[I have made a few more changes here and there but nothing too big worked to clear up some of the grammar. There were a few spots where my mind was going over lightspeed but my fingers could only go snail speed. Thank you for reading. Enjoy]

Chapter Six The Liberation of Langara part one

21 March 2014

Dakara

The last thing Rya'c did before leaving Langara was the release of a cloaked surveillance satellite that would monitor the system in real-time back to Dakara. His guest had awakened after hours of being stunned. It was starting to give him concern for the stun effect should not have lasted so long. He figured it may have been due to the man's weaken condition. Far the man was wearing rags for clothing it looked like he had not eaten in days. As the man began to stir his eyes opened with a startling him with his new surroundings far he was being restrained by bonds.

"You are among friends," Rya'c stated as the man's gaze found him. The man jumps back against the bulkhead of the Alket hearing. "I am Rya'c son of Teal'c First Prime of the First new System Lord Bra'tac. We have rescued you and the girls that were accompanying you from the aggressors of your world."

The man hearing that looked and saw the two girls laying on some soft bedding that the Jaffa laid out for them. "What have you done to them?" He said all but yelled as he went toward them. They were bound as well.

"We just stunned you and them to keep our presents unknown to the enemy. There was a seeker drone near where you were. Had we not it would have found you there. The girls will be fine it will take more time for the effects of the stun to wear off in there weaken states. What is your name?"

"I'm Dion Forest these are my daughters Lena and Sofia. Why are we restrained and where are you taking us?" The man asking holding his hands up as he did, indicating the bonds that held him.

"We are taking you to Dakara To see Lord Bra'tac. You are restrained to keep you safe from trying doing anything stupid. I will release you now if you now so you may tend to you girls, there is food and water in those containers there." Pointing to his left. "We will be arriving soon. Once you tell of what has happened on your world you will be free to go with the Tau'ri. They will be sending forces to free your world."

"Those are the peoples of Earth right?" Dion Asked. He thought he had heard them called that once but he had never dealt with the people of Earth before.

"Yes. They may want more information as well." Rya'c said. "Now eat get your strength back." He then turned and went back to the bridge sealing the door behind him. Dion found the food cubes and other foodstuffs as he drank most of the water that was in a bottle. As his girls woke he offered them the same. They were so pleased to eat after what was weeks crapping by barely able to find anything at all. After they had there fill they fell asleep once again on either side of their father.

Sol Two

Terra, Springfield

20 March 2014

After returning to Springfield there was a small welcome home party for Jenifer Hailey. Mitchell and O'Neill returned from Reach for the occasion. Hailey had known of O'Neill's colon but this was the first time they had met. The party had lasted for hours way into the morning. Carter had left early on going to her lab that was adjacent to her offices. She was going through the data crystals that were given to earlier that day on Dakara. The modification of the shields and cloaks was going to be easier than she had thought with just a simple macro upgrade in the programming. That had already been done she had these upgrades sent out immediately to all there ships it would only take a few hours to be done. The next thing was a design of the drone weapons it was a downgraded version of the ones at Antarctica. These worked the same way but would take more to affect the shields on some ships. The third thing there was two designs of the ZPM's that they would be able to build. These to were a downgraded version but could still hold massive amounts of energy and they were rechargeable using the Asgard ion generators that were used onboard their ships. These would draw in the excess energy to be stored for later. Though they would only be able to store so much it would help out a lot. The other was a mini ZPM that also could be recharged. There were even plans on how to put them in the 302's that could be used for shields cloak and even use to power a hyperspace window for up to ten light-years of travel before needing to recharge. In which that could be done with the 302s on power generator or its capital ship.

The information on the Aschen's Elementals was quit disturbing Sam figured they would be able to hold there own with the smaller clusters of less than five but not on more than ten. If they attacked with larger clusters in greater numbers things would not be good. She had seen their carriers deploy up to two hundred on each. The carriers were not that strong even with shields their weapons they would not be able to penetrate the shields of a 304. Their hyperdrives were slower than on the 303C cargo ships. With that, she could figure how long it would take for them to come by ship to Sol 2 and that would be thee months from their homeworld. She would have to wait on the numbers that they wielded and of any other surprises they may hold.

21 March 2014

Sol 3 Terra Nova, Reach

USAF Training Center

Cam Mitchell had received a data burst from Dakara. It wasn't what he hoped for there was the three unknown ships and two command carriers with four hundred Elementals drones. There was also the news of the occupying army with around ten thousand troops on the ground with their unknown armaments. There was an artillery piece in place, some form of a tank and what looked like a troop transport along with hundreds their big drones and thousands of Kenobis drones. This was not going to be easy and would take more than a few ships. He would have to commit all the forces available to him. He called in the other generals and Colonels to plan the attack.

They had been planning for something like this for a while. But this was going to be their first time fighting for another world. That the US would put together this kind of force. They had a downsize some of the tanks and troop transport that could be deployed through the stargate. However, this has never been tried and with only a limited number was available this would be their test.

Five hours into the meeting General Rodgers looking with concern. "We will have little trouble with their ground forces other than those larger assault drones and the hunter Kenobis drones. The tanks we have ready should be sufficient and we have the manpower to send but it will take time to get them through the Stargate. We will need air support and a platoon of marines to secure the gate before we can begin to send in the troops."

