Adversary

Chi-Chi reached the location they agreed to meet in. Since it was still early in the morning, there was a bluish glow that barely gave light to the things around it. She was holding onto the outfit she made for Goku.

It was still hard to believe that, over a day, and some crazy events, Goku was now her partner in crime fighting. Some doubtful part of her still held onto the thought that Goku's actions from yesterday had been some kind of fluke. She would even take that it had all been some kind of weird, and freaky, dream.

She knew the truth though. Goku had saved her yesterday, by using something, he called, a ki blast. It was the same thing that 16, 17, and 18 used against her. Well, 17 and 18. 16 was still a mysterious one, she has yet to fight personally. She wasn't even sure what his strength registered compared to the monstrous strength of both 18 and 17.

There was a chance that he was a lot stronger than the both of them. Which wouldn't be good for her if she had to go against him alone. It'd be even worse for her if she had to go against him, plus the other two. Now that she had Goku on her side though that changed the balance quite a lot.

That one blast alone, he had used yesterday, was enough to blow 17 and 18 away. She wasn't sure how all of these energy blasts worked, but she figured that should have been an amazing feat. It was just the kind of help she needed right now.

Goku was powerful, and she- well, she wasn't sure what she was anymore. There was just so many powerful people around her now. It was starting to make her feel small. After all, how could she compete with shooting laser beams?

Her own laser beam, was weak compared to the ones Goku, 17, and 18 were using. Sure, it had cause some damage, but that was mostly due to luck and surprise. Not that it even mattered anymore.

During yesterday's battle, 18 had managed to bust it up. She had managed to fix the broken parts of her helmet, and attach a new visor to it, but she couldn't do anything about the laser beam part of it. Her father's scientist back in China were the ones who had created that feature after all. Only they would know how to fix it.

She was starting to doubt herself as a superhero. She couldn't just be dependent on Goku's powers forever. How was she going to make herself useful from now on? What if it wasn't just 16,17, and 18 that had this destructive power.

What if some new villains came in with the same kind of power? How would she even stand a chance against them with the way she was now. After all, it was certainly possible that that could be a likely outcome. Goku had the same kind of power. His brother did. Vegeta and Krillin also possessed this kind of power.

He had mention it had something to do with their Saiyan blood. Which explained why Vegeta was able to do it, but Goku had said that even Krillin knew had to do these things.

That probably meant, that with enough practice, and knowledge, just about anyone can do it. How could she stand up to that?

Speaking of Krillin and Vegeta, she hadn't had much time to actually process it. Goku had just revealed so many big things, it had numbed most of her reaction, but they also knew how to do these kind of things. She didn't know to what extent though.

No wonder those three were always suspiciously disappearing for a couple of days. They must have been training at Goku's house up in the mountains when they disappeared. Which explained why they could never tell her or Bulma where they had really been.

Although she didn't see why they couldn't just say they were training. Vegeta told Bulma that most of the time anyways. Chi-Chi might have been a little suspicious that they spent that much training, but she wouldn't have tried to pry like she did before.

With all this knew information, there was one other thing Chi-Chi wanted to ask Goku about yesterday. Its something she desperately had wanted, but she knew she had no right to ask.

After finding out he knew about controlling ki, and how to teach other people on how to use it, she immediately wanted to ask him to train her. It would be extremely helpful in any future battle if she had to face another foe like 18, but she just couldn't risk it.

If she asked him, they would be spending even more time together. Plus she would be in a lot more vulnerable position that would give Goku more authority over her. What if her secret was expose that way?

Not only that, but she knew that that would be taking advantage of Goku's kindness. He had been so honest with her about everything yesterday, and had even agreed to be her partner. Yet, she still kept her identity a secret from him.

She knew it was better this way, but she couldn't help, but feel guilty over it. That was no way to start a healthy partnership. How could she ask him to train her on top of that?

Her train of thought came to halt when she heard a footstep behind her. "Sorry, I'm late, my brother interrogated me before he let me leave this morning. He said it was suspicious that I had woken up so early on a Sunday." Goku explained.

Chi-Chi raised an eyebrow. "How did you get behind me?" They were in an alley, and she had been facing the same way of the only entrance.

Goku grinned. "I flew," he said pointing upwards.

Chi-Chi chuckled. "I guess I should get use to that kind of logic from you."

