Hey, what's up everyone. I'm doing a request story with crafordbrian17 for the Loud House. This might be either a one-shot or a two-chapter story. Now this is basically his idea, and I'm here to request it. Hope you enjoy this story.
Is a normal day at the Loud House. But today is a special day, Lori, Leni, Luna, and Luan are going to have a picnic with their friends. We see Lori, Luna, and Luan making sandwiches enough for everyone to eat. However, the only one who isn't making any sandwiches is Leni. The only job she's doing is putting drinks, napkins, snacks, and other things in the basket. She's a bit disappointed that she's not helping to make the sandwiches for their friends at the picnic.
"Why am I the only one who is like putting stuff in the basket? Why can't I help make sandwiches" Leni asks her three sisters with Lori not looking at her.
"We told you Leni that you're ban from making anymore sandwiches." Said Lori not looking at her.
"Why?" Leni asks.
"Because the last time you made them, it gave all of us food poisoning." Said Luan reminding Leni the expired sandwiches she made before they're first vacation.
"I wanted us be prepared since we can't stop anywhere to eat." Said Leni.
"We appreciated your determined to help Sis. But you could've made them the day before tomorrow. We were barfing as if we're on a crazy train like a roller coaster!" Said Luna not liking the memory of all that barfing.
"Which is why we ban you from making any sandwiches in the future." Said Lori.
Much for Leni disappointment, she knows they're right. As soon, they finished making the sandwiches for their friends. Lori got a checkboard to make sure they got everything they need.
"Okay, let's go over and make sure we're not forgetting anything. Picnic Basket?" Said Lori.
"Check!" Luna shouted.
"Food?"
"Check!" Luan shouted.
"Picnic Blanket?"
"Check!" Shouted Leni holding a white bedsheet.
"Um, Leni? That's a bedsheet… not a picnic blanket." Said Lori which Leni took a closer look at the sheet she's holding.
"Dang it." Said Leni.
After getting the picnic blanket. Lori, Leni, Luna, and Luan got in Vanzilla with Leni holding the basket. Rita and Lynn Sr standing in the yard with Lori pulling the window down "We're off!" Said Lori.
"Be careful Lori. Don't want you and your sisters get hurt." Said Rita worrying about her daughter's safety.
"That's right. Watch out for any bears! Bears will try and steal the picnic baskets!" Said Lynn Sr.
"BEAR?!" Shouted Leni afraid "Are we going to run into bears?!"
"Dad bears literally don't steal picnic baskets." Said Lori pretty calm "And besides there's Park Ranger's to make sure."
"Well, better safe than sorry." Said Lynn Sr.
Lori put the gear in reverse backing out. As they're on the road they wave at they're parent's before driving away. They're parent's watch as their children driving off. Rita looked at Lynn Sr with a odd look.
"Bears? Where did you get that idea?" Rita asks.
"From that weird show about two bears. One tall bear with a hat and a tie, and the short bear with a bow tie." Said Lynn Sr looking at his wife which she gave him a disapprove look.
"Lynn, that's Yogi Bear you're watching." Rita telling Lynn Sr that it's a kid show which Lynn Sr slapped his forehead.
"Dang it!" Shouted Lynn Sr.
The four sisters got to the picnic site where they're friends are at. Everyone they know is here Carol, Whitney, Becky, Dana, Chaz, Mandee, Jackie, Maggie, Sam, Mazzy, Benny, Fiona, Miguel, Ruby, Teri, Amy, Lyberti, Parvanna, Rex, and Shannon.
"For the last time Leni, there are no bears around this area." Said Lori keep telling Leni about no bears.
"But Lori you heard Dad! There might be bears trying to steal our picnic basket!" Said Leni very worried.
"If there are bears in this area, we would know." Said Lori.
"Yeah Leni, so relax. Seeing you worry is un-bearible! HAHAHA! Get it?" Luan joked which her siblings groan "But seriously, you need relax."
"What's this about bears?" Said Carol walking up to the Loud Sisters with Chaz, Sam, and Benny.
"Oh, hey Carol. Dad warned us to keep an eye out for bears." Said Lori explaining.
"Well, the last time we checked there aren't any bears in this area." Said Benny.
"That's what we kept telling Leni." Said Luna pointing at Leni.
"Well, I hope we get to eat soon. I'm starving." Said Chaz rubbing his stomach.
"Didn't you just eat a large sub sandwich few minutes ago?" Sam asks reminding him.
"That was just an appetizer." Chaz pointed it out "And besides, I'm still famished."
"Chaz you have the biggest belly. It's like you have a blackhole inside of you." Said Carol pointing at Chaz stomach "I'm pretty sure you'll eat everything we brought."
