I've decided I want this to go differently. VERY Differently.
S1 E3 Razz Act 1
The Four came up on Brightmoon Castle.
It was beautiful, the golden building. On a pedestal in front of it was the glowing pink pearl-like object.
"That's the Moonstone. It's Brightmoon's Runestone, and the source of my power." Glimmer explained.
"It's... amazing." Breathed Lonnie.
"Okay, I just need to go in there, recharge, and deal with my Mom." Said Glimmer, riding forward.
"Uh, this will be fun." Glimmer sighed. "Oh! Bow, maybe you should take Adora in the back way?" Glimmer asked, before riding off.
"Oh. Yeah. Good call." Said Bow.
"The Back way?" Lonnie Inquired.
...
"This is the back way?!" Lonnie gasped, as Bow held her at least twenty feet in the air.
"It might seem weird, but we totally come in this way all the time." Said Bow, helping her and Rogelio into the window.
Lonnie and Rogelio looked around.
"Oh! Hey, here. Why don't you put these robes on?" Asked Bow, handing Lonnie and Rogelio a pair of robes. I say hand when he just threw them at their faces.
"No reason." He added, unconvincingly.
"Are you trying to hide us?" Asked Lonnie.
"What? No!" Replied Bow, clearly lying.
Rogelio snorted in deisbelief.
...
{ We're on the edge of greatness }
Lonnie and Rogelio are standing in a room in the Fright Zone. They Opens a door, and Glimmer's room is through it, with Glimmer and Bow inside.
{ Turning Darkness to Light }
Bow and Glimmer are teleported by Glimmer next to Lonnie and Rogelio.
{ We're Right Beside you }
Lonnie Takes Out the Sword, and a Bright Light comes out of it.
{ Ready to fight }
An Image of a mountain angled from the bottom is shown, with Lonnie as She-Ra jumping off of it, swinging her Sword Down onto the Camera, alongside Rogelio, claws outstretched, Glimmer, hands covered in Energy, and Bow weapon Drawn.
{ We're gonna win in the End! }
Mermista jumps down, swinging her trident.
{ We must be strong! }
Frosta jumps, punching the Camera with her ice fists.
{ And we must be Brave! }
Perfuma rides down on a wave of plants, sitting in a meditative stance, a smile on her face, followed by Entrapta, accompanied by robots.
{ We gotta find every bit of Strength we have }
The scene changes to Adora and Catra standing back to back, Catra smirking, Adora with an unsure look on her face. Kyle and Scorpia are on Either side of them, Kyle looking unsure, and Scorpia smiling, her claws in the air. as the Camera rises, we see, at the top, Hordak on Catra's side, his back turned, and Shadow Weaver, her hands clasped together, and then Kyle Cringes, Scorpia raises her tail, Adora looks up at Shadow Weaver, Catra looks up at Hordak, Shadow Weaver looks at Adora, and Hordak looks behind him, all against a dark background.
{ And never let it go }
Lonnie slams the ground, unleashing a wave of light, and when it clears, we just see, against a starry purple background, the words: 'An Unlikely She-Ra.'
...
"Glimmer!" Angella shouted. "Where have you been?" She demanded, as she advanced towards her daughter.
"Hey, Mom." Said Glimmer, nervously.
"All of Brightmoon has been worried sick! What were you thinking?"
"Mom-!" Glimmer began, but then her vision became hazy, and her mother's voice began echoing.
"How could you be so selfish and disobedient?"
Glimmer then clutched her head with an "Uh-" Before passing out.
"Glimmer!" Angella gasped.
She quickly put two and two together. Glimmer obviously had used up all her magical energy.
She picked up her daughter, and flew up to the Moonstone.
Glimmer regained a few seconds of consciousness, seeing her mother's worried face before passing out again.
...
When Glimmer did wake up, her mother was beside her.
"Are you all right?" Asked Angella, gently.
"I'm fine, Mom."
"Don't think you're not still in trouble. You didn't even take up the time to charge before you left?"
"I didn't think I'd be gone that long." Replied Glimmer, as she made a pink orb that rose up, expanding until it dissipated with a sound like fireworks launching.
"Where did you go anyway?" Asked Angella.
"Okay." Said Glimmer. "Bow and I found a piece of super-powerful First Ones' Tech in the woods...
...
Rogelio and Lonnie had found different pieces of clothing to hide themselves. Purple Cloaks from Glimmer's wardrope.
Lonnie's one was a bit short, but otherwise perfect. Rogelio, needless to say, was not so successful. It came down to his upper thighs.
"Are you sure these'll work?" Asked Lonnie.
"Yeah."
Replied the Archer.
"So, the people of Brightmoon are gonna be... less welcoming with a couple of Ex-Horde Soldiers."
"Maybe a little..." Muttered Bow.
"How Little?" Inquired Lonnie.
"Think... Pitchforks and torches."
Lonnie and Rogelio let out a despairing groan and growl.
"It's just that the people of Brightmoon have been really hurt by the Horde. Everyone here has lost someone in the war. You can't blame them for being a little suspicious." Explained Bow.
Lonnie just looked at the floor.
Suddenly, Glimmer teleported in with a tall woman with wings.
"Hey, guys! I decided to teleport my mom in!" Said Glimmer.
"Right, so what-" Began Angella, before seeing Lonnie and Rogelio.
"Who are they?" She asked.
