(Warning: About to go on a vulgar filled rant in 3...2...1...)
So I just got attacked earlier today on one of my other stories by this fucking internet troll who apparently has nothing better to do than insult other peoples work. For those of you who do not know I am working on a My little Pony story on top of this and I'm like, sixteen chapters in, and this stupid ass loser went through all and left a review on all sixteen chapters spewing nothing but bullshit criticism. I'm going to leave a few here for you to see.
Review for chapter one. YOU SUCK BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
Review for chapter two. THIS IS A GARBAGE STORY
Review for chapter three. AWFUL! HORRIBLE! MY STORIES ARE BETTER BY ALL MEANS
Review for chapter four. YOU ARE GARBAGE!
Those are just a few of the hateful shit he gave me but notice in these four he never once said why he doesn't like my story instead jut resulted to insults and hate. He says that his stories are better but this guy used a guest account meaning there is absolutely no way to prove this guy can even write a story much less prove that his work is better than mine.
Now I know I'm not the best writer on this website, there are people worlds better than me, but by know means does that mean you can be hurtful and mean just because I'm not a fucking professional here. If you don't like my work, that's fine at least be nice and tell me what you don't like about it, or better yet just don't say anything at all. I've read plenty of stories on here that I don't like, but instead of being a dick about it I instead just didn't say anything, this asshole though instead decided to try to make me feel like a horrible writer and person.
To this reviewer I will not name I got this to say, grow up! Nobody likes a fucking internet troll, no one enjoys flames. You are a fucking coward for writing your reviews as a guest knowing that I cannot respond to you. Because if I did you would sure as hell not like what I would have to say to you. I pray you grow up and mature and realize that there is no place in this world for bullies like you. And if I see you attacking one of mine or someone else's stories again like you did earlier I will report your ass before you can have time to apologize.
I have no place for any internet trolls in my stories, I don't mind constructive criticism but if your going to be a dick, if your going to be a troll, than it's better off that you not say anything at all. I work hard on these stories, I put in a lot of time into something that I don't make money on because I enjoy doing it. Please do not take the joy away from me. Be nice, that's all I got to say.
On the other side of the world in Paris France, Suki was flying the Watchdog's company jet boarded with Jack Frost, and Peabody. After more than a decade of not being able to fly after the accident with the Split stream, Suki was able to find a way to get her pilot license back despite the affects from her Chronal accelerator. For the past seven years Suki had been flying the Watchdogs to every mission, as well as vacation spots, and even took the jet out grocery shopping a couple of times. Branch had told her more than once that the jet was only supposed to be used for missions only, but after more than a decade of not being able to fly a damn jet due to her accident Suki was going to fly that thing to as many places as possible.
That wasn't the only exciting thing that had happened to Suki in the past nine years. Five years ago her and Lena had decided to adopt a baby girl. Despite the constant danger the world was in, and despite the fast that Suki was away from home a lot, that still wasn't going to keep her from starting the family she always dreamed of with Lena, and now with her little girl Emily's fifth birthday around the corner, Suki was hoping that they would be able to end this war soon so Emily could live the best parts of her childhood without fear of one of her mom's dying out there in the field.
"We will be approaching Paris soon loves," Suki said over the intercom, please raise your tables up and strap in, and also feel free to look at the beautiful sights that Paris has to offer. If you look closely to the left you will see the Eiffel Tower, one of the most prestigious tourist attractions in the world.
"Suki," Peabody replied behind her "We are not here for sight seeing, we are hear on a mission."
"Does that mean I can't pick up a birthday present for Emily while I'm here?"
"There is only three of us," Jack pointed out "Do you really think that is enough for this mission?"
Peabody smiled, trying to stay confident, though deep down he had to admit he was nervous himself. "As long as we stick together we should be fine."
Peabody looked down a couple pictures of his team, both past and present. Branch had gone to Haiti to try to talk Tooth into rejoining the crusade, Shifu, Hiccup, Astrid and Reby, were off on other assignments but promised they would arrive to back them up as soon as possible, but as the three of them arrived at Paris, the more Peabody doubted that any of their friends, past or present was going to come to their aid. Setting the pictures down he rubbed his index and forefinger over the most recent picture of their team. It was from their last Christmas Party, Suki was wearing a elf costume, Branch was in the most ugliest Christmas party they had ever seen, Jack was in a Santa outfit and Reby was standing on top of her mech suit which was decorated in Christmas lights like a house.
"If your going to show," Peabody said softly so no one could hear the concern in his voice. "Now would be a good time."
"Attention everyone," Suki replied "This is your captain speaking, we has now arrived to our destination, you may now turn on your electronic devises as well as weapons of mass destruction. Weather today is mostly cloudy with a one hundred percent of..." There was a loud explosion ahead of them and the three Watchdogs could see a giant fireball in the middle of downtown Paris "Robot invasion."