"Hey, I'll still leave some for you guys." Said Chaz.
"Yeah, it's okay if Chaz eat a lot." Said Leni as she stands beside him.
"Well, as long we have plenty." Said Carol but looked at the Loud Sisters "You did bring plenty right?"
"Don't worry Duette. We got plenty of food with us." Said Luna with Leni showing the basket to them.
"That's good to know." Said Sam.
"Well, aren't we going to have a nice picnic? Or stand around like scarecrows?" Asked Lori as Leni looked confused.
"Wait, are we like scarecrows?" Asked Leni confused.
Not bothering to correct her. Lori grabbed Leni by the wrist dragging with her. While everyone else followed suit to join the others. Seeing everyone brought their own picnic baskets as they about to enjoy a perfect day to eat lunch.
Luan sits with her friends Benny, Maggie, Ruby, Amy, Lyberti, Parvanna, Rex, and Shannon. Luan eating her sandwich as she looked at her friends "What did you guys bring for the picnic?" Luan asked.
"My Mom packed banana cream pie. Which I didn't asks for." Said Maggie gloomy.
"That's look good, because Pie'm all ears for it. HAHAHA! Get it?" Luan joked which made everyone minus Maggie laugh.
"I brought egg salad." Said Benny holding the salad bowl "Just enough for everyone."
"Boy, what a cracking crew we got. HAHAHA! Get it?" Everyone minus Maggie laugh at the pun.
"Me and Amy brought some crisp chicken tenders." Said Ruby showing some chicken tenders.
"Oof, hope we won't chicken out now. HAHAHA!" Luan joked with same result.
"What did you bring Lyberti?" Amy asked.
"Just some pudding." Answered Lyberti brought out pudding cups.
"Let's pudding down, shall we?" Luan joked with the same results.
"Rex? Shannon? What did you two brought?" Ruby asked them.
"Just lemonade. Nothing special." Said Rex as Shannon took out a container with lemonade and cups.
"It's a hot day out. Figure we could bring drinks." Said Shannon.
Everyone looked at Luan waiting what pun she could say next. But after some thinking "I got nothing." Said Luan got nothing to say a joke.
Luna is sitting her girlfriend Sam and their friend Mazzy. Luna has her sandwich cut in half to share with Sam. Mazzy brought Jell-O with chunks of ham in it as they started to chat.
"I got the tickets for Mick Swagger concert." Said Mazzy as Luna eyes widen with excitement.
"Really?! Are you sure?!" Asked Luna.
"Of course, I'm sure. I manage to get three of them." Mazzy took three Mick Swagger concert tickets for the next week showing "And since you've been a huge fan of his, you get the ticket."
"That's Mazzy!" Luna took one of the tickets.
"Don't think I forget about you Sammy." Mazzy gave Sam a ticket.
"Oh boy… its going to rock!" Said Luna who has her arm wrapped around Sam's shoulders.
"I bet it would as always Lune." Said Sam smiling at Luna.
We the see Leni with her boyfriend Chaz. Her friends Fiona, Miguel, Mandee, and Jackie. Seeing everyone brought food, they see Chaz eating a large sub sandwich with ham, tomatoes, cheese, salad, chicken, pickles, and some sauce. In front of him are smashed potatoes in a large bowl, hot wings, and grilled cheese sandwiches. Much to everyone's surprise on how much food Chaz ate. With everyone staring made Chaz looked at them.
"What?" Chaz asked them.
"Wow Chaz, you sure brought a lot. There's basically enough to feed an army of raccoons." Said Miguel comment how much food Chaz brought to the picnic.
"No kidding. Except the raccoon part. I don't want to think about an army of raccoons." Said Fiona which Jackie looked at her.
"What's wrong with raccoons?" Jackie asked.
"Raccoons are nothing but thief's and dirty vermin." Fiona answered.
"I agreed on that. But I'm worried about Chaz health." Said Mandee.
"You don't have to worry about my health." Said Chaz.
"Yeah, Chaz is like very resistance. How else did he won Royal Woods Hot Dog Eating Contest." Said Leni much to everyone agreement.
"Hey Hun, mind sharing some?" Leni asked witch Chaz nodded.
"Of course, I brought enough for everyone." Said Chaz as they grabbed the grill cheese, the wings, and smashed potatoes.
At Lori's group, Lori is having a discussion with her friends Carol, Whitney, and Dana. Which Lori taking a bit from her sandwich "How's your assignment Carol?" Lori asked.
"I'm almost done with my history report." Said Carol.
