Chapter 15 revised and edited. Review or PM me on what you think about this chapter now.
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'Talking'
"Thinking"
'Heavily demonic voice'
'Fox talking'
"Fox thinking"
*expression*
Jutsu
Flashback
Chapter 15 – The End and A Super Pervert
Gaara appeared on the floor in a flash of sand while his opponent jumped down to the stadium and landed shaking the floor.
Onotsuchi was a burly looking man reaching almost two metres in height and looked like a typical body builder with a shaved head. He was shirtless and wore dark brown form fitting pants with a Rock forehead protector tied around his left bicep.
'Haha a puny kid like you has no chance of beating me, forfeit now or I will crush you.' Said Onotsuchi in a deep booming voice.
Garra's response was to uncork his gourd, look Onotsuchi right in the eye and say 'You will die. Quickly.'
'Let the sixth match begin.' Said Hayate.
Onotsuchi went through hand signs and called out 'Rock Burial.' The ground split up and heaps of rocks went flying at Gaara and buried him.
'I win.' Said Onotsuchi as he walked away.
All of a sudden all the rocks surrounding Gaara were blasted away and Gaara was left unscathed.
'Did you?' asked Gaara who used his sand to demolish all the rocks laying on the floor before sending a massive wave of sand at Onotsuchi and quickly surrounded him leaving only his face uncovered.
'This is a real burial. Sand Burial.' Said Gaara clenching his fist crushing Onotsuchi causing him to cry out in pain before dying in a storm of blood.
'I win.' Said Gaara in his stoic voice before he vanished in a blur of sand reappearing near the rest of his team.
'Winner Gaara.' Said Hayate.
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The board went through names again before landing on.
Temari VS Ino Yamanaka.
Temari and Ino both walked down and faced off. Temari's face showed apathy while Ino's showed determination laced with worry.
'Let the seventh match begin.' Announced Hayate.
Ino jumped back and took a stance while Temari kept up her facial expression while leaning on her fan.
'What aren't you going to do anything?' Asked Ino.
*Yawn* 'Why bother you don't have a chance anyway. Give up now and save yourself the embarrassment.' Mocked Temari.
Ino growled before charging at Temari. Temari stood still, staring at Ino with apathy.
'Don't say I didn't warn you.' said Temari hopelessly.
Ino threw a punch which Temari blocked with her fan. Ino then brought her leg up but Temari pushed Ino back with her fan and then vanished.
'Where did she...' Said Ino before collapsing forward from being hit on the back of her head from Temari's fan.
'Well I warned her.' Said Temari still having an apathetic expression.
'Winner Temari.' Said Hayate.
Temari searched for Naruto's eyes and noticed he was looking at her with approval. Temari winked at him before walking up the stairs.
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The board once again went through names and stopped on.
Kiba Inuzuka VS Choji Akimichi
'Yahoo let's do it.' Said Kiba jumping down from the upper level.
Choji walked down.
'Let the eighth match begin.' Announced Hayate.
'Tunnelling Fang.' Shouted Kiba as he leapt at Choji and begun spinning.
'Partial Expansion Jutsu Arm.' Said Choji as his arm tripled in size. Choji used his arms to knock Kiba back.
Kiba took a moment to think about how to deal with Choji expanding and then smiled.
'Catch Akamaru.' Said Kiba as he threw a red pill to Akamaru.
Akamaru growled and his fur turned red.
'Man Beast Clone.' Said Kiba as Akamaru jumped on him before he turned into a clone of Kiba.
'Fang Over Fang.' Shouted Kiba charging at Choji.
Choji crossed his still enlarged arms in front of himself blocking one of the attacks, but he was also attacked from behind and unable to block so he was sent flying to the ground. Choji picked himself back up and punched one of the spinning Kibas but the Kiba he hit kept drilling into his fist. Choji grunted in pain but kept pushing against the Kiba until the other Kiba struck him in the back of the head knocking him forward, but it wasn't strong enough to cause him to lower his fist.
'Ugh my head.' Said Choji who momentarily put his other hand over where he was struck.
Choji then opened his palm and the Kiba drilled into it but Choji dealt with the pain and closed his hand around the Kiba.
'This match is over if this is Akamaru, Kiba you need to forfeit or I'm going to throw him into the wall and if your Kiba you'll get knocked out.' Announced Choji.
The Kiba which was free growled before raising his hand and saying 'I, Kiba Inuzuka forfeit.'
