An: Here is chapter 22, I've seen your suggestions regarding what Hinata should be, Everyone wants her as a Kitsune Yokai, a few suggested she should be Gap Girl due to her stalking skills,
Then there's Kejoro the hair prostitute, Tamano Mae, Jiang Shi and Jurogumo..Now those who wanted her as The Slit Mouth Woman / Kuchisake Onna, Sorry that role belongs to Taeko Uzumaki,
Now the topic three suggestions is:
The Kitsune
Gap Girl
And a Bunny Yokai?, Something i have never thought of i might consider it...
But im choosing between Kitsune or the Rabbit Yokai.. for Hinata since those two seem like popular choices.
And to Idea Guy:
I have been thinking long and hard about your story idea about me publishing a Naruto x Hachishaku-sama X Origa of Discordia... you say i should make it a alternate version of 'Dark Elf Queen's Harbinger' I might just go with that idea but will take some time to think the development and how to plot the Story... but hey im going to try your idea and see how it works.
Let us continue the story.. and I've made my decision, Hinata will be a Hybrid of a Fox and Rabbit Yokai.
Chapter 22
( In Ame)
"You don't think it's possible that Zetsu has been captured has he?" Spoke Pain as he looked at Konan than at Madara Uchiha who was in the shadows.
The Uchiha scowled behind his orange mask, he has heard of this Urban Legend named 'Hachishaku-sama' stole not only the Gobi Jinchuriki and the Nibi Jinchuriki but also the Kyuubi too and is hiding them from his sights...
"It can't be possible for Zetsu to be captured... after all you did send him where to find that accursed Urban Legend and where she hid the Biju?" Spoke Madara
"Yes... i believe the only place we haven't looked so far was the land of Uzu... Whirlpool country..." Said Pain looking at Madara
"Go there... retrieve the Kyuubi, Gobi and Nibi... i want them all back!" Commanded Madara with Pain Nodding as Konan started sweating feeling a chill run down her spine.
"And Hachishaku-sama?" Pain asked again
"Kill her" Was all Madara said as he crept in the shadows.
"Rally the others, tell them we move to Uzu..."Pain said to konan as his 6 paths Appeared besides him walking away, Konan.
Konan just stood there she knew that was no way to have Pain reconsider... this suicide mission... It frightened her to deal with Hachishaku-sama... she was scared and did not want to die.
( Kumo)
The Raikage has been sitting at his desk looking at Darui his top Jonin with a gruff expression.
"These all i could gain Raikage-sama... it appears Hachishaku-sama has been busy... she went all over the elemental nations to snatch away children." He said while his leader looked him.
"So... it's true... the Urban Legend has returned..." He said with a sigh...
"What should we do Raikage-sama?"Asked Darui who saw his leader having a thoughtful look rubbing his forehead temple.
"Is there anything else?" Ay asked once again
"I've heard Konoha lost their Kyuubi Jinchuriki to Hachishaku-sama... and is sending a retrival team to find him and bring him back" The Jonin spoke.
"I see... so they are not the only ones who lost their jinchuriki to the Urban Legend," He said seeing him nod as he heard how The Gobi Jinchuriki Hannya in Iwa was taken.
"Good Work Darui, you are free to leave" He said as his jonin bowed and left leaving the bulky kage to think.
Could Hachishaku-sama stolen Yugito? if she took Konoha's Jinchuriki and Iwa's Jinchuriki, with a scowl on his face he dared to not think Hachishaku-sama did such a thing... not only she killed children here in Kumo and lightening Country but also took Yugito.
He pressed his intercom
"Mabui" He said
"Yes Raikage-sama?" Spoke His assistant
"Send Bee and his team here to my office i have a assignment for them" Ay spoke as she replied yes Raikage-sama.
He wanted to see if Bee and his team could go and find Yugito.. from Hachishaku-sama.. he didn't want to risk Bee going there since the akatsuki could try to take him but he knew his brother was strong enough to handle one akatsuki member but Two? he wasn't sure he just hoped he would return in one piece.. with Yugito...
And Should they fail it seemed that the Raikage would have to commit a Kage Summit regarding Hachishaku-sama.
( Back on Uzu)
Naruto had alot of questions going on in his mind, he couldn't believe Hinata had came here? what the hell was she doing here yes he was surprised to see her come here willingly and just to see him as Hachishaku-sama said.
As he stared at the living room door that was sealed closed with Hachishaku-sama and Hinata in there alone.
( Living room)
Hachishaku-sama smiled staring at the Contract Hinata had signed as she looked up at the girl.
"The deed is done, your Soul belongs to me..." She said seeing Hinata nod
"And now... you will become a Yokai... you lose your humanity" She said walking towards the hyuuga girl who held a brave face.
"When will the Ritual start?" Hinata asked staring at Hachishaku-sama
"The Ritual will begin soon, before that could happen I'm willing to let Naruto-kun talk to you before you are turned into a Yokai" She said leaving out the living room as Naruto now walked in.
"Hinata-chan?" He said seeing her turn to him with a blush
"Naruto-kun? is that you?" She said blushing she couldn't believe how handsome he was
He couldn't help but like her appearance too
"Yes it's me in the flesh Hinata-chan you look beautiful" He said seeing her blush and look away as they both sat on the couch getting ready to talk.
( With Hachishaku-sama)
Going down her basement in her secret lair as Taeko, Kayako and Sadako were with her.
