This is my first ever fanfiction and I wanted to be one piece. Don't hate on me too much, but I would like some tips to improve the plot and my writing.
Disclaimer : I do not own one piece or Their characters but I do own Rinka (my oc)
This will be a Law x Oc story and it is rated Teen because of blood and language . If anyone reading this likes it and is also good at writing we should team up.
Title: I'll get even
"Captain , are you really going to buy a slave," asking Penguin ?
"I mean we are pirates but I didn't want to own a slave ", Penguin exclaimed .
" I'm just simply looking for new crewmates." Law stated with a smirk. The Heart pirates were at Sabaody Archipelago at the time to restock supplies if they wanted to be prepared for the New World . Their was Trafalgar D Law, Penguin, Bepo and Shachi who were watching the
Slave auction.
In the back of the building you could see , Eustass Kid and his crewmates, Killer and Heat who were with their Captain.
When Rinka Finally woke up after being attacked and beaten up by pirates. she was in
a cell with a strange collar on her already sore neck. When she was recalling memories on
what happened before she black out she started becoming scared and worried. After a few minutes had passed She finally managed to calm herself down. She now noticed there were alot other people in the same situation that she was in. Then she noticed this one guy who was next to her
. He looks like he is in his late 30s with short dark hair and wearing a button down shirt and long shorts .
" where am I? Rinka asked, even though she might already know the answer .
"You are in Sabaody Archipelago human auction house for slaves and you were out cold when you came here , you were knocked out for almost a whole day" The middle-aged man explained. When she heard the new information, she froze for a sec .
When the middle aged man took another look at Rinka he could see the rage in her bright red eyes . Rinka then took a deep breath as she tried to calm down her breathing .``Whoever buys me I will just beat him or her up then run away." She declared in the most hopeful tone she could muster.
The man was quiet for a minute" For a pretty girl you seem kinda crazy."
"I already lost all of my loved ones and my home , but I'm not going to lose my freedom" She stated proudly. The man started to brighten up from the woman's positive attitude.
"Okay just be careful and just don't get yourself killed," He said with a light shrug. Then they both started smiling at each other .
As they smiled at each other, they could hear the host of the auction house start talking into the loud microphone. Rinka was thinking to herself that she can escape from this hell hole if only they didn't take away her stuff . She didn't want to leave her stuff behind and also because she had a lock picking tool in her bag .
All of her belongings that she had before she came here was gone. So she assumed that they stored her luggage somewhere she just needed to find it. Her armor and sword were gone nowhere to be found and even her small bag that had her money and medical kit with all her healing herbs were gone too.
But the one thing that she really didn't want to leave behind was her sword; it used to belong to her master before she died. When she realized that her valuables were gone ,she started thinking of a plan to get them back.
The only thing that they didn't take away from her was her clothing . Rinka was wearing a plain black tank top and a white pleated skirt that reached 3 inches above the knee. And a small black belt looped around her white skirt and finally black boots that came half way down to her bruised knees.
As she was still thinking of a plan for her escape. She came out of her thoughts when she could hear the host now beginning to speak.
"Ladies and gentlemen, Thank you for waiting ! I am your host for today, Disco-san! Let's start the auction".
The awful man shouted in an excited tone and nearly everyone in the house was just cheering , clapping at the terrible individual. When Rinka heard all that it just made her doubt the world government even more than she already did. She always had some doubt in the world government system but now this really pushes her into the edge. All she wanted was to get her belongings and leave this hell hole.
When the guy started calling out numbers ,she could see one person after another leaving the cold and damp cell and being led onto the bright stage. As time went by she could see there were less and less people in the same cell to where she was being held captive.
To pass some time Rinka looked around in her cell to see who was left. Then Rinka looked at one interesting bearded man who looked really old and had gotten his collar off . At first Rinka thought she was just seeing things but after blinking a few times to clear up her vision, she then realized her eyes weren't playing tricks on her .
While Rinka was thinking more on how the old man had gotten his collar off, she could only think one thing ," Haki," Because she had now started to sense his powerful haki.
From where Rinka was standing she could see a mermaid with green hair struggling to fight off the thugs who were trying to put her into a glass bottle. Rinka then stopped looking at the green hair mermaid when she heard yelling and screaming from the crowd. Rinka looked to see what all the fuss was all about and why all slave workers started running to the front stage .
