Chapter 17 revised and edited. Review or PM me on what you think about this chapter now.

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'Talking'

"Thinking"

'Heavily demonic voice'

'Fox talking'

"Fox thinking"

*expression*

Jutsu

Flashback

Chapter 17 – The Boy Who Defies Destiny

'You should give up now and escape while you can or I will humiliate you. It is my destiny to win here today.' Said Neji arrogantly.

'Wow you genius types always have massive egos. I can't believe the stadium can hold it.' Replied Naruto mockingly.

'You will pay for you insolence Byakugan.' Said Neji as he took up the gentle fist Taijutsu style.

Neji charged and Naruto simply stood there while Neji attacked him with the Eight Trigrams Sixty-Four Palms. As Neji went to strike Naruto channelled chakra around himself and let it burst from him all at once sending Neji back.

'Now that you've made the first move I think it's my turn.' Said Naruto as he vanished in a burst of speed.

Neji eyes rapidly swivelled as he frantically looked around trying to find Naruto but he was unable to find him.

'Wind Release: Vacuum Sword.' Shouted Naruto blurring directly in front of Neji and slashing his sword out which released many thin yet wide blades of wind at Neji.

Neji was too close to dodge so he quickly rotated and emitted chakra from all of his points 'Eight Trigrams Palm Rotation.' Shouted Neji.

The crowd was rather surprised; the Hyuugas at seeing a branch member know their most powerful main branch techniques and the rest of the crowd at Naruto, a so called loser, pushing the Hyuuga prodigy so fast.

'Well I must say that was a pretty good move otherwise there was a good chance you would have been split in half.' Said Naruto smiling before adopting a serious expression 'However this isn't over yet.' Finished Naruto as he started going through hand signs.

'Fire Style: Grand Fireball Jutsu.' Neji made a quick substitution and in his place remained a pile of ashes once the fire died down.

Naruto couldn't find Neji so he made four clones and sent them out to the corners of each stadium while Naruto closed his eyes and waited.

Four kunai struck and dispelled all of his clones. The memories he got back from the trajectory from which they were hit told him where Neji was. Naruto disappeared again and appeared behind Neji and punched him to the ground.

'Neji I truly pity you. You talk about destiny controlling everything but you are desperately trying to fight against it.' Said Naruto softly before sighing.

'*scoff* What would you know about destiny you're just a loser.' Stated Neji arrogantly.

'If that's the case, then I guess you're worse than a loser because I know much more about it than you.' Said Naruto before pausing in thought.

Naruto tapped a finger on his chin showing he was thinking before snapping his fingers.

'Aha I got it. I was trying to think what you call a person who is losing to a loser. Know what I call a person who is losing to a loser? Neji.' Laughed Naruto.

Neji angrily stood up and charged at Naruto and once again tried to use the Eight Trigrams Sixty-Four Palms but due to Naruto's speed he only managed to close off sixteen points on each of Naruto's arms.

'I have sealed the points in your arms and you can't do jutsu anymore you're finished. Proctor, call the match or I will kill him.' Said Neji looking at Genma.

Genma was about to call it before Naruto laughed. Neji turned to look at him and growled.

'You think that would stop me. I could open my points right now but instead I will show you not to underestimate people by using only the skills your teammates use, Taijutsu and weaponry.' Said Naruto as he drew his blade slowly allowing everyone to get a good look at it.

Those more proficient with weapons realised this sword was something special and was able to conduct all types of chakra, even elemental chakra to a very high degree.

Neji scoffed and drew a kunai and charged. Neji aimed directly for Naruto's left shoulder but Naruto parried the blade off and kicked Neji in the stomach. Neji flew back and looked up only to see Naruto wasn't there. Instinct was the only thing that saved him as he rolled to the right avoiding Naruto who had dropped from the sky and slammed his sword directly where Neji's stomach was before rolling away. A three metre deep hole, about one metre wide was left in his wake as Naruto pulled his sword out of the ground.

Naruto charged chakra and forcefully reopened his chakra points using some of the Kyuubi's chakra mixed into his. Naruto then resheathed his sword and went into the Demon Fox fighting style which had him with his back leg, which was his left leg, bent and his front leg which was his right curved in front of him facing to the front and left while he had his left arm held at his side and his right arm held part way between his body and head with his fist being directly in front of his neck allowing him to be able to attack or defend at a moment's notice.

Neji used his eyes and analysed the stance and couldn't find any weak points. Neji was now slightly worried as he realised his opponent must be very strong in Taijutsu to have such a strong guard. Neji lowered himself into the gentle fist style and both stared each other off.