Goku noticed the clothes in her arms. He could see the colors were mostly black, (or a really dark gray) yellow, and a little bit of red. It didn't look as bad as he thought so far, but he was still a little hesitant on the whole idea of wearing a costume.

He had assumed she would get him to wear a bright blue, and pink one like she wore. He was glad she didn't, but it still didn't mean that the costume was going to be any less embarrassing to wear. "I-Is that mine?"

Chi-Chi looked down at what he was pointing at, "Hm? Oh yeah. Here." She said as she handed him the clothes. She had been so busy dealing with all her thoughts, she had almost forgotten about his outfit.

"I wasn't sure what you were into. I remembered what you said about you being Saiyan, and you seem so proud at the fact, that I thought you would like something influenced by that. I spent all night researching about them, but apparently there isn't much history about them." She explained.

"I'm actually surprised at how many Saiyans there are in this city because of how rare it is to see one nowadays. I did manage to find some picture of how they use to dress though." She said. "They wore a lot of spandex and armor, kind of like how my outfit was made, so it was pretty easy to make yours since I was already use to making clothes with that kind of material. Why don't you try it on?"

Goku was impressed by all the hard-work she put into making this outfit for him. Without hesitating, he pulled off the shirt he was wearing, and threw it on the ground.

Chi-Chi quickly turned around after pulling herself from the trance Goku's exposed upper half had on her. She felt her face burning. She hadn't expect him to start undressing in front of her just like that!

Trying to ignore the fact that she was glued to his form for awhile, she distracted herself by chatting with him. "I can always adjust the outfit if you don't like something from it, or it if it doesn't fit."

Goku slipped on the dark gray, almost black, colored pants on first. Although from the way they stuck to his form like second skin, it was more like tights than pants. They went up to the middle of his stomach.

Next was the armored part of the outfit. It was almost as heavy as the weighted clothing he wore when he trained. It was mostly black, and was the length of a normal shirt. Maybe a little shorter. From the sides, their were something like flaps. The flaps on the sides, and a small area on his stomach were the only things that weren't black, and instead were a beige color with lines of black.

He had small armored pieces for both of his arms that covered the length of his forearm only. They were both red and black. Lastly, he put on the his shoes that were a similar style to his forearm armor, but they also included the beige color with black lines that covered only the tips of his shoes.

Goku threw a couple of jabs trying to feel the way his new outfit felt. He stretched a little bit before jumping up high in the air. Lady Anonymous sure knew what she was doing. Nothing constricted him as he moved, but he still had a sort of protection from the outfit.

"This is great, thanks!" He said as he continued to test out the clothes.

Chi-Chi let out a sigh of relief. "I'm glad you like it. There's just one more thing missing..."

Goku stopped mid punch to turn to her. "What is it?"

"We need to do something about your eyes and hair." She replied. "I have your eyes covered," She held up some shades to show him. "Its your hair I'm worried about."

Goku took the weird looking glasses from her. They were similar to the visor part of her helmet, except these were in the form of glasses. Putting them up, he looked back at her. "What's wrong with my hair showing?"

"Its not exactly a common hairstyle." The heroine replied. "It won't take long for people to recognize you. At least the people close to you."

"I wouldn't worry about it." Goku assured her. "When do we start the actual fighting?"

"Oh right! Well first we have to start with patrolling the city." Chi-Chi informed.

"How do you usually do that?" Goku asked.

"I just jump from roof to roof around the city. It keeps me hidden, and also gives me a good view of everything that happens." She explained to him. "Its tiring, but it gets the job done."

Goku followed her from behind as they began jumping from roof to roof. He would have much rather flying, but followed her anyways.

Chi-Chi was sort of surprised Goku was able to keep up with her. By now she should be used to Goku's abnormal abilities and strength, but she still viewed him as a weak person sometimes.

Ch-Chi frowned as she got a bad feeling suddenly. She stopped on top of a roof and signaled for Goku to come to a stop to. There were a few gunshots inside of a restaurant before two guys came running out with a bag of money.

They jumped into a get away car before speeding off. Chi-Chi began to follow it by jumping from each building, even faster than she was before. "Looks like we found our first volunteers." She informed him with a grin.

"Lets hurry up and catch up to them before we..." Chi-Chi trailed off as Goku zipped past her in an impossible speed, leaving only a gust of wind behind him. "lose them?" She finished. She let out a small huff of annoyance, but tried following behind him anyways.