"What's it about?" Whitney asked.
"About America Founding Fathers." Answer Carol.
"Really? I got about the Civil War assignment." Said Dana which she looked at Lori "What about you Lori? How's things with Bobby?" She asked.
"Everything is going great." Answered Lori smiling.
"Even with him now living in the city with his family?" Asked Carol which Lori nodded.
"I'm glad. I wished there's some way you two be together gain." Said Dana.
"Well, once we're finished with High School, we'll be at Fairway together." Lori told them.
"Isn't that where talented golfers go?" Whitney asked.
"Yep. It's a few miles from Great Lake City, so me and Boo-Boo Bear will able be attending." Said Lori.
"Aren't you going to miss your family?" Carol asked Lori "After all, you're always the one who keep your siblings from tearing the house down."
"No offence, I'm not sure Leni will take up the task to keep your younger siblings under control." Said Dana.
"I'm worried about Leni too. But I'm sure she'll be okay." Said Lori hoping that Leni would be fine without her.
While they're enjoying the picnic. They hear some rustling noises. They all looked where the bushes are as the rustling continues "What the heck is that?" Whitney asked.
"I think its rabbits." Dana told her.
"Ooh, bunny rabbits." Said Leni as she stood up walking over the bushes.
"Leni, I don't think its rabbits." Said Jackie.
"Yeah, it could be a skunk." Said Fiona.
"Or Bambi! HAHAHA! Get it?" Joked Luan.
"If its either of those I'm going to pet one." Said Leni as she reached the bushes "Hello mister rabbit, skunk, or Bambi. Come out, don't be shy."
Two figures shot out from the bushes to reveal to be brown bears. They both gave a roar which cause Leni and everyone to scream. They all quickly ran as the bears gave chase. Everyone running for their lives as the bears running on all fours, chasing them.
"I thought you said there's no bears in this area?!" Leni shouted running by Lori side.
"There literally shouldn't be! The Park Ranger told us that!" Shouted Lori as Carol running by her side.
"He did say this is his first day as Park Ranger!" Carol shouted running.
"I guess someone forgot to tell him about the bears!" Sam shouted with Luna running with her.
"He should have at least asked his co-workers about it!" Shouted Luna.
"Can we talk about it after we lose them!" Chaz shouted pointing at the bears while running gaining on them.
"Oh man! Where's a Park Ranger when you need them?!" Benny asked running with Luan.
"And tell me why we ran away from the cars?! We could've drive away!" Fiona asked running with Ruby by her.
"Maybe because the Author wants to make this story longer!" Said Ruby with Fiona looked at her.
"That's the dumbest explanation I ever heard!" Shouted Fiona angry.
"Hey guys! I see a warehouse! We could hide in there!" Miguel seeing a warehouse in view.
They came into a clearing as they ran to the warehouse. Lori tried to open the doors but found it locked "Oh you got to be kidding! It's lock from the inside!" Said Lori.
Mandee then spotted a vent "There's a vent! We can get in through there!" Said Mandee.
Lori and Carol took the grade off together. One by one they enter through the vent. After Luan and Maggie went through, Chaz went next but got stuck. He tried to move forward and backwards but unable to move.
"Guys, I'm stuck!" Shouted Chaz where Rex, Dana, and Leni are the only ones outside.
"Oh, for the love of…!" Dana tried to push Chaz in by force using her right shoulder then using her back "Why are you so fat Chaz?! If you haven't eaten so many junk foods, we wouldn't be in this situation!"
"Hey, it isn't my fault people made food so good!" Chaz argues with Dana.
"Well, haven't it cross your mind to go on a diet?!" Dana argues back at Chaz while Leni and Rex standing while watching.
"Guys what's the hold up?!" Sam shouted.
"I'm stuck!" Chaz shouted.
"What?! Oh, the love of…! Carol help me get him in here!" Said Lori as she and Carol grabbed hold onto Chaz arms.
They both pulled as Dana continue to push from outside. Leni and Rex then looked at each other.
"Should we like help Dana out?" Leni asked Rex.
"I think she got it." Said Rex but as soon Leni and Rex see the bears, he quickly chances his mind "On second thought… WE BETTER HELP!"
Both Leni and Rex then joined Dana. All three of them starting to push Chaz through the vent. While Lori and Carol pulling Chaz. While trying desperately to push Chaz in, Dana looked to see the bears coming closer. Then an idea pops up. Dana then walked away by a few steps, getting a good distance Dana then ran in full speed. Using her shoulder as a battering-ram, she rammed into Chaz behind. The force from Dana running has able to get Chaz loosen as Lori and Carol pulled Chaz inside which landed on top of them. With Chaz inside Dana, Leni and Rex quickly went through the vent just as the bear's arrived.
