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i didn't originally plan to reply to the reviews personally but some of the reviews have really made me want to.
FSOGFanFictionAddiction: I hope that too, and I do intend to finish this really soon not dragging it on and on.
Misssee: I am glad you approve of thier professions I was really nervous with these details and the description of Mia's restaurant.
Jadelyn0811: And for some odd reason I really liked writting this story, just to make Christian react better when he learns about his to be or existing child, because let's be honest he really was a dick in the real series. He was insensitive towards the person he wanted to give everything (which means materialistic things to him) so atleast I feel better when he is sweet to her just in fictions.
Mineangels2: Now that will be telling, just a little patience wait till the next chapter.
Guest reviewer: Well I also like it when Ana is self accomplished and does not rely on Christian for anything but even if she isn't financially anywhere near him she is too stubborn for her own good, which is one of the qualities of Ana I really can't write about and frankly don't even appreciate as she has been into trouble multiple times even though Christian is always there offering help beforehand. (You guys don't have to agree with me on this)
Guest reviewer: I am trying to write as much as I can, but I am amidst filling forms, studying for an entrance exam, choosing college and stuff, I have already written some chapters and am working on some, I wouldn't want to leave you all waiting for a month after posting my backup mate
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And thanks to everyone who has been kind enough to take out some time to write a review as it gives me the idea if what I am writing is good enough and motivates me to write ahead.
Now this chapter is really looooonnggg about 5k so I will not be posting this friday.
Just kidding...
I will post on this friday.
The stories I follow are not updated in a long time so I know how it feels.
Flashback
19th December 2011
It is just a day before our Christmas break starts, tonight I am attending a pre holiday party for all the students. I hate parties but I don't know why but I think I must go to this one. I don't really have much friends atleast not as many as any 19 year old who is on the rowing team would have but there are some which is definitely more than the friends I had in high school, as there were none in high school.
As I reach the party I grab a beer and settle by the bar looking at my surrounding feeling out of place and regretting my decision to come, then I lay my eyes on a beautiful girl more beautiful than I had ever seen or imagined a girl could be. She feels to be as uncomfortable as I am. I consider going to her to make small talk but then I realise I have never done it before, I just could not all I knew of relationships was my weird relationship with Elena, where she fucks and beats me as she pleases. I shudder at the thought, just then I see some fucker go to her and trying to talk to her. I fist my hand in anger, I would want to punch something preferably that fucker then I see him trying to touch her. I cannot hold myself back anymore and rush towards them.
As I reach them I hold my anger and say through gritted teeth, "Anything wrong with you!"
The fucker turns to face me and I glare at him as if I could kill him. He takes the signal and backs off.
Then the girl turns to me visibily seeming to be relaxed.
"Thanks" she says in the most angelic voice I had ever heard.
"Well, someone needs to teach them their manners."
"So, you took the responsibility." She giggles and if I could hear her giggle more I would die a happy man.
"Yeah. By the way I am Christian "
"I am Anastasia."
"That's a beautiful name for a beautiful girl."
She blushes.
"So Anastasia, what are you doing here. You don't seem to be happy being here."
"Please call me Ana, Anastasia feels like someone is scolding me." She giggles again and the sound goes straight to my groin. I guess it has been too long.
"Yeah I don't really feel like I belong here, I let my friend talk me into coming here and she ditched me for some random hookup."
"Well that makes the two of us. I don't really feel myself here too. Let's go outside for a small walk." I say holding out my hand for her.
She takes it without any hesitation which makes me happy.
