A/N: Well, here we are... The Hot Springs part...read and please review! I appreciated the last wave of reviewers a great deal! even though you have nothing to say, it'd be nice to hear from you! I'd like to hear your thoughts about the story thus far. I'm not a mind reader, after all.
Also, I tend to update fast, so stick around for a few days and I'll update.
Same day...
Evening, 10:30 PM...
We strode towards the baths at the topmost floor, where there was an indoor and outdoor artificial Hot Spring.
I wrapped my Yukata close towards my body for warmth as I shivered.
"Is it the men's time to enter?" Junpei asked the attendant.
"Yes." The lady said, "Sure of it."
"Now are you sure?" I asked.
She rolled her eyes, "For the hundredth time, it is men's only!" She said irritably, "Besides, rich studs like you with glamorous hair... I bet you wouldn't mind being looked at?"
Lee, Kenji, Quan and I brushed our hair pompously back with our hands. Junpei crossed his arms impatiently.
"That's right." Lee said.
"Thanks." I said as we went in.
The hot springs were elegant and warm. Junpei looked at an exit door and left it halfway open, using a sandal to leave it ajar.
"When in doubt, know your way out." He said.
"You guys are pretty high-strung." Lee said.
"After our near death experience last year, we wanna secure things." I said as we shedded our yukatas. Note, we wore towels to cover our loins.
"Nice pubes." Lee said to Quan, "So the carpet does match the drapes..."
"Quit looking." Quan said angrily.
"Alright, chill out Wendy Wu." Lee said.
"Grrrr!" Quan purpled.
We entered the hot springs. Boy, was it hot!
We swam around as we enjoyed the thermal effects.
"Whew! It's scorching!" Junpei said as we took cover in the rock alcoves and swam around some more.
"It's not called a hot spring cause it's cold." Kenji said.
"So... Any progress with Minako?" Lee asked as he washed his hair.
"You don't know the half of it!" I said.
"Spill it!" Quan cried.
"Come on." Kenji said.
"Fine!" I said, "We were kissing and Major Stupei, Ace Defective of the Cockblocker Squadron decided to ruin it all by barging in." I said bitterly.
"I resent that!" Junpei said, "Besides, you weren't exactly gonna score anyway. You weren't exactly 'storming the trenches' until the last minute!"
Everyone groaned, "Junpei, you can't just interrupt a guy when he's making a move, that is NOT okay!"
"Gimme a break..." Junpei said.
"Well, what about Yukari-chan? You two were the biggest love team last year!" Kenji said.
"Guys, I realize that I'll always have a place in my heart and soul for Yukari, but now I've reached a transition... I... I really like Minako. Now more than ever." I said.
"But what about your date with Yuka-tan?" Junpei asked.
"We just chatted like old friends." I said simply.
"More like rekindling the old flame!" Quan said.
"We're just friends. She just spoke of her problems to me. No more, no less." I said as I washed my face with hot spring water.
"Really? So you guys are that close? Like, super-duper close?" Lee said.
"Come on, give me a break, she was... confiding in me." I said.
"Confiding..." Kenji said derisively, "It's not confiding if she talks to you about her personal issues."
"Actually, it is." I said.
"I'll shell out ten thousand yen that they'll end up together, who wants to get in on the action?" Quan said.
"You're nuts if you actually think anyone would-" I said.
Lee threw him a lot with ten thousand yen. Kenji threw him one as well.
Junpei was writing on paper.
"Don't go there, buddy." I said, "And where do you guys keep all that paper?!"
"Either that or he's gonna be friendzoned. Minako all the way. It's a bet!" Junpei said.
"Here you go!" said Lee "Put mine with yours, Bro." Lee said.
"You already voted for Team Yukari!" Junpei cried.
"More chances of winning." Lee said.
"Aw, come on, can't we talk about normal stuff like basketball or something?"
"Hey, don't count on that, bro, no one here is normal, you know..." Lee said.
Everyone laughed.
