I thought this story will have 10 chapters but it really will have 9, unless I write an epilogue. I can't believe I'm the only one who had this idea. I'd love it if other people wrote their own Magical Girl Island type stories. I just want to vent about W.I.T.C.H. for a second, because since their New Power transformations are more modest, the skirts still have obscenely long slits and the shorts are obscenely short. Their regular outfits are usually more modest but sometimes not. Meanwhile in Miraculous Ladybug, the magical outfits are tight but they cover everything, and their civilian outfits are very modest. If only more TV shows would promote modesty. I wrote a theme song but it may not be in every chapter. I plan on writing a one-shot on how their identities were discovered, and I have other stories written.
"Last time on Magical Girl Island," Chris narrated, "the final five each had to battle a loser from Playa Des Losers. Since the fights were over too quickly, starting from Taranee and Ryuko's fight, the girls had to fight while a mutant flower breathed fire at them. The fight was still short, and before the last two fights even started, Cornelia teleported it away. The Guardians won this challenge, and Rena Rouge was voted off. Will Ladybug win this round, or will she lose? Find out now on Magical...Girl...Island!"
Theme Song
We were ordinary teenage girls,
Then we got powers to save the world,
We used to have secret identities
Now there are no more mysteries
Now that we are famous
We ran out of monsters to defeat
So we can't wait to compete
It's Miraculouses vs. W.I.T.C.H.
And one of us will end up rich
Now that we are famous
Now that we, now that we
Now that we are famous!
Now that we, now that we
Now that we are famous!
The final four were sitting together at breakfast since it was a shame for Ladybug to sit alone(they also told her she could sleep in their cabin).
"Okay, are you guys ready?" Chris asked as he strolled in. "For this season," he continued, "we had to make some new rules. One new rule is that when one team is down to one person, that girl will fight the other team one on one. If she wins the majority of fights, she'll still compete on her own but she'll have one less competitor. If she loses, she'll be sent to Playa des Losers and the others will compete against each other. For this challenge, Ladybug will have five minutes to hide anywhere on the island, including the lake around it, and each Guardian will have to track her down and fight her. By each fight and when tracking Ladybug, everything goes which means the Guardians can fly, just remember to not do anything that will cause great bodily harm to the other girl. Slight bodily harm to the other girl is allowed and encouraged. The girl who is incapacitated in any way for ten seconds loses. Now let's go outside and start."
Five minutes after Ladybug ran and hid, Chris said,"Irma, you're first." Irma used her element to try to find Ladybug, which took some time because first she was searching the island which was pretty big, and she had to depend on whatever moisture was around. She finally got a mental image of her underwater by the beach, breathing with a red with black spots snorkel.
Irma made her way to the lake and used her powers to bring Ladybug to the surface. "I guess we have to fight now," she said.
"Yes you do," came Chris's voice from the loudspeaker, "and to spice it up, you'll be chased by bees!" A swarm of bees came out of nowhere, causing the girls to run screaming into the lake.
"Hello, some action please," Chris said over the loudspeaker.
Irma used water to shoot the bees out of the air, but Chris put a stop to that by sending a giant pipe into the lake which sucked the girls up and spit them on the shore. "No hiding in the lake, and if you do, you'll just be removed again," he announced.
The girls resumed screaming and running while defending themselves with magical blasts(Irma) and a force-field(Ladybug, by spinning her yo-yo), and Chris continued demanding that they fight each other.
Wanting to get rid of the bees and to shut Chris up, Irma conjured up balls of water and trapped the bees in them, then she rose into the air, flew over the lake, and summoned a giant wave which carried Ladybug all the way to the woods.
Chef, who was flying over the are in the plane ever since the fight started, lowered a giant screen which showed a countdown. When the number zero flashed on the screen, Chris announced, "Irma wins!" as Ladybug sat in the woods catching her breath while some fish flopped around next to her. "Now Ladybug," he continued, "you better go hide so Taranee can find you."
Five minutes later, after Irma returned to where her friends were and Ladybug hid somewhere else, Taranee used her telepathy to track Ladybug. Ladybug was deeper in the woods, so that was where Taranee headed.
When she reached Ladybug, Chris said over the loudspeaker, "time to fight, ladies, and this time to spice it up, you'll be chased by robots!" A door appeared in one of the trees and several robotic bears walked out and lumbered towards them.
Ladybug did most of the work since Taranee didn't want to cause a forest fire and she knew fire and electricity didn't mix, but Chris just sent more and more robots after them and Ladybug was getting overwhelmed. Jumping into a tree, she summoned a Lucky Charm, and got a red with black spots fire extinguisher.
Meanwhile, a fed up Taranee blasted the robots with a wave of magic that destroyed them, then conjured up a fireball and aimed it at Ladybug. Ladybug pulled the pin and covered Taranee in foam which put out her fireball. The foam also made it hard for her to conjure up more, and as she tried doing so, a screen popped out of a tree and started a countdown.
"Ladybug wins!" Chris announced when the countdown reached zero and Taranee still hadn't produced a fireball. "Now will she win against Hay Lin, or will she lose and be sent down the Dock of Shame?" he continued. As Taranee went back to her friends, Ladybug went to hide for the last time.
Fivees later, Hay Lin used her element to track Ladybug to the base of the thousand-foot-high mountain. When Hay Lin got there, Chris announced, "to spice this fight up, you will fight during a hailstorm!" Immediately, hailstones, and pretty large ones at that, started raining down on the two girls.
In between protecting themselves with wind or a yo-yo force-field, the girls tried to blow away or entangle the other one up.
Hay Lin concentrated and sucked all the hailstones into a whirlwind, then chased Ladybug around with the whirlwind until she got sucked up as well. After several seconds, she then had the whirlwind spit Ladybug out.
Ladybug was bruised and disoriented, but she quickly got up and jumped from tree to tree so the other girl wouldn't be able to aim at her.
Hay Lin just made another whirlwind, sucked Ladybug into it, and made it spin faster and longer before having it spit Ladybug out. This time, she was too dizzy to get up right away. A screen popped out of the mountain and started a countdown.
"The Guardians won which means Ladybug has to walk down the Dock of Shame!" Chris announced after the countdown reached zero. "Also, since we won't be having an elimination ceremony, we'll be showing videos of Ladybug instead."
That night, they all watched clips of Ladybug from that day's challenge and all the other challenges while eating s'mores. Chris did have a lot of marshmallows left and he decided they should be put to good use. When they were done, Ladybug walked down the dock and onto the Boat of Losers.
"With Ladybug gone, the three remaining Guardians will be competing among each other to see who's the best," Chris said as smiled at the camera. "Who will win and earn the cash and the title of Ultimate Magical Girl? Find out next time on Magical...Girl...Island!"
Two more chapters to go! I tried making the fight scenes longer, but they are all experienced fighters and I doubt they'd drag fights out. I am biased towards WITCH but I tried to make the outcomes of this challenge realistic. While Lucky Charm is powerful, Ladybug is limited to that and she usually needs time to figure out how to use it while the Guardians can just blast her. And even though she also has her yo-yo, the Guardians can easily blast it away. Please tell me how you think a battle between Ladybug and friends and the Guardians will turn out.