Chap 3 - Silent Beauregard makes her reappearance!
Wassup Boiz
I want to address some of the reviews I'm getting (please note these were the most recent reviews when I started writing this chapter):
1) Thank you for pointing out that mistake about Jesse. Jesse used to be Clarisse and I always assumed that Clarisse was kinda better/ equal with Percy but I can see your logic
2) Fuck you. I'm going to separate Piper and Jason and it's not your story
3) Chapter 3 is toning down the "awesomeness" of Nate a little. I kinda like him being OP tho
I'm going to start responding to the three most recent reviews from when I start the chapter! Maybe you'll get featured who knows.
Just so you know, I've changed the story up a bit.
Silena Beauregard never liked/dated Charles Beckendorf. Charles doesn't exist. Silena always had a crush on Will Solace and Will always had a crush on Silena.
I know it doesn't really explain why she would become a spy for Kronos, but whatever. Lot of POV switches in this chapter. Wanted to mix it up a bit (tell me what you think in reviews).
Without further adieu,
Enjoy!
It was a regular Monday morning on camp half blood and people were doing their regular after breakfast activities when suddenly the earth opened up and Nico came running out sprinting at full speed.
"Need... talk... Percy... NOW!" Nico panted.
They took him to Percy who was watching a movie with Annabeth. Percy stood up immediately when he saw Nico and asked "what's wrong."
"There's been a disturbance in the Underworld. Persephone has let someone come back up to the surface and Hades is pissed."
"That's not good," Percy said. "Do we know who it could be?"
"No. I have no idea. All I know is it's a girl."
"Alright thanks Nico. I'll tell people to be on high alert," Percy said as he gave Nico a pat on the back.
Then suddenly the warning danger siren started going off. They all ran outside to see what was happening.
Percy saw the ground open up and a pale girl walk out and collapse.
Will Solace POV
I saw the ground open up and a pale girl step out into the open. She looked around a bit then looked up and fainted.
She obviously needed medical attention so I ran over and picked her up and then ran back to the medical cabin. I made sure her vitals were ok then I ran to the Big House to talk to Chiron.
Meanwhile... (back to third person)
Nate opened his eyes and slowly pulled his arm out from under Piper's face. He slowly got up to avoid waking her up then walked over to the bathroom to clean up. When Nate was done he walked out of the bathroom to see Piper awake and rubbing her eyes.
"What time is it?" Piper asked still rubbing her eyes.
"I think 8. We should get going."
"Nate are you still mad at me?"
"Piper I was never mad at you. Maybe disappointed. But not mad," nate said as he walked over and sat down next to Piper.
"Maybe I can, make it up to you?" Piper said as she got on her knees and grabbed his manhood.
"Cmon Piper," Nate said as he picked her up and put her back on the bed. "You know I don't want that."
"Oh," Piper said. "Well maybe you want your favorite?" She said as she unclasped her lacy bra and her massive 32Ds (changed her cup size, bigger is always better ;) ) popped out of her bra.
Nate grinned.
"No. Not that. But I've thought of a way you can make it up to me."
...
Nate was eating his cereal with Annabeth and Percy when Piper sat down wearing the sluttiest thing she had ever worn.
Piper was wearing the classic "school girl" outfit.
(I'm a guy so I'm sorry but I don't know the names for the pieces of clothing)
She had a low hanging shirt that:
A) Showed off her awesome cleavage
B) Showed her massive tits trying to break out of her bra
C) Snd was also way too short, showing off her nice stomach.
She was also wearing a short shirt and and white leggings.
You look hot," Nate said to Piper as she sat down next to them.
"Shut up nate," Piper said as she playfully punched him in the shoulder.
Annabeth looked surprised and Percy's hand might have dropped under the table.
"What's with the outfit," Annabeth asked Piper.
"He made me wear it to make up for me charmspeaking him last night."
"Oh yeah about that. I have to say I still think Percy was better. Sorry nate."
Nate laughed.
"No worries. I like piper's body better anyways."
Meanwhile Piper was getting lots of looks from a lot of the other boys.
Will POV
I was sitting in my chair looking at a book on how to do acupuncture when the girl woke up and looked around.
"Hey," I said. "I'm Will. I'll be taking care of you. How are you feeling?"
"Will?" The girl said. "Will Solace?"
"Yeah," Will said.
"It's me. Silena."
"Oh my god it is you. How did you get out?"
"Persephone let me out. I was her personal maid and she said once I pleasured her 1,000 times and gave 100,000 men blow jobs, she would let me free."
"Really? I didn't know she was allowed to do that."
"She isn't. That's why Hades is pissed."
"Oh. So is Hades going to take you back down?"
"I don't know."
"Ok well you get some more rest. Your body isn't used to the sunlight yet so you need to conserve energy."
"Ok."
...
(Piper's cabin)
"Hey babe can you get me the soap."
