with telekinetic force. "Why the hell would Tzeentch tell you to do that," I ask my voice distorted by the power flowing through me.
"I do not know creator my master did not tell me why only that I must," it said.
Tzeentch what the hell are you up too? I think.
I pLAnteD The SEeDs oF cORrupTiOn tO LEt tHe FlOweR Of trUSt BlOOm, the Architect of Fate said cryptically.
Enough with the fucking riddles, why did you tell the Changeling to do this? I ask.
bY cOrRuptIng The fALlEN we wOuld Be gaIniNg cONtROl OF NeW paWNs to Do OuR BiDDiNG ANd gAtheR iNFormATion, or If neEd bE CrEAte A sCeNaRiO wHerE nO MaTTeR wHAt yoU ArE Seen as THe hEro and are sEen aS A POtEntIAl AlLY, eIThEr WAy, thEy arE paWNs That daNce TO ouR tunE, said Tzeentch.
And was Asia a pawn in this plan? I threateningly ask.
NO crEatoR Her aRrIval Was A mInOr sPeed bUmP, i hAD no pLaNS OF usIng her FoR arE GOalS, Tzeentch says.
I let the Changeling go understanding that he had not met for this to happen. "Changeling take me back to my home," I ordered the daemon. The daemon grabbed onto me and we both faded from existence.
Luke's Casa
As we teleported I quickly get out one of my books and flip through it. Well, I have no other time to plan this shit out so whether this is good or not it needs to be done, I think as I make my way outside. The Changeling has already left to return to the warp I assume. As I reach my yard I slowly reach my hand out and just imagine. Soon humanoid figures start to form from the shadowy black void. Most men would be dwarfed by the height of these men. They were carefully crafted armor, large a bulky but looks to be able to tank normal conventional fire. Their armor detailed with yellow and red, with a black fist within a white background designed upon their pauldrons.
The marines of the Imperial Fist chapter, one of the first founding chapters of the Emperors finest. Servitors, tactical marines, assault marines, scouts, terminator squads, and Centurion squads all start to appear out of the void. But there is one shape that towers the rest.
Hopefully, this works, I think. Slowly the being in question walks out of the shadows.
Wearing large armor of burnished copper and gold with eagles adorned onto it, this mountain of a man towered even the Space Marines. He continued to walk forward his cloak flapping in the wind reminiscent of eagle wings. He wielded a colossal chainsword and a tactical bolter designed for his specifically for the man's large hands.
"Hello father," he spoke as he stopped in front of me his voice calm and deep. His face a stoic almost emotionless.
"Hello, Dorn it has been a while," I reply to my "son" Rogal Dorn, the 7th primarch.
Well I know you guys are probably hating me right now since I left it at such a cliffhanger and you guys are probably craving some action.
So we have Rogal (Adorable) Dorn as the first named character that isn't a god in this story. You were probably expecting some one else weren't you. I got to say I like Dorn and I am looking forward to writing him in this story. I hope to get his personality down and throw in a bit of TTS in there for good measure.
And we also meet Asia, I hope some people aren't bothered I put her in this, I have kinda noticed a trend with most fanfics is that they try and never bring Asia into the story which is something I have never understood. But I hope to put her in this and make her a close to actual self as possible.
Also, I hope that now I have fixed the error and mistakes I made in the last chapters and I hope to make sure that from now on the story is set up like this.
Also, I have another story called Tinyhammer: Home Invasion. If you're not familiar with the concept of Tinyhammer it is basically if the minis from the game were alive or they came to our world but were only as tall as their game counterparts. It is gonna be full of humor and some action from the perspectives of the minis themselves. I hope you guys give it a look and check it out and with that, I will see you guys next time.