This story is highly based off the story 'Judgemental' written by ForgeUpwards. A Harry potter story with a similair story. I read that two chapter long story and enjoyed it greatly, so I was really dissapointed when I saw that the last update was Augustus 6 2009.
So I thought by myself, why don't I write a story similair to it, but slightly different and with my own ideas? So here it is.
I was walking in Dragon Alley with my mother, furiously trying to ignore the looks I was being given by wizards. Is it too much to not be judged by my name? Given by the looks I was given, I guess not.
But what did I expect? I was the granddaughter of the dark lord. I guess they had reason enough to hate me, I would hate myself too. But still... It's not like I walked up to my grandfather and said something like, "Hey dad, why don't you try to kill Harry potter?" I wasn't even born during that moment.
Everyone had been shocked to discover my mother's and mine existence several years after my father's death. Obviously the shock hadn't worn off yet... I shook my head. I shouldn't think about my poor excuse of a grandfather, I would soon be starting at Hogwarts. I was homeschooled for my first year and would be a second year at Hogwarts.
If I would make friends? I doubted that... But I did want to learn more about magic.
"Lovella?" mother's voice broke through my thoughts.
"Hm?" I actually hated the name 'Lovelle'. I would preffered to be called Hailee, which was my second first name.
"Are you alright?" she asked worriedly.
I faked a smile. "Of course I am, mommy!"
My mother grew up to be very lonely, being the daughter of the Dark lord, which is why she was a bit protective of me.
Mother nodded and looked back in front. She entered a shop. I would have followed her if I hadn't been so focused on a boy running towards me. He collided against me. I let out a yelp as I landed on the ground with him on top of me.
I looked up, about to tell that damned person a piece of my mind, but stopped when I saw him.
"Whoa! Sorry. You're alright?" I allowed the boy to help me stand up. The sight of the boy's face made me speechless.
His hair was golden blond and he had the most pretty blue eyes I had ever seen. gulp. I opened my mouth and then closed it again, like a fish.
The boy grinned. "Enchante. My name is Louis Weasley. And what's your name?" He struck his hand out and I timidly shook it.
Wow, wait a minute...Weasley? Louis? "You're Bill and Fleur's son, am I right?"
"The one and only one." Much to my surprise he slung an arm around my shoulder. "And you are...?"
I bit my lip. "Lovella Riddle..."
He stared at me with a blank look before smiling. "Well, you're not a dangerous 'future dark lord' like my uncle Ron described. You look pretty cute though."
I bristled and he laughed. "Calm down kitty, I was just kidding. About the 'dark lord' part, since I genuinely think you're cute-" I blushed. "My family is on a extended vacation in France and since I didn't want to stay any longer here in France, I just decided to go to my uncle Ron's. Want to hang out together for a while?"
I frowned. "I'm supposed to stay with my mother!"
He smirked. "I don't see your mother anywhere.." Oh shit. "So you might as well come with me." So I ended up walking next to him, unable to break free off his grip and not really wanting to since this is the first time I hung out with someone of my age.
Louis suddenly pulled me into a Quidditch store, declaring that he was going to buy me a present. "Louis?" We stopped and turned around.
A cute boy with black hair and green eyes walked towards us with curiosity. "Dad and uncle Ron are really worried since you've disappeared-" I shot the blonde a look, who looked away and started whistling. "Who is that girl?"
"Lovella, this boy is my cousin Albus-" As in Albus Potter? "Al, this pretty girl here is Lovella."
Albus stared at me with slight surprise. "As in Lovella Riddle?"
I nodded.
"Okay..." Albus turned around to run away but Louis grabbed his arm and dragged him inside the store.
The poor man at the counter almost had aheart a heart attack when he saw me. I wanted nothing more than to bury my face in my hands.
"A-Albus Potter and L-Louis Weasley." The old man decided to ignore me, which seemed perfectly normal for me. "What can I do for you?"
Albus crossed his arms. "Nothing. This thing here-" He gestured at Louis. "Dragged me inside."
Louis, ignoring his cousin, said, " I need a new pair of keeper gloves and my friend here needs a new broom."
"Wha-" Albus gasped at Louis and I nearly choked on my own tongue.
We just met, my grandfather killed his uncle, I was the granddaughter of Tom Riddle, and-and- I could list so many reasons why Louis' idea was absurd.
"You don't have to!" I whispered as the man hurried to the back room.
"I want to." Louis smiled at me. "And the Weasley family has enough money anyway..."
Albus let out a groan. "Just wait until uncle Ron finds out about this..."
The man walked back in the room with two packages in his hands. The shopkeeper handed Louis his Keeper gloves and asked, without looking at me, "Miss Riddle wants to choose a broom herself, I suppose?"
Louis shook his head. "No, I choose. Lov knows nothing about brooms." Albus snorted and I frowned. We watched as he skimmed through the broom handbook. "Here." He exclaimed happily. Albus and I looked over his shoulders. Louis was pointing at a broom I had never seen before which was named "The Eclipse".
