Chapter 5: Echowing

Echowing padded over to Sagestar who was talking to Rainstorm. There was a scowl on his face as he approached them. Sagestar stopped talking to Rainstorm mid-conversation and turned to Echowing.

"We are attacking RiverClan today." Sagestar told Echowing.

"Why?" Echowing asked. RiverClan didn't do anything and we don't have enough proof that Shadowsong killed Leopardflower. Echowing thought.

"You know why." Rainstorm growled. "We're leaving now. The rest of the clan already knows."

"Let all cats old enough to catch their own prey join beneath the high ledge for a clan meeting!" Sagestar yowled. Echowing padded over to his friends Foxstep and Fawnshade and sat down. They both look extremely worried. Echowing knew how they felt. If only Leopardflower were still here. She'd be able to change Sagestar's mind. Echowing thought sadly. But then he realized something. Leopardflower would still be alive and this wouldn't be happening if Shadowsong hadn't killed her!

"Echowing, Fawnshade, Foxstep, me, Rainstorm, Prickleclaw, Ferneyes, and Ambermist will come on the battle patrol." Sagestar announced. "Fishpetal, Jaggedthorn, Redtuft, Silverpaw, Hollypaw, and the rest of the warriors will stay and guard camp with the medicine cats, queens, and elders."

Echowing nodded along with the rest of the clan. He felt a burning fire of rage inside him. They would attack RiverClan, and hopefully kill whoever murdered their beloved medicine cat.

"ThunderClan, let's move out!" Sagestar yowled and the clan cheered. Echowing stood up and was herded out of camp by the large marched over to the RiverClan border. A RiverClan cat saw them coming and ran away when they were near the border. Despite his eagerness to kill the murderer, Echowing felt deep down inside that what they were doing was not right. He felt that there was a better way to solve this, and that blood would be shed for no right reason.

"Wait!" Echowing yowled and the patrol stopped. They all turned around and looked at him. Echowing shuffled his paws uneasiliy. He felt uncomfortable with all the expectant eyes staring at him.

"I just think…" Echowing started. "that maybe we should think about this more. I mean, we don't have any proof that Shadowsong killed Leopardflower."

"Traitor!" Rainstorm yowled. "He's on the RiverClan side!"

Sagestar studied Echowing for a moment. "I think Rainstorm is right." Sagestar meowed. "Maybe you are a traitor. Fawnshade, Rainstorm, take him back to camp, throw him in the prisoners' den, and guard the entrance of it. I will give your further instructions when I get back."

Fawnshade and Rainstorm nodded and escorted Echowing back to camp.


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ThunderClan

Leader: Sagestar- pale brown she-cat with white patches and blue eyes Apprentice, Hollypaw

Deputy:

Medicine cat(s):

Flowerspots- ginger spotted tabby she-cat with amber eyes Apprentice, Blackpaw

Warriors:

Rainstorm- dark blue gray she-cat with white splotches and a white tipped tail Apprentice, Silverpaw

Prickleclaw- spiky black tom with bright green eyes

Fishpetal- silver she-cat with brown eyes

Echowing- dark silver tabby tom with green eyes

Ferneyes- gray tom with white swirls and gray eyes

Ambermist- cream she-cat with amber spots and golden eyes

Jaggedthorn- ticked tabby tom with shades of brown (cats can't have black eyes)

Foxstep- dark ginger tabby tom with black paws and amber eyes

Fawnshade- dainty, light brown she-cat with white spots and pale amber eyes

Redtuft- fluffy, dark ginger tabby she-cat with white patches and blue eyes

Apprentices:

Silverpaw- silver tom with brown eyes

Hollypaw- spiky black she-cat with bright green eyes

Blackpaw- black she-cat with bright orange eyes

Queens:

Dawntreader- white she-cat with ruby colored patterns on her sides and neck, golden eyes (Mother to: Neitherkit and Scarletkit)

Doeshine- white and gray she-cat with yellow eyes (Mother to Brightkit and Creekkit)

Kits:

Neitherkit- black on one side, white on one side, white side has a golden eye, black side has a blue eye, white paws on black side, black paws on white side

Scarletkit- thick russet fur with bright blue eyes and white patches

Brightkit- fluffy white she-cat with black paws and brown eyes (pelt works if it's the same as a grandparent)

Creekkit- black tom with hazel eyes (same with Brightkit)

Elders:


ShadowClan

Leader: Miststar- silver tabby tom with green eyes

Deputy:

Medicine cat(s): Snowfire- albino she-cat with reddish pink eyes and a scar on her left cheek, shoulder, and eye

Warriors:

Honeymouse- large, muscular, cream tabby she-cat with pale blue eyes, a battle scarred pelt, and white patches (cream cats are tabbys and cats have to have white near their eyes to have blue eyes)

Snakeheart- lithe, broad-shouldered, creamy-brown tabby she-cat with dark copper eyes and a bent tip tail

Stormwing- large brown and white she-cat with blue eyes and a nicked ear

Jetpelt- large, muscular jet black tom with long claws and violet-blue eyes and white patches, former loner

