Author Note

Hi there and welcome to another chapter. I thank everyone who offered me their insights, so I will answer some of you who either pointed things out or asked questions.

Michas – Her character was shown in a way regarding Shirou's ineptitude in this war. Seeing as her master was in constant need of protection and still with the self-sacrifice mentality, she needed to be in constant lookout for trouble. Since in this story, she does not need to worry about protecting him all the time, she can fight and act more like freely. Also, yes, I have made a couple of tweaks here and there. Furthermore, I enjoyed seeing Saber more in UBW than in Fate. She appeared more at ease, less rigid when outside of battle.

The-Killer40513 – Oh, yes, I can't comment much, from fear of revealing what I'm planning. Sorry.

DaDragon562 – All interesting ideas, thanks for the tips.

Gan315 – Yeah, personally, I don't enjoy the Avalon ending as well. Though I can't comment much from fear of revealing my intentions before necessary.

Tl34lt12 – Yes, Shirou will not be so reliant on Banshou and Bakuya. He can easily switch between different styles of fighting…kind of like Kakashi in Narutoverse. Being able to fight in all both close and long-range. Also, while their paths are aligned somewhat, in this story, Shirou and Archer are not the same. I will explain it better more on the next chapters. It will be quite interesting to write about their fight.

Dandragonmc - About your comment of Gae Bolg, from my research, sure it would reach the target even before Lancer released it, hence it couldn't be dodged. However, what would happen if he had to abort the regular movements. With Shirou's reinforced sword attacking him, he needed to adapt.

Also, I have posted a reviewed second and third chapter. There were some mistakes here and there, so I fixed them. But if some errors are still there, please let me know.

Now here comes the chapter.

Fate Stay Night: Sword and Arrow

Part I – Fifth Holy Grail War

Chapter 5 – Training interlude and new discoveries

Emiya Shirou found himself standing at the very same darkened grass hill. All around him he could see nothing but a thick fog and barely his own body. He could feel the heavy presence of mana in this region as if it responded to his presence. The fog then began to slowly lift, and he could see that the hill was littered with swords from all sizes, formats and even material. Suddenly, all swords lifted from the ground and hovered inches from the ground. The boy took a step back frightened as all the swords flew at him. He used his arms to defend himself and closed his eyes waiting for the pain. Little did he know, however, that instead of attacking him, the swords strangely morphed inside of him until he could not see any sword in front of him.

It didn't take five seconds for Shirou to hold his right arm in deep pain, before the limb transformed into a steel shaped weapon. Each change brought great pain until all his limbs were transformed into weapons.

Shirou dropped on the ground screaming his lungs out from the excruciating pain.

"Shirou…wake up…" The boy trembled and immediately looked at his arms to see nothing but flesh. Saber was by his side immediately.

"Saber…" He got up and massaged his head, trying to take the image away from his head and failing miserably.

"You were having a nightmare…" The pain in his head was still strong, but he at least was relieved knowing what happened. That field again surged in his mind. Usually, the fire that happened in Fuyuki always appeared in his dreams, well, when he wasn't dreaming something about Saber's past. Now, that darkened field took the fire's place and Shirou wished it didn't happen. At least with the fire he could know it was a dream. This new scenery made him feel quite unease. His brain was trying to tell him something and he could not figure it out.

And it all began once he saw Archer. Just the mere presence of that servant was enough to make him feel like this. It irked him to no end when the answer failed to reach his musings.

"The hill with the swords again?"

Shirou felt her gentle hand on his shoulder and appreciated.

"Yeah, only this time, the swords morphed inside of me and my body was painfully being transformed into a weapon of sorts. I could feel extreme pain as if my arms and limbs were literally yanked from my body before the strange weapon surged where my limbs were." Saber frowned in concern and she closed her eyes for a while, before opening it in shock. Shirou had described quite thoroughly. Her master's scream of pain echoed her mind and it frightened her. He was always so pain resistant, that hearing his scream of pain brought her chills. She now wanted nothing more than to tear her own limbs if it meant keeping him form harm. It was the second night in a role that Shirou had dreamed about this and it happened after he met with Archer.

She knew that the concept of time didn't matter for heroic spirits, but so far, at least in her mind, only heroic spirits from the past were summoned to the Holy Grail Wars.