"One sec," Piper said as she put down her magazine.
Piper POV
I got up and walked into the bathroom and got the soap. I opened the shower door and threw the soap in.
"Thanks babe," Nate said.
I grinned when I saw his dick rise.
"What's going on there Nate."
He grinned back.
"I really like your outfit."
I laughed.
"Oh yeah?"
I took off my clothes got in the shower with him. I pushed Nate against the wall and started grinding against him dick. Then I got on my knees and took his dick in my hand.
"Do you want me to deep-throat your big dick like a good girl?"
Nate nodded his head furiously.
I grinned as I took his dick into my mouth slurping and licking as if it was the best popsicle I had ever eaten. Nate was moaning and groaning I was slobbering all over his dick. Then I deep throated 8 inches of his dick. I started to hum, knowing he loved it. Nate groaned.
I started tickling his balls and furiously licking his tip. Nate groaned again.
"Cumming," he whispered. I deepthroated 8 inches, but then he pushed my mouth down the other 3. I had to repress my gag reflex and my eyes were watering. He finally came down my throat and it felt nice to feel his warm cum traveling down to my stomach.
Nate sat down and I sat down in front of him and started to grind against his dick to get him hard again. I wanted to fuck him really badly so I positioned my pussy and dropped my hips.
Nate's dick penetrating my pussy is the best feelings EVER. I started going up while moaning a lot. Nate put his hands on my hips and he grabbed me and started thrusting really fast. I cried out. He groaned when he finally came in my pussy. It felt amazing.
Nate POV
I groaned as I slammed into Piper one more time and came into her pussy. She moaned and came on my dick then flopped onto my stomach in exhaustion.
I could tell she was exhausted so I gently soaped her body then I dried her off and tucked her into bed.
"Nate," she said. "I love you."
I bent down and kissed her.
"I love you too babe."
...
(Back to third person)
"As you guys know, it's capture the flag night," Chiron said to the whole camp except Jessie and Nico. Jessie had one leg on Nico's shoulder and one leg on the ground while Nico fucked her anal with his thick cock behind the Hades cabin.
"Mhm. I love your massive cock Nico."
"You... always.. say... that," Nico gasped in between thrusts.
Nico started thrusting erratically desperate to cum and he finally did. Nico groaned and Jessie moaned as Nico's cum filled up her tighter hole. Nico pulled out and then pushed his dick in her pussy.
"Why do you never stay. We can never make this a thing if you don't stay for longer than 3 days," Jessie said as she traced circles in his hair.
"You know I have to do things for my dad Jessie."
"I know and I hate it," Jessie said pouting.
"C'mon let's get back to dinner."
...
"The teams tonight will be Aphrodite, Hephaestus, Poseidon, Athena, and Demeter vs. everyone else! Good luck to all."
Nate was sitting with Piper and when she heard the news she started pouting.
"Why are you technically part of the Hermes cabin?"
"I don't know."
"Ugh this sucks."
"I think you'll get through it."
"I hate you so much."
"I thought you said you loved me."
"So much..."
...
"Alright team," Nate said. "We have to have a strong defense. I think the Ares kids should defend and everyone else will attack."
Most people nodded their heads, so Nate kept going.
"I'm thinking we rush the left side and catch them off guard. They'll never see it coming."
Most people seemed to nod again so Nate finished the meeting with a "alright team let's do it."
(Meanwhile...)
"This is an easy match guys," Percy said to his team.
"They only have the Ares cabin so all we need to do attack them from range. The Apollo cabin should run a flanking mission and snipe the Ares cabin from afar and then me and a few others will rush the flag with Apollo cabin covering us. The rest should stay on defense. Sound good guys?"
Percy was greeted with a roar of approval.
"Let's do his guys!" Percy shouted.
...
Nate was crouched behind a rock and saw the enemy lining up for attack.
"The game must be starting soon," he thought.
Nate heard the gong go off that signaled the start of the match and he tensed ready to fight.
As Percy and a few others got close to Nate's rock, he jumped out and -
Yes that's the end of the chapter.
I'm sorry guys. I really am. But I need ideas! I have no idea what Nate's powers are and I have no idea what his godparents name is.
Also, at the end of the last chapter I said something about Aphrodite cabin coming back. Completely disregard that. I'll be coming back to that later.
I also wanna know: do u guys want more frequent shorter chapters or longer chapters that take me longer.
I just asked a lot of questions but try to answer a few of them in the review section (it helps my story attract more readers and you get to voice your opinion)
Please answer these questions in your review as following:
Dear Plushbear,
1) What Nate's power is
2) Nate's godparents domain/ name
3) Shorter or longer chapters
I've read all of the 29 reviews so far. I'm hoping to get the story to 40 reviews by the time I post my next chapter.
Thanks so much readers! I really appreciate the help. Sorry this took so long. I'll try to get the next one out by the end of November.
Cheers,
Plushbear