Choji let go of Akamaru, who had passed out and reverted to a dog, next to Kiba before shrinking his arms.
'Winner Choji Akimichi.' Announced Hayate.
"Ugh I'm going to go broke when we go eat barbeque." Thought Asuma while Ino cheered.
'Nice work Choji you did really well, plus that was a good way to win knowing Kiba wouldn't risk Akamaru getting hurt.' Complimented Shikamaru.
'Thanks Shika but it looks like it's your turn now.' Said Choji while pointing at the board.
Shikamaru Nara VS Yurasu
'*sigh* This is so troublesome.' Said Shikamaru as he slowly walked down while his opponent calmly waited. Yurasu had a bottom heavy build. He wore shorts that came halfway up his thighs and wore a sleeveless black shirt with his headband tied around his neck. His legs had a lot of muscle and he had a firm stance, while his arms were rather wiry as was his neck. Overall his appearance was rather amusing.
'Let the ninth match begin.' Announced Hayate.
Yurasu went through rapid hand signs in blurring succession before saying 'Flying Rock Wave Jutsu'.
When he finished the ground begun to shake and rocks and boulders started breaking out from the ground and floating in the air for about an instant before flying all flying at once at Shikamaru.
Shikamaru dodged the boulders and made a cross in front of his arms to protect himself from the small rocks. Shikamaru lowered his arms when he stopped feeling the rocks pelt him. He then pulled out six shuriken and held them in between his knuckles. He waited until Yurasu used his jutsu again but before the rocks started to fly at him he threw his shuriken at Yurasu. Yurasu dodged backwards and begun to make hand signs for his jutsu again but had to dodge six kunai this time. He then looked around and couldn't see Shikamaru.
'Come out coward or I'll make you come out.' Shouted Yurasu.
He then saw part of Shikamaru's jacket behind one of the rocks and using his legs jumped high revealing the strength he had in those limbs.
'You're finished.' He shouted as he came down and landed on the rocks smashing them and crushing Shikamaru. Or so he thought. However this was not the case as there was only a jacket there not Shikamaru.
'Shadow Possession Jutsu complete.' Said Shikamaru from behind Yurasu.
Shikamaru then pulled out a Kunai held against Yurasu's back and said with a yawn 'Forfeit or die.'
Yurasu blinked before sighing and stated he forfeited and Hayate called the match.
As Shikamaru walked back up Choji cheered while Ino was in the background drawing circles on the floor with her finger mumbling how she was the only one to fail out of her team even though she was the best looking.
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The board went through names again before landing on.
Tenten VS Chiri
Chiri was a slim girl with black shoulder length hair. She also had a sword strapped to her back and wore a dark brown shirt cut off at the shoulders and black pants with her headband tied around her right thigh.
"Finally it's my turn. She has a sword this might be fun." Thought Tenten as she walked down.
'Let the tenth match begin.' Announced Hayate.
Chiri pulled out her sword which was deceptively longer than it appeared reaching almost two metres in length. Tenten smiled and summoned two tantos before settling into a stance. Chiri charged and extended her arm while swinging her arm downwards looking to decapitate Tenten but Tenten held the sword in between her tantos one against and the other behind the blade. Seeing that no one was able to move they both lowered their swords and jumped back. Tenten took this moment to pull out a summoning scroll and begun flinging scythes, maces and kunai at Chiri. Chiri used her sword to try and block some but had to keep dodging to the left and right to avoid getting hit.
Tenten then stopped throwing her weapons and Chiri immediately charged. Chiri slashed diagonally cutting Tenten's shoulder before the blade was stopped by her tanto.
'Ha give up you almost lost your arm just now next time it might be our head.' Threatened Chiri.
Tenten jumped back and pulled out a scroll which Naruto recognised.
"So she's using it already. I wonder if she can handle it?" Thought Naruto.
When she summoned the blade most people were surprised but for different reasons.
Haku for seeing her use it, Kakashi and Sakura as they didn't know what Naruto did with the sword, Lee and Guy as they had no idea how she got it and everyone else because they were either unaware Zabuza was dead or why the Leaf had one of the seven legendary swords of the Mist.
'You know this blade is called the decapitating carving knife I wonder if that is just a name or if it suggests something.' Said Tenten.