"Am I suppose to take advice from a couple of idiots who left me to face the dangers of a crazy, rich kid and his hulk of a bodyguard while they emptied their ballsacks on a bottle of suntan lotion?!" I replied angrily.
"Hey, be quiet about that..." Quan said with a hushed tone.
"But dude, remember not to listen to your carnal desires bro." Kenji said.
"What the fuck are you going on about?!" I said.
"I'm saying we should enjoy the good times." Kenji said.
"Hahaha, yeah!" Lee said, "Like when my Doctor told me not to have sex and I did it anyway. Fuck the Doctor, that's what I say!" Lee said, "And now, my dick reddens everytime I get a boner."
"Dude, you should really listen to your Doctor..." Kenji said.
"Well, at least it isn't herpes... Unless you have that as well?" Quan said.
"Maybe. I'm none too sure." Lee said.
"O...kay..." Quan said as he moved away from Lee.
"What should we do to commemorate Minato's bravery?" Quan said, "Usually, it'd take him a lot of courage to pull that off."
"Usually?!" I sputtered angrily, "I've done thing that'd make your hair curl!"
"I know! Let's sign his cock!" Lee said.
"I'm not gonna let you sign my cock." I said.
"Why not?" Lee said, "Scared?"
"Because, I ain't gay." I said.
"It isn't gay if you're brothers." Junpei said.
"No, if you're brothers, it isn't gay. That's... that's something else." Kenji said darkly.
"I'll sign your cock!" Quan offered.
"Uh, no way. No one's signing my dick, unless they're signing a trip down the building with from the windows." I warned.
"Fine... Killjoy..." Lee muttered.
They relented and began joking around.
"I had a girlfriend once, and she gave me the clap." Lee said.
I choked on the water.
"What?"
"The clap?" I said.
"Yeah. That's like, a sexually transmitted disease... Sexually transmitted." He added with a wink. Junpei and Kenji moved slightly away from him.
"What?!" I said in disbelief.
"Get it? It was a sexually transmitted-"
"Disease!" I finished.
"Whatever, anyway, it wasn't hard for me to tell people that I had 'it'."
"You actually told people that?!" Kenji said in disbelief, "Who'd want to know THAT?!"
"Nah, they heard me screaming me head off everytime I took a piss." Lee said with a shrug. They moved even farther away from him.
"Ugh! Too much information alert!" Quan said.
"Of course, I did have to take a shitload of antibiotics for it... and it did make my earwax all greasy and it smelled like burnt rubber, but it was all cleared in the end." Lee said.
Again, we moved farther from him.
"Well, look," Kenji said, pointing to the clock, "It's almost time for the girl's turn."
"Time flies when you're having fun..." Quan said wistfully, "Or when you're naked with your classmates,"
I looked at Junpei, "Hurry."
"Oh come on, you sourpusses! I say we try the outdoor bath! Minato, go ahead, while the boys and I go check in the attendant." Lee said.
I went on ahead.
The outdoor bath was same as the indoor, only it's outdoor... It was for men and women, but it was abandoned today, except for a lone figure.
I went towards Naoto, who was hiding behind one of the ornamental rocks.
Due to her small and petite size, I couldn't see anything other than her shoulders and head. It was so steamy, I could barely see anything else.
"Naoto-kun?!" I hissed, "What are you doing?!"
"Taking a bath... Whew, it feels nice." She purred.
"Uh huh... Everyone would know you're a Detective... Who brings their hats in the bath?!"
She shrugged, "My idol, Raidou, perhaps?"
"Hey, this is a bad idea, Nao-kun, what if someone sees you?" I asked.
"Minato-san, just because I look like a male, doesn't mean I have to smell like one." She said, "And besides, the steam ensures no one would see me for who I am."
She took a deep breath and went underwater for a while and resurfaced.
"Okay, okay, alright, now get out of there, before you get all pruny." I said.
"Minato-san, if you're so worried, please go stand watch." She said nonchalantly.
