(Ok, so from the reviews on chapter 11 you seem to like the other cats! And since one of my lovely reviewers wrote something specifically about Fleetfire, let us have a whole chapter on him! YAY!)
Fleetfire gave up on trying to steal back his food. But he knew he couldn't get another piece or cats would accuse him of trying to become a fat kitty-pet. He shot a cold glare at his mouse-brained brothers, and padded away. He quietly slipped out of camp. His spirits lifted when he broke into a run, pelting across the endless moor. When he neared the border he saw a cat, with one terribly bent wing. He padded over and grinned. "Hi. I'm Fleetfire"
He padded slowly back to camp, yawning. He had spent his day with the she-cat who was called, Twistedpaw. Unfortunately his clan-mates weren't as nice as his new friend. As soon as he entered camp he was bombarded with taunts and teasing. Mousefoot and Webwhisker were the first to greet him. "Hey, kitty-pet! Over here!" Webwhisker called, motioning to a fresh sparrow that he had placed beside him. On the other side of camp, Briarbreeze was calling to him. "Hey Fleetfire! Come sit with us!" she motioned to the cats sitting next to her, Swantail and Frostlight. "Um, ok?" he said padding up to the group of cats. Briarbreeze smiled. "I don't think any good would have come if you sat with them" she said motioning to his half-brothers. Fleetfire smiled. Heat lapped at his checks. He swore if his fur wasn't dark gray on his checks, they would be bright red. "Ya. They hate me." he said turning to look at the other two cats sitting with Briarbreeze. Swantail, a skilled hunter, was Briarbreeze's close friend. The deputy, Frostlight, was Swantail's mate. Fleetfire personally admired Frostlight, and always tried to impress the silver tabby. "Soooooooooooooooooooooo..."
(Cliff-hanger, kinda! Well I know most of you have been waiting a while for this, and I apoligize. School caught up with me, being so close to the grading period. Anyways, the next chapter of Crowstar's Hatred will be up soon! Bye!)