"I will need you three to put together your Yokai Chakra and fuse it through Hinata"s body.. once she's through talking to your father" Hachishaku-sama said as she explained to Kayako and Sadako that they were having a Step Mother.
Kayako didn't trust Hinata... like Taeko did but Sadako seemed enthusiastic about having another Mother...
It would take some getting used to, to trust Hinata.
"Pour the Yokai Chakra into the Pit" Hachishaku-sama said as they all circled around the pit flaring up their Yokai chakra sending it inside the pit for it to glow crimson red as Hachishaku-sama filled up the pit with her Yokai chakra
Kayako's pet Black Cat with Two tails and different colored eyes was staring at the pit before looking at her Owner that she Mewed as Kayako slowly pet her Cat.
"Bring forth the ingredients" Said Hachishaku-sama
Sadako brought the ingredients that consisted: A Rabbit's foot and Cotton tail with a Fox pelt.
Tossing it inside the pit.
Hachishaku-sama sent a little of the Kyuubi's chakra into the pit along with the ingredients that was in the pit as she stirred it.
The pit was glowing filled with such Yokai chakra...
"Give it 10 more minutes... for it to mix and combine.. once it's ready bring Hinata here Kayako" Spoke Hachishaku-sama as Her daughter nodded.
( With Naruto and Hinata)
"Why Hinata? why come here to be with me? when you could have lived, better life in konoha?" He asked sitting by her as she stiffened.
"I... i.. i wanted to see you again... i can't live without you Naruto-kun.. I've saw your message and just couldn't bare to stay in Konoha it's not right without you there" She said her reasoning as he looked at her.
"I was sad and self loathed myself for not telling you how I feel about you... i let my shyness get in the way and made me weak for not telling you sooner before you left with Jiraiya-san" She said looking away.
"I wanted to tell you that i loved you... but just didn't have the courage to do so... now that you're married with Hachishaku-sama and have three daughters.. i felt like the world was going to end for me.. but when I learned of your heritage... i thought it wasn't too late for me that I still had time to tell you and try to convince Hachishaku-sama to be with you.. " She said now turning to him seeing him look at her with his eyes widened..
She Loved him? how dense he was.. during his days as a Genin he has been trying to gain Sakura's attention for months and she never returned her feelings to him all she did was bash his skull with her fist and just talk to him all ugly and just look up to Sasuke.. like he's god... After being with Hachishaku-sama he gave up his love on Sakura and wanted nothing to do with her anymore since she has been a Bitch to him he resented her for all the shit she's put him through and grew tired of her abuse. But Hinata was a different story, He saved her from bullies when they were younger and she along with Shikamaru and Choji were his true friends.
"You love me?" He whispered but she heard him.
"Yes, Naruto-kun i do.. which is why I abandoned my team, my clan and the village just to be with you, Hachishaku-sama said she's willing to share you with me" She said with him looking at her in surprise.
Naruto himself smiled Hinata did all of that for him? She left the village on her own free will.
Before he could say anything the living room door opened revealing Kayako
"Hinata, Hyuga Mother said it is Time..." Kayako said as she stood by the door looking at Her father and Hinata
Hinata stood up and gave Naruto a knowing smile.
"I'll be back Naruto-kun"
She said leaving the living room following Kayako.
( In the basement)
Hinata came down and looked in surprise seeing Hachishaku-sama stand there with Taeko and Sadako on her right and left,
"Undress Hinata" Hachishaku-sama said as the Hyuuga girl blushed as she did as told taking off hed coat that revealed her all of her curves that she hid from others.
Hachishaku-sama grinned in amusement seeing Hinata's curvy figure and firm chest that developed.
Kayako could only twitch her eyebrows at Hinata's figure jealous that her Sister Taeko hit puberty and she knew her older sister wears a trench coat to hide her curves too.
Sadako could only frown she couldn't wait to get older to have a figure like that.
"Good, now come here and step inside the pit" Hachishaku-sama instructed as the Naked Hinata came towards The pit looking inside it seeing it was nothing but a pool of red and orange Chakra
"Go on, dive inside... once you do.. you will become a Yokai" Hachishaku-sama said folding her arms as Hinata dived down in the pit and fell inside the pool of red and orange chakra.
Hinata felt her whole body burn and had a pained expression, Everything inside her body was flaring up the Chakra was consuming her.
Hachishaku-sama grinned watching this turn of events.
Half an hour later.
"Bring her out the pit I think she's ready" Hachishaku-sama commanded
Kayako extended her black hair inside the pit and latched onto Hinata pulling the girl out as Kayako widened her eyes at Hinata'a new appearance as did her other two sisters.
Hachishaku-sama smiled looking at the now Yokai turned Hyuuga Girl.
Hinata opened her eyes looking around.
"So Hinata tell me how you feel?" Hachishaku-sama asked
"I... i..." She said touching the top of her head and widened her eyes feeling a new attachment on top of her head.
Taeko held up a mirror and showed Hinata her new appearance Hinata has Rabbit Ears on her head... standing up wobbly she noticed her legs felt much stronger and better than before, reaching behind her backside she noticed she has a fluffy cotton tail. she could feel the Blood of a Yokai in her veins she no longer held the Hyuuga Blood, Her eyes were Pale Lavender.
" I feel great... I'm a rabbit!" She said noticing her Hands are furry lavender paws with claws and that her breasts had gotten bigger
To be continued
An: Well what do you think? I decided Hinata becomes a Yokai Rabbit. i might use the rabbit reference from Killing Bites or One Piece Carrot.
Until next time... I'll update again this Friday or Saturday