This is my first fanfiction story so please pm me about your suggestions and critics.[no hate comments please]and i will try to improve the writing stle.
A boy was standing near a mighty river with people thronging both it was confused where he was ,who he was,and what was he just remembered his name Perseus jakson and the face of a mighty figure posiedon about him he just knew that he was his father and a olympian,he could also remember the face of a blonde girl named annabeth who was his he heard a loud roar which meant that the monsters he had left behind were catching on had tried to kill the large human looking monsters but even when he stabbed them right in the heart they would just heal so his only hope was to outrun them even that was a difficult with a loud sigh he borrowed [or stoled] a car which he had never seen before but heck he couldn't remember much about his past except that he was in a strange country with strange people and ran the car straight in the river to save himself as water ave him powers and then collapesed with exhaustion.
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When he opened his eyes he heard a girl voice saying ,'He doesn't look Indian ',and a voice saying ,'
he looks american,' before he again to him he was in India the home of hindunism and their gods ,the river he had came near him was the holy ganga and he was carried to varanasi because of him being a son of posiedon as he couldn't drown from where he was teleported to indraloka.
It is a short chapter but promise the next will be atleast 1k long.