I've decided to end this version of the story. I want to add more to the lore and history of the far west and flesh out its native tribes. When I do make a new story on this, I think I'm going to keep it more cannon like with Elia, Rhaenys and Aegon being saved by the Sharp Claws and maybe Lyanna and Jon join them west or something. And while working on the world building of my second rewrite I'm going to try to write smaller stories or one shots.