Hey guys and welcome back to my rewrite. I dare say that I am happy to see that you guys like my rewrite and my new story (Which I'll upload next week.)
Before I get started I would like to answer some questions.
Derago: Yea I hope so as well. Most of the time I mostly stop when I loose interest which hopefully that doesn't happen. And about your other review in Vampire Knight it isn't abandoned. it just says ? because I don't know what to do about it yet. I am thinking on rewriting most of my stories but we'll see.
Well that's about it for now and will let you guys read a better version of chapter 2.
Disclaimer: One Piece was created by the magnificent Eiichiro Oda along with Touhou Project made by ZUN.
Zoro...
Nami...
Usopp...
Sanji...
Chopper...
Robin...
Franky...
Brook...
All of them gone and Luffy couldn't do anything to save them. He was too weak to stop them from taking his crew away from him.
Luffy crouched down in despair as he felt tears coming out. 'Again, it has happened again. I've grown stronger but it still wasn't enough!?' He thought while gritting his teeth and clenching his fists.
He hears loud footsteps as he looks up and glares at the man who has done this.
"Give them back. Give them back right now! Or I'll never forgive you!" Luffy yells to the Shichibukai but the man's expression never changes. The man raises his hand which looks like it has paws in them and says this to the captain.
"Farewell Straw Hat. We will not meet again." Is what he said before bringing his hand down at Luffy. To make him disappear like he's done to the others. Luffy raise up and screams out.
"Noooooooo!"
"AAaaaahhh-Whah!" Luffy yells while sitting up from the sofa only to fall down to the floor.
"Oww." He groans as his sore body moans in pain. He sat up as he looks around the room. "Whoa. What a mess."
Books are seen everywhere in the room with a few knick-knacks just laid about. This room is even messier than the men's bedroom back on the Sunny.
He also notices his straw hat and his blue cardigan on a side table. He had a bit of a hard time standing up but manage to put on his clothes without trouble. He left his cardigan open and let's his bandaged up body have some air.
"Now then how did I end up here?" Luffy wondered out loud as he tries to think what happened. He then remembers the dream he had a gasp while widening his eyes.
"That's right. We all fought that light admiral and got split up by that paw man." Luffy looks down worriedly as he sat back down on the sofa.
He sighs loudly as his head hits the sofa. "Where could they have gone?" He asks himself which brought back a short memory.
"Then train against all kinds of beasts, adventure in each corner. In the land of Gensokyo."
Luffy sat back up as that actually gave them a thought. "Wait that mysterious voice brought me here. That means it brought the others here too!" He grins largely as he jumped out of the sofa and starts running to the door.
"Once I find the others, we can get back and continue our adventures!" He shouted as he ran out the door. But the moment he opens the door he bumped into someone and they both fell to the floor.
"Ow, what's the rush ze?" Marisa groans a bit while rubbing her butt.
"Shishishi sorry." Luffy says while chuckling. The two was then interrupted by a loud growling sound. "Ah I'm hungry."
Marisa blinks and was silent for a moment before started chuckling herself. "How about I get dinner ready first before doing anything?"
"Wow really!? That will be awesome!" Luffy shouted in glee as he looks like he has stars in his eyes.
-GENSOKYO-
"This is not awesome." Luffy said in disappointment as all he sees are mushrooms. There was no meat at all.
"Guess you don't like mushrooms huh ze?" Marisa said while she herself eats the mushroom stew.
"There's no meat." Luffy simply said even when he still eats like he hasn't eaten for a week. It might not have meant but food is food.
Marisa sweat drops and laughs in amusement.
"So anyway where did you come from? From what I've seen it seems like you were in some kind of battle." Luffy slowly stops.
"Yea we were in a hard battle. But we lost and have gotten separated." Luffy quietly said as he carried on eating though more slowly.
"Others ze?" Marisa questioned with Luffy nodding.
"Yep we are a pirate crew." Luffy said with a smile while Marisa was a bit surprised. She heard about pirates from some of her stolen old books (Borrowed). But she hasn't heard that any was here in Gensokyo. Is he from the outside or something?
"I'm going to have to ask you something." Luffy tilted his head in confusion with his cheeks full of mushrooms. "Have you ever heard of Gensokyo ze?"
Luffy swallowed the food and thought about it. Have he ever came across an island with such a complicated name?
"Nope."
"Then that means you guys came from the outside world." Marisa said nodding as Luffy just looked more confused.