If Archer was somehow linked to her master from the past, then why is Shirou suffering like this after meeting him. Could it be that the Archer servant came from the future? And as such, could it be that the person that became Archer in the future was somehow related to Shirou? She flinched at the thought. Placing both Archer and Shirou side by side, she just could not see much resemblance. Though they shared some physical traits, Saber knew her master's personality and she could not see it in Archer's. Archer's eyes showed her nothing, but a man filled with regret. His eyes were empty, and he saw the world with nothing but skepticism. Shirou, on the other hand, Saber could see life staring back at her. She could see fierce resolve looking back at her, which pretty much settled him apart from Archer.

So far, she had very little to use in terms of comparison and it was just a theory.

"I think it's best for you to rest today, Shirou." He was lying on his bed once more, looking at the ceiling in deep wonder.

"Ah, school has been suspended for the week after Rider's attack. I guess we can take it easy Saber."

The woman nodded with a smile as she then went back to her bed by his side.

"Thank you Saber…let us try to sleep some more."

"Let's…good night Shirou."

===Next day===

After a nice breakfast, Shirou and Saber opted for a different type of training today with lack of possible injuries.

Shirou explained that his magical circuits felt in slight disarray, upon waking up, forcing him to make adaptations to his movements and mana usage. He figured that it was not a bad change as he could project weapons with less strain and faster than before. The problem, however, was that he needed to adapt his movements. Hence why Shirou was now running around the house's garden while Saber was sitting on the porch calmly drinking some tea. Shirou could see how at ease was his servant while he was the one doing small bursts of movements, as if he was fighting an invisible enemy…truth he told he was imagining her as an opponent.

A great number of arrow targets were sprawled, and he would project his longbow and arrow in between bursts to go after the targets. Saber opened her eyes from her relaxing moment as she followed the arrow hitting the bullseye every time.

Seeing her master's movements and dead accuracy made her remember one of her knights.

Tristan's accuracy with a bow was quite frightening and Shirou possessed similar levels of skill. The only problem was that from the servants left, not many would be fazed by his arrows. Lancer was immune and Archer would use his own skill to block it. Against Caster would be ideal, though she was skeptical since caster servant were magus in nature. As such, they had spells to protect them against projectiles. Of course, Saber would be there as well, so the odds of Caster not being able to keep up was quite high. Berseker would just be annoyed. Furthermore, as her eyes landed on her master, she could see that he was faster. However, her trained eye could not help but notice a small issue. When Shirou told her about the changes in his magic circuits, she frowned in deep concern.

He had trained a long time to reach his current level and now they just could not take that long to get used to the new feeling.

"Shirou…" He stopped close to her location.

"I can see you are having an easier time releasing the mana burst to increase your movements and reinforce your limbs, but now it seems you are lacking control."

"Lacking control…"

"You are releasing more mana than necessary throughout the movements. You are releasing more but with the same effort from before." Shirou frowned at that while teacher Saber continued. "Try searching for the necessary amount inside yourself and then match the needed effort." His face showed that Saber's explanation was not exactly academical, but nodded, nonetheless. He was a kinesthetic learner anyhow. He would learn more by practice rather than reading a book or listening to a lecture. Shirou attempted the course a couple more times, paying more attention to the amount of mana he used for his movements.

It took him a bit of time, but he managed to understand what Saber was referring to.

Saber could see improvement, but he needed more time to practice.

Eventually, the boy began multitasking and now tried doing three things at the same time. He was constantly on the move and still sending arrows towards the bullseye, but now he was also tracing a great number of swords while moving. What shocked her however was that Shirou was mixing regular swords with noble phantasms as evidence of Gae Bolg and Caliburn amongst the projected weapons. Though neither of the noble phantasms were reinforced to have the same power as the original. Shirou's overall capacity wasn't affected, but rather the speed in which he had access. Such was Shirou's power of adaptation in the field. He was literally a waking army.

Saber instantly remembered the last time she had faced such an adversary.

The image of that insufferable golden armor servant archer from the previous war just made her blood boil.

Though he would simply attack from a distance, Shirou was comfortable with both short and long-range fighting.

When Shirou stopped in front of her once more, he was on his knees panting hard. And she thought that he agreed to take it easy today…

"Had enough, Shirou?" She smiled upon seeing a relaxed smile on his face despite the obvious tiredness.