"That's our cue," Peabody replied grabbing his Telsla Canon, a giant assault weapon that shot out electricity.
Looking out the window Suki could see the entire street was littered in robots, there was no safe spot to land, within a miles radius. "Peabody, clear us a place to land, we will be right behind you."
Peabody laughed "You better be." Opening the hanger door. There had to be at least a couple hundred maybe more robots, all attacking a single part of town. This definitely was not going to be easy with just the three of them.
"Peabody, why are the robots attacking now?" Jack asked looking down at the invasion below them.
"I don't know Jack, but the people down there need our help, and right now we are all they got." Leaping from the jet, Peabody landed right in the middle of a swarm of robots. The robots was firing at a couple of police officers working desperately to shield a little girl from the oncoming invasion. Peabody landed on top of one of the robot's ripping it's head off it's body and using the built in machine gun in it's wrist to fire at three more robots.
With the first four robot's down Peabody turned to the female officer who stared at Peabody with complete confusion.
"Bonjour Officer, we are here to help." With a roar Peobody turned towards the rest of the robots and firing his electricity gun he charged at them.
"Was that a puppy?" the little girl hiding behind the officer asked pointing towards Peabody.
Suki had to give Peabody this, despite his size and relatively calm demeanor he could clear a army of robots pretty fast. Within a little under ten minutes Peabody had enough of the road cleared for Suki to land the plane. Perfect timing too, because the robots was starting to catch on to Peabody's attacks and was adapting to them. The robots started to pile on him and pin him down. Peabody leapt into the air to try to land onto a robot but instead the robot saw him and grabbed onto his leg, slamming Peabody onto the ground. Four more Robots suddenly showed up, three on them grabbed his other limbs and the other held his head down while a sixth robot walked over loading up his gun to shoot Peabody down. The robot pointed at Peabody's head only to suddenly find icicles impaled through it's head as well as through the bodies of the other five robots.
"Good work Jack."
"Thanks."
"Watch, your back," Suddenly Suki sped up and shot a robot trying to attack Jack from behind.
Blasting down a few more robots Peabody dragged a car tilted over on it's side to shield himself and the civilians from the ongoing attack.
"Get the civilians to the ship," Peabody ordered Jack.
"You got it."
Suddenly the ground below them started to shake.
"Um, what was that?" Jack asked concerned.
Suddenly a giant robot the size of a skyscraper stepped out behind the tower of skyscrapers in the city. The three watchdogs gasped in shock and horror as it pointed it's giant guns in their directions.
"Get down!" Peabody shouted as the robot shot it's massive guns causing everybody to scatter for safety.
The guns was just the beginning though, in the middle of the robot's chest a giant red ray started to light up.
"Get to cover!" The Watchdogs tried to get to their jet but it suddenly got hit by the ray, split in half and exploded. Jack saw the ray heading towards a cop and the young girl, putting up a ice wall, the wall protected the two of them from the explosion from the explosion but it caused him to get caught in the explosion as a result and thrown backwards, slamming into a overturned bus. Peabody himself was thrown several feet and hit his head against the asphalt and was knocked out for a few seconds.
When he awoke his ears was ringing his vision was blurred. Despite the ringing though he could hear Suki calling for him with panic in her voice.
"Peabody!" Coughing, and his body aching in basically everywhere one's body could ache, Peabody slowly got up and saw Suki holding Jack in her arms, the cop and the girl he put a ice shield up to rescue was hovering over him.
"Stay with me Jack, your going to be okay, Peabody!" Peabody ran over towards where his to agents was and his eyes widened when he saw Jack. He was conscious but barely, he had several burn marks all over his face, arms and legs.
"Jack"
"He can't walk," Suki replied in panic, "He is hurt bad, he needs help. We can't stay here!"
Peabody turned and looked at the giant robot destroying the city, and the hundreds of civilians fleeing for safety. The photo of the Watchdogs, now burnt flew up to him from the ship rubble. Looking at the photo of his team, his family, he remembered how many agents they had lost fighting this war, he thought that the three of them might be enough, but he was wrong, if they didn't flee now they would all die. But he couldn't let the innocent civilians die, someone had to stay behind and hold this giant robotic monster off while everyone fled. Sighing he knew it had to be him, Branch wasn't here, he was in charge of this team, this mission. The Watchdogs was his responsibility while Branch was away. He knew it was suicide but if it was the only was Suki, Jack and the people of Paris survived, then it had to be done.
"Suki, get everyone out of here, I will hold the line."
"But..." Jack moaned as he tried to move, to no avail, "You said to stick together."
Peabody sighed but tried to talk positive to give Jack and Suki hope, even if it wasn't much. "Don't worry, I will be right behind you."
