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Olivia managed to stay awake until the bus and backup arrived. The EMT's rushed her in the ambulance and she noticed an older officer hop in. "Detective Benson I've notified your captain he wants to meet you at the hospital." The officer said. "Okay, I hope you didn't stress him out too much." She said she didn't want him to get too worked up with his heart. "Don't worry detective I'm sure he will be fine you really should be worrying about yourself right now." He said surprised at her worry for other people when it looked like she just went through hell. He did not really know her; he just saw her at Crime scenes sometimes. The ride to the hospital was relatively quiet just the EMT's giving orders. Olivia learned she had four broken ribs and no punctures, For which she was relieved.
At the Hospital
Room 157
1:27am
Olivia was in her hospital bed being examined by nurses. She really just wanted to get out of here and put the son of a bitch Ken Randal away. "Miss Benson?" The Doctor asks. "It's Detective Benson." Olivia retorted. "Right Detective Benson, Do you need me to preform a rape kit?" The man asked. "NO, because I was not raped." Oliva stated. "Would you like me to let some people come in?" He asked. " That's fine."
Oliva then saw a sea of people flooding into her room. She was relieved because she would only have to tell what happened once because everyone was there. Cragen Elliot Jon Fin Melinda and Casy. "Oh My God Olivia!" Casy and Melinda Gasp at the same time seeing her bruised and cut body. "It's not as bad as it looks,'' Olivia stated Matter-of-factly. Everyone got situated in the room. Elliot At the chair closest to the bed Craden in one by him. Casy and Melinda on the couch. And Much and Fin leaning against the wall. "What happened?" Asked a very worried Eliiot. "Well.." She began. " I was walking home from the precinct when I heard a Noise from the alley by me, I thought nothing of it at first and then I heard it again. I reached for my gun and realized I left it at the station. Then someone blitzed me and punched me in the face I fell down And my vision started to get blurry. Next thing I know i'm being dragged down the alley and i tried to fight back but that didn't work. Then he dragged me up and slammed me against the alley wall and I Saw Him it was Ken Randal. Elliot felt the anger boil up inside him when she said his name. "I started fighting against him but he had my hands pinned above my head. He threw me to the ground and started kicking me over and over." She said wincing at the thought. "I tried to get up but he knocked the wind out of me. He got on top of me and started punching me while calling me a Bitch. I tried to block the punches with my hands but he just pinned them above my head. He Got angry when I showed no Fear or Pain And he said "I know how to really make you scream and he ripped my shirt. Olivia passed. "Oivia did he-Much started tears welling in his eyes. Olivia interrupted. "NO I head butted him and he fell off me We both got up and he charged for me but I dogged him and he ran into the wall and fell down I then put him in handcuffs but he would not stop fighting so i put him in a sleep hold. I then called for backup and now i'm here." Olivia concluded. By the time Oliva finished everyone had tears in their eyes and Casy was silently crying. Olivia yawned and rubbed her eyes." We leave you alone so you can rest there already sending ken to sing sing." Fin said. They all said their goodbyes and left except elliot. "Olivia I'm so sorry I'm your partner I should have had your back. Offered you a ride home, something."Elliot said already feeling guilty. "NO El!" Olivia started. "Don't blame yourself, it won't change anything." Elliot sighed he knew she was right. "I know I'm sorry." He said "Don't be." I'm just saying You don't see Much in her apologising because he had some conspiracy that this would happen."Olivia said playfulness egged her voice. Elliot let out a sigh of relief 'She was gonna be okay'.
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