"Yes, it's enough for now…I still think I can improve, but I lack the stamina to keep going." He laughed awkwardly at his servant's snort in derision. "Say, Saber, how about we do something different today?"

"Different...what do you have in mind?" Shirou had already recovered some of his breath and now stood straight.

"How about a date?" The woman looked at him in question, wondering about what the word 'date' meant. He certainly wasn't about to mention any romantic implication behind the term. "Oh, well, a man and a woman go out and do something together. Also, I figure that not exhausting my mana supply could better acclimate me to the new use." Her face displayed wonder, but Shirou didn't exactly expect her to behave like a woman from his time either. Saber, for her turn, found it quite odd that he would suggest a thing and in the middle of the war no less.

"Shirou, what's your intention for suggesting this?"

Shirou didn't have a clear intention in mind, aside from having the opportunity to do something else instead of training and fighting.

"Like I said, I have been overextending my magic circuits for quite some time now. I figured that I could introduce you to a nice district nearby…they have lots of nice restaurants and food vendors, I bet you will enjoy it."

She could not help but pout at the low blow.

"Are you trying to convince me by appealing to my weakness Shirou?" Saber had a major appetite and would no doubt appreciate fine food.

"I just think it would be nice to have for us to go out a bit. For me it would allow me to ease the strain on the magical circuits and you could have all sorts of delicious food." Saber released a sigh in dismay at the odd suggestion from her master. Still, she figured that it was no different from Irisiviel sometimes taking her out throughout the city. At that time, however, she was nothing but Irisiviel's bodyguard, hence why she had no choice but to follow the odd woman around. Shirou, on the other hand, was offering her a choice. And despite a big part of her believing that doing so was useless as far as their goal was concerned, a little part of her indeed wished to try some of the region's food…just like Shirou had suggested.

"Okay Shirou, we can go, but I'm still unease about this." Shirou nodded with a smile on his face.

"I understand Saber, if anytime you wish to return home, we come back immediately. Though I have a feeling that you'll enjoy this more than I will."

Saber doubted, though complying with her master's request. She could see merit in resting his magical circuits. If they were strained during battle, he would be at a severe disadvantage, but in her mind, a good rest and recovery was better suited. Certainly, a strange request from her master.

It didn't take long for Shirou to change his clothes and even make some sandwiches for the road ahead of them.

===Shinto District===

As they walked towards the bus stop, Saber could not help but stare at her master's smiling face. It was rather intoxicating as she found herself smiling as well. They hopped into the bus that would take them to Shinto District. Saber was busy looking around throughout the ride, looking at the bridge they were in…looking at the bright ocean by her side. It took them half an hour to reach the new district. Shirou urged her to follow him as they went through many stops throughout the city. They first stopped inside what looked like a European sweet shop. Shirou urged her to order everything her eyes wanted. In the end, Saber chose a tall glass ice-cream with three different, while Shirou settled for a slice of chocolate cake and some coffee.

Though he was having trouble eating since Saber had already finished hers and was looking at his cake with sparks in her eyes and a slight drool on the side of her mouth.

He sighed and pushed his cake for her to eat. Saber blushed in embarrassment and appreciated her master. The cake was gone rather quickly and Shirou ordered some more. He knew that she would enjoy this much more than he did, after all. What he was secretly enjoying, however, was simply this…seeing Saber at ease with a content smile on her face, eating dessert after dessert. It did not matter that the entire place was looking at the strange foreign girl like she was crazy. Back in his house, Saber had already eaten three times as much and still wanted more.

After that, they passed through some other shops as Saber's curiosity beat her rational mind.

She stopped at literally ever possible shop. Her eyes marveled at the display of flowers. She was a girl first after all. He could see that her eyes lingered more on the lilies. Aside from the flower shop, they entered inside a gift shop and Saber's eyes wandered around every item in the store, ranging from nice ornamental clocks to kitchen appliances. Along the way, they stopped inside a bookstore as Shirou handed her a book on swords. Her interest was glued immediately while he browsed different topics. Saber, for her part, found many swords from past ages and became fascinated by it. She even asked if Shirou could purchase it for her.

Once outside the bookstore, they stopped for some snacks and then resumed their walk.