"The outside what now?" Luffy said as Marisa smiles as she now explains to Luffy just what Gensokyo is. How it is a place for creatures that doesn't want to be forgotten or feared. How it is considered a paradise for all kinds of supernatural and how Gensokyo is covered by a barrier, sealing them off from the rest of the world.
Luffy was nodding as he likes the sound of it. It sounds like an adventure just waiting to be had.
"You understanding what I'm saying so far ze?" Marisa said with Luffy grinning happily.
"Yep, it's a really cool mystery land!" Luffy said really confidently. Marisa then laughs out loud while leaning back on her chair for support.
"Well you're not that far off ze." She said as she kept on laughing with Luffy chuckling along with her.
The two talked as they were really becoming good friends.
"Wow! You're really a witch!?" Luffy said in shock with Marisa nodding as she played with her mini-hakkero.
"That's right ze. I am just your ordinary witch." Marisa gloated as she doesn't have the chance to show of considering there are people even more impressive around here.
"Wow and you said that..." Luffy stopped to have another scoop from his fifth bowl. "...that there are more here?" He finished as Marisa chuckles nervously.
"Maybe not witches but I do know a few that uses magic." Marisa clarified as Luffy had a dreamy look in his eyes.
"Oh man just wait for Usopp and Chopper to... hear this." Luffy then remembers about his friends. He was so caught up with retelling some of his adventures that he slightly forgot that they weren't here with him.
"Hey um... are you alright ze?" Marisa said in worry but Luffy started looking serious and ate all the food in one go. Marisa was still surprised to see his cheeks bloat like a chipmunk. Luffy had told her about his ability called the Gomu Gomu Devil Fruit and she got to say that is the weirdest ability she has heard yet. She met a time stopping maid and a human/ghost gardener but seeing a person made entirely out of rubber shouldn't be possible. The closest would be her friend Alice who can manipulate her dolls like living beings but that still fails to compare to this pirate. (They both forgot to introduce themselves so they don't know each others names.)
"Thanks for the meal witch." Luffy gratefully said before he walks to the front door. Marisa stood up and said.
"Hey wait where are you going!?" Luffy looks back and grins.
"I am going to go look for my friends. Bye!" Luffy shouted before running out. Marisa was silent for a moment before realising something important.
"Wait! Its night time so it's too dangerous out there." Marisa runs out but she can't see him. "Oh crud." Marisa mumbled before reaching her hand as the broom flew right to her. She catches and flies up to find the idiot.
-GENSOKYO-
"Hmm that's weird. Why isn't the vivre card moving?" Luffy mumbled as he held out the piece of paper in front of him. The vivre card is supposed to help him get back to Sabaody since he knew that the others would start heading back. But for some reason it just wouldn't move. "Is it broken?" Luffy just shrugs and tucks it back in his hat and decided that he'll find his way back the old fashion way.
"Don't worry guys, we will get back together." Luffy said quietly as he sped up a bit. He ran for ten minutes but he was still in no way knows where he is going. Not only was it night time but the trees were so thick that not even the moonlight could shine through.
"Oh man I'm lost!?" Luffy shouted out as he tried thinking on his next move. The move was simple as he pointed in front of him. "I'll head north. The exit must be there." Was what Luffy thought as he carried on. But he was stopped when he started hearing something.
"What was that?" Luffy asks himself as started seeing two bright red dots in-between the trees.
"I am so hungry." He hears a young voice as it started giggling. Luffy looks like he understood.
"Well I was hungry too. Thankfully the witch gave me some food. Too bad it didn't have meat though." He said to it as the red lights glows.
"Oh my yes! Meat is the best!" The voice shout out gleefully with Luffy grinning while he started ti drool.
"I know right!? Shishishi." The two of them laughs as the two seems to be becoming good friends. But then that was interrupted as Luffy hears a growling noise.
"Oh man I need to eat." The voice said as the two lights seems to be turning into a more sinister red.
"I can take you to the witch. She may only have mushrooms but there still pretty good." Luffy offered as he has forgotten that he was lost. The voice giggles again but it seems darker than before.
"Don't worry. I got the food right here." The voice said to Luffy as he tilt his head.
"Really? What is it?" He asks but is now getting a bad feeling about this.
"You!" Luffy's instinct was spot on as the red lights jumps out of the tree and launces right towards Luffy.
"Whoa!" Luffy jumps to the side and notices the red lights was shining out of a big black ball of darkness.
