So this story is completely done. I don't think people are to surprised by that. truth is, I never was truly happy with the story. The story itself as in a setting was fine however... That's the end of it. I broke a few serious rules in this story that I now very much regret.
1. This was the very first story I ever wrote. Now we all know you never do that, XD
2. I made the self insert a horrible Gary Stu. honestly I don't know what I was thinking when I did that. Then again I was young and stupid back then.
3. Grammar. The grammar is absolutely an atrocity. This is due to me being severely dyslexic. While at the same time English is not my native language. and I was on basically middle school. which would translate in to elementary school levels of English. I tried to get a beta reader around the end when I was about to give up on the story. and when I didn't find one I decided to kill the story off.
Now besides the three rules I also Cleary didn't describe the scenes correctly. then there is the lack of time that I have. this all lead to the decision for me to kill the story off. who knows maybe in the future I will try and make a new attempt. but that is certainly not a promise... now if you liked the story then I am sorry. and I am happy you enjoyed it. I however can not say the same. I don't enjoy the story any more.
also I had a hard drive failure and lost half the story. with that I also lost the notes I had for the story layout. this also goes for the other two stories I wrote. anyway seeing the recent comment of Icelord I felt it appropriate to make this announcement
best wishes
-MB