Tenten lifted the sword and charged aiming for Chiri's torso Chiri put her blade in front of her and blocked. Tenten quickly freed one of her hands and threw four shuriken at Chiri making her back up and jump to the right. Tenten then charged again and slammed the sword exactly where Chiri would have been if she didn't think to dodge at the last minute. Chiri took this chance to charge at Tenten but Tenten slashed at Chiri's legs inflicting a deep wound into her ankle.
Chiri fell to the floor and felt the decapitating carving knife on the back of her neck.
'Give up or we will find out if this sword lives up to its name.' Said Tenten.
Chiri sighed and announced that she was giving up.
'Winner Tenten.' Said Hayate.
When Tenten walked back up Lee was crying and congratulating her about her 'flames of youth' and that he was dying at not yet having his shot to fight.
'Nice work Tenten, although I didn't expect you to be so good with that sword already.' Said Naruto.
'Yes Tenten your performance was magnificent.' Said Lee with flames in his eyes again.
'Well I am a weapons specialist so I made sure I could use any weapon and the blades of the seven ninja swordsmen are the most famous so I had to know how to handle them. But you guys should focus on your matches because there is a good chance that one of you is up next, you might even have to fight each other.' Finished Tenten.
Lee looked at Naruto and Naruto looked at Lee while each thought "That would be a youthful/awesome match."
The board however had different ideas and showed Lee VS Kankuro.
'Yes there is no way I was going to be last.' Said Lee who quickly jumped down.
Kankuro walked down and thought. "What a loser this will be over in a minute."
'Let the eleventh match begin.' Announced Hayate.
Lee charged and kicked Kankuro up in the face wasting no time not allowing him to use what he had wrapped up. He then appeared behind him and loosened his bandages and wrapped them around Kankuro and begun to spin.
'Primary Lotus.' Shouted Lee as he smashed Kankuro down on to the ground.
When the dust cleared Lee was bleeding from a gash in his chest with purple fluid mixed with blood flowing out.
'Ugh what happened?' Asked Lee as he dropped to one knee.
The bandages surrounding the thing Kankuro brought down with him opened to reveal Kankuro unharmed.
'Like I thought over in less than a minute.' Said Kankuro.
'How?' Asked Lee.
'I'm a puppet master and you attacked my puppet before but when you wrapped around it, it stabbed you with poison and now your body is full of it you're going to pass out in a minute. I win' Said Kankuro.
Lee looked at Guy who gave him the thumbs up.
'Maybe not. You should not underestimate the handsome devil of the Leaf village. The second gate, gate of healing is open!' Shouted Lee.
Lee's wound begun to close up and he stood up again, free of the effects of the poison.
'You may be right about this match being over in one minute but I won't be the one to lose.' Said Lee before vanishing in a blur of speed.
Lee kicked the real Kankuro up this time and appeared behind him.
'At least this way you will feel what your puppet felt. Ironic empathy don't you think.' Said Lee as he loosened his bandages again wrapping them around Kankuro.
'Primary Lotus.' Shouted Lee and drilled Kankuro into the ground before jumping away.
Kankuro was knocked out cold. Hayate looked at him and knew this match was over.
'Winner Rock Lee. Would the last two people yet to fight please come down.' Announced Hayate as Kankuro was taken away by medics.
Naruto and Dosu walked down.
'I will beat you here and get my revenge for what you did to my shoulder.' Said Dosu.
Naruto looked at him then to the floor and remembered the pain he saw and was reminded of his own life but also remembered the condition his friends were in when he found them in the forest.
'Last match begin.' Announced Hayate.
Dosu charged and pulled his sleeve back and went for a jab to Naruto's stomach.
Naruto however disappeared in a flash leaving Dosu confused.
'I can tell you have had a hard life Dosu filled with lots of pain and I myself contributed to that but, forfeit I don't want to kill you, but if we continue you will lose and possibly die as you're not fully recovered.' Said Naruto appearing behind Dosu.
'Well if that's the case I'll kill you first.' Said Dosu as he pulled out a kunai and threw it behind himself to force Naruto away.
'Very well.' Said Naruto drawing his modified Katana.
Naruto charged at Dosu and slashed at him hitting his gauntlet which caused Dosu to growl as he pushed against it. Naruto used this moment to drop down and swept Dosu's legs while giving his head a spinning mule kick sending him away. Naruto then appeared behind him and gave him an uppercut sending him into the air.
'First Tail: Tail of Pain.' Said Naruto as his one tail cloak begun to form around him.
Most of the Leaf Chunin and Jounin present were worried as well as the Hokage, but Kakashi was calm seeing as he knew that Naruto was able to use part of the fox's power, thus no one acted seeing Kakashi's calm demeanour but stayed on alert.