Along the way, they talked about mundane topics such as what each other liked and disliked. Shirou saw how engrossed she was while pointing at places she wanted to go. Saber, for her part, heard how Shirou came to learn about cooking. He explained that when he was young under Kiritsugu's care, they would usually buy take out food. But one time, his adopted father attempted to cook something. They way Shirou described made Saber laugh. Irisviel would have loved to hear this, she mused. Saber even ventured a guess that Irisviel would have enjoyed meeting her new master. Shirou then descried Kiritsugu's failed attempt at making even the simplest meals and Saber internally appreciated that her master became self-taught in the kitchen.

As they continued their stroll, Saber's eyes were focused on a place where people appeared to strike a white ball coming at them at high speeds with a piece of metal.

Shirou tried teaching her how to swing a baseball bat, but he sighed as she swung it like she would with a sword. Her time was up, but a fierce look from Saber showed that she would not live this place until she nailed the ball like her master did, which earned a sigh in resignation from him. He was then and there introduced to Saber's fixation with competition. Despite it all, with enough patience and after many attempts, Saber managed to land a hit on the ball. Though what happened after that made Shirou gawk in surprise. Unlike him who needed to reinforce his arms to have the same strength, Saber didn't have to.

As such, when the baseball bat hit the ball, the bat snapped in the middle and the ball had exploded.

Saber just blinked her eyes in surprise and then turned to Shirou.

"Did I win?"

He just scratched his head and awkwardly smiled at her, already thinking of having to pay for the damage.

After that, Shirou took her inside a nice restaurant for some lunch that served western style cuisine. He personally wondered if Saber would feel more at home eating something close to her homeland, despite her homeland being from another time. Though Saber enjoyed the food, she commented to him that she much preferred the food he made over this, which earned a smile from him. She was currently holding her teacup and looked at the pleasant liquid with a smile on her face.

"I rather enjoy this tea; it has a very good smell."

"I always use the regular ones back home. From now on, I can make this tea for you Saber." She appreciated and took another zip with a tranquil smile.

Shirou still had one place he wanted to take her when they walked past a toy shop as Saber's eyes landed on a cute looking stuff lion inside the store. They quickly went inside as Saber grabbed the stuffed animal and looked with a smile on her face. The boy could not help but laugh slightly at the scene, which earned a slight pout from Saber. Who would have thought that King Arthur liked lions? Though Shirou noticed that the animal fit her personality and he even purchased the small lion to her. He had to refrain from laughing as she held the little thing tight in her arms as they reached the final place of their day. It was a nice plain park when lots of families would join for a small picnic or simply took a seat on the grass while admiring the view of the city.

Shirou took a white sheet from his bag and placed on the ground, before inviting Saber to take a seat as he opened his bag with the sandwiches and some crackers for them.

Of course, her eyes sparked once more as she leaned towards the basket wondering which one to eat first. Shirou just smiled as he took a seat opposite to her. So far, he was right. Saber ended up enjoying their time together as Shirou took some mental notes about what Saber liked the most. Saber, for her part, found herself wandering about her previous hesitation in doing this. True, the war was still ongoing and true, an enemy could strike at any time. However, she was learning from her master about these types of experiences and she realized that it was rather enjoyable. It certainly provided them some perspective, despite their mind being inadvertently taken back to the Holy Grail War.

"Ah Saber…could I ask you something?"

"Certainly…" She was far too engrossed in finishing what looked like her third sandwich.

"Well, from the dreams I had about you, I already know about your reign as king and even saw you when you took Caliburn. But I don't know much before that…how was it for you growing up?" Shirou immediately cursed himself for bringing such a tough memory for her, but he guessed that her hardship began once she received the mantle of king and had to deal with ruling Britannia. Much to his relief, though, he could see a gentle smile on her face at his question. Of course, her life wasn't a nightmare since she was born. It was only until a couple of years after she received the crown that the bad events occurred. Come to think about it, these days, she rarely lingered to those days. It was much simpler and more meaningful to her than her best days as a king, in the rarest of occasions. Her smile did subside, however, as she turned to ponder.

Shirou took the sudden silence as he had crossed some boundary and offer his apology for asking.