She could see a tall man with a brown coat was now on the floor and bleeding from his mouth. She later found out that the man who bit off his tongue had chosen death instead of being someone's property. Rinka couldn't help but to feel some kind of empathy to the now dead pirate.
As Rinka could heard all of the yelling and gaspes from all of the nobles she really thinks how dramatic and stupid they are acting.
After the staff was done dragging the lifeless body of the man who just commited suicide, they started where the auction had left off. When Disco called out her number ,she knew it was her turn to be looked at as nothing more than an object rather than a human being . Then 2 big men dragged and pulled her out on the huge stage.
When she first came on stage she was blinded by the bright lights that were only focused all on her. Eventually her eyes got used to the blinding lights and also the many disgusting stares she got as well. After Rinka was done being pushed and dragged onto the spotlight she could see a cheering crowd that looked excited at their newest arrival.
When she saw there were a lot more people at the human auction house than she thought it just made her sick. Rinka just couldn't believe that these people are claiming to be the greatest in society.
Rinka's facial expression can only be described as a bored and somehow calm look rather than pure terror. Rinka didn't want to show weakness in front of the nobles or other human scum who are in the auction house. If she did show the slightest amount of fear that would only amuse the huge audience.
When Rinka was on stage , Law was just leaning back on his chair, bored out of his mind ,since no one really met Law's standards for joining his crew. The most exciting or rather dumb part that Law saw today was that big guy who bit off his tongue. Law thought it was pretty funny when he saw all of those nobles were just pissing their pants after witnessing a man who had committed suicide .
But still he was kinda disappointed that he couldn't find anyone really interesting to join his crew. Before Law was about to leave the auction house, he stopped where he stood when he saw Rinka. Law couldn't believe someone who was being auctioned off into slavery dosen't look the least bit scare. That's when Law started gripping onto his bidding plate .
Rinka was just thinking to herself *No matter what happens here ,I will still have my pride as a proud Knight not as a toy for these nasty nobles.*
Disco started introducing Rinka with a very large grin, knowing this girl will bring in a lot of money . " Coming from the New World this beautiful woman who just now turned 19 years old ,"It's Rin- Senpai! " This woman was formerly a high ranking knight from a great kingdom that is known for great medicine and advanced medical care." " But now since the kingdom does not exist any more , she has nowhere else to go, but to a powerful noble as your slave ."
"She has amazing swordsmanship and great hand to hand combat skills,and she has great medical skills as well. She can be your personal doctor or your punching bag ." " With all of her skills and good looks you will be crazy not to buy her. I mean just look at her, her beauty can probably rival up against Boa Hancock, and that woman is considered the most beautiful woman in the world. "
Rinka just hated how Disco treated her as nothing more than some object, not even a human being. When Rinka hears her new nickname she loses even more of her pride. But Rinka didn't really care that much since it was just some stupid nickname.
She was just more worried since they know she is a doctor. When they were asking questions about her she never told them that she was a doctor now.
Then Rinka was thinking to herself *Maybe they saw what was in my bag or maybe they just assumed that from where I came from.* Either way Rinka didn't really care that much when that part of information about her was out to everybody in the auction house to hear. But she kinda wishes her medical skills could be kept a secret because it would be even harder to escape since someone will pay even more for her .
Having a beautiful swordswoman as a bodyguard is already good enough but also a doctor as well it's too good to be true.
After Disco was done with her introduction . Rinka could see a lot of noble men giving her a creepy and lustful stare with drool coming from their mouths.
" I wonder what happened to her kingdom?"Penguin asks while itching the back of his head.
"Poor girl." Bepo said with pure sadness in his voice .
" I wonder why she doesn't look worried for someone who is being auctioned off for a slave ."Law said with a smirk.
Law grew even more curious at the female knight.
*Well, well , looks like I got my new crewmate after all.* Law thought to himself in amusement.
"We will start the bid at 500,000 Beri. Do we have 1,000,000 Beri?" Disco asked, and saw someone raise his hand. "5,000,000 Beri!" " 8,000,000 Beri !" A voice yelled."15,000,000 Beri!" Another countered.
When the number for her bid kept on going up she started to become more anxious . Since they are paying some much for her it will be harder for her to escape.
" C'mon you can do better than that just look at her silky long purple hair and don't forget her mystical red eyes and just look at that pretty face."Disco shouted.