In an instant Naruto had stabbed his blade through Dosu's knees and elbows shattering the bones as Naruto had immersed his blade in the Kyuubi's chakra.
Naruto dropped back to the ground landing on one knee with his sword held out to his right side and Dosu fell to the ground unable to move. As soon as Dosu hit the ground he sheathed his sword and stood.
'Be glad you are still alive after what you did to my friends.' Said Naruto as he waited for Hayate to call the match.
'As Dosu is unable to continue the winner is Naruto Uzumaki and with that these preliminaries are over.' Finished Hayate.
Everyone stared at Naruto and most were thinking something along the lines of when did Naruto become this good or ruthless while Gaara stared at him going over what he had said in his head.
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All Genin who made it through to the finals came down with most distancing themselves from Naruto, who couldn't care less.
'Naruto you were most youthful in fact for a moment you were immersed in 'flames of youth'.' Shouted Lee unaware that it was power from Kyuubi not youth.
'Naruto that was rather impressive and I'm glad that you never used that move on me in wave.' Said Haku.
'Yeah impressive, but, don't you think it was a bit brutal?' Asked Tenten.
Naruto gazed directly at Tenten with a stern face and said 'Anyone who hurts those important to me will only receive one chance at forgiveness. I warned him and he didn't forfeit therefore I'm completely justified. Also we are ninja, ninja have to be brutal or else our villages could get overtaken by people who are even more brutal than what you just saw. However don't worry, I won't ever use a move like that on my comrades.' Said Naruto breaking his stern face with a smile as he said that.
The Hokage told them that the exam finals would happen in a month to give them time to prepare and allow important dignitaries to arrive.
'Now to decide who will face who in the finals you will each draw a number.' Said the Hokage.
After everyone drew and said their number the matches were determined as follows.
First match Naruto VS Neji.
Second match Gaara VS Lee.
Third match Sasuke VS Shino.
Fourth match Haku VS Choji.
Fifth match Shikamaru VS Temari
Sixth match Tenten VS Sakura.
'You now know who you will be facing so use this month to plan accordingly and also to rest and recover, until then let us adjourn until next month.' Finished the Hokage.
Naruto left and begun to wander around the leaf village until he came by the hot springs and saw a fifty something year old man looking in on the women's baths.
'Pervert!' Naruto screamed at the man causing him to fall and hit the side of the hot springs.
The women inside heard the noise and ran away covering themselves up causing the man to cry.
The man looked at Naruto and growled.
'You just destroyed my research!' Shouted the man. The man was tall with waist-length, spiky white hair tied back into a pony tail, with two shoulder-length bangs that framed both sides of his face. He also had red lines that ran down from his eyes and wore a horned forehead protector with the kanji for Oil in the centre. He also had a noticeable wart on the right side of his nose. He wore a green short shirt kimono and matching pants; under which he wore mesh armour that showed out of the sleeves and legs of his outfit. His outfit was completed with hand guards, a simple black belt, wooden sandals, a red cloak with two simple yellow circles, and a scroll on his back. He also had a tattoo in his left palm which appeared to be swirl-like tribal marking.
'Yeah yeah research. First I meet a creepy white guy who smells like snakes and now I meet and old pervert who smells like toads.' Said Naruto as he walked away.
"Snakes? No it couldn't be." Thought the old man.
'Hey wait, kid what did you mean by a white guy that smells like snakes?' Asked the old man.
'*sigh* I don't have time for this I need to train for the finals but if you really want to know it was some guy called Orochimaru. Later pervert.' Said Naruto who jumped away.
'So the fourths legacy met Orochimaru and walked away from it interesting.' Said the old man.
'Hey it's the pervert let's get him!' Shouted the women from the bath now fully clothed.
"Oh crap I better run." Thought the old man who was chased by about fifty angry women.
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'Hmm I wonder if the pervert got away.' Said Naruto to himself as he walked around the village looking for a good place to train in seclusion.
'Hey I'm not a pervert.' Said the old man appearing in front of Naruto.
'Oh yeah then what are you?' Asked Naruto.
'I'm a super pervert.' Said the man before summoning a toad and doing a dance on it while saying
'I am a man who makes; ladies swoon with his good looks and men tremble in fear from his very name, the sage of Mount Myoboku, one of the legendary three Sannin. I am Jiraiya.'
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