Once he was close enough for his plan to work, Goku jumped off the building he was on, and landed on the street. He was now at the front of the oncoming car heading right towards him. He had been so focused on catching up to the criminals, he had only thought up this far ahead. Now what was he supposed to do? How did Lady Anonymous usually start these things?

"Uh..." He started off in uncertainty. "Stop your car!"

The car continued to get closer to him though so he had no choice, but to blast a part of the street. He had been hoping that would have stopped the car, but instead it unexpectedly caused it to flip.

Lady Anonymous had barely made it at the scene, and was slightly out of breath trying to catch up to her crazy partner. It didn't take her long to see the overturned car, and the criminals trying to crawl out from underneath it. "Go-!" She began to scold, but then stopped when she realized she was going to give out his name.

"Lady Anonymous!" Goku shouted when he noticed her. He looked like a kid who had just been caught with his hand in the cookie jar. "Sorry, I just-"

"Ah! Its that superhero bitch!" One of the guys shouted. He was out from the car, but was still on the ground when he spotted her. "I'm not letting you take me back to jail again!"

The guys stood up, and began running towards her, before aiming his gun at her.

"Oh no you don't!" Goku said as he kicked the gun out of the robbers hand. 'Light punch, light punch,' he chanted. He tried softly punching the guy. For a second the guy just stood still, making Goku think he had succeeded, but then he suddenly flew back until he hit a nearby building.

"Uh-oh." Goku said as the guy landed on the ground, revealing his injured face.

Chi-Chi couldn't help, but slap herself on the forehead using her good hand. "This is going to take some getting use to…"


Chi-Chi swiftly jumped across rooftops, hoping the small exercise would burn out some of her anger. She had to drag herself out of bed this morning because she had been worn out from yesterday's chaos. It was suppose to be the first day she would see Goku as Chi-Chi instead of Lady Anonymous ever since she asked him to be her partner.

She had been nervous about it the whole morning. It worried her that her secret could have been revealed if she wasn't careful with her words in front of him. Her stomach was in knots throughout her whole walk to school, and she was practically shaking by the time she was outside of her classroom.

Instead of seeing him in his usual seat next to her though she saw no sign of him. She had assumed he was probably running late, but when she mentioned it to Bulma, she told her that Goku wasn't even coming in today! It took everything in her not to have a nervous break down right then and there.

Now that she was more aware of how Goku's mind worked, she wasn't really that surprised he pulled something like that. She realized he was unaware that him and Lady Anonymous went to the same school, but the whole situation still annoyed her.

As soon as she spotted her partner waiting for her at their meeting spot, she recklessly pushed a lot of power to get to the next building quicker. She accidentally added too much energy though causing her to miss her landing. Instead of falling off the roof and landing on the ground though she hit something sturdy.

"Whoa, you alright there?" Goku asked as he steadied her, careful not to put any pressure on her injured arm. He had barely made it to her side to save her from falling.

"Fine." She firmly stated as she straighten herself out. Inwardly she was cursing herself out. How could she have done a foolish move like that in front of Goku?

It was bad enough she threw her pride away by asking for Goku's help, but now she even needed him to save her from her own clumsy self? How much more pathetic could she get in front of him?

"More importantly, why didn't you show up to school today?" She questioned him.

Goku seemed to flinch a little at her words. "S-School? Uh, I was a little caught up with something today…." He trailed off trying to avoid looking her directly in the eyes.

Chi-Chi felt her eyebrow twitch in irritation. This was the answer she got from him after everything she went through because of him today? After everything she went through with him yesterday?

She moved closer to his face, so he was forced to look her in the eyes. "What were you caught up with exactly?"

A nervous look overcame his features again, until he blinked, and it morphed into suspicion. Even with his eyes partially concealed, Chi-Chi could clearly see his eyes narrow onto her. "How did you know I missed school?"

In a quick snap, their roles were reversed. Chi-Chi looked up as she tried to think up an excuse, and avoid eye contact. "I have to keep tabs on you sometimes to make sure you don't run into any trouble as your civilian self." She lied hoping he would buy it.

Trying to bring back all the fire she had from before, she tried to turn the tables again. "I-I answered your question, its only fair you answer mine now. Why did you miss school?"

Goku sighed, giving into her demands. "Okay, but your probably not going to like to hear this..."

"Try me."