The shopkeeper walked off to retrieve the broom. "The Eclipse got an Unbreakable Braking Charm and excellent speed." Louis told me. After that Louis paid for the broom we left.
Louis dragged me everywhere that day; to Gringotts, to get what little actual money was in my vault, then Madame Malkin's for robes, and many other Wizarding supplies. All that time, Albus trailed behind us, looking like he wanted to be everywhere except here. I don't blame him...
I would love to be friends with him, but I already know that it would be impossible for the son of Harry Potter to want to become my friend.
I blinked when we were standing in front of Ollivanders. "He reopened his shop?" I asked surprised.
"Only about two years ago." Louis was the one who answered because Albus was still too reluctant to talk with me. Louis leaded me inside. Ollivander seemed to appear out of nowhere and flinched when he saw me.
"She's here for a wand, not to murder you," Louis said, rolling his eyes.
The man sighed and hurried down the rows. He took a box and trusted it at me. I opened it and held the wand inside it with a firm grip. Sparks erupted from the tip of the wand. I didn't expect for the wand to choose me so quick. "How did you know?" I asked.
"It's in the family." Was his answer.
"I'm not like my grandfather!" I snapped. I grabbed some Gaellons from my money bag, threw them at Ollivander's feet, pushed Albus out of the way and left the store. I attracted more attention now that I was half-sprinting. I suddenly felt myself falling.
Someane had grabbed my legs. I screamed and started kicking them.
"Ouch! Lov, cut it out!" Oops...
I sat up immediately. Louis was rubbing his jaw, two of his teeths had been knocked loose. Albus stared at me with anger.
"I'm sorry..." I whispered. I pointed my wand at him; for a moment Louis' eyes widened in terror and Albus looked ready to grab his wand, but then Louis' teeth were fixed and I buried the wand back in my boot.
"How... did you do that?" Albus asked softly. I noticed that it was the first time he spoken to me.
"I was homeschooled last year." Louis stared at me. I tilted my head. "Hm?"
He chuckled. "Nothing." He held up his hands. "I bought your stuff."
"You ran with it?"
"Of course. I'm really athletic. Come on, get up." For the second time, Louis pulled me up to my feet.
Albus coughed. We looked at him. "Look Lovella, I'm sorry for judging you without really talking to you... Despite who your father is, you don't seem so bad." He smiled at me. I smiled back.
Louis wrapped his arms around our shoulders. "Yaay! My cousin and my future girlfriend are getting along fine!"
"Future girlfriend?" I asked.
He smiled and stuck his tongue out. "Just kidding."
I suddenly heard running behind me. I turned my head a bit to look. It was my mother. Like expected, she started to scream.
"LOVELLA! WHAT WERE YOU THINKING?! DO YOU EVEN KNOW HOW WORRIED I WAS WHEN I SAW THAT YOU WEREN'T WALKING BEHIND ME ANYMORE?! HOW DARE YOU RUN OFF LIKE THAT?!" Louis, Albus and I took a step back. My mum can be terrifying when she's mad.
Witches and wizards were looking at us. Then mum rounded on Albus and Louis. "AND YOU TWO! HEY YOU PUT YOUR HANDS OFF HER!-" Louis let go of me. "WHY DID YOU TAKE MY DAUGHTER AWAY FROM ME YOU IRRESPONSIBLE LITTLE BRATS! IF AURORS HAD GOTTEN THEIR HANDS ON HER, WOULD YOU HAVE BEEN ABLE TO PROTECT HER? I DON'T THINK SO-"
"Lana." The calm voice made me sigh in relief, because Louis was looking murderous and Albus looked like he could faint every moment. Lana turned to look at Ron and Harry, who appeared behind her. Ron's face was a thundercloud.
"I'll thank you not to yell at my nephews!" He snapped, coming to stand between Louis and Albus. "That girl-"
"Ron!" Harry glared at his friend. "I think it would be better if you take Albus and Louis-"
"What? No!" Louis protested.
"Daad!" Albus whined.
"Home." Harry finished, ignoring his son's and nephews protests.
Ron nodded. "Yeah, I think that would be a good idea. And I will have a word with Louis' father too."
"Merde! Uncle Ron, don't!" Louis begged.
Ron forcefully dragged the two boys away.
"This isn't fair at all!" Louis yelled. "I want to get to know her better."
"Stop treating us like kids!" Albus added.
Ron was deaf to their protests and they soon dissaparated.
Harry rubbed his scar. "Lovella, please don't do that again. Ron and I nearly had a heart attack trying to find you three."
I looked away. Harry and Ron had obviously thought that I had dragged Louis and Albus away to kill them off. Adults...
My mother wrapped her arm around my shoulder. "Anything else?"
"See you on the first of September," he said briefly before walking away. He dissaparated not far away.
"Come on, dear, let's go home." Lana said.
I gulped. I was suddenly feeling really scared to go to Hogwarts...
That's it, I know that it's pretty short but the next chapter will be longer, I promise.
R and R please ;D