AN:HEY,GUYS! HERE'S WHATS GOING TO HAPPEN. I'M GOING TO KEEP UPDATING THIS STORY LIKE USUAL, WHILE ALSO WORKING ON A REWRITE. THIS STORY WAS MAINLY JUST ME GETTING MY FEET WET SO TO SPEAK. NOW THAT I FEEL I'VE GOT A HANDLE ON THIS WEBSITE I'M GOING TO START A REWRITE. I'M THINKING ABOUT MAKING IT DARKER, BUT IDK YET. YOU GUYS TELL ME WHAT YOU LIKE MOST ABOUT THE STORY AND I'LL TRY TO KEEP THOSE ASPECTS OF IT. THE NEW VERSION WILL HAVE A MORE OBVIOUS VILLAIN AND (HOPOEFULLY) BETTER WRITING. BUT DON'T EXPECT ANYTHING TOO SOON, EXAMS ARE COMING UP AND IM DROWNING. I KNOW HOW ANNOYING THIS CAN BE, SO I HOPE YOU CAN FORGIVE ME. I WISH I COULD UPLOAD A PICTURE AS A PAYMENT OF SORTS, BUT I DON'T THINK I CAN. IF YOU HAVE ANY IDEAS, LET ME KNOW. ;P