"Chaz... you really need to lay off those sub-sandwiches." Said Lori taking in breaths.
"Agreed." Said Carol.
"Yeah... we almost got mauled out there because of you." Comment Dana.
"I'll work on my diet when we get back." Said Chaz which he'll forget to do later.
"Um, guys... what are we going to do?! There's bear's outside and we're trapped in here! How are we going to escape?!" Whitney starting to freak out as she griped her head.
"Okay calm down Whitney. Everything is going to be..." Shannon trying to calm Whitney down only for her to grab her collar.
"Calm down?! HOW CAN I BE CALM WHILE THE BEAR'S ARE RIGHT OUTSIDE!" Whitney yelled shaking her.
"Is it that you don't like bear's? Or is it because you don't them to ruin your dress while they maul you to death?" Becky asked.
"Or is it that you don't them to ruin your pretty hair?" Asked Fiona.
"Speaking of hair, when was the last time you check that round-head you call a hair?" Asked Whitney mocking at Fiona's hair which made everyone gasped.
"OH SNAP!" Said Luna.
Fiona was dumbstruck before glaring at Whitney "Take that back… or else." Said Fiona threating Whitney "Make me… round-hair." Said Whitney glaring right back.
That's when Fiona then attack Whitney by jumping at her. The two are fighting in a dust-cloud, at each other's throats. Teri then stood in the middle breaking up the fight between them. Keeping them from attacking one another.
"That's enough you two! Whitney, I think we suggest by finding a way to escaped." Said Teri.
"Yeah, I'll be happy to get out this spooky place." Said Amy clearly terrified being inside the abandon warehouse.
"I like it. I prefer to hang out at spooky places." Said Maggie who's liking the place.
The place has spiderwebs everywhere, rats with red glowing eyes, roaches crawling, and shadowy figures from old tools hanging around. Miguel looked at Maggie with an uneasy feeling.
"You're really messed up you know, that right?" Asked Miguel.
"I'm pretty aware of it. Which I don't mind." Said Maggie as Luan look at her.
"I bet Lucy would love to meet you." Said Luan.
"Okay now what? What are we going to do?" Mazzy asked everyone.
"Simple, we find a way out of here. And since I have leadership skills, I'll led us." Said Lori volunteering herself as leader.
"Hold on, who died and make you leader?" Fiona question Lori.
"Yeah, we didn't decide who going to be the leader." Said Jackie.
"You're literally questioning someone who has nine younger siblings? Trust me, I know my quirk." Said Lori reminding them that she's the oldest out of all the Loud kids.
"Trust us on this one. She's really good at it." Said Luna.
"Alright people, let's go." With that said everyone then follow Lori. They walked down in a dark hallway.
As they walked down the dark corridor. The group can't help to feel creep out by the atmosphere. Spiderwebs and the sound of water droppings from the old pipes. The only one who isn't creeped out is Maggie since she's used to it.
"The atmosphere here is creepy. I like it." Said Maggie smiling.
"I hate it, it is giving me the creeps." Said Whitney.
"Yeah, I'm getting very unease by this." Said Sam very unsettled by the dark.
"Don't worry Sam, I'm here for you." Said Luna softly which made Sam smile.
Jackie has Leni by the hand since Leni doesn't have sense of direction. Plus, she's gets scared easily. As they walk through the dark, Leni felt something grabbing onto her skirt as she let out scream, making everyone jumped.
"Leni what's wrong?!" Jackie asked her.
"Something grabbed my skirt!" Said Leni.
Jackie looked behind of Leni to see that her skirt is got caught on a loose screw, Jackie sigh in relief "It's alright Leni. Your skirt got stuck on a screw on the wall." She said as everyone sigh. Jackie then got Leni's skirt off the screw.
"Boy this place sure has a lot of spiderwebs." Said Rex which made Leni gasp.
"What if we run into any spiders?" Leni asked clearly afraid of spiders.
"Well, if we see one, all you have to do is squish it with her shoe." Said Jackie which got everyone gross out except Maggie.
"Um Jackie? You do know Leni isn't someone who would kill a bug." Said Dana.
"Yeah, she wouldn't harm a fly." Said Mandee.
"Oh right. I guess I'll kill any spiders that comes too close to Leni then." Said Jackie offering herself to keep any spiders away from Leni.
"By the way…" Chaz started to speak as they resume walking down the hall "Are you guys still mad about me being stuck?"
"Um… yeah." Respond Dana "You nearly got me, Rex, and Leni killed by bears."