As we go outside I ask her about her course and learn she is studying English literature. She asks me the same and I tell her about studying business and add that I want to run my own mergers and acquisitions business one day. She wishes me luck for it and expresses her wish that I succeed. I ask her if she is enjoying college as it is her first year here, she seems to like the college and I randomly add that I want to drop out as it seems a waste of time but my parents won't let me do that and I would not want to disappoint them as they adopted me and gave me a life that I could never dream of. She tells me that she believes that one day they will be proud of me. I ask her about her family that contains of her step father as her father passed away when she was a baby and her mother who is always out in a search for a new husband. She asks me about my family and I tell her about my grandparents, parents and siblings. She says I have glimmering eyes when I talk about my grandparents my grandpa, my hero 'Theodore' and my grandma 'Phoebe'. It is weird how I can talk to her with so much ease, I have never told anyone about my family in so much detail, I only used to tell their names and professions and vaguely mention my siblings it was how I was programmed. I smile at her. She looks beautiful and I want to kiss her but also I don't want to cross a line then, I am reminded of Elena, I have never regretted being with her but now I feel that I should've never met her.
As I look at her lips and into her eyes, her thoughts seem to match mine as she gets on her tiptoes to kiss me. I lean in and as our lips touch I feel this electricity surge through my body. I cannot do this to her, she needs to know, she must know. I break the kiss.
"Ana" I breathe. "We need to stop this, you don't know me."
"What do you mean, I know you. You have a girlfriend is that it?"
"No, I don't.. I don't have a girlfriend. It's complicated."
"A fuck buddy?"
"Something like that, it is one of my mother's friends she seduced me when I was 15 and since then I am sort of her... "
"Her what?"
"Sex slave"
She gasps.
" I cannot believe she did that to you, Mrs.Robinson" she says with hate."So... You want her?" She says almost in a whisper.
"No, I don't. I just want you." I say without giving in much thought.
She smiles and speaks, " Then why did you stop?"
" I thought I was cheating by not telling you this."
"You would only cheat if you go back to her and let her continue to abuse you. And you would cheat on your own self."
"I promise to break off things with her. I will, I swear."
She smiles yet again, " I will hold you to that."
She looks irresistible. Elena can go and fuck herself, I am not going back to her, not now that I have this gorgeous girl with me, I don't know what will happen or where we are headed in our future but I know for sure, Elena isn't a welcome part of it. Ana has made me realise how wrong it is what I have with Elena.
"So, Anastasia where were we?" She giggles and we kiss this time with fervor and passion, for our hunger for each other. I lick her lips asking for permission to enter my tongue into her mouth which she gives and our tongues perform their own erotic dance. She grabs my hair at the nape of my neck and pulls it. Suddenly I feel myself getting hard, and she giggles into my mouth letting me know that she felt that too.
"Ana, I want you." I say regretting it as soon as I said that.
"I can see that." She giggles looking at my crotch. Making me more hard. "What would you think if I said I want you too."
I am shocked by her revelation but also ecstatic.
"I would be more than happy." I say as I start kissing her again.
"I... need to... tell you something." She says in between our kiss.
"Yeah."
She blushes and seems shy as she lowers her head.
I place my finger beneath her chin and lift it so she can see in my eyes
"Ana, you can tell me anything."
"I... I am... a virgin."
I stare at her in disbelief. I cannot imagine her not being touched. She is so beautiful. Obviously she would have had a boyfriend who would've desired her.
"None of your boyfriend's ever touched you."
"I never had any."
Now she is lying, she is too beautiful to be single.
"Not even one?"
She shakes her head frantically.
I feel joy surge through my body, no one has touched her, though it may seem ridiculous but I feel ecstatic that she has never wanted a man and now she wants me.
"You have been kissed apart me, right?"
Please be No. Please.
"Yeah, but not like this."
It makes me happy that no one has kissed her better than me. But still I feel jealous of the guy who was with her.
Without much thought I speak up, "I will be gentle, I promise." And give her a peck in her lips.
She smiles and nods at me.
I take her to my apartment which is five minute walk from the campus as I want her first time to be something special that she remembers for the rest of her life.