When Rinka hears what the man says about her to the people who were bidding on her . He is just trying to make her more valuable, and that just makes her sick to her stomach.
Rinka still remains calm and just waits until she can get a chance to go to the back room and retreat her stuff so she can escape from this nightmare.
She could hear one man from the crowd say " 20,000,000 beri." When Rinka hears that ,she still remains calm even when her heart stops beating for a sec . Law could care less about how freakin expensive the girl is, she was the only one who caught his attention by looking like being sold off into slavery wasn't such a big deal. Without even meeting her yet, she has already met all of Law's requirements for joining his crew.
Everybody in the room stopped bidding on the beautiful swordswoman after Law had just placed his bid. No matter how pretty and useful the girl was, nobody was brave or stupid enough to bid against the Surgeon of Death.
"20,000,000 Beri going once! Going twice! And Sold, for 20,000,000 Beri to Mister Trafalgar D Law !" Disco slammed his hammer signaling the bid on Rinka was over. When Law won Rinka, he gave a smirk to Captain Eustass Kidd cause Law knew that Kidd was also interested in the girl as well.
"Captain, why did you buy her?" Bepo ask".
Law didn't answer the polar bear's question instead he stared off into space. When Rinka's turn was done she was taken away from the stage to get ready for her new master.
Rinka was then taken to the back room, where there were even more cells and where the sold slaves were . She wished she could do something to help them . She began to sigh and tried to forget their sorry faces. Rinka was still trying to think of a way to escape without being noticed because too much attention was the last thing she wanted. If only she had her bag with her she could easily pick the lock on the cell and treat some of her injuries and treat the people around her too. Then Rinka just came up with an idea .
When she was in the same cell as that old man who got his collar off she could sense Haki coming from him. But she began to sigh because she realized she didn't have enough skills to do that with her Haki yet. And even if she did, it was just too risky to try..
When Rinka was back from her thought she could hear a DrumRoll and music and could see lights pointing at something on the stage.
She couldn't tell what it was but she just assumed that it was the mermaid that she saw a few minutes ago. When the music stopped playing Rinka could hear "cheering from the crowd.
After some time had passed Disco slammed his hammer to close off the bidding for the mermaid. Then Rinka could hear a loud "bang" from the front of the auction house .
She realized it was a gunshot which means someone has been shot or probably killed. Rinka heard another loud bang but it didn't sound like a gunshot more than a crash. After hearing the big crash , Rinka could hear fighting and more gunshots in the auction house. Then all of the noise stopped when she sensed powerful Haki nearby . She now wonders who released that powerful Haki attack.
When Rinka traces the person who released the powerful Haki . She could see the old man from earlier who had his collar off. When Rinka got a closer look at the old man's face then she finally realized it was the legendary pirate , Dark King Silver Rayleigh. When Rinka looks at Rayleigh he just smiles at her then walks away.
Rinka was just shocked that she didn't notice who he was earlier. Then she was facepalming herself in the head. After Rinka was done facepalming herself she could see a blue-haired guy wearing nothing but his underwear and a purple Hawaiian shirt was now running to the crowd of slaves with something in his hand.
As Rinka took a closer look, she soon realized he had the keys for their collars. He said "Hey almost slaves! All the buyers took off ! You should scram while you can, here!" Then he just threw the key at them. She didn't even care that a weird prevert saved her all she cared about was being free.
When Rinka finally unlocked her collar she started looking for her valuables so she could leave this nightmare. Even if all the slaves left ,Rinka was determined to find her belongings because some of the stuff they took from her was really important to her and she didn't want to just leave it .
After looking for God to know how long she finally found the right room she was looking for. " Yes finally I finally found it" . When Rinka was done talking to herself . She saw her bag that still had her money in it and also some herbs and different medical stuff in it too . On the side of her bag she saw her sword and her armor . When Rinka saw her armor she put it on.
Her armor was pretty simple to put on so it only took her less than 10 seconds to do so . It was only a chest plate and some gloves , but she felt safe in it and she just couldn't wait any longer without wearing it . After she was done changing into her armor she then grabbed her sword and her bag then ran to the nearest exit . While she was running, she could hear her black boots making loud noises as she ran down the quiet halls. After maybe 10 minutes she could finally see the light from the blue sky which meant she was truly free .
I really hope you like this chapter and also thank you for reading it.