"Right… sorry about that." Chaz apologizes.
"Look Chaz, if you weren't so fat your whole life, you wouldn't have gotten stuck in that air vent. Heck, you still look like you're much fatter than usual." Said Fiona insulting Chaz.
"Oh yeah?" Said Chaz glaring at Fiona "I may be fat but look at how plump your hips and legs are."
Fiona grabbed Chaz by the collar and pulled him close as she glares at him "Don't you start criticize me. Either you take back what you said or…' Fiona starting to threat Chaz.
"Okay, okay! Sorry, let's bygones be bygones okay?" Asked Chaz which Fiona let him go.
"Wherever." She said walking pass him with Leni and Jackie walked up to him.
"You okay Chaz?" Leni asked.
"Yeah, surprisingly I am." Respond Chaz.
Then suddenly, a loud crash echoed through the warehouse made everyone jumped. They all looked around "What the heck was that?!" Asked Parvanna extremely nervous. They all look down where the light at the end of the hall where they see two large shadows of the bears coming around the corner "Oh no, the bears got in!" Said Rex with a whisper-yell tone.
"What are we going to do?!" Lyberti freaking out.
"Everyone in here!" Said Lori opening a door close by.
She motions everyone to get in the room. As they all entered the room it was soon discovered it was a very narrow room where everyone is being squeeze in. As soon, Chaz turn to enter he immediately got stuck. And the only other person is outside the door is Dana trying to push him in.
"OH, COME ON!" Shout Dana she took a few steps back before ramming him in.
As soon, everyone is inside Lori then close the door. Only then she realizes the door isn't closing since there's about 23 people inside. Lori pushes the door with more force while everyone is very cramped inside "Okay, maybe this was a bad spot to hide in." Said Lori talking to herself which everyone could hear.
"Oh, you think?!" Shout Whitney "This room is way to small!"
"Not to mention cramped!" Said Carol.
"Why did you think hiding in here is a good idea?!" Ask Becky with Lori still pushing the door.
"Don't blame this on me! There wasn't time to look for a place to hide!" Lori responds.
"Well, at least things won't get any worse." Said Carol.
Suddenly, they heard a rumbling sound. They all look where the source is coming from. Chaz stomach gurgle as he sweats "Uh oh…" Said Chaz.
"Uh oh? What you mean uh oh?" Lori asked.
"Guys I don't want to alarm you but…" Chaz stomach rumbled again.
"Oh no… OH NO! DON'T TELL US!" Begged Whitney.
"I think nature is calling." Said Chaz as another rumbled is heard.
"LORI GET US OUT OF HERE!" Called out Miguel.
"WE'RE GOING TO GET FARTZILLA ON!" Shouted Luan with a pun.
As everyone calling out for Lori, the young teen looks back to see the bears coming closer. She looks back and forth before looking back at the door "Sorry guys!" Lori apologizes taking a few steps back "But you need stay in there until the cost is clear!"
Lori let out a mighty yell using her shoulder to ram the door shut. With the door shut and everyone shouting. Chaz let out the mother of all farts. Everyone then let out screams and disgust groans after Chaz farted in the room. Lori give a sympathy look. Hearing the bears getting closer Lori look behind to see a bookshelf. She quickly kneels down and moved the books out the way so she could hide. As soon, the books are moved away Lori then laid down. At first it was hard but manages to squeeze in, she then put the books in front of her.
As the bears went around the corner, they walked down the hall. They starting to sniff around, trying to track the teens. Lori separate the books to take a better view seeing the bears walking down. Nervously sweating Lori watches as the bears are near the door. Coming to the door the bears sniff some more but rear their head back. Shaking their heads after smelling something really stinks. The bears then continue walking not bothering where the smell is coming from.
As soon, the bears left Lori pushes the books out so she could get out from her hiding spot. Placing her hand on the shelf with the other on the ground she pulled herself out. She then walked to the door and opening it. Once Lori open the door Whitney, Luan, Benny, Miguel, Amy, Mandee, Jackie, Parvanna, and Mazzy fell onto the ground gasping for fresh air. Chaz meanwhile became stuck again on the doorframe.
"Chaz why you stop?" Ask Carol from inside the room.
"I'm stuck." Chaz respond which Carol gave a sigh.
"Okay… Leni would you help me get your boyfriend?" Carol asked Leni.
"Sure thing." Respond Leni.
Both Carol and Leni use their hands and pushed Chaz out. Once he's out everyone else joined the others who are also gasping for air. Shannon stood up as she glares at Lori "Lori… out of any other place to hide. Why did you choose a tiny room for us to hide in?!" Shannon shouted.