I ask her to sit in the living area and go to my friend's room, I take a few packs of condoms from his drawer. Also I borrow some scented candles that his girlfriend likes. I place them in my room and light them. It looks pretty good. But hey what do I know about all of this hearts and flowers. I have never done that, but for Ana I will do it. I go to the kitchen and find a fine bottle of wine that my grandpa gave me on my 19th birthday. It has been with me for 6 months now and today is the perfect opportunity to open it. I take two glasses and head to Ana. She seems lost sitting at there. I go to sit beside her and pour two glasses of wine for us.She smiles taking the glass from me and moans as she enjoys the taste of the wine. I have to say it is really good but then again grandpa has the best taste in wine. I look at her and feel happy that I went to the party. When we both have had our glass of wine, I ask if she wants more.
"Why, are you trying to get me drunk?"
"Not exactly, as I already have you where I want."
"Well I am not there in your bed yet, so maybe not exactly where you want me to be."
"Who says I want you only in my bed. I want you with me always and you are sitting right in front of me. So it works fine for me."
As I finish my sentence her lips come crashing to mine. After quite a passionate kiss she whispers against my lips, "Take me to bed, Christian. Please. I want you."
I don't need to be told twice as I pick her up bridal style and take her to my bedroom. She gasps as she takes in the room. She has tears brimming her eyes.
"You did this for me?" She asks in disbelief.
"Ofcourse" I grin at her.
She kisses me again but this time slowly conveying her joy and happiness for making her feel special.
I place her on her feet our lips connected when we come apart for breathing I take the hem of her tshirt and look at her in the eyes asking for her permission she nods at me smiling.
I take off her t-shirt in a swift move, then I start taking off her jeans when they are lying far from us on the floor. She stands in front of me only in a pair of black lingerie. I look at her body in awe, she is beautiful, more than anyone could ever know. The way the candlelight reflects on her body it makes me believe I am the luckiest guy possible.
I don't know how long I have been staring at her but as she extends her hand to unbutton my shirt I panic and grip her hand roughly.
"Ana, I cannot bear to be touched on my back and chest. It brings back bad memories. I would've told you the story behind it but this moment feels too perfect to ruin by a fucked up story of my past. I will tell you but not now"
She simply nods and takes her hand back.
I unbutton my shirt and pants and see her stare my torso and bite her lip.
"See something you like?" I tease her.
She nods and comes to kiss me. She holds my arms, respecting my boundaries, then moves her hands at the back of my neck pulling my hair there. It makes me moan and my erection grinds into her body through the thin fabric of my boxers.
As she feels it she grinds back into me making me groan.
I move the kisses down to her jawline then the sensitive spot behind her ear down to her neck to her collarbone, then finally to the swell of her breasts. She moans softly at my ministrations
I kiss the top of her breasts and move my hand to her back and unclasp her bra and without any fuss her bra falls on the floor.
On their own accord my lips move down to her left nipple sucking as if my life depends on it. She lets out a whimper, I pause to see any sign of discomfort on her face but only see an expression of pure pleasure as her back arches pushing her breasts further into my face. I continue until her left nipple hardens to my satisfaction and then give the same amount of attention to the right nipple. I watch her body tremble and I know she is close then I move my left hand to her left breast and start pinching at her nipple.
"Come for me, Ana" I whisper against the valley between her breasts as both my hands work on her nipples. The words seem to do it as she orgasms. I am looking at her face and I have never seen anything more beautiful than the sight of her coming at my hands. I kiss her and pour all my affection for her in it.
As I move to her neck yet again she moans louder than before and they drive me crazy but she has to wait, she needs to be ready for me and I have no intention of rushing things with her.
I move my hands down to her panties and look at her if she feels uncomfortable but she seems so lost in pleasure that she can't even open her eyes. As my hands move inside her panties I feel her clit throbbing against my fingers and I move down further to find her wet core dripping with her arousal. I am so turned on that she is that wet for me. I massage her wet folds gently spreading her arousal all over her sex and on my hand. I slip one finger inside her which slides in effortlessly due to her wetness. She gasps at the intrusion opening her beautiful eyes for me to see. I slip another finger inside her and whisper against her neck, "keep your eyes open for me, Ana. I want to see you."