"Well, they are Horde Cadets -hear us out- that defected." Said Glimmer.
Angella looked angry and skeptical.
"You allowed Horde Soldiers into Brightmoon!?" She whispered, angrily.
"EX-Horde Cadets." Corrected Glimmer. "Give them a chance, Mom! They defected! They want to help!"
Angella breathed through her nose, attempting to keep calm.
"Plus, Lonnie here-" She gestured to the Human Horde Defector "-Can do something really cool!"
Angella raised an eyebrow.
"She was supposed to do it before you got in." She shot a look at Lonnie, who mouthed; "You never told us that"
Angella breathed through her nose. "Show me."
Lonnie took out the sword, and raised it. "For the Honour of GRAYSKULL!"
Nothing happened.
"Huh?" Everyone looked confused, though Angella for a different reason.
"For the Honour of GRAYSKULL!" Lonnie tried again.
"Why isn't it working?" Asked Bow, worriedly.
"What was meant to happen?" Asked Angella.
"Well... the last two times she did it, she turned into an 8-foot tall blonde lady." Explained Bow.
Angella looked surprised. "And you two both saw this?"
"Yeah! We did!" Said Glimmer, fiercely.
Angella frowned. On the one hand, Glimmer and Bow were claiming to have seen it with their own eyes. On the other hand, they were the only ones to have seen it, and the one who they had claimed to have done it was a Horde Soldier.
"I shall consult my council" She said after a while, walking out. "Do NOT leave!"
Everyone nodded.
...
"So, she defected?" Asked Shadow Weaver.
"Yes, she-she did." Replied Adora, looking shaken.
"This is a problem. She could provide information to the Rebellion."
The two were speaking to each other in Shadow Weaver's chamber.
"There's... something else. A new Princess."
"A New Princess?" Shadow Weaver inquired.
"She was at least 12 feet tall. She took out the squadron with just a sword. And when everyone except me and Catra had retreated, she... transformed... into Lonnie." Adora had begun quivering.
Shadow Weaver frowned under her mask. Lonnie was clearly more than she had ever thought.
"This is unfortunate. The Princesses have obviously brainwashed your friend, and somehow turned her into one of their own."
Adora gasped. "W-what do we do?"
"Of this I am not sure. I'm not sure. We shalL figure something out." Shadow Weaver placed a hand on Adora's cheek.
She caught a flash of something on Adora's face.
"There's something else, isn't there?"
"Well..." Began Adora. "When we Attacked Thaymor, it was more like a village full of innocent people than a fortress..."
Shadow Weaver sighed. "Adora, the power of the Princesses protects them. They can turn their village into a fortress within seconds. It was fortunate that you were able to take them by surprise."
Adora continued. "Lonnie said that- that you've been lying to us-"
"SHE was the one who was lying!" Said Shadow Weaver, raising her voice. Upon seeing Adora's slightly scared expression, she controlled herself.
"I'm Sorry, Adora. She has become brainwashed by the Princesses. Of course she would lie."
Adora simply looked at the ground.
Shadow Weaver sighed. "Even if it was a village of innocent villagers, Adora, it was still a Rebellion Village. Hard choices have to be made in war."
Adora sighed. "I- I guess."
"I only want what's best for you, Adora. Come, allow me to show you something.
...
Adora was led through a series of corridors which she had never gone through before. Signs said 'RESTRICTED' and 'DO NOT ENTER!'.
Eventually, they came to a room with a few scientists in, as well as a box on a pedestal.
"What is this?" Asked Adora.
"This is a room where we combine magic with technology, Adora. Look." She pointed to the box on the pedestal.
She gestured to it, and Adora stepped Forwards.
As she opened it, she gasped.
A sword sat in the box. It was shaped like a katana, Black blade with a dark maroon hilt and guard. She grasped it, and held it up.
"I could only put so much power in it, Adora. Test it out." She snapped her fingers, and the scientists departed, one pulling a lever before they left.
Out of the ground rose a Boss Bot.
"Swing the Sword, Adora." Said Shadow Weaver.
Adora did as instructed. As she did so, an arc of energy and electricity appeared. It almost immediately flew at the bot, slicing it in two.
Adora gasped. Shadow Weaver clicked her fingers, and more Boss Bots rose out.
Adora swung again. The arc sliced through one Bot, the electricity bouncing to two others, short-circuiting them and blowing them up. Adora then leaped forwards and sliced the leg off the final bot. When it aimed at her, she sliced at it again, this time through it's body, and making it blow up.
"Well done, Adora. I was intending to give it to you next month, but if Lonnie has a sword, and has become a Princess, then you must even the odds."
Adora looked at the sword's blade, seeing her reflection in it.
She would save Lonnie, no matter what.
...
Lonnie: MythaWolf made a great Intro.
Glimmer: Could be better. I could have have been buff.
Bow: No.
Catra: You would look stupider than you already do.
Glimmer: You wanna try me, Cat?
*They go into fighting stances*
MythaWolf: Stop! You are my two favourite Characters, and I am in charge of this story, so do not beat each other up!
Octavia: You're a rubbish author, anyway!
*MythaWolf presses a button, and a Trapdoor opens beneath Octavia*
Catra: Good riddance.
HEYOOOO! You like the intro? The reason I did Lonnie not being attacked by a camp is that, well, I really don't like that sort of episode, to be honest. You know, when people get the wrong idea and the protagonist gets into trouble because of it?