"Yeah Loud! Why you chose this room?!" Mandee agreed with Shannon.
"There wasn't time! I have to make a quick decision!" Lori defend herself as she explains "Those bears would have spotted us!"
"Wasn't time my butt! That was the second time I have to pushed Chaz fat-ass through a tight space!" Complained Dana.
"And what's worst… that Chaz farted in there! Seriously Chaz, lay off the sandwich!" Fiona complained to Chaz who chuckled nervously.
"Sorry." Chaz apologizes.
"I was right in front of him… I smell like a skunk spray on me…" Whitney whined.
"Okay just calm down everyone." Said Parvanna.
"Yeah, arguing won't get us anywhere." Lyberti told them.
"They're right. Let's us keep heading forward and away from the bears." Said Lori.
Afterwards they started to walk down the corridor "This warehouse trek is taking forever." Teri complained "Stop complaining." Respond Mazzy. What felt like been a few minutes they arrived at the back of the warehouse. Which sadly became a dead end for them. Much to everyone's frustration.
"Great, just perfect! Now what?!" Whitney shouted.
"We could head back where we came from." Said Sam which everyone looks at her.
"Go back? Where those bears are at?" Ruby question.
"Yeah, that's a huge no." Said Amy "Those bears will tear us from limb to limb."
"Say Carol how much do bears eat anyway?" Benny asked Carol which the blond look at him confused.
"Why do you want to know?" Ask Carol.
"Well, since we're being chased by bears, it won't hurt to ask."
"Well, I did some research on the bears for my assignment. Bears basically eats 90 pounds per day."
"Okay… and how much do humans weigh?"
"For an adult 75 pounds."
"And what about bunch of teenagers?"
"That's 110 pounds."
There's an awkward silence until someone spoke "So you're saying that we're really screwed then." Maggie asked which the teen nodded in response "Fantastic." Maggie sarcastically commented.
"Well now we know who's going to get eaten first." Said Dana staring at Chaz.
"Why are you looking at me?" Chaz asked.
"Because you're basically a walking buffet!" Shouted Dana.
"Hey, you don't need comment on Chaz weight Dana!" Leni defending Chaz.
"Okay dudettes, why not we just calm down." Said Luna.
"Luna is right. Calm down, besides I think the bears lost interest in us." Said Lori.
However, they hear a low growl coming from behind. As everyone turn around, they see the two bears coming out from the shadows. They growl bearing their fangs walking up to the teens slowly. Everyone backed away in fear looking at them with their eyes widen as dinner plates. Amy was the first to speak "We're dead. We're so very, very dead." Said Amy in utterly fear.
Rex then looked up to sees a pipe. The pipe is holding part of the ceiling from falling. Base by the rust on it, the pipe would be able to break. He looked around to find something to throw. He then notices Jackie heart-shape necklace. An idea hits him as he looked at Jackie "Jackie." Said Rex getting Jackie attention.
"Can I use your necklace?" Rex asked her.
"You want to use my what?!" Question Jackie.
"I have an idea. But I need to use your necklace for it."
"Are you crazy?! No way! This belongs to my grandma before she gave it to me!"
"Look we don't have time to argue! Just let me borrow it!"
"Forget it, if you want someone's necklace use Fiona's!"
"Wait what?" Fiona look at her confused.
The bears roar at them as they charge at them. Causing them to scream in fear. Without wasting anymore time Rex grabbed Jackie's necklace and pulled it off from her neck. Rex spins the necklace before throwing it. The necklace hits the pole which then shattered, causing the ceiling to collapse. Debris then fell and landed on top of the bears. With everyone coughing as the dust settled, they then stared at the bile where the bears were at. Everyone was dumbstruck at what just happen with everyone taking in deep breath.
Carol looked shocked at what happen. For the moment there, she saw her life flash before her eyes. She shook her head to clear her mind before looking at everyone "RUN!" She shouted.
With that everyone ran around the debris and ran down the corridor the bears came in. Jackie, meanwhile, kneels down and picked up her necklace in her hands. It was a little dent but still in good condition. She feels tears sliding down her cheek before grasping it tightly to her chest. She then stood up and ran after the others.
Once they're away from the bears, they stop taking in some breaths to calm themselves. Lori was the first to speak "Is everyone alright?" She asked which everyone reply "Good… Rex?" Looking at the young man.
"Yeah?" He replied.
"I don't what to be rude but… WHAT WERE YOU THINKING?!" Lori shouted, "YOU NEARLY KILLED US!"
"Sorry, I have to think of something!" Rex trying to defend himself.