"You don't need to apologize, Shirou. I have seen some of your memories as a child with your father, so it's only natural for me to tell you." Shirou breathed more easily as she started. "My life before Caliburn was filled with simplicity, you see. I lived in a simple house and Sir Ector, one of the most noble knights I have ever met, helped raise me to become a knight like himself. Sir Ector had a son name Kay who became a brother figure to me growing up. I would follow him around all the time. I helped him taking care of the family's horses, even did some chores that he was meant to do by order of Sir Ector." Shirou could see her laughing from clear nostalgia and found himself incapable of thinking about anything other than this magnificent sight. The sun was illuminating her golden locks and the gentle wind slightly rocked her bangs. "It was my brother Kay who taught me how to fight, despite him never admitting that I was better than him. He would always declare himself the winner in our spars over some technicality. Sir Ector and Kay were my true role models growing up."

Saber used her hand to gently remove some of her hair from her eyes as she looked at Shirou. The man was caught blushing immediately and apologized.

"Sorry...I didn't mean to stare like that Saber…it's just…" She just nodded, though, clearly amused at him. She was too lost in her own childhood to notice.

He was at a loss now about what he was feeling when looking at her, though he managed to resume the conversation.

"I bet they were amazing individuals, Kay and Sir Ector to have raised you. I would have liked to meet them." Saber smiled at him and pointed to her head, giving him her consent to do just that. He closed his eyes and could see a small Arturia sparring with her brother…he could see her cleaning the horse's stable….he could see a noble man with gray hair tending to her wounds after falling from the horse one day. Above all else, he could see the innocent smile of a little girl. Saber, for her chance, found herself completely at ease in showing this to Shirou. The traumas of her life as king were too strong and managed to cloud the happy times of her life, but thanks to her master, she was able to remember and it made her truly happy.

"Shirou, I wish to express my gratitude to you for taking me here…and for reminding me of my younger days. Thank you."

"It is my pleasure.…I did say you'd enjoy this, though I have to say that I had a wonderful time, even more so getting to know you better." After that, they both fell into a comfortable silence as Saber devoured that last sandwiches.

===Fuyuki===

They took the bus back to Fuyuki and Shirou could see that Saber had enjoyed her day as much as he did, if the look of pure relaxation on her face was any indication. He was surprised when out of a sudden, her eyes started closing slowly until she used his body to get some sleep. It was times like these that Shirou wished it could last forever as he looked outside the bus to see the sun slowly setting down. When the bus arrived at the station, Shirou gently nudged Saber to awake, and he saw her slowly adjusting to the situation.

"Wha…Shirou?"

"Wake up Saber, we need to get out of the bus." She blinked a few times and looked around. She was surprised that she had indeed fallen asleep. "You were so comfortable that I couldn't bring myself to awake you so soon."

The servant blushed in embarrassment. It's just that this was the first time in a long time that she felt like this and she even forgot her role in this war. After all, she was the servant, not Shirou.

"I apologize Shirou…" He would not have it though.

"No apologies needed Saber…you have been by my side worrying about protecting me. It felt nice to protect you for a change." He could see that she reverted to her servant like personality, but he could not help but smile at the frown she was displaying. She did not need to say it out loud for him to know that she didn't like being protected. Though he now saw a new side to her in Shinto, he will treasure both sides of her. The strong warrior knight and the gentle soul that felt so at ease next to himself that she cuddled.

Once outside the bus, they walked side by side. It was already nighttime by the time they hopped off the bus.

Despite being more reserved now, Shirou could see that her smile from before was still there, despite more reserved.

However, the war soon came back in their lives when Shirou stopped walking and appeared lost in thought. Saber looked at him.

"Is everything alright, Shirou?" She could see his angered face and became worried instantly.

"He is watching us…" She didn't need to ask who he was referring to. By the angry tone he used to speak, she knew who Shirou was talking about. However, her eyes and senses could not detect anything.

"I can't see or feel him nearby, how can you tell he's watching us?" Shirou then turned to the bright city lights and pointed at the tallest building where he saw with his reinforced eyes that Archer was there watching them with his arms crossed. Saber became alarmed immediately. If Archer was truly there, then they were at serious disadvantage right now. He could attack them from this distance easily. Long distance targets was Archer class's specialty. Saber quickly manifested her armor and positioned her invisible sword. They may have a cease-fire with Rin, but Archer had independent action, meaning he could override it.

"Can you see what he's doing Shirou?" Saber could see that Shirou's eyes had briefly lost its usual warmness. And she had found out that she missed seeing them smiling back at her.

"He's looking at me just like I'm looking at him." The scene split in two as each side showed one looking at the other as if they were in the same space.

"What shall we do, Shirou?" He stood there unresponsive for a while, before turning back to her now showing her smile, which secretly eased her worries.