"After I finished patrolling with you yesterday, I flew back home only to find my brother waiting for me outside already. It was already suspicious to him that I came back home later than him, and then the freakin television came on, and it just had to be on the news. We don't even watch the news!" Goku rambled.

Chi-Chi was not liking where his story was heading. Goku had been on every news station since yesterday because of his debut as her new partner. "Goku, your brother- he didn't…?"

"He found out as soon as he saw the first picture of me." Goku confessed. "Maybe you were right about that thing with my hair."

Chi-Chi pinched the bridge of her nose. She knew it wasn't the hair that had given him away. Since the morning, the girls in school had been talking non-stop about Lady Anonymous's hot, new partner. It was all anyone would talk about at school, and none of their classmates had made the connection with Goku. Not even Bulma, and she had been close to Goku since they were younger.

Goku must have done something to give himself away to his brother. After all, she had been doing this hero thing awhile already and no one has even been close to figuring out her secret yet. Sure they were brothers, but she was also able to keep this a secret from her father, so she doubted Goku's brother was just able to figure everything out from a single picture.

She had figured working with Goku and his crazy strength would have made her job a lot easier, but all he's done is make her workload even heavier than before. If it wasn't for him there was a good chance she would be dead already, but that was when she was fighting against 18 and her brother.

During their last fight they had suffered a major defeat from Goku. What if they had decided to skip town because of that? If they were out of the picture, there wasn't much she needed from Goku. Maybe she should just quit this whole thing between them before either of them grew any attachments to each other. This way it would hurt less.

"I-" Goku tried, but was interrupted when he felt danger signals going off in his head. "Watch out!" He shouted to Lady Anonymous before tackling her down. He felt a hot flash of heat zoom above his back.

Goku quickly grabbed her arm as he escaped three more energy blast that were aimed for them. Whoever was attacking them, had good aim. When the blasts stopped, Goku scanned the rooftop trying to look for their attacker. There was a huge chunks missing from the rooftop, but that was all he could see. The smoke in the air was preventing him from seeing more than that.

The first thing Chi-Chi looked for was cold crystal blue eyes that either belonged to a woman with blonde hair, or a man with black hair.

Instead though she was greeted with a man that was almost double her size. He was wearing a blue suit that revealed his muscles from his chest to part of his stomach. His skin was a reddish hue, and he had huge point ears, and two horn poking out of his forehead, making him look like some kind of devil.

He sent a smirk straight towards Chi-Chi, showing off his sharp fangs. Fear shot through her like a lightning bolt. From the pit of her stomach, she could feel something wasn't right about this guy. He was giving off an ominous feeling that made her skin crawl.

Forcing it down, she tightened her fist as she took a step forward. Her eyes met his yellowish ones causing her to frown. "You could have killed us with that attack of yours. Who are you?" She demanded.

The devil looking man, let out a deep chuckle. "I can already smell the fear rolling off you little girl. This won't be taking long."

"She asked you a question." Goku tightly reminded him. He didn't appreciate the way he was trying to intimidate Lady Anonymous.

"Heh, I guess I don't mind letting know how much shit your in by having me as an opponent." He taunted. "My name is Dabura. Also known as King of all demons."

This guy was acting like he had already won this fight before it even began. A small scowl came to her face. "Is there some reason you're after us, or are you just looking for a reason to get your ass kicked?"

"We'll see if you are still able to talk like that once I get a chance to mess that pretty little face of yours, girl." Dabura warned with a smirk still present.

Chi-Chi and Goku both glared at him, but waited for him to continue.

"I was approached by somebody who gave me enough money to satisfy even a greedy monster like me. In exchange, I had to track down the girl known as Lady Anonymous, and her new partner. Once I found you two, he gave me the choice of either testing out the strength of you two, or getting rid of you guys once and for all. Too bad I went with the more familiar option of mine. You two won't be living long enough to see another tomorrow." Dabura stated.

The threat was clear in the air, and Goku and Chi-Chi both prepared themselves for any kind of attack. The atmosphere was tense, but Dabura kept his casual stance, and smirk.

Since Dabura made no move to attack them, Chi-Chi took that as an invitation for her to make the first move. Without hesitation, she charged at the devilish looking man.

"Wait Lady Anonymous, stop!" Goku shouted. He knew Dabura was planning something suspicious. The way his smirk grew only confirmed his suspicion. Lady Anonymous continued to run though, leaving Goku with no choice, but to try and run after her.