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'Wow Naruto is doing pretty good don't you think Shikamaru?' Asked Choji.

'*sigh* So troublesome.' Replied Shikamaru. But he was also watching the match with a keen eye and couldn't help but wonder how Naruto became so strong.

'Yes it appears that Naruto has excelled rapidly since the academy and has now become someone who it would be illogical to underestimate, which it seems is what his opponent is doing.' Spoke Shino saying the greatest amount of words many people ever heard him speak.

'Yes it appears that Naruto is too much for Neji do you not agree Tenten?' Commented Lee.

Tenten nodded but kept her eyes on the match.

Gaara stared with his normal impassive face but inside he was excited and curious "So this is the power he spoke of. I will kill him if he cannot beat me as it would mean he is weak just like everyone else." He thought.

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'Let me tell you about the Hyuuga clan's hatred. You and almost all of these villagers are unaware of what happens but the Hyuuga has a special mark, a curse mark which it puts on all branch members. This mark is used to keep the branch members in line. You and everyone here have no idea what it is like to be branded with a mark that controls your life.' Said Neji angrily.

Naruto gave a small smile of understanding before speaking. 'Neji listen to me now, you are the one who has no idea about me. You may choose not to believe it but I have a mark that has singled me out my entire live. This mark has been the bane of my existence for almost my whole life until I changed my view. I realised that while I may be isolated and looked down upon by others, but, there are a select few who do care for me. While that number may be small it is where my vast strength grows from. If I had never had anyone...' Said Naruto as his eyes drifted to Gaara in the stands who simply stared back.

'If I never had anyone I would have fallen into despair and darkness much like you have and I probably would have tried to place the blame somewhere, much as you curse destiny. The difference is, I was not happy to simply fall into the darkness and descend into madness and that is why, as hard as it is for you to believe I am able to defy destiny which is also why I will win here because... I make my own destiny.' Finished Naruto.

Neji was stewing in rage unable to fathom Naruto's audacity to speak such things and as such he charged and shouted 'Eight Trigrams Sixty-Four Palms!'

Naruto spoke as Neji approached and said to him 'Now let me show you how perseverance and hard work makes one capable of defying destiny.'

Naruto got into his stance and parried every strike Neji tried and threw fifty shuriken at Neji ten at a time in rapid succession three seconds apart. Neji used the Eight Trigrams Palm Rotation to deflect the waves of shuriken and kept spinning as he saw Naruto charging at him. Naruto gathered chakra in his right hand and quickly formed a sphere of chakra and slammed it against Neji's defence while shouting 'Rasengan!' shocking almost every Jounin and anyone who knew of the Fourth Hokage's legendary technique.

The jutsus both grinded against each other before Naruto begun to push through. With one last push of chakra Naruto broke through Neji's so called 'ultimate defence' the discharge of which, sent him flying back into the stadium wall which he hit and slumped down.

'I failed the Genin graduation exam three times. I could never do the Clone Jutsu.' Said Naruto.

'However I found a way around that and learnt the Shadow Clone Jutsu instead. Don't come whining to me about this destiny stuff and telling me you can't change who you are. I did it and you can do it to, because after all, you're not a failure like me.' Finished Naruto.

'Winner Naruto Uzumaki.' Announced Genma.

Everything went silent until after a while some clapping begun which soon increased in volume. Naruto helped Neji up as the medics came out and Naruto smiled at the crowd before walking away.

"Naruto Uzumaki, the boy who defies destiny." Thought Neji as the medics took him away.

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Naruto walked up to the contestant area and received a fair bit of congratulations from Lee and Choji, a lazy thumbs up from Shikamaru before he mumbled troublesome a wary eye from Temari and an excited one from Gaara.

'You did really well Naruto.' Said Sakura.

'Yeah it seems I'm really going to have to step up my training to beat you.' Said Haku with a small smile.

'Naruto that was amazing I don't think I've ever seen anyone beat Neji and you absolutely dominated.' Commented Tenten.

'Naruto I will win my match and then I will fight you in the next round.' Said Lee excitedly.

At this Naruto gave a small frown. 'Lee, be careful I know you are strong and want to prove yourself but...' Said Naruto as he lowered his voice slightly 'Your opponent is very dangerous and you need to watch yourself in this fight.' Finished Naruto seriously.

Lee nodded but all the same replied 'Do not worry about me Naruto I won't lose.'

Naruto took a seat and got comfortable as Lee and Gaara walked down to the centre of the stadium.

Lee stared at Gaara with determination and Gaara stared back impassively.

'Second match Lee VS Gaara. Begin.' Shouted Genma.