Blackflower- jet-black she-cat with a long pelt, plumy tail, and green eyes, former loner

Noble-eyes- albino tom with deep red eyes, former loner

Eldersong- large, muscular, jet black she-cat with violet-blue eyes, long claws, and white patches, former loner

Ravenwish- small jet black tom with faded golden dapples, and fiery golden eyes, skinny build, former loner

Wolfshade- black tom with a bluish sheen to his pelt making it look indigo in certain light, dark blue eyes, white patches, and a long pelt, former loner

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SkyClan

Leader: Littlestar- small black tom with amber eyes

Deputy: Flamesky- large dark ginger tabby tom with green eyes

Medicine cat(s):

Warriors:

Whiteshade- battle scarred, muscular, large white tom with one golden eye

Nightclaw- black she-cat with orange eyes

Rainwood- brown-russet she-cat with cerulean eyes and a messy pelt, former loner

Rednose- ginger tabby tom with yellow eyes

Snowleap- tall, long furred, white tom with black paws, a black tail tip, longer canines, icy cobalt blue eyes, and a long scar on his nose, former loner

Rowanwillow- brown russet tom with icy sky-cobalt eyes, white patches, a messy pelt, a long tail, and black paws (former loner

Silvershine- dark silver tom with a bulky build, blue-green eyes, white patches, and a shaggy tail

Apprentices:

Queens:

Leafheart- black she-cat with white patches and blue eyes (Mother of Whiteshade's kits:

Ripplekit, Amberkit, Bluekit, and Eaglekit)

Darksun- blonde she-cat with orange ginger siamese points and pretty creulean eyes, long wavy fur, and a fluffy tail, and a black sock on her right leg (Mother to: Littlekit and Willowkit)

Kits:

Ripplekit- silver she-cat

Amberkit- black she-cat with amber eyes

Bluekit- black tom with white patches and blue eyes

Eaglekit- brown tabby tom

Littlekit- small brown russet she-cat with a long pelt, long tail, white patches, black paws and tail tip, and cobalt-sky eyes

Willowkit- small, long furred tom with a white blonde pelt, orange ginger seal points (siamese points) and pretty cobalt- cerulean eyes

Elders:


WindClan

Leader: Vinestar- long legged skinny brown tom with yellow eyes

Deputy: Frostpool- white she-cat with yellow eyes (Mother to: Snowkit and Gorsekit)

Medicine cat(s): Lilyfall- tortoiseshell she-cat with white spots and blue eyes

Warriors:

Grasswing- long legged gray tabby tom with green eyes

Yarrowtail- dark brown and white tom with green eyes

Apprentices:

Puddlepaw- mottled brown she-cat with green eyes

Featherpaw- white she-cat with brown stripes and green eyes

Queens:

Stormclaw- black she-cat with green eyes (Mother to: Blazekit and Smokekit)

Kits:

Blazekit- ginger tabby she-cat with yellow eyes

Smokekit- black tom with green eyes

Gorsekit- white tom with brown stripes and yellow eyes

Snowkit- white tom with green eyes

Elders:


RiverClan

Leader: Birchstar- brown and white she-cat with deep blue eyes

Deputy:

Medicine cat(s):

Warriors:

Sagethorn- gray tabby tom with amber eyes

Shadefin- black she-cat with hazel eyes

Shadowsong- pretty black she-cat with orange eyes

Fernfall- brown tabby she-cat with pale green eyes

Sootstrike- black tom with yellow eyes

Ivypool- black and white tom with blue eyes

Fishfin- bulky, mottled, dark, speckled gray tom with green eyes, a scarred face, and tufted ears

Apprentices:

Shimmerpaw- bulky, silver tabby tom with dark green eyes and webbed paws (There is already a Silverpaw in ThunderClan)

Pinepaw- large, broad shouldered, sleek furred, black she-cat with coper eyes and tufted ears

Featherpaw- lithe, gray tabby tom with blue eyes, tufted hears, and white fur near his eyes

Queens:

Berryfur- tortoiseshell she-cat with green eyes (Mother to: Pikekit)

Morningfur- small, broad shouldered, pale brown she-cat with with golden eyes, and webbed feathered paws (Mother to: Splashkit, Volekit, and Shrewkit)

Kits:

Pikekit- black and white tom with blue eyes

Splashkit- small, speckled brown she-cat with amber eyes and feathered paws

Volekit- skinny, short, thick furred, white tom with blue eyes and a black tail (works if he has the same pelt as a grandparent)

Shrewkit- lithe, brown she-cat with golden eyes and white ears

Elders:

Birdfeather- skinny, ragged, white tortoiseshell she-cat with pale blue eyes, a battle scarred pelt, and a shredded ear

Barkgorse- thick furred, brown tabby tom with amber eyes, a white hind paw, and a scarred flank

Mintleaf- large, dark gray she-cat with pale green eyes


Cats outside the clans:

Zekir- light silver tom with pale cobalt blue eyes, longer canines, long tail, black paws and muzzle, and white patches