Dabura silently waited for Lady Anonymous to be in the exact spot he wanted her to be in. This fight was already over before it began. His calculated eyes watched as she faced his direct line of fire. Before he could lose his chance, he swiftly brought his hand up created a powerful, and sharp line of energy.

Chi-Chi was still running towards Dabura until Goku pushed her to the ground, before backing up himself. She hit the ground hard, landing on her butt. "What the hell was that for-" Chi-Chi started, but then noticed a thin cut on his cheek. "How did you get that?'"

Then she looked down on the ground, only to see a huge slash on the ground, and her and Goku standing on either sides of it. Trying to put the pieces together, of what just happened, she lost her concentration when a booming laugh reached her ears.

"This whole time, they were worried about this super hero woman, when the real threat was this boy all along." Dabura stated.

Chi-Chi clenched her fist. This is what she had been worried about ever since she started her partnership with Goku. People would start painting the picture with Goku as the superhero, and her as the sidekick.

"What is your name boy?" Dabura asked, focusing all his attention on Goku.

It was like Dabura was trying to stomp on all of her pride. He wasn't the least bit concerned with her as a potential threat.

Goku was busy trying to figure out the name he would give to Dabura, he didn't noticed Lady Anonymous running towards Dabura, until it was already too late.

Chi-Chi jumped in the air while she was running, and came down towards the unexpected Dabura, with her foot stretched outward. Instead of hitting a body though she went through him as if he was just made of air. Turning around, she saw that he had completely vanished, even though he was just there two seconds ago.

Confused, she turned back around, only to receive a heavy hit to the stomach by someones knee. She could do nothing, but keep her mouth open as the air left are lungs.

Dabura let out a chuckle. "Did you really think that was going to work? You're pathet-"

Goku's fist connected with Dabura's cheek, throwing him off balance a bit. He quickly created an energy blast, sending Dabura off the rooftop.

Goku bent down to Lady Anonymous's level. "Are you alright?"

Chi-Chi nodded in response. She could still feel her stomach was in pain. She would have to worry about it later though.

"We need to get out of here, or this building might collapse." Goku warned. "Lean on me, and I'll fly us somewhere more secure." He offered as he placed one of her arms around his neck.

Chi-Chi automatically yanked her arm away from him. "I can get there myself."

Goku blinked in surprise. What had caused that reaction from her? Ignoring it for now, he tried again, a little more serious this time. "We need to hurry, he'll be back any minute now, and if we stay here, someone might accidentally get seriously hurt."

"I understand that Goku, but I don't need your help with this. I can get there myself." She firmly insisted.

His eyebrows furrowed at her sudden attitude change. "Why are you-" He was interrupted by a firm kick to the face.

Chi-Chi watched as Goku crashed into a nearby building. She looked up to see the giant man bringing both his fist down, aiming straight for her.

She leaned back catching herself with her hands, and flipping her whole body backwards. She did a couple more back flips to create some distance between them.

Her eyes widen as Dabura easily closed the distance between them once again, and stood only inches away from her. Frowning, she threw a fury of punches, that Dabura matched with his own hands. He effortlessly caught one of her fist, and then the other, trapping her.

As hard as Chi-Chi tried pulling her hands away from Dabura, she couldn't set them free. She was completely at his mercy. It made her angry enough to shout in frustration.

"No need to feel bad about having no chance against me. I am the strongest demon in all of the underworld. Instead you should feel pride for having me be the one to end your pathetic life for you." Dabura mocked.

She continued to try and struggle, and not let Dabura's words get to her. She began to feel something different from Dabura's hold. It was like it was slowly getting hotter. It wasn't till it started to feel really painful, did she realize what he was doing. He was burning her hands, using some kind of ki move.

Dabura finally let her go, but the pain didn't stop there. He kicked her directly on her stomach again, sending her flying. If her stomach wasn't bruised from before, it definitely was now. Luckily, instead of some building stopping her, Goku caught her.

"What happened to your hands?" Goku asked, after noticing the red blotches around both of her wrists. He set her down on a random roof.

Chi-Chi removed the remaining parts of her now ruined gloves. "Nothing important." She replied, before she ripped parts of her cape to use as bandages for her wrists.

Dabura stood across from them, with only a couple of buildings separating them. Now that Chi-Chi had fixed herself up, she ran back towards Dabura without a second thought.