"Oh, yeah," I said, "Stand watch, Minato-san, while I blow our secret, with my dirty girl habits!" I said in a mock tone of her voice, "Hygiene..."
Then, the boys jumped in.
"Oh crap! You're doomed! There's a bunch of things I know they're about to notice!" I said.
Naoto went red and went lower.
"Me first, me first!" Kenji cried.
"Outta the way!" Lee cried.
"Haha, too late!" Junpei said as he jumped first, followed by Kenji.
"Whoa, it's hot!" Junpei said.
"Well, it's not called a hot spring for nothing, moron!" Kenji said.
Lee nodded to Quan. They checked the temperature of the water with their toes before reeling back, locking arms and jumping at once.
"ATOMIC CANNONBALL!" Junpei cried as he and Kenji tried to run away, but were swallowed by the wave. The boys rode the wave towards us.
"Hey, dudes!" Junpei said, "Spending some quality father-son time?"
"She- I mean, he's not my daughter! I mean son!" I said defensively.
"Oh, hello boys! I didn't know you were here!" Naoto said flusteredly, "I was just washing up, now I'm clean and I gotta go! Bye bye!"
"Come back here! I know we were tools to you before," Lee said as he did a backstroke, "So, let's start over- Hi, I'm Lee!" He said as he extended a hand as Naoto shook it.
"I'm Junpei." Junpei said.
She nodded and smiled.
"And I'm Kenji." Kenji said.
"Hello Junpei! Hello Kenji!" She said as she tried to go away.
"AND I AM QUAN! KING OF THE ROCK!" Quan bellowed as he climbed a boulder, "And there's nothing you girls can do about it."
He was in his birthday suit. Naoto shielded her eyes and averted her gaze.
"Oh yeah? Well, I bet Naoto and I can take you!" Lee cried as he did a karate pose, "All the way! Wait, that didn't sound right."
"I don't really want to take him anywhere." Naoto said dismissively.
"But Naoto, we HAVE to fight!" Junpei reasoned.
"No, we don't. We could just... Close our eyes... and swim around..." She said as she tried to go away.
Kenji wrapped an arm around Naoto, "C'mon, don't be such a g-GIRL!" "YEOW!" Kenji cried as I went and bit him on the butt, "Something bit me!"
I spat out discreetly, "What nasty flavor."
"Girl!" Lee hissed as he pointed at a group of girls.
Naoto used that distraction to slip away unseen.
"Aaaah! It's been sometime since I've been to one of these!" Pinky sighed.
"I went in one, at the Amagi Inn last year... It was nice." Rio said.
"It feels like the one we went to last year." Yukari said.
"Minus the men..." Fuuka muttered.
"Indeed. It was hard-pressed for me to find a skilled enough worker to make these..." Mitsuru said, "But it was worth it."
"Today's my first time." Minako admitted.
"Don't worry," Yukari reassured, "You'll never forget your first."
They went in the baths and swam around.
"Oh my!" Minako breathed, "It sure is hot..."
"I heard there are positive side-effects in going to hot springs..." Fuuka said.
"Bravo, Mitsuru-senpai," Yukari noted, "This is wonderful."
Mitsuru beamed at her, "Why, thank you."
"Why don't we swim around?" Pinky suggested.
"Swim around? I'll melt." Rio said.
"Splash one!" Pinky said as she splashed water onto Rio's face.
"Argh! Take this!" Rio retaliated with a torrent.
"Ow! My eyes!" Pinky said.
"Take this, Yukari!" Minako said as she splashed Yukari.
"Oh, ha ha, real mature." Yukari said sullenly.
"Shit..." Junpei cursed as we hid behind the rocks.
"Is it them?" Kenji muttered.
"Yeah! No mistaking Pinky's pink-ass hair!" Quan hissed, "Or Yukari's fabulously brown hair! Rio's mane-like pony tail... nor Fuuka-chan's cute cyan hair... least of all, Minako's soft, red hair that would look so good on my children and-"
I glared at him.
