Chapter 1: Kidnapped

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Dinosaurs talking

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(Dakota's POV)

Right now me and Blue are watching our hatchlings play with each other and we started talking.

"Blue, you know that I love you right?" I ask.

Blue giggles, "Yes silly, you told me that hundreds of time" Blue replied.

"Heh right I lost count" Then our youngest son Razor comes to me, "Dad can you come and play with us?" He asked.

That's just like them always asking me to play, I am typically in alpha mode watching over the pack but I always try to make time to spend with Blue and the hatchlings.

"Sure Razor I can play with you all" I reply.

My second youngest hatchling is Rose who comes over to me, Hey dad did you decide to play with us?" Rose asks.

"Yes sweetie so what do you want to play?" I ask.

My second oldest hatchling Daisy comes over, "How about hide and seek?" she suggests.

My oldest hatchling Blade comes over and agrees. Just then I see what I think is called a helicopter landing on the island.

"I will be back" I tell the hatchlings and I nuzzle Blue.

"Dakota take me with you" Blue begs.

"Blue I can't you need to be here with the hatchlings but I will take Echo if it makes you feel better" I say.

"Ok, but be careful" Blue says.

"I will" I reply.

I go get Echo and we leave. When we find the helicopter some humans yell that they have come for me and then they started attacking us. "

Echo go back to the pack!" I yell.

"But what about you?" Echo asks.

"I will be fine just get them out of here" I reply.

"But we need you" Echo says.

"You all will be fine just go and that's an order!" I yell.

Echo then runs to go get the pack. I then feel something penetrate my scales and I start feeling sleepy. Before I lose consciousness I here a man talking. "Tell Vic that we got him" He said. "Yes sir" The other man says. One last thought came to mind, Please Echo, protect the pack.

So what do you think is this a good first chapter? In the next chapter I will add the Jurassic Park Raptor pack so what should their names be? By the way Razor is about 3 in human years, Rose is about 6, Daisy is about 7 and Blade is the oldest at age 8, hope you enjoyed the chapter and please review, bye.