"By bringing an entire ceiling down?!" Carol question.
"I would say it bring down the house. But even I find it terrifying." Said Luan.
"And what's worst that you used my necklace!" Shouted Jackie stumped towards Rex and staring at him in the face "Out of anything you could've use it has to be my grandma's necklace!"
"Sorry, Jackie." Rex apologizes to her "If there something I could do to make it up for it?"
"Save it. You did save us from those bears." Said Jackie.
"Those bears aren't coming after us, are they?" Mazzy asked.
"Nah, those ceiling parts landed right on top of them. I say they're pretty dead." Said Maggie very dark.
"Are we going to jail for killing a bear?" Lyberti asked them very worried.
"I hope not, I don't want to spend jail time while in this dress." Whitney responded.
"I like totes agree. Prison clothes are so out of style." Leni agreed with Whitney.
"Okay, we'll worry about it after we find a way out." Said Lori.
They then suddenly hear clanking noises. Loud bangs as the bears slowly coming out from the debris and gave a mighty roar. Everyone looked down the hall where they ran down from. Luna is the one to speak first "I think the bears are still alive dudes, and they're coming back for us." Said Luna.
"Oh, you got to be kidding! Don't those bears ever quit?!" Shout Fiona.
"Let's move!" Lori ordered them as they all continue running.
They ran down the hallway trying get away from the bears as possible. Becky then looked down the hallway seeing some light coming through. She then spotted a window "Hey there's a window! We could get out through there!" Said Becky getting everyone's attention. They come to a complete stop. Staring through the window they see the forest.
"This is our ticket out of here!" Said Teri.
"Okay so how can we open it?" Asked Parvanna.
"RRAAAWWW!" Carol came running as she threw a wooden chair through the window shattering it completely. Not a single glass remains.
"OH MY GOSH! Why the heck did you throw chair through the window?!" Lori asked Carol.
"And where did you even find a wooden chair?!" Fiona asked.
"No time! Let's get out of here!" Shouted Carol.
One by one they get out first is Carol then Lori, Luna, Sam, Mazzy, Benny, Luan, Maggie, Whitney, Becky, Miguel, Ruby, Teri, Amy, Lyberti, Parvanna, Leni, Rex, Dana, and Mandee all quickly jumped out through the window into the outside world. But as soon, Chaz got to the window he immediately gets stuck with Shannon bouncing off from his behind. And landed on her butt onto the floor. She stares at Chaz who is stuck "SERIOUSLY?!" Shannon yelled "Why is he so fat?!"
"Chaz what's the hold up?!" Miguel asked while Chaz trying to pull himself out.
"I'm stuck!" Said Chaz much to everyone's annoyance except Leni.
"Seriously dude?! Again?!" Shout Luna.
But the one person more annoyed is Dana "You got to be kidding me?! We're almost home free Chaz!" Dana shouted.
"What is with you get stuck every time?!" Question Amy.
"Do you really want to ask that question?" Chaz gave a stern look at Amy.
"You really need to lose some weight bud." Said Amy.
"Come on Luna we need to get him out!" Said Sam running to him.
"Right behind you Sam!" Response Luna.
Both girls grabbed Chaz arms as they pull him. As they pull Luna looked at Chaz "You really need go on a diet man! And maybe eat something healthy!" Said Luna.
"I'm well aware that I need to go on a diet!" Said Chaz.
From Shannon point of view from inside the warehouse, Chaz has barely moved an inch. He's stuck in really good this time. She nervously pulling her hair as she watches "This picnic is really getting out of hand." Shannon said to herself.
She then hears something from her left. Looking back down the hall two shadows are seen as the bears have manage to get themselves out from the pile from the ceiling. And are now heading towards Shannon direction.
Starting to panic she quickly trying to push him by using her shoulder "Chaz!" Shannon shouted to get his attention "Shannon? What is it?" Chaz asked.
"Chaz you need to suck in your gut! Right now!" She told him.
Just as Chaz suck his gut in, Shannon quickly took few steps back. As soon, the bears see Shannon they then ran towards her. Shannon hearing them coming charge and rammed Chaz, freeing him which landed right on top on Luna and Sam. Hearing some moaning's Luna and Sam try to speak.
"Ch-Chaz dude…" Said Luna underneath.
"Y-You're… c-crushing us…" Said Sam.
"Oops, sorry about that." Chaz apologizes getting off the two rocker girls.
"Shannon! Get out of there hurry!" Shout Amy.
Shannon seeing the bears coming. She was about to jump out when Amy grabbed her arms. She pulled Shannon out the window in time before the bears got to her, as Shannon is in Amy arms "You okay Shannon?" Amy asked which she stood back to her two feet "Y-Yeah, thanks for the save." Said Shannon.