"Get back here food!" The voice said all giggly as Luffy grew annoyed. The ball turns around and chases after Luffy.
"Hey I am not food!" He replied back as he jumps over the ball. He lands back into the ground and stretches his arm back. "Gomu Gomu No: Pistol!" He shouts out as launces his fist at the ball. It hits the ball but Luffy didn't fell anything.
"Miss me." The ball sang as the fist went back as Luffy is now confused.
"Why didn't I feel anything?" He asks himself but it wasn't answered as the ball went right in front of him.
"Come here!" Luffy felt little hands grabbing his shoulders as the girl was about to take a bite.
"I said…" Luffy leans back and head butts the ball with this time actually feeling something hitting. "I'm not food!" He shouted angrily as the ball shakes from the dizziness
"Ow food isn't meant to fight back." The ball said as Luffy is beginning to figure out why the first hit didn't hit. He grins.
"Well I'm not food so there!" He said while leaning back again but for a different attack. If there is a girl hiding in the ball then he just has to find it. "Gomu Gomu No: Gatling Gun!" He then punches out so quick that it looks like he has multiple fists.
"Whoa!" The ball yelped as it flew up in the air above the trees. Luffy stops and looks up angrily.
"Hey that's not fair! Get back here!" Luffy shouted as the moonlight hits the ball as it is now slowly disappearing which shows the girl hiding within. Red eyes, short blond hair. Wears a black vest and skirt, and white blouse. A small red amulet is tied to the left side of her hair, making it look like a ribbon. She is Rumia, Youkai Hiding in the Darkness.
"Why won't you stay down!? I am hungry so just stay down and be my meal!" Rumia pouts cutely as her arms are up like a cross. Luffy crosses his own arms to show that he isn't someone's meal. Which is ironic since he pretty much eats all kinds of animals. Rumia growls as she raises her arm and some kind of spell appears. "Take this! Spell Card, Darkness Sign: Demarcation!"
Then balls of light appears and is weaving in circle spreads followed by aimed waves of bullets.
"Whoa!" Luffy dodges the light as it kinds of reminds him of the light admiral. "Slow down!" Luffy kept on dodging but as time goes on the bullets seems to be getting faster. Rumia laughs in delight.
"Ready to give up!?" She shouts over the noise of her Danmeku. Luffy grits his teeth as he can't keep up, he has to step it up.
"No way! I have to get back no matter what!" He shouts out as he then stomps on the ground which makes his legs pumps up. His body glows red with steam coming out.
"Gear Second!" He shouted and disappears shortly afterwards.
"What the...?" Rumia looks around confused as her Spell Card finally runs out of time. Luffy then appears right underneath her and stretches out his arms to the tree branches.
"Gomu Gomu No!" Luffy strains as Rumia actually grew more fearful.
"Oh no!" Rumia tries to fly away but it was already too late.
"Tet Rocket!" Luffy speeds up like a missile and hits Rumia right on the back. Luffy drops down but Rumia was sent flyng.
"This was definitely not worth it!" Rumia shouts loudly as she was gone from view. Luffy finally sighs in relief as he got out of Gear Second.
"Wonder why she wanted to eat me so much. She was so weird." Luffy scratches his head and was about to carry on.
"It was because she was a youkai ze." Luffy looks up and sees Marisa flying down on her broom. "But it looks like I didn't need to worry at all since you seem tough enough to handle Rumia of all people." She says with a grin.
"You're right witch! I need to be strong to become King of the Pirates!" Luffy pointed to himself as he says it proudly. Marisa chuckles as she has heard Luffy mentioning that in his tales but still wonders what that sort of title means.
"Um, my name is Marisa. Marisa Kirisame. Actually I don't think I caught your name." Marisa asks as Luffy look up thinking but figured that he didn't introduce himself.
"Then my name is Monkey D. Luffy. Pleasure to meet you." Luffy says as he carries on his way.
"Whoa where are you going ze?" Marisa blocks the way as Luffy is pouting with his arms crossed.
"I'm looking for my friends." Luffy walks around and carries on. Marisa was thinking for a way to help the captain and gets an idea. She hopes her friend doesn't mind waking up this late.
"Then how about I take you to one of my friend's ze? She will help you search for your crew." Marisa said to Luffy as he actually likes the idea.
"Really!? Well why didn't you say so. Come on!" Luffy shouted as he ran in a wrong direction.
"Wait it's the other way!" Marisa shouts out as she flies towards the running pirate.