Suki could see right through Peabody though, she knew what he was about to do. She just preyed he would somehow make it out. "You better be."
Grabbing his weapon Peabody emerged out of his hiding spot and turned to face the giant robot. Suki and the cop helped Jack to his feet as they fled. Suki and Jack both turned to look at their team leader one last time, knowing what he was about to do was suicide. The robot looked down at Peabody, who just gave the metal beast a wicked smirk, refusing to show any signs of fear, if he was going to die right here, he refused to die scared.
What nobody saw was a hooded figure with a staff running across the rooftop towards Peabody's position. As the giant robot charged up another blast the hooded figure jumped in front of Peabody, and deflected the blast with his staff, causing the blast to bounce off the staff and blast several of the smaller robots instead as well as knock the giant robot back a few feet.
Suki, Jack and everyone turned to see what just happened. The hooded figure didn't say a word as he lifted off his hood and stared at the others, causing their eyes to light up in glee.
"Shifu!" Peabody gasped
Shifu didn't reply, he just took out three throwing stars and tossed them at three more robots hitting them right between their metallic eyes before taking out his staff again and charging off at a high speed, striking down as many robots as he could.
Shifu didn't come alone though, everyone turned as they heard the loud sound of a Night Fury approaching. Toothless fired a blast at the robots as Hiccup and Astrid jumped off the fiery beast. Hiccup slammed his fire sword into the ground causing a giant ring of fire to shoot out and blast several more robots to pieces. Astrid threw her ax and watched as it ricocheted off several robots, slicing right through them before it returned to her like a boomerang.
"Yes!" Suki squealed shaking Peabody in excitement. "The Calvary's here!" Taking out her two pistols Suki zipped away to return to the battlefield, a new wave of confidence fueling her.
A giant pink mech suit came flying in, firing blasts at the robots below. Flying past Peabody Reby, saluted her superior. "Hello Peabody"
" Diva!" Peabody saluted back, calling her soldier by the code name she requested when she first joined.
Lastly Tooth floated down like a angel, her wings causing a bright light to blind the enemy as she took her staff and pressed it on Jack's injuries.
"Let's get you back in the fight."
With reinforcements finally here the team was able to clear off the smaller robots easily, but the bigger robot was had just found his second wind. Approaching the Watchdogs it charged it's ray and fired another blast at the heroes causing Hiccup and Astrid to put up their shields to protect their team mates from the deadly ray.
"How are we going to stop this thing?" Tooth asked.
Peabody thought it over before a second before he turned to Jack.
"Jack, can you create a small ice bomb that could freeze the thing from the inside on detonation."
"I could, but we would need something to set it off."
"My Pulse bomb should be able to do the trick." Suki replied
"Of course, the pulse bomb connected with the ice should be able to cause a blast big enough to take that thing down. But how are we going to get inside that thing."
"You clear a path and just leave the rest to me!" Suki replied as she handed Jack one of her bombs. Jack created a a ice container and filled it with cold liquid before putting the bomb in.
"The liquid will freeze on contact once your bomb goes off." Jack replied handing Suki the container. "You got thirty seconds, good luck."
"Won't need it."
"It's getting hot," Hiccup complained as he felt the heat from the way heating up his shield "Whatever you are going to do, do it now!"
"We need a distraction if I'm going to reach the power cord!" Suki replied.
"I'm on it!" Reby said from the sky. Shooting at the robot, the robot turned off the ray and turned it's attention towards Reby.
"Come and get me you over sized trash can."
With the robot distracted Suki sped off, running up the robot's leg to get inside it's power core. The robot looked down and saw Suki coming, it lifted it's arm to attempt to squash Suki where she stood. Shifu saw it though and, saying a chant in Chinese, he swung his staff and released the dragon spirit inside that sliced right through the robot's arm allowing Suki to reach the power cord.
Setting the bomb inside the power cord she rewound and in the blink of the eye she was back with the team just in time to see the bomb explode. Causing the giant to freeze and shatter to pieces.
The ice bomb also caused a cloud of flurries to fall in the middle of downtown causing the young girl to playfully chase Jack's robot as the team celebrated.
"Victory is our's my friends!" Hiccup cheered.
"Hey Suki," Astrid replied patting her troll friend on the shoulder.
"Took you long enough." Suki replied
"Sorry, we would of been here sooner but Hiccup just had to stop and have lunch."
"I can't fight on a empty stomach." Hiccup replied in his defense.
The cop who had been on the scene walked up to the heroes as they continued to celebrate. "You saved us all. Whatever happened in the past, I for one am glad you are back. Thank you."
"Just doing our jobs," Peabody replied.
Tooth smiled to herself, they did save them, she helped save more as a Watchdog then she ever did as a regular nurse. Now she knew why she was here. This was how she was going to save lives. Now more than ever, she was with the Watchdogs to the end.