Authors Note: Hello, and welcome to my fanfiction! ^_^
I'm glad so many of you liked the first chapter of the story but I'd like to clear up some things maybe? As much as I appreciate the positivie feedback - the story isnt really a comedy. Its more of a romantic family drama with horror and action elements mixed in with a time travel plot. I hope this clears things up and please remeber to leave positive reviews! Enjoy 3
-XxxDracoMalphasxxX, the Author
Chapter 1: A Winter's Fall
The up starter, founding daughter without her father got a lot farther by being a lot smarter, by being a lot hotter, by being so well honored, by 15 she was casting spells and writing charters.
1776, New York City
A flash!
Kara was dazed. After all, she had just traveled back in time by over thirty years. Upon arriving, she had three thoughts that came to her slowly, the first being how windy it was in 1776. The second was how strange it was that they hadn't invented the ground yet.
CRACK!
Her third thought was "ouch." Ignoring the searing pain in her head, back, and bottom, Kara tried to piece together what just happened. She tried to get up, only to find that there were three figures standing over her.
"AH MAN, MY CART!" said one.
"I zink ve have bigger problems, mon amie," another one said.
"Are you alright, miss?" the final one said as he reached out his hand.
Kara took his hand and the boy blushed. He had never seen a girl so beautiful fall out of the sky and smash into a cart before. The three of them seemed to realize this all at once as they stared blushing. Kara was unsure what to do.
"Uh, h-hey?" she managed awkwardly "You're still holding my hand dude," she said as politely as possible.
The three men snapped out of their trance immediately and the boy withdrew his hand somewhat sheepishly.
"M-my apologies, miss! Um, hi! My name is John Laurens," he said with a slight bow.
The French guy, who until now had been standing behind Laurens, butted in. "Je m'appelle Lafayette, mon amor," he said as he kissed her hand. Kara blushed slightly. Laurens pushed Lafayette away.
"Riiiiight, and this guy over here is-"
"HERCULES MULLIGAN!" the larger man yelled.
"YO, I DON'T CARE HOW BEAUTIFUL AND ANGELIC YOU ARE, SOMEONE HAS TO PAY FOR MY CART!"
Kara blushed. She never thought of herself as beautiful, but that's not why she was turning red. She had just noticed how much damage her little landing had done to their cart. She had landed directly in the front, completely damaging the front wheel and engine.
Her eyebrow twitched.
"Thanks a lot for the great teleportation spot, Mom...," she muttered under her breath as she pinched the bridge of her nose.
"What was that?" said Laurens.
"Uh, I said 'I'll fix up your transportation...uh, it'll be the bomb!'" she lied. "Just turn around really quick, please!"
The three were confused but obliged anyway. Turning to the wreck, Kara knew what to do immediately. Using her brilliant magick skills, she cast a spell to repair the wheel instantly and sparked the engine back to life with a bolt of magick electricity.
"Easy," she smirked confidentially. "Okay, you can turn around now!"
The three men turned around and couldn't believe their eyes! "How did you-" Hercules started to say.
"Uh, I guess I'm just really good with my hands!" Kara said as she shrugged nonchalantly.
"That is completely and totally...AMAZING!" Hercules exclaimed. The other two agreed and were equally astounded.
"Kara, you're so cool!" said Laurens.
"Oui oui!" agreed Lafayette. "Kerry, you have to come get drinks with us, mon amie!"
"Well I don't know about that," Laurens said concernedly. "I'm not sure she's old enough…"
"She looks 18 enough to me, mon amie!" Lafayette said excitedly, and Hercules agreed.
"Well, I guess that's it then, what do you say, Kara?" Laurens asked.
Kara gave it some thought. Was disappearing off to get drinks with these older guys really what she should be doing? After all she'd been sent back in time to do something important. But she needed to blend in, after all, even if that meant hanging out with some very strange strangers. Besides, who knew what these goofballs would do without her?!
"Yes!" she gladly exclaimed!
The three men cheered excitedly and lifted Kara onto their shoulders. "Kara! Kara! Kara!" they proudly cheered as the people of the town stopped what they were doing to applaud and join in on the cheers. The whole town had exploded in a cacophony of cheer happiness as Kara passed them on the mens' shoulders! The scene was happy and Kara thhought it would feel this way forever. However, if she only knew…
In the shadowy bushes a girl with tangled bottle blonde hair watched silently at the happy scene. She smiled wickedly as she watched. "So it seems as if Kara has arrived." She began to laugh evilly. "All according to plan!" The evil girl turned around to reveal...red eyes and sharp pointy teeth! "Hehehe and now to put my plan into action…"
To be continued . . .
