What if Momon was actually a different person and not momon? That's basically the premise of this. Oh and Nabe is not partners with Momon. There might be some romantic situations in this if you were wondering There will also be some changes to some things. I guess we will start from the beginning.

So I read your critiques and I've remade the entire thing! I really hope this one is better.

The (soon to be) great warrior Momon entered an inn. He walked to the counter.

"Apartments are seven bronze pieces a night."

"seven bronze pieces sound like nothing but its a lot more than like earth. I don't even know what the hell made the game do this, if this even is the game anymore...''

"As you wish."

Momon laid seven bronze pieces on the counter

"The room is on the second floor in the back."

Momon walked to the room, entering it.

He sat down on the bed, releasing a loud sigh of relief.

"What have I gotten myself into? At least I'm not some weak guy or I'd be dead by now. Well then first thing in the morning I should be trying to get a partner or a group of people to help me on this. Maybe I could even find another play, even though I knew literally no one. Man I'm so unprepared for this... Then again who would be prepared to be transported to another entire dimension. While playing a game for degenerates."

He moved about in the room. Unsure of what to do, he had no people to help him and he was lost in a world where he didn't even know how to read.

He stood up from the bed and walked out. Going down the stairs and headed towards the exit, before being blocked by the foot of some loser.

"Excuse me sir but it appears your leg is blocking my way."

"What are you gonna do about it ya fuck?"

Momon signed and just stepped on the losers foot. The looser making a "youch" sound as he stood up.

"Hey that hurt you know!"

"Oh I'm sorry but I don't care."

"Oh really no-"

Momon had grabbed the guy by the shoulders and threw him across the room. His looser buddy's standing up and trying to punch Momon. Momon throwing both of them in random directional breaking a certain costumers table who had just bought a potion. She gasped with anger as she walked over to Momon.

"Hey you just broke my potion! That cost me a lot of money ya know! I skipped out on eating for months to get it! How are you gonna get it back for me huh?"

"Uhhhh, I could help you on adventures?"

Momon said wanting to not waste one of his potions on a simpleton.

"I'll consider it... Alright done considering let's go do a quest!"

"Alright then"

"AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH WHAT THE FUCK WAS I THINKING?!...Get yourself together Momon, you'll do some quests and you'll upgrade your plate rank. Yeah yeah that's what you're gonna do."

"So big guy, what's your name? Mines Brita if you were wondering."

"My name is Momon, the raven black hero! The last bit is what I want to be called-"

"Cool, so where do you come from?"

"Uh, from the east?"

"OH NO SHES CATCHING ONNNNNNNNNNNNNN-"

"Oh that's cool, I've never been too far away from this place. Anyways, let's go!"

That's it for now, please do tell me if there's anything wrong. sorry it's so short (That's what he said) it's the middle of the night and I've been really wanting to update this.