Everyone then breath in relief as they all sat on the ground, exhausted taking in deep breaths of fresh air. They take in the warmth of the sun as it shines down on them. While the bears grunts are heard in the background.
"Man what a day this has been." Said Rex wiping some sweat away.
"I know. First, we're having a relaxing picnic, then the next being chased by hungry bears." Said Whitney while she fixes her hair.
"Get ourselves trapped in an abandon warehouse with zero exits." Said Carol stretching her legs.
"And not to mention nearly got crushed by a ceiling. All for what? Just nearly get mauled to death?" Said Lori laying on the ground with her back too tired to sit up.
"Not to mention Chaz weight problem." Said Dana pointing at Chaz.
"Yeah, I think he may have broken some bones in me." Sam rubbing her shoulder and arm.
"Okay I get it! I'll go on a diet if it gets you all off my back!" Shouted Chaz.
Unfortunately, the bears gave a huge roar as they swipe their claws around near them. Leni, Jackie, Whitney, Parvanna, and Becky scream while the others jumped in fear. Not wanting to stick around any longer they all started to book away from the warehouse with the bears still inside.
"How did things come down to this?!" Shout Benny running with Luan by his side.
"Whose idea was it to pick a spot to have a picnic?!" Asked Luan.
"It was Carol!" Mandee replied.
"Yeah, she's the one who decide where we could have our picnic!" Said Jackie with Carol running by her side.
"How was I supposed to know about the bears! The Park Ranger told us there weren't bears in the area!" Carol remind them about the ranger.
"Well maybe next time ask someone who isn't on his first day on the job!" Said Jackie.
As they arrived back to the spot Lori quickly get to Vanzilla "Hurry get everything packed and get your butts in Vanzilla!" Lori ordered them as they all quickly grabbed all the stuff. Things like baskets, blankets, even the food. They all then ran to Vanzilla with Carol quickly open the door.
They all get in one by one as Luna, Sam, Mandee, Miguel, Jackie, Lyberti, Parvanna, and Shannon got in. Chaz however, got stuck when he's getting in "Oh c'mon! Get in you big lump!" Luan shouted angry. Luckily Luan using her back has able to push Chaz in. The rest then got in as Carol tries to close the door. But with so many people inside, its hard to close. Carol groans in frustration takes a few steps back before ramming it with her shoulder to shut it. Once the door is close, she and Lori quickly get in the front seat.
"Okay do we have everyone?" Lori ask making sure no one is missing. Everyone replied who are basically squish together because the number of people. Especially with Chaz in the middle.
"Whitney get your dumb poofy hair out of my face!" Maggie ask Whitney who's big poofy hair is literally in Maggie's face.
"Don't call my hair dumb! Besides I can't!" Said Whitney trying to move her arms "My arms are stuck between you and Leni's!"
"Hey guys I think I'm blind!" Said Leni who is also got Whitney's hair on her face blinding her.
"Scoot over Rex!" Fiona on top of Rex shout at him.
"How about you scoot over!" Rex yelled back.
"Jackie could you move your hair away from my face!" Dana asked Jackie who is sitting on her.
"Sorry, Dana but I can't move my arms." Jackie replied.
"Stop with the complains people!" Lori shouted to stop them from complaining anymore "When I see that Park Ranger, I'm going to give him a piece of my mind!"
"I wouldn't do that if I were you Lori. If anything, you might get ban from the park for life." Said Carol reasoning with Lori "Not only that…"
Both Lori and Carol look at the backseats to see everyone squished together "How are we going to explain this to the Park Rangers?" Carol asked nervously.
"I'll talk to the Park Rangers about the bears." Lori answered, "I just hope Vanzilla can be able to handle this many people."
"And let's hope it doesn't break down."
"Why you think it'll break down?"
"C'mon Lori your family has this van for years. Plus, everyone knows Vanzilla breaks down almost all the time."
"Fair point."
With that Lori starts the engine and drives, only for it to be moving slowly. Very slowly while tilting a bit which everyone took notice "Um Lori? Why is Vanzilla moving very slow?" Luna asked from the back seat with her face against the window.
"Because it's taking on too much weight." Lori answered which it got everyone feel offended.
"You're just saying that for being smart." Said Parvanna.
"So, I guess that means Dad was right about the bears." Said Leni remembering what Lynn Sr told them earlier which Lori just rolled her eyes.
Finally, its done. This is the longest request story I have ever done. Took a lot longer than I thought. But anyways, here it is. Hope you all enjoyed this.
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