"Uh, never mind." He said quickly.
"It's okay. It's fine. Everything's gonna be alright." Junpei repeated to himself over and over again.
"Well, Mitsuru-senpai's hair looks very glamorous!" Quan said, "The straightness, then the child-like twirl!"
"WHAT?!" Junpei and I jumped, "Sh-She's here?!"
"Oh yeah. Right beside Pink." Quan said casually.
"Junpei, you dolt, why didn't you check the time?!" I roared angrily.
"I did! It's our time in the baths, I swear!" He said quickly.
"Oh, fine! Those girls have been doing this since the dawn of time!" I said bitterly.
"We need a plan." Kenji said hastily as he rubbed his bite wound.
"That WAS Plan A! Trying to prevent THIS!" I said.
"We need a Plan B then!" Kenji cried.
"Forget Plan B, we need a Plan C, D, E, F, G and all the 20 other letters of the alphabet!" Junpei hissed.
"Guys, relax, why don't we just go out and tell the girls that they got the times mixed up." Quan said simply.
"It's not that simple, Quan!" Junpei said, "On top of the girls beating the crap outta us, we got Mitsuru-san to deal with!"
"And she deals hard." I said.
"Guys, we can just say this is one big misunderstanding." Quan insisted.
"You fool! They won't listen to reason!" Junpei said.
"I've got a plan... We all run, and hope they don't catch us." Lee said, "It just might work."
"Are you joking!?" Junpei cried.
"Nope." Lee said.
"This just went from Mission Impossible to Mission Improbable to Mission In-freaking-sanity!" Kenji hissed.
"You're a madman! You're crazy!" I cried to Lee.
"Good. 'Cause if I wasn't, this probably wouldn't work." Lee shrugged.
"Well... We don't have much of a choice." I admitted, "Let's do it!"
We readied ourselves.
"Geronimo!" Lee cried.
"Crazy Horse!" I cried.
"Wounded Knee!" Junpei cried.
"Sitting Bull!" Kenji cried.
"Aüre Entúlúvâ!" Quan cried.
We charged out screaming.
"What th-" Minako said, "Boys! There are boys here!"
"Ahhhhh!" Pinky, Mitsuru, Fuuka and Yukari yelled.
"Get them!" Rio shouted as they grabbed a pile of wooden buckets and threw it at us.
I got hit in the chest, but managed to stay up.
"It's our time, not yours!" Quan shouted, "It's a big misunderstandi-" Quan got knocked out with three direct hits to the head from Pinky, Minako and Mitsuru. "Argh!" he slumped down. Nobody bothered to pick him up.
"Girls, your time is over!" Lee shouted.
"So is yours!" Yukari snarled.
Lee took several hits and managed to take cover behind a rock.
"Ya gotta hit harder to take me down!" Lee yelled.
Fuuka hurled a bucket and downed Lee.
"Ow! Fuuka! You hit hard!" Lee said with a bloody smile.
"Rio, baby! We can negotiate this peacefully right?" Kenji got floored by Rio, and floated on the water with a major nosebleed.
"You crazy girls! Check the damn time!" Junpei shouted while running.
"Yeah, it's time for your asses to get stomped!" Minako growled as she launched several buckets and knocking Junpei down. I picked him up and ran away.
Then, a big bucket smote my head and I fell down.
Junpei was saying something, his lips moved but I couldn't hear anything.
"-we gotta move!"
The girls were whipped into a frenzy. I saw an opening and went to one of the rocks. It was designed as a maze, after all.
"Crap! A dead end!" I hissed as I set Junpei down.
"Let's climb over it!" He hissed.
I boosted him up.
"Adios, partner!" He said, moving away.
"What?!" I said angrily.
"Just kidding. Give me your hand." He said as he lifted me up.
We were about to slip away, until Kenji ran towards us.
"Help me!" He pleaded.
I reached out to grab his hand, but Junpei grabbed my hand after hearing the angry tirade of abuse and curses from the girls approaching.