Goku shockingly watched as Lady Anonymous recklessly got back into her fight against Dabura. "Lady Anonymous!" He shouted as he ran after her.

It was obvious to him Lady Anonymous was no longer fighting against Dabura with his help. He couldn't understand why she acting this way towards him.

Ignoring the current issue between them, he focused his attention back on their opponent. Dabura had made no movement, and instead chose to stay still as Lady Anonymous got closer and closer. The last time he had waited for her to come towards him, he had surprised her with some kind if special attack.

His brother always told him to pay attention to the way an enemy acted during a battle. From what he got from Dabura, it was that he wasn't an ordinary person that used normal ki moves. He was also strategic.

Dabura wasn't just underestimating Lady Anonymous by just standing there and doing nothing, even he wasn't that overconfident. No, he had something up his sleeve, and if he didn't do something quick, Lady Anonymous could get really injured.

A glint hit his eyes, and Goku seen as Dabura's face change to something more devilish than before. This was it. Dabura was planning to go ahead with whatever he had planned.

Running as fast as he could, Goku barely made it passed Lady Anonymous. He pushed her out of the way, and immediately felt something pierce his shoulder.

Lady Anonymous looked up and watched in horror as a spear stabbed her partner. She felt herself freeze, as her eyes stayed stuck looking at Goku. She couldn't look away even if she wanted too. Even when a gush of blood began to spill from his body.

"Ahaha! I had planned on finishing off the girl, and then taking care of you, but I guess the order doesn't matter much." Dabura said. He found the whole situation hilarious. "To think I thought highly of you. You foo-" He felt a something hit his chest. Looking down, he saw it was his own spear that had hit him.

Looking up, he saw Goku holding his injured arm. He had one eye close, and was panting a bit, but he was still standing up.

Dabura was forced to kneel, as his injury overcame him. Gripping the long spear, he quickly pulled it out of him causing him to shout in pain. The spear had barely missed his heart by a couple of inches, and he had a feeling that wasn't by accident.

Just who was this kid? How could he have been so injured, and yet still managed to wound him in such a way? No. This kid was powerful, but he wasn't powerful enough to easily win against him by a simple move like this. He had just been too careless, and let his guard down.

He was in too much of a vulnerable position to try and continue and fight though. He was left with no choice, but to use this chance to escape. Growling, he moved his cape, and teleported out of there.

Chi-Chi barely noticed Dabura disappear from sight. She was more focused on her injured partner. He was looking back at her with his eyes filled with disappointment. This was not what she had wanted.


Sorry for the late update. Its clear my idea of uploading the other chapter early, and this one later, was a bad idea. Not only did I not even get the chance to work on my other story still, but this one came in late too. I don't know how to feel about this chapter, but I don't think it was one of my best. The next one should be more exciting though. Goku's superhero name should be revealed, its not that big of surprise, but I will be also setting a couple things up, so that a few secrets are out ;D I don't know if they are all coming out in the next chapter though. Please tell me what you guys thought of the chapter too.

By the way, Goku's outfit is the one Bardock uses in some game for dbz. He's wearing a mask with it, that I didn't include for Goku.

LA-HIJA-DE-SON-MILK: I'm glad you like that they are now going to be working together. I was a little nervous some people would not like it. Thank you! I'm not sure when I will update my other story. I think I might put it on hold for awhile. Thanks for asking!

Rinfantasy: Haha that's what I was thinking too, but I don't think it will fit him xD I know right? I love writing Goku's and Raditz's relationship in my stories. They should have kept him in dbz :c Yeah, Bulma knows they are saiyan, but she only sees it as a race of people. She has no idea about ki, or what it even is. Thanks for the review!

Mavis101: Updated! Hope you liked the chapter! Thanks!

Generala: Haha it does sound funny. Hm... I wonder too... :o? Thanks for reviewing! Hope you liked the chapter.

PoeticBliss: Haha, I know, I already want to reveal it to him! Although I wonder if it will ever be revealed! :ooo! Thank you! ^-^ Hope you liked the chapter!

a dbz fan: That's a good guess! Can't say if its right or not though xD Yes, I have seen Black's costume, and I was considering using that outfit, but I went with Bardock's instead. Also Gohan's outfit didn't really fit with Goku, at least to me v.v Honestly, the outfit and the name were the hardest for me, but I eventually picked them. Hopefully people don't get too upset with my choices!

hayabusa girl: Lol that's good. Haha same, I just went with the simple one.