I'm not JK Rowling, since I'm an American typing this story up on Google docs. Also please review.
"Alex, the game is tomorrow, I'm so scared," Keegan told his dormate.
"Keegan, you will be great," Alex said.
"Keegan you are one of the youngest Quidditch plays in Hogwarts history, in recent history there was only one other first year, Harry Potter," Edwin Chambers said.
"I'm nervous," Keegan said.
"Don't be," Alex said. The next morning Keegan had trouble eating breakfast.
"Key, you will do great," Rowan said coming up with Rose.
"Yeah, I want to cheer for Hufflepuff but Dominique will kill me since her boyfriend plays for Ravenclaw," Rose said.
"Dominique is one of your many cousins, right?" Keegan asked.
"Yes, her parents are my uncle Bill and aunt Fleur," Rose said.
"Wait, Fleur Delacour and Harry Potter are both aunt and uncle?" Keegan asked with a mouthful of bacon.
"Yes, my family is very very famous," Rose said. The Hufflepuff captain Ian Truman came up to Keegan and told him to get ready.
"Fleming, you will do great," Truman said.
"I hope so," the keeper said to the chaser.
The game started, Keegan could feel his beat in his chest.
"Captains shake hands."
It was only a few minutes into the game when Keegan had to block the quaffle.
"Truman has the quaffle, oof hit by a bludger get from Max Grip or is it Leo Grip," the commentator said.
"But he still has the quaffle going to score on Zach Grip and ten points Hufflepuff."
"The Grip brothers are talented player maybe because their aunt is the manager of the Tutshill Tornadoes," the commentator said.
"How does your aunt being the manager of a team have to do with being a good player," Keegan muffled to himself as the game went on.
" Hopkins and Davies going for the snitch and it looks like it will be Davies, no, Hopkins takes the lead."
Keegan looked out onto the pitch.
"And Hopkins catches the snitch Hufflepuff wins by ten points."
"Good job team, Hopkins keep up the good work, McManus look before you hit the bludger and Fleming good first game," Truman said as the team entered the Hufflepuff locker room.
"Party in the locker room after lunch we just finished in time."
Keegan went up to Truman.
"Can Rowan join us know my twin?" Keegan asked.
"Sure your brother can join even though he is a Gryffindor."
"Rowan is my older twin sister. Why does everyone think she is a boy? And can't tell us apart? I do have long hair but," Keegan said before McManus told him shut up.
"Team let's hit the showers, get change and go to lunch," Truman said the get change part looking at McManus.
I want to have an one going joke were Rowan is confused for a boy or the twins are confused for each other