"Sorry. Every man for himself." Junpei said.
"H-Hey! You can't just leave me here!" Kenji shouted.
"Alright, fine, hurry!" I said as I grabbed him and he clambered on the slippery rock, not daring to let go and he finally stood on the platform.
"Sorry boys! We warned you not to come!" I shouted as we went out and barred the door, to prevent the, from chasing us.
We heard a faint shout; "Execute them, Senpai!"
Then, a familiar sound of an Evoker, "ARTEMISIA!"
We grabbed our clothes and ran naked going up.
When we reached the safety of the door, we stopped for a breather.
"That... was close... too close! We are not doing that again." I panted.
"Whose idea was this anyway?" Junpei said breathlessly.
"Ours, admittedly." Kenji said while gasping for air, "Did you guys see-"
"No." I said.
"No." Junpei almost sobbed.
"What a fail. Let's hit the showers." Kenji said.
Naoto was so shocked at our dramatic entry, she dropped the cup of tea she was drinking and gasped audibly.
"By Jove, what is the meaning of this?!" Naoto growled.
"We had a narrow escape. Sue us." Junpei said wearily as he went to his room to get dressed.
"Why on earth are you guys naked?!" Naoto said exasperatedly.
"We said we had a narrow escape." I explained our flight from the girls.
"I see... but please cover up!" Naoto said, "Shame on you three!"
"C'mon, we're all men here, right?" Kenji said as he slapped Naoto's butt. Naoto flushed bright red.
I went to get dressed and went out to to find that Lee and Quan had arrived, shivering and not speaking about what had happened.
"It was awful..." Quan said as his teeth chattered.
"Damn them... I never knew the Directress to be into some voodoo shit." Lee said as he sneezed.
"Ouch... They really hurt me." Quan said.
"We warned you not to go, but you never listen." I said smugly.
"Oh, shut up." Lee sneezed. "You weren't turned into a popsicle!"
"It's true! A giant thing appeared behind Mitsuru-san and froze us! It's true!" Quan supplied.
Junpei and I looked at one another uneasily.
"Froze you? Haha, I think you two got hit in the head a little too hard." Kenji scoffed.
"It's true!" The duo shouted.
"Trust me, you were imagining it." Kenji assured.
"Yeah, I guess you're right... But why are we shivering? I mean, we just came out of a damn hot spring!" Lee said.
"Beats me." Kenji said, "Maybe your brains are a little fuddled up."
Lee went in to get a shower.
I grabbed a toothbrush and brushed vigorously.
"Phew... That was a narrow escape... For my part, mostly." Naoto said.
"No! That was vile! You owe me BIG!" I spat out and put more toothpaste on my mouth.
"I never want to see a naked man again." Naoto admitted.
"Sorry! Forgot my soap!" Lee said as he went out stark naked.
"Lee, what are you doing?" I said.
"Sorry, I don't wear pants at the dorm, I ain't wearing one here." Lee said as he entered the bathroom.
"Was that... a man's butt?" Naoto said.
"Don't look at me, I'm not biting that apple." I said as I spat froth from my mouth and gargled.
The guys recovered and we all converged into the lounge room.
Suddenly, the doors opened and Lee overturned the couch as a makeshift shield as the boys and I ingloriously cowered behind it.
"Hey, hey, we come in peace!" Minako said.
"Like hell you are!" Kenji shouted.
Naoto was just drinking tea behind us.
"We just wanna say... Sorry." Yukari said as the girls bowed.
"It's not our faults-" I shouted, "Wait, what?"
"We found out we got the times mixed up-" Rio said.
"Ya think?!" Junpei shouted.
"Also, we didn't know the outdoor bath was for both men and women..." Pinky said.
"Not into reading signs, eh?" Quan said sardonically.
"We thought they were for one gender at a time." Rio said.
"Well, wrong thinking kills many people." Lee spat.
"Anyway, accept this as a sign of our apology." Minako said and a group of waiters entered with sumptuous dishes.