"He won't attack us Saber. Let's go home." She waited a little as Shirou simply turned his back to Archer and kept walking, later followed by Saber who by now had released her armor and her normal clothes remained.

===Emiya's Household===

Saber was by the kitchen table as she watched Shirou preparing something for them to eat. They even stopped at the local market for Shirou to purchase the special tea brand that Saber enjoyed in Shinto.

Her wondering from this morning now returned full force. It was evident that her master and Archer shared a link with each other somewhat. Shirou just could not sense threat from such a long distance. And it was now clear as far as her knowledge was concerned, that Archer was not someone from the past. Even if she does not know what type of connection they have, she could it happening each time Shirou and Archer crossing paths. And from the concerned look on her master's face, she could see that he was coming to the same conclusion as her.

"Shirou…" The man in question turned to see her and he could see her concerned look for him.

"I guess I know what you're thinking Saber and I can't help but wonder the same myself." He offered her some tea before taking a seat himself.

"Archer…and his connection to you somehow…I can't simply place him as a heroic spirit from the past, considering how his presence is influencing you now. I tend to think that he is from the future, or least a future."

Shirou often ventured about the road not taken in life. What would happen if he was never found by Kiritsugu…what would happen if the fire in Fuyuki ten years ago never happened…or happened differently. Time itself has many variables that could shift the events in the future. One of the books in his adopted father's library, Shirou read about said theory. Different decisions throughout life brought about different temporal dimensions. For instance, how different would his life be if he entered this war practically clueless about his skills as a magus. What if he simply was never chosen as a master and thus would not ever meet Saber. So many probabilities in his life that could very well alter the type of future he would have. It was indeed quite intriguing to think about it. Shirou mused that Kiritsugu must have kept this book as a hobby, considering it was not pertinent to his life or even his line of work.

While Saber corrected herself, he knew that it could very well mean that Archer was somehow connected to his future or at least a possible future considering several life choices that Shirou has yet to choose.

"If Archer is somehow connected to my future, or at least a possible future that is. Then he became like that as a product of a future decision of mine." Shirou's ideals of being able to become someone who will be able to save others. He could see in Archer's eyes. He could see that the man had a great amount of trauma and that it led him to be skeptic, to be hollow. Like Saber, Shirou felt nothing but emptiness from Rin's servant. As if his spirit left his body and only the body, the shell remained.

"Quite possibly, yes." Somehow the thought of her master becoming like Archer caused an immeasurable amount of weight in her chest.

They had continued the discussion for another half an hour before both went to rest for the night. Today was a life-altering experience for both, but tomorrow the war continued, and they needed to be ready.

Author Note: I have already devised the events that will follow in the next chapters, so I have decided to stop here.

Please tell me what you think. It's something that I always pondered when I saw UBW and Archer's interactions with Shirou. Of course, one can't come with a simple and shallow conclusion that Shirou is Archer and vice-versa. Archer became a product of Shirou's ideals; however, his overall personality was shifted by the events that may or may not happen throughout the boy's life. All UBW showed was that Shirou could become Archer. The future's not set in stone, no matter how much one thinks it is. You make daily decisions…you meet different people…you have different interactions and experiences throughout your existence. Who's to say where it will take you. Who's to say that Shirou will inevitably become Archer in the future.

Come to think about it, if Archer is Shirou, then the events of the holy grail had already happened in his life. But it would be certainly different because Rin would have summoned another servant instead. Perhaps in Archer's past, Rin had summoned Saber instead and won the war. Who knows?

Like I said before, the fight between Archer and Shirou will be as exciting as challenging, but I hope if will be to the reader's' enjoyment.

Also, for those who may believe that I had made up the story about Saber's past before taking Caliburn, please know that I research the fate material before doing so. Yes, fanfiction allows us to write a different version of the story, but in my opinion, once you deviate from the anime's concept, you are simply bending the rules in your favor. Please accept that I'm sticking to the theory as much as I possibly can here. And everything I write is because of a similar event I saw in one of the episodes. As such, some may not concur, but I hope that the majority will.

Finally, I ask that if possible, please review my work.

I enjoy reading your comments as it helps me understand that you enjoyed it (or not). It also allows me to learn if I made a mistake and could thus fix it. So, please review, even if only to express that you liked the chapter or not.