Hey guys,
I want to thank you all so much for your support for the story, I really do appreciate it. So, I've read over the story and decided that I'm going to remove it from the site. There's way too many problems with it already, I think it is mostly down to my desire to rush through to a more interesting part. The pacing is terrible, some characters aren't exactly in character and it just feels like the further this goes the more it will fall apart in its current state. I think the plot for this story is good, I just don't think I'm the right guy to make the most of it.
Like I said I appreciate the support and I will leave this up for about a week if you want to copy it down.