And she does, as I gently thrust my fingers in and out of her and my palm grinds her clit, she comes gloriously. I withdraw my fingers and put them in my mouth and suck them. Her eyes widen at my action and I smirk at her, "You taste better than I had anticipated."
She blushes hard and I put my fingers in her mouth allowing her to taste herself. She moans as she sucks hard on my fingers I imagine it is my dick and nearly come but I control myself.
She suddenly drops to her knees and pulls the band of my boxers off, letting them fall on the floor. She states at my erection for a few moments as her eyes bulge out but then without a second thought she puts me in her mouth and starts sucking on me as if I am a candy. But it feels so good to have her warm mouth wrapped around me. I see her head Bob up and down my shaft and I have never seen anything more erotic than this. Then she takes me to the back of her throat. Doesn't she have a gag reflex? I haven't seen any other dick in my whole life but I definitely know that I am not small rather completely the opposite. And this girl here is deep throating me. Fuck that feels too good to be true. My hands move to her hair pulling her to me.
"Jeez... Ana that feels... so good."
She sucks so hard that I almost come.
"Ana, stop if you don't want me to come."
As if that was all she needed to know she moves faster and doesn't stop until I come spilling my seed in her mouth and she takes all of it swallowing until the last drop is nowhere to be seen. And I come harder than I have ever came shouting her name. She stands up smiling at me as if proud of what she just did and she must be.
"Ana, I have never came this hard." I admit and she giggles making me hard again.
"I think it's only fair if I return the favour." I say with a smirk at the thought of what I am about to do with her. I pick her up and throw her on the bed she squeals as she bounces on the bed once.
I go and sit between her legs and touch her panties to ask her permission to pull them off she nods and in a second her panties have joined our other clothes on the floor. We sit in the bed with not a stitch of clothing to seperate us. I smile at her and start to kiss her stomach, then I push my tongue in her belly button making her squirm.
Then I move down to her glistening sex, and kiss her lightly on her sex except for her clit which is dying for attention, she writhes beneath me.
"Please Christian." She starts moaning.
"What , Ana?" I say as I smile against her sex.
"Please"
"What do you want Anastasia?"
"I... I want you."
"How?"
"Inside me. Please"
"Are you sure?"
"I have never been more sure. Please just take me."
Her wish is my command.
"Are you on birth control?"
"Fuck, No" she tenses.
"Don't worry, I have condoms."
I put the condom in my erect member as she looks at it in disbelief.
"Will it..."
I understand her worry and try to comfort her.
"Don't worry it'll fit."
She nods hesitantly.
"This might hurt a bit. Tell me to stop if you feel too uncomfortable"
She nods again.
I rub the tip of my cock against her sex to lubricate the condom, though I am large, she is very wet and it will hurt her a lot less than it could.
"Please Christian." She says frustrated with all the teasing and I take pity in her as I place myself on the entrance of her sex and enter her as slowly as possible.
Her cries tell me it is hurting her and I try to comfort her, so I pepper her face with light loving kisses wanting to tell her that I do not mean to hurt her.
When I fill her to the hilt then I stop to give her time to stretch and to make myself accustomed to her tight core. She is gripping my dick so tight that it takes everything in me not to come on the spot when I relax I look at her, she nods and speaks, "You can move"
I move ever slowly inside her and her cries from earlier are replaced by moans, "Faster Christian." I increase the speed slightly.
And move relentlessly in and out of her determined to find that spot to bring her pure pleasure and I think I hit it when her moans turn louder and she cusses, "Fuck Christian, right there" I hit it again. "Yesss" she hisses.