"Whoa! What is all this?" I said in wonder.
"Our apologies!" The girls said in unison.
"Well, damn right!" Lee said in approval, "You owe us after that ordeal!"
"But how am I suppose to eat?! I lost three fingernails trying to escape your screw ups!" Kenji cried, showing his mutilated fingers.
"And my lip got torn by a rogue bucket." I said.
"And I chipped a tooth!" Quan said.
"Not to mention I almost fractured my skull!" Junpei said.
"Well, what do you want us to do?" Yukari said.
The guys and I smiled, "Spoonfeed us."
The girls were bewildered, "No way. Nuh uh!"
We smiled, "Owwww! My head! I think I'm gonna die!" I cried.
They boys followed suit and we made it overly melodramatic.
"Alright, alright!" Minako shouted, "We'll do it."
Rio spoonfed Kenji as she lectured him about dietetics and choosing nutritious food while she was at it. Kenji just nodded as Rio serviced him.
Junpei was spoonfed by Chidori, who Mitsuru summoned here after Fuuka called her. Chidori was awfully sweet, blowing on the hazelnut soup before letting Junpei sip it appreciatively.
Lee got more than he bargained for after Fuuka stabbed him on the nose while trying to feed him some chicken leg with a fork, but he seemed happy.
Quan seemed bored, as if Pinky spoonfed him all the time while Pinky chatted with him about which pink dyes she should use for her hair.
"But babe, your hair is already naturally pink!"
Minako and Yukari, seeing as they were, more or less, my two main squeezes, they both spoonfed me and dabbed my lips after they became soiled. Minako kept looking at me while she did, though it must've been because of the kiss.
Yukari, of course, was doing her absolute best, and it did get my attention... Sometimes, I think about what's wrong with me, having two girls vying for my love... I know I needed to make a choice...
But is there much of a choice when I got two of the most perfect girls in the world to choose from?!
A/N: what a wave of emotions!
Anyway, anyone here ever ate a roasted bat? I tastes better than it sounds, actually...
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blablabla6h
I also got reference when...Minako says she will take example of Minato cleanness(or whatever) and then the other girls butts in and then the situation gets awkward...yeah...I know where you got that from...
Good for you!
Kaijeno Arisato
Junpei AGAIN IS THE BIGGEST COCK BLOCK
Hot Springs huh I have an idea? Do the same hot springs except this time Minato escapes and everyone else gets destroyed
Nah, I don't think Minato should be that cruel to his friends...
2sassy4u
It's about time I came crawling out from the darkest corner of the lurker's cavern haha. Been reading since DoS, then DoA to only review a few time as guests. I guess from now I would be reviewing more often haha. Anyway, YES. Days of winter! Wanted a MinaxMitsu since DoS, excluding the interference of Yukari lol. I just hope you would start it soon, making me psyche up right now. Anywho, DoA seem to be progressing quite steadily, from a little stem of buddying friendship, then Minato finally having the guts to actually confess his feelings. At times, the sense of humour you put is somewhat hilarious, and the angst and cliffhangers are what keeps me wanting the next update. Also, I like your style of writing although you could try and refrain using the word 'said' a couple of times in a row. Anywho, i'll be on the lookout for another update and I'll try to review whenever possible :)
Huzzah! Welcome to the light!
It's reviewers like you that make writing so worthwhile!
Yep. I assure you that DoW will be coming soon. In fact, I'm editing it as we speak, well not literally, you know.
Thanks! I really hope you'll take the time to review! I love reviews as much as I love writing.
Hope to see you often!
blablabla6h
Now I know...what is Yobai...speechless...Awesome chapter as always...but one thing...don't interrupt the confession of love between Minako and Minato...'cause this is the fourth time you did it...because It's annoying...and killing the suspense...or you have something planned, really interesting?
P.S: Like I said, I don't care...I just said...it's doesn't look good...but, keep it, man...I don't care...
Now you know!
It's neither annoying nor kills the suspense. It's part of the story, blah. If you would actually wait to see what happens, the world would be a better place.