"We will have the air support after we take out their ships which is the biggest issue at the moment. We will break the 302s into two groups one for the elementals the other for the ground assault. Once their armaments are spent they will jump away to to the rendezvous point. Where we can pick them up. All ships are to jump away when their shields drop below 20% if at all possible. We can't afford to lose a single ship. This is not Earth just keep that in mind. We just are not going to give up on our allies." Mitchell said looking at all the ship captains in turn. After more plans were in place they got to work making the final preparations. The attack would be in two days if all went well.

The next day Paul Stevenson walked through the stargate at Reach with him was a floating sled with servile containers. Sam had arrived earlier that morning to help with the final upgrades of the 304s. She was at the stargate to greet Paul. "Welcome to Reach." She offered her hand in greeting.

He could help but smile at the name as he took her hand with a shake as he looks around. "I've brought you a few gifts at the request of Jack." Turning to the sled, a mini ZPM came floating towards them he takes it and then hands it to Sam. "This is the mini ZPM I'm guessing you went over the data crystal I gave you." Pulling it from her mind. "I have also brought the adapters for the 302s it should not take long to add them on. These will allow the 302s to have shields and cloaking ability it also works with hyperdrives giving them a range of ten light-years. As you know the recharge will take twelve hours if depleted. But if you swap them out on the 304s you should not have any problems. There is enough here for this mission. You will need to make your own in the future. There are also twenty of the downgraded ZPMs that are fully charged as well." He concluded.

Her eyes were wide and at a loss of words then. "Why thank you this is more then we could hope for. How is Jack, these days by the way?"

"He and my other brothers and sisters are all well. We have been fighting the Wraith and another race that we have yet to identify. They are what Shepard calls the Uglies. They attack a Travelers ship while it was scouting a planet that is without an Stargate. One of their fighters pierced the hull and killed servile on board before they were killed." Paul said. "Shepard said he encountered them in an alternate universe. Where they were attacking Atlantis."

Carter remembering the reports "I've read about them in the mission files. You do not know who they are? That is troubling." Sam said, "How is the war with Wraith going by the way?"

"We fill they are on the run for now. We are having a hard time tracking them down. They are proving to be more elusive than we first thought them to be." Paul said. After two days of getting the upgrades installed and system testing, things were good to go.

Langara

23 March 2013

Three groups of hyperspace windows opened outside of the Langara system as six ships fell back into normal space activated their new cloaking ability. The ships slowly moved toward the unsuspecting Aschen fleet. There was still the same ships as before when the Jaffa had reported. The Elementals were in singles or clusters of three. They were spread out thinly in two groups one above where the Kelowna capital city once stood. While the other group was over their ground forces that were in between the Terrania and the Andari Federation.

Two ships were a short jump away from the planet waiting for the signal to go. The other six ships moved into firing range of the two control carriers and the enemy destroyer vessel. Once in position, they sent the for the other ships. The two ships dropped out of Hyperspace outside the firing range of the Elementals. With their shields up and weapons powered they quickly targeted the first of the enemies ships. Four Asgard beams lanced out destroying them after only a few seconds. The other Elementals started to move toward the two newly arrived ships. Shields were up on the control ships as they moved away from the fighting to stay behind their drones.

"Open a com channel," Mitchell said as after the first shots were fired. "Aschen vessels I am General Mitchell of Earth's defense forces. You are to cease and desist the occupation of Langara immediately. Failure to do so will result in more destruction of your ships." Cam concluded as he motioned to cut coms. "Let us see what they do now."

The destroyer began to moved toward the invading ships powering their weapons they released a volley of plasma blast striking one of the 304s shields and to the surprise of the Aschen Commander though he would not show it. Their weapons didn't have the predicted effect. The elementals began to fire more blasts at the other ships as well.

It was at that time three of the six ships decloaked and was on top of the command carrier. Firing on it with all six of the Asgard beams it's shields felled in just two volleys. As the third round of lances struck the hull and exiting out the other side just before it blows. The six men on board found themselves consumed in a bright flash of light before finding out that they were no longer on their ship but in a holding cell. Now with one down the three ships moved toward the second control ship and engaged their cloaks. Then changed course to the transport ships.

The second group reappeared on top of the second control ship firing six Asgard beams with the same effect. Then again they disappeared only for the first group to reappear near the two transport ships. Disabling them with a few well-placed shots and disappearing again. While this whole time the Cam's on the Hammond and the Revere had been engaging the destroyer and the Elementals their shields were dropping but not like it was at Earth.

When the other six 304s appeared behind the elementals and was taking them out with ease. The Aschen destroyer took control of them ordering them to form a cluster of ten. It then began to withdraw out of the fight their shields were failing at a steady drop.

The sum of 128 of the f302s was launched fitting the legos before they were able to regroup. Firing their Naquadah infused aim120 missiles at the elementals then opening fire with their rail guns was able to destroy a few of them. Take hit after hit from them as well and their shields were dropping as they broke away to recharge. Half of the elementals were now damaged or destroyed. Four 304s moved toward the Aschen destroyer firing beam after beam reducing its shields every time. Till they were no more. With the launching of six mark IX missiles the destroyer jumped into hyperspace fleeing the battle before they hit their mark.

The remaining elementals continued the attacks as the 304s changed their tactic and began to cloak change positions and decloaking only to do it again and again till they were all destroyed. The two Aschen transport ships worked to get their hyperdrives fixed to no avail. The task force then turned to start beaming the crews off of the transport ships. Once they were secure a team of Marines and scientists was beamed in.

[ Hope this was a good chapter. I may have overpowered it a bit. But the Aschen adapt and learn from their mistakes. I have part two about ready so I'll post in a few days. Just trying to drag it out a bit. Please leave a review good or bad to tell me where I'm going wrong. Thanks for your time.]