And after hitting the same spot for 5 times she comes around my cock clenching it tight, shouting my name so loud that probably the while building will know my name by the morning and with 2 more pumps I come chanting her name. As I am coming down from my orgasm I realise she has her arms wrapped around my chest, my eyes shot open at the connection and I feel no pain or flinching, maybe it is because I know she will never hurt me. As she realises what she has done she removes her arms and starts apologizing over and over again. I stop her by kissing her and ask her to do it again she almost cries when she touches me again.
She notices my scars and asks about them, I do not hesitate to tell her and recite my whole story to her before my parents adopted me. How my birth mother was a crack whore, her pimp burning me with cigarettes over and over again, her dying because of over dose of drugs, me being with her dead body for four days wondering what happened to her. When I look at her she is crying and I hold her close to my chest.
When her crying stops I see that she has fallen asleep with her head resting on my chest. I fall into a deep sleep without any nightmares for the first time ever.
When I wake up the next morning, it is not the nightmares waking me up but the fact that I have had my fill of sleep as I look over at the clock it is 6 in the morning that means I have slept for over 8 hours, for the first time. And I give the credit to the beautiful creature laying on my chest. I kiss her forehead which makes her stir but she does not wake up instead snuggles further into my chest. This makes me laugh. I whisper in her ears while nibbling it, causing her to moan, "Wake up sleepyhead." She looks up from my chest and smiles at me. I can't control anymore and lean in to kiss her. "Mmm Good morning" she says.
"Indeed a good morning." She chuckles at my comment.
"What time is it?"she asks lazily.
"A little after 6. Why?"
"What? Fuck I am late." She stands up suddenly and jumps out of the bed naked searching for her clothes, I laugh at the sudden outburst of energy and definitely enjoying the show. As she bends she groans as if in pain and then I remember she might be sore!
"Sore?" I ask with a grin, knowing I did this to her makes me fucking proud of myself.
"Uh-huh. You better wipe that grin off your face mister." She says with her hands on her hips giving me death glare. I try to change the topic.
"Where do you have to be this early in the morning?"I ask
"My roommate's parents are coming to pick us up to take us home. They will be here around 8 and I need to pack up my stuff and take care of the place"
I nod
When she is fully clothed, she comes up to me and I pull her in my lap and hold her close.
"I will miss you." I whisper in her ears.
She pulls back and kisses me and I kiss her back with everything I have.
"And I will miss you " she says touching our foreheads.
We sit there for what feels like an eternity. Then I start to stand up to get dressed to drop her home.
"Christian don't, as much as I would want you to drop me home, I know it will end up in the rerun of yesterday's activities." She says giggling, "And as much as I would like that, I am really late." She stands up, "Well maybe we can put it to better use the next time we meet." She winks looking at my erection which was poking her ass not much longer . And she leans in to kiss me one last time. I close my eyes and relish the connection that we have.
End of flashback
I remember that night as if it was yesterday, it was the best night and the morning of my life.
I still feel her hands on me as no one has touched me there except for her.
Well for a virgin, knowing no thing that has to do with sex I guess I wrote quite a fair scene. Better than I had thought anyway.
I have read about 250 fanfictions and I think that I have these quotes and scenes stuck in my head (which I doubt tons of time a day if they are mine or something I read somewhere) , I may write them sometime unintentionally. I don't want to copy anyone's work. If anyone of you notices similarity between major scenes or plotlines do tell me either by review or pm me. I would not want someone to copy me and hence will not copy anyone else. I will be original and have been writing this story (and 2 others) for some time now and finally got the courage to post it. The response has been really good and maybe in future I might post the other stories as well.
Please review and give your thoughts on this chapter as it took me a lot of time to write it and even more time to edit it so that Ana and Christian are close to their personalities as written by E.L.James, but this is highly out of character for Christian to approach someone and for Ana to just go with a complete stranger but if it wasn't this way, my story wouldn't exist hence a fan-fiction.
Thank you everyone once again for kind words(until now, though constructive criticism is most welcome) and being patient with mistakes if there are any...