Actually, you shouldn't care and it looks good. If you didn't care, why mention it at all? You confuse me sometimes, dude... Really.
Radaketor
WE ALL LOVE QUAN, GROUP HUG!
*hugs Quan*
So they finnaly kissed, and when it all seemed like it was going to end good... STUPEI FREAKING COCK BLOCKS MINATO! And if that's not enough, Minako ran away?
Bravo, you keep getting better after each chapter, i read on your Bio that you wanted to be the best Persona writer in Fanfiction, well, i think you already are, i've read a lot of other people's strories, and most of them don't reach your level, congrats and good luck with the next chapter.
Who doesn't love Quan? He looks like Rise, except without the hair and the female parts. If he were Yaoi, he'd be the uke.
I know... When he did it at Yakushima. It irked me to no end.
Haha, you're far too kind and you give me too much credit... But I think I'm a good writer, at most. Maybe when time comes and I'm lucky, that would come true.
Again, many thanks!
BloodyCain (Guest)
Of course you would consider it "stealing" unless we put up a review. What a good excuse
Well, it wouldn't kill you to actually review, would it? Besides, it's good practice to speak your mind for a change.
Also, thanks for reviewing!
ReachingOutFES
Finally their lips have met and what this read about the hot springs? Yeah I know you mentioned it earlier but I suggest trying something original for the hot springs bit. How about Minako ends up during the time it's suppose to be guys only and Minato hides her? Or you could for the classic "guys end up in the hot during the girls' time and get kicked out'". Totally up to you...
I think you did your Brooklyn rage well enough... Next time I hope!
Yup. All original.
Well, nice ideas, but I already planned it... Well enough, I guess.
Minato and the boys make all the preparations, being extra careful, yet the girls still managed to go in and evict them, later repenting with the dinner bout.
Thanks! I never watched much Yugioh so I wasn't sure.
ThePersonaficationOfNight
That was totally sweet, seriously epic chapter with the sweet stuff in the end, glad Yukari didn't show up to ruin the mood, Minato comforting Minako was really touchy and yippie they finally kissed until Junpei had to ruin it all, but am happy nonetheless that they finally let each other know even tho a bit.
Minako owning Lee was awesome, she acted sophisticated for a moment and then BAM ownage mode on.
Can't wait to see where it goes, can't wait to see what Yukari does now I'm guessing she goes bitch mode again against Minako, would really love to see Minato finally telling her to just go away and Finally tells her that he loves Minako, I recently read your days of summer story man Yukari acted like a complete douche towards Minato, even tho in the end they got together.
Plz update soon waiting for more.
Thanks! Junpei doing that is just too annoying...
Yeah, tomboyish girls rock!
Yes, it would come to that soon, but not too soon. Not after some heavy drama.
Haha, yeah, thanks. I enjoyed making DoS...
Hoshi no Ookamiden 217
*cheers*
I'll admit that I've been reading this story for a while, and I always wait eagerly for the next chapter.
But it's just that I've had nothing to say since you write pretty well. Even if everything is one line long. Meh, who cares? It's clear you've already got a good grasp on your writing style, so I'm not going to say anything more about that.
Anyways, keep it up!
Thank you! I'll also admit I've seen you around in a few stories I skimmed and you review pretty well and I hope you'll do so for my story too. Why, with your help I could further improve the story!
See you soon.
KazuyaYamura
Junpei... Junpei... Junpei... Always there do destroy a romantic moment... But Minato finally did it and I think this will end well! The romance scene was great and I could feel Minato's anxiety throughout that last bit. And is it just me or are they going to the hot springs... I can only I imagine what will happen there... *laughs evilly*... Ahem, so I hope the last chapter is coming soon, cause I'll be waiting!
Ugh, you don't know the half of it... Good thing Minato did it before Junpei entered, otherwise the kiss might not have happened.
Yes! Hot springs! And procrastination